1. Write a composition according to the article on the signboard
One night during the summer vacation, my father said something that surprised me: "Xiaoyi, do you want to go out with me?" As soon as I heard it, I had been waiting for this sentence from my father for a long time. How rare it is! I said yes at once.
I am driving on the road in my father's electric car. The evening breeze blows gently all the way, although it is not very cool, but my heart is much more comfortable. I look east and west. Suddenly, I saw that the signboard of a bathhouse was broken, and the "bathing place" became a "grain field", and the "three points of water" next to it did not light up. I looked at other signs again. "Ha ha ha ha …" That's funny. Dad asked me strangely, "Xiao Yi, what are you doing?" Is the nerve wrong? Why are you laughing so crazy? What's so funny? ..... "I laughed out of breath and said," Look at the signboard of that restaurant,' catering' has become' cannibalism'! " "wow! Want to eat people? " Dad said with a smile. My father and I laughed on this wide road.
I had fun this evening! But I would like to remind shopkeepers to maintain their "bright signboard" to avoid making jokes again. 2. composition about signboards 511 words
signboards are common things in our lives, but have you ever paid attention to them? Today, I'm going to introduce you to two names that I think are not bad.
One is a large shopping mall near our school, called Dream Island. After listening to this store name, you will definitely feel that it does not match the reality. Why? Because the island of dreams, as its name implies, is a dream island, and the dream island is desirable.
If I were a customer, I would walk in with this curiosity. After entering the inside, I feel that there are two worlds inside and outside. Look! It's busy outside, and the noise is terrible, but not only the environment is elegant, but also the air is fresh and there is wonderful music to listen to! It's really comfortable.
What a veritable "dream island"! The other one is a pastry shop opposite our school, and the signboard says: be beautiful, that is, the name of the shop. "Beauty" means delicious and delicious; And "point" means snacks and cakes, so together they are delicious cakes.
when I heard that, I've hung three feet. are you the same? Approaching the bakery, the smell of freshly baked bread came to my nose, and I accelerated my pace and couldn't wait to walk into the restaurant. Wow! There are so many cakes in the bakery that they are baked sallow, which immediately aroused my appetite.
in fact, sometimes, the name of a store is related to the rise and fall of this store's business. However, as long as it has its own characteristics, it can also be famous. After all, the most important thing is the quality of products.
I think the names of the shops are not bad: Block Fish, Xingyuan, Hualian, Jin Lun, Huaxi, Chunjiang, Pepsi and Benny Road. 3. Ask the Great God to write two compositions ranging from 611 to 811 words. 1. Self-compose the topic with love as the idea. 2. I, a confident girl, enjoy the happiness of success and the pain of failure in the ocean of growing up. They always knock on my door from time to time, and with them, I have made a confident me and accepted the baptism of wind and rain. The busy mid-term exam has passed. But my heart is still beating, and I haven't forgotten the tension during the exam. I will never forget that day, the Chinese exam that made my heart beat faster for the first time in my life. In retrospect, my hands are still cold and I am constantly sweating. At eleven o'clock that day, when I finished all the Chinese exam papers, the stone in my heart fell to the ground and I happily checked the questions. However, when I read the composition, it seemed that I was in winter. My composition is beside the point. Maybe I read it wrong and am too nervous. How is that possible? However, my intuition, the facts in front of me tell me that it is really beside the point. Suddenly, I was shocked. What should I do? Rewrite one? However, time must have passed. I didn't look at my watch carefully. It must not be enough. How did this happen? I seem to see time slipping through my fingers. No, no, come back! Tears welled up in my eyes. Why is it my turn to be unlucky? My hands are constantly rubbing against each other. How I wish time could come again! No way! There is still more than half an hour, it is still possible, otherwise I will definitely suffer from anxiety during these hours. Whatever, the pain will be painful! At that important moment, I felt that I was wandering between writing and not writing. Finally, reason finally made me decide to fight. I firmly believe and think confidently that I can do it. I am a confident person, and what I work hard will be successful. Where there is a will, there is a way. At 11: 11, there is still half an hour left before the end of the exam. I took the composition paper, sat down, and as soon as I got the pen, I began to write quickly. Remembering the failure and success in the English test, I quickly constructed an article. Slow down, slow down, don't pass so fast. My heart secretly prayed. My hands were shaking, my heart was shaking, and I felt that I was working hard all over. Finally, this long-awaited article was finally released. Now at 11: 37, I really feel that I am too great. In such a short time, I actually succeeded. I feel that I have created a miracle. I handed in the test paper. Although it is a short-term work, I still believe it confidently and believe in myself. I won't fail this time. The next week, the score came out, 91 points. Although it was not the best, I was still in high spirits. At that time, I finished the composition test for the first time in an extremely nervous short time. It confirmed that my confidence was correct. Witnessed my poor experience. There is nothing impossible in the world, and it is impossible to just dare not do it, not to be unable to do it. Believe in yourself and do those things that you dare not do, and we will see success beckoning to us. I am confident that I will continue my growth journey and still accept the test of wind and rain. However, there is one more valuable memory in my memory and one more confidence in my belief. 4. How to write the material composition? The material given to me is like this. Today, Xiaowen passed by the market and saw a seller < P >, so I embellished it. Write more details. For example, what day is it today, is Xiaowen on his way to school, or is it on his way home from school, or is it a weekend, and Xiaowen passed by the market on his way to the bookstore? If it is on his way to school or school, then what? Is it a brand newly put up by the shopkeeper? You can also describe today's weather, Xiaowen's mood, things you saw on the road, the market situation, whether there are many people, etc. When you find the brand, you can describe what it is like, how big it is, where it is hung, whether it is a wooden or iron brand, and what color it is. When you find the mistake, you can write it in detail. Tell the boss Hou. 5. Continue to write the "signboard" composition encyclopedia
When my son ran his father's flower shop, his son John hung up that signboard and received customers one after another like his father.
One day, the official visited the flower shop again and found Dundt's son running it, which surprised and pleased him. The official said, "Hello, John! I feel honored that you came to run a flower shop. Your experience and attitude towards customers are not worse than your father's.
but I have some ideas about your sign. " John replied, "Go ahead! I can change it. "
"Seeing that you are so young, I don't want you to simply pick up the signboard like your father", the official said calmly, "Then you should name your flower shop! Now, the sign says: Astor Flower Shop sells beautiful and bright flowers. A customer came to this flower shop two days after this incident and bought some flowers.
I also gave some advice to John: "Hello, I like your flowers very much, but when I saw the signboard in your shop, I felt it was dazzling. Especially the words "beautiful and bright".
Your flowers are beautiful. What's the use of signs to describe them? Why not delete these words? John listened to the customer's advice and simply changed the signboard to Esther Flower Shop. The next day, a customer came to this flower shop. He said to John, "I like the flowers in your flower shop very much, but I don't like the signboard of your shop. When people look at this shop, they know it is a flower shop."
why don't you get rid of the "flower shop"? " Later, there was only "Astor" left in the flower shop. Dunt's son's flower shop business is getting more and more prosperous, and his reputation is getting more and more prosperous. John got married and gave birth to a son.
One day, John thought about the signboard in the flower shop for a long time, and suddenly realized something and took it off neatly. 6. Writing a composition with signboard reading materials
First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice", which shows the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.
"We usually rely on accumulation, but the examination room depends on exertion", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".
vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.
There are two ways to establish a "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, and make reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs in a specific notebook, or make reading cards.
the second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the spoken language of the public and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us, so that over time, we can speak out in chapters and write beautifully.
(2) to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.
Because many students usually don't pay attention to the accumulation of materials, they worry about it every time they write a composition, or make it up or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.
If you can, you can take a video camera and tape recorder, observe life deeply, take an active part in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time by sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery.
in this way, the article written is flesh and blood. (3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation.
opinions are the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the idea is not profound, which often shows that the author's thoughts are superficial.
therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.
"One more thought, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.
so we can see the essence through the phenomenon. We should also record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.
Secondly, it is necessary to compile, that is, to extract famous sayings, aphorisms, etc. In a word, the composition should be accumulated, and three writing warehouses, namely, vocabulary warehouse, material warehouse and thought warehouse, should be regularly counted, sorted and classified, and constantly enriched and expanded.
Second, learn to observe before writing a good composition. When Mr. Lu Xun answered the question of how to write a good article for literary youth, he emphasized two points: one is to read more and the other is to practice more. "Look more" here means to observe more.
This shows that if you want to write a good article and master skillful writing techniques, you should observe more, learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing. Chekhov, a Russian novelist, earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself into an observer with keen eyes and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise yourself to observation, as if it were second nature. "
It takes time to practice observation as a habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable. Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials you need in your composition: you should be interested in some seemingly insignificant things that are meaningful, and pay attention to the causes, processes and results; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out into the society, get in touch with more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things and merge them into the long river of your own thoughts at any time.
This is the process of observation. In the process of observation, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Observation should never be limited to "seeing with the eyes". In a broad sense, observation with more practical significance refers to mobilizing all human five senses: listening with ears, feeling with body, and more importantly, thinking with heart and brain, so that such observation will be more delicate and profound.
(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is better than a bad writing.
Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will make the observed materials go to waste and many valuable things will be wasted. (3) observation should pay special attention to perseverance.
Don't commit "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not good for writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about life every day of your life, so that you can write a wonderful article. Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you will often find it difficult to write.
I hope you can learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your observation ability of approval, and make great progress in your writing practice. Third, if the meaning is high, the text will win the idea, which is to establish the center and intention of the article.
so what problems should the article pay attention to when formulating ideas? (1) Correct conception is the first essence of the article's conception. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the article's feelings and ideas are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration. (2) Intention to be single-minded "The matter of composition is more expensive than single-mindedness, and specialization makes perfect, and dispersion is stupid."
no matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. If an article wants to explain this problem as well as that point of view, it will be ambiguous if it rambles.
In fact, if you want to cover everything, you will definitely not meet in place. Besides, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if you express the center through several things, you should stick to the center, keep the goal consistent, and focus on the combination of materials and centers, so that all the power contained in materials can be directed at the center. (3) the idea is to be novel. The article should not follow the crowd, and the novel angle is the core of composition innovation.
The novelty of conception requires jumping out of the old box, not following the forward thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective.