Keywords: 150 My puppy's second grade words

Word count: 150 word composition

This article is applicable to: the second grade of primary school.

Composition source:

This composition is about the second grade of primary school 150 words. The topic is: "My dog can catch mice". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Once, when I came back from school, I saw the dog catching mice on my mother's flour bag. It uses its eyes to see if there is a mouse, and then catches it. This dog runs very fast. Mother went downstairs and saw a little mouse. After a while, the dog ate the mouse. Puppy, you are great!

Teacher's comment: It is said that "dogs take mice and mind their own business". Unexpectedly, it really exists in real life. It's really interesting. The author should focus on describing the process of dogs catching mice, and highlight the details with action descriptions, so that the article will be wonderful!

Keep trying!

(China, Xue Le: Teacher Zou Zi) 2009-5- 17 20:54:00