I personally feel that your design is not very reasonable, compared to the original better.
The original design, wet and dry partition. The bedroom is separate, better privacy, the dining room doubles as a living room, it will be more convenient to receive guests, and your sleep will not be affected.
Your new design, there is a closet next to the bed, and the aisle is also used as a living room, so I feel that you should have very little space.