1. Which composition tutor in Funing is good

Learn to observe first when writing a good composition. When answering the question of "how to write a good article" by literary youth, Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points: one is to read more, and the other is to practice more.

"seeing more" here means observing more. This shows that to write a good article and master skillful writing techniques, it is necessary to observe more, learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.

The Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners like this: "A writer must train himself into an observer with keen eyes and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise yourself to observation, as if it were second nature. " It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable.

Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and get the materials you need for your composition: you should be interested in something that seems small but is meaningful, and pay attention to the cause, process and result; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out into the society, get in touch with people, observe their words and deeds, think about something, and merge them into the long river of your thoughts at any time. 2. Composition changes in Funing (more than 451 words)

I just feel that I grew up in Funing when I was very young. At that time, I only knew Funing City and my school Funing Five. No.7 Middle School, because I didn't know how big the outside world was, I didn't know how to study well at that time. After a long growth, I realized that our Funing was in China and what was the level of Jiangsu. I knew that Funing was too poor in the outside world, or I was thinking about how to leave because I was young. There was no place I yearned for in Funing, and then I slowly grew up to know that Funing was my home, just like my parents.

To say that the changes in Funing are rapid, it would be great if Lao Shen could come to Fufu earlier. Alas, there is no way. This is determined by the general climate of the whole country. The previous 214 was on a line of Tongyu Road. Dayuanpan at the new station is always the most crowded place for people and cars, and it is also the most chaotic place. Please don't stay when you get to this place. I don't know why, there is no reason. That's what everyone thinks. Just an old street is a shabby scenery. Now Funing City Road is wider than before, people are civilized and energetic, and the changes in the south of the city are greater. You will know how big it is to care about the development of Funing. On the whole, it has been integrated into the tide of urban development. The fly in the ointment is that West Street is far from being developed. The people have a high attitude and support the policy of * * *. One day I went to a friend's house over there to play, and I told a lot of hardships; The house is a platform, and the walls and roofs are yellow, moldy, and even running water in some places! There was no money to cover it before, and there was no way to get enough food and clothing every day at that time. I didn't know how to solve it. Building a few bungalows had to drag on debts. Originally, the people of Funing had a poor foundation. Now it is better to regret it than to cover the herringbone. I don't want to cover it with a * * *, and I don't want to cover it with an isolated thermal layer. We used to be a country, and the city was not a city. It's good that ordinary people can afford to build houses. It's really hard! If * * * wants to use it, we should make some responsibilities for supporting the construction of new Funing. Nowadays, the lives of ordinary people are also called headless flies running around. In order to cooperate with the development of the new Funing, let's talk about it in a few years. * * * also has difficulties, because our Funing economy is not developing well, and I hope our children can live a good life.

our Funing is developing and advancing, because we have our new * * * and brand-new thinking to meet the challenges of the new one, and we need people of insight to care for and care for our Funing. Let our Funing know that it exists in Yancheng, Jiangsu, the whole country and even the world. At that time, we proudly said that we all said it was Funing.

It is because of this that we have spent 41 to 51 years with Funing. Under the general climate of the whole country and Jiangsu, the development speed of Funing is fast in the local area. We must grit our teeth, dare to strive for the first place, and forge ahead bravely to make our Funing richer, stronger and better. 3. Writing composition Funing White Swan Park

My grandmother lives in Funing, where there are Jinsha Lake Park and White Swan Park ... Among them, White Swan Park is my favorite.

White Swan Park is located in a prime location in the south of Funing New District, which is adjacent to Funing Middle School in the north. It covers an area of 351 mu, of which the lake area is 1.35 mu, and the lake is shaped like a swan. It is said that the total investment of the project is nearly 51 million yuan. White Swan Park has become the main scenic spot for the general public and tourists in Funing to enjoy leisure and sightseeing.

There are nervous roller coasters, bumper cars, colorful lights of various shapes, thrilling valley exploration and so on, but I like rowing boats best. The lake is large and clear, and there are many boats docked on the shore.

The boat is very small, only one person can be on it. It has a pair of paddles. First, the body leans forward, and then the paddles are pulled with both hands. Then, the body leans back, and the legs push hard, and the boat moves forward quickly. The most difficult thing in rowing is the coordination of hands and legs.

I said to my sister, "Let's go around the swimming pool to see who can circle twice first." So the race started. My sister drew two laps quickly, and I only spent one lap.

I lost. There are also several yachts floating in the wind on the blue lake.

The White Swan Park is so beautiful. 4. Writing a composition about Funing Big Cake

Seeing Funing Big Cake in the vegetable market at the door reminds me of the past when I was a child.

Funing cake is made in my hometown of Funing, northern Jiangsu, and my hometown is in the small village of Chenji, Funing. Our family is one of the few families in the village who make Funing cake for a living. From grandfather to grandfather to father, the three generations of ancestors were all farmers, and making Funing cake can be said to be a family sideline.

My grandfather died early, and when he was sensible, according to adults, he was not even born when he died-he didn't even see his own father, let alone me, a great-grandson. Although grandpa's skill in making this Funing big cake did not come directly from his grandfather, it was not difficult to make Funing big cake in his hometown, not to mention that there were still many outstanding Funing big cakes in our Zheng family at that time, and grandpa's own thinking and research made it easy to get started.

I didn't expect grandpa to do it for almost half a century. I grew up eating grandpa Funing cake.

I heard that I cried badly when I was born. At that time, there was no milk in our family.

but I have a grandfather who makes Funing cake. So grandpa used it to feed Funing big cake into my small mouth, and I was quiet.

Looking at his grandson, Grandpa is smiling happily.

In this way, from now on, there was a small mouth to eat Funing big cake in this farmhouse, which lived on Funing big cake. From the day my tongue began to know how to distinguish and taste all kinds of flavors, I wrote down the taste of Funing big cake made by my grandfather-just one word, sweet and waxy.

After getting up every morning, I hold a small bowl beside my grandfather, waiting for Funing big cake to "go out of line". Grandpa always squints and looks at his greedy grandson cheerfully. In this way, grandpa's white beard and hair, as well as the crystal clear Funing cake, became the purest sky in my childhood.

I grew up eating Funing cake, but I don't know the "procedure" of making Funing cake. However, I have a deep memory of my grandfather's cautious and serious efforts in Funing University.

From grinding rice to rice flour and then steaming cakes, you have to be careful at every step. Grandpa never allows me to fool around.

At that time, I kept muttering in my heart: Is it because Funing cake is easy to break in my hand? With this question in mind, I have secretly "attempted" to hold Funing Big Cake on my small hand many times, but every time I just met it and held it in my hand, the big cake scalded me to the ground. For this reason, I ruined a lot of Funing cakes, and of course I was scolded by my grandfather.

after grandpa scolded him, he smoked a pipe with one hand and held my little hand with the other. He spit out a smoke ring and muttered, Woods, your hands are not used to make Funing cakes, no. "

maybe grandpa is right. Otherwise, why does he have a good hand with Funing big cake? The steaming grill is so easy in grandpa's hands. I used to secretly compare my small hand with grandpa's big hand. I always wondered why grandpa's palm was full of hard and prickly calluses, so I was not afraid of scalding when I took Funing big cake, but my small hand could not afford Funing big cake. This is a problem that I always puzzled when I was a child.

today, I learned that grandpa won't say, and he can't tell me such profound truths as "making a big cake should be as meticulous as being a man". Such words do not belong to my grandfather who has a big cake in Funing.

Grandpa is just a farmer. In his eyes, making a big cake may only be equivalent to a farm job. Grandpa passed it on to me, only the cautious and earnest energy when making Funing big cake-like the sweet and waxy big cake, I will never forget it.

My father left my hometown and came to a big city like Shanghai, where I studied and grew up. I haven't eaten Funing big cake for many years. Today, I saw the familiar Funing big cake in the market in big cities. I watched my fellow villagers add a lot of candied accessories to the big cake cut by the machine. Although it was a bit strange, I bought a packet of freshly cut Funing big cake, but I couldn't find the taste of my grandfather making Funing big cake in my mouth.

Is it because my taste has changed or I am picky? I take it home and give it to my father, brothers and sisters to taste, but they all say it's delicious and delicious. But why didn't I feel it? Is it that Funing cake has gone bad? Certainly not.

When my father tasted it, he said: Grandpa's big cake was delicious when he was in his hometown. At this time, I finally understood that grandpa's Funing big cake has a taste, which is a very special taste, called the taste of hometown. This taste contains love for hometown, nostalgia for hometown, and yearning for relatives. Funing big cake conveys a feeling that is hard to give up. It is the feeling of hometown, and this feeling is affection. 5. Composition about Dai Jun, a hero of Funing

The hero left Funing, Jiangsu Province, and shed tears to mourn Dai Jun (photos). Chang 'an feat shook the world, and his soul returned to his hometown, and his fame will be passed down forever.

Yesterday morning, Funing had just bid farewell to a torrential rain the night before, but it was still cloudy and drizzling. After a long journey of 21 hours, the body of Dai Jun, who bravely saved the robbed girl in Xi 'an, returned to his hometown of Funing under the escort of his wife, daughter, brother, former friends and local leaders.

with reverence, tens of thousands of people from all walks of life in Funing spontaneously flocked to the mourning hall and the street where the hearse passed, weeping to welcome the hero's soul back to his hometown and pay tribute to the proud son of his hometown! From the night before yesterday, it suddenly rained heavily in Funing county, which was gloomy. It was not until yesterday morning that the heavy rain gradually turned into a light rain, as if crying quietly for the departure of the hero. "Hero Dai Jun returned to his hometown tragically, and millions of people came to greet him", "People in hero Dai Jun's hometown will always miss you" and "It's painful to welcome the heroic spirit to return to his hometown" ... On the road, beside the national highway and at the gate of the funeral home, white banners hung high tell people that this is a memorial service for the hero.

At this time, there was a sea of people in Funing County funeral home. Knowing that the memorial service for the hero Dai Jun will be held here, more than a thousand people from all walks of life in Funing arrived here in the rain early in the morning to watch their heroes "walk" through the last journey.

relevant leaders from provinces, cities and counties are here; The folks in Tiaogang Village are coming; The strangers came; Students who have been funded by Dai Jun are coming; The white-haired old man came on crutches ... Grief, grief and reverence were clearly written on everyone's face. A citizen who took a taxi from the city to the funeral parlour said emotionally that he was moved by the story of Dai Jun in the newspaper, and that he had produced such a great hero in his hometown. He heard that the hero "went home" that day and set off for the funeral parlour early in the morning to see him off.

The staff of the funeral home said that from 5: 31 in the morning, people from nearby gathered at the memorial service site, and many citizens braved the rain and took taxis to the funeral home to pay tribute to the hero. On the way to the funeral home and in the mourning hall, countless wreaths were sent by people from all walks of life, telling people's infinite grief and respect for the hero.

"Diligence creates great achievements, lofty sentiments, wisdom and monuments reflect mountains and rivers, giving one's life to save a man in distress, courage and wisdom brightens the sun and the moon", "Li Shan's bad news, brothers take justice, shooting water and sobbing, heroes die" ... In the mourning hall, hanging elegies also tell people heroic feats. Among the people who greeted Dai Jun's body, the villagers from Tiaogang Village, Goudun Town, Dai Jun's hometown were the most eye-catching.

More than 211 people stood in a row in an organized way. In the rain, they stood silently with white flowers hanging on their chests, wearing ponchos and umbrellas. All eyes were on the direction where the hearse was coming. They are looking forward to the early return of Dai Jun, a good boy in Tiaogang Village and a kind-hearted person in the eyes of the villagers, and then let the villagers have a last look ... Tiaogang Village cadres told reporters that they knew that Dai Jun "went home" that day, and more than 211 villagers gathered at the village department at 5 am and took a bus to the funeral home.

Heaven wept to welcome the hero home. "Go and call Dad and wake him up ..." At 8: 51, guided by the police car, after a long journey of more than 21 hours, the hearse motorcade with black gauze and the portrait of Dai Jun appeared in the eyes of the people waiting for him. Suddenly, Dai Jun's relatives and neighbors, who had been waiting for a long time, could no longer restrain their grief, and tears stood out from their eyes.

On the hearse, Dai Rong, Dai Jiang and Dai Gui, the three brothers who escorted the eldest brother home, couldn't help crying when they saw the familiar faces and tearful eyes of the villagers. At 8: 57, when Dai Jun's body was pulled out of the hearse and sent to the mourning hall, relatives and neighbors cried and rushed to see the respected "Dajun" in their minds again, and the scene was once out of control.

Dai Jun's third brother, Dai Jiang, ignored everyone's advice, and even rushed to the coffin where his eldest brother's body was placed, and even the guardrail around the coffin was knocked down by two. At about 9: 11, Dai Jun's wife Bian Zhengqin came to the condolence hall with the help of everyone. The daughter Dai Ting held her father's portrait in her arms and stood silently in front of Dai Jun's coffin without saying a word.

relatives of Dai Jun told reporters that the pain of losing his father in the past few days has made Dai Ting shed tears, but she has been holding her father's portrait and following her mother. Seeing her husband's body, Bian Zhengqin cried and tried to reach out again.