(1) first suppress and then promote, and cultivate appetite.

Alas, how can the teacher let me sit at the same table with him? She is the fiercest girl in my class! So everyone called her "tigress". -"deskmate"

Straight to the point, straight to the point.

My friendship with A Min is unusual-my deskmate in junior high school for three years. I have a lot to say to her. -"deskmate"

(3) Describe vivid images.

She is really ugly: yellow and thin face; Sharp chin; Under the almost invisible eyebrows, a pair of long and narrow eyes; The nose is flat and big; A serrated tooth, slightly yellow ... alas! Needless to say, her appearance really doesn't deserve such a beautiful name-Zhu Lili. -"deskmate"

(4) natural account, the following flat report.

At the beginning of the new semester, I noticed a problem: there are 33 boys and 27 girls in our class, just one more boy at a table, and so are the girls. When a boy and a girl sit at the same table, there is bound to be a crisis. But I never imagined that this crisis would come to me. -"deskmate"

5] At the beginning of the lyrics, it resounded through the sky.

"You will remember tomorrow/the diary you wrote yesterday/you will miss tomorrow/the person who cried the most ..." A melodious song "You at the same table" came from the roadside audio-visual bookstore and brought my thoughts back to the time three years ago ...-"At the same table"

[6] Parallelism and repetition create melody.

A friend is someone to whom I can offer sincere feelings; A friend is someone I can trust completely. Friends, share with me when you are happy, and walk with me when you are in danger. Life without friends is like life without sunshine. I have such a good friend. -"Friends"

Once you open your mouth, there will be endless questions.

The past is like smoke, and most of it fades away with the passage of time, but how can those eyes make me forget? -"Friends"

Famous for leading the way, open the door and understand the meaning.

Bacon once said: "A person who has no real friends can be called a poor person who lives in a lonely life forever." His words showed the importance of friends. Yes, if a person loses friendship, it is difficult for him to live in this world. -"Friends"

(9) Contrast clearly and highlight the key points.

As time goes on, many people are gradually forgotten by me. However, there are such a pair of eyes, a voice and a figure, which still haunt my mind for a long time. -"Friends"

⑽ Use flashback to attract readers.

When we left the national defense education school by bus, I don't know why, but tears actually swirled in our eyes. Is it nostalgia? Do you want to stay in that bitter but tired but energetic life, or do you want to stay in that harsh but sincere and kind soldier, our instructor? -"Friends"

⑾ bring order out of chaos, set the clouds to see the sun.

Some people say that indifference is to see through the world of mortals, see through everything, and think that everything is false and hypocritical ... This view is a misinterpretation of indifference. If we look at the dictionary, we will understand that "indifference" means not pursuing fame and fortune ...-"It doesn't matter"

⑿ Taishan coping, clear-cut.

At present, the trend of campus comparison is rampant, and I think this trend really needs to be braked. -"Compared with the wind, you can have a rest."

[13] Lenovo symbols are wonderful.

A dream once buried under the gunboats of western robbers left the bitter witness of the older generation, the heartache of tears and the yearning for it. Growing up with the crying Yangtze River, we tasted sadness when we were teenagers, stepping on the expectations left by our predecessors and looking forward to one day ...-"Expectation"

[14] Describe the environment and render the atmosphere.

10 9 is here again. Mr. Lu Xun has been dead for 60 years. From evening till midnight, I sat quietly by the window, letting the cold rain beat against the window lattice. Under the lamp, a pot of chlorophytum lightly smeared the wall of a emerald bookcase. The night wind is blowing, and my body is slightly cold. I shed tears at the thought of Mr. Lu Xun.

⒂ inscription is the crown, and philosophy is the first.

Nothing in the world can escape the dialectics of nature. Which is right and which is wrong, which is better and which is worse, which is happy and which is worried, can it be summarized in one sentence? -"If memory can be transplanted"

[14] read widely and be handy.

It is said that on the Yuan Ye in Africa, there is an insect-eating flower with bright colors and unusual fragrance. Many flying insects can't resist the "temptation" and die in it ...-"Resist the" temptation "

⒄ Express emotions and touch people with emotions.

In the twilight, wisps of smoke billowed from the farmhouse. I stood at teacher Zhang's window with a bunch of gardenias in my hand. Teacher Zhang, are you still so busy? It's time to have a rest. Today is your holiday-Teacher's Day. I came to see you with a harvest. -"trivial memories"

⒅ Metaphoring people with things has profound implications.

In the endless wilderness, an ancient tree, although its life has reached the last moment, is still growing tenaciously. Next to it, a small tree is pulling out its buds. The root of the old tree withered, and it lost the juice of life to the young tree; The leaves of the old tree are yellow, which injects green life into the young trees. The old tree has gone through many vicissitudes and gone through a difficult course. Now, the little tree has just sprouted branches and spit out leaves, but the old tree has left it ... just like my grandfather left me, he left me in a hurry before he could accept my gratitude. -"trivial memories"

The key to solving problems, the expression center

Responsibility is what a person should do. Soldiers have the responsibility to defend their country; Doctors have the responsibility to heal the wounded and rescue the dying; Teachers have the responsibility to train successors. Workers, farmers, employees, businessmen ... everyone has their own responsibilities. In our society, there are many conscientious people in all walks of life, who constitute the most beautiful scenery-please allow me to capture a moving picture from this beautiful landscape scroll.

⒇ setting contradictions, fascinating

"I can't believe this, you have lived in this class for more than two years, and you will have no feelings for this group? ..... "This is what teacher Chen said to me this morning. I looked at teacher Chen's angry eyes, and tears of injustice swirled in my eyes. I said psychologically, "Teacher Chen, you misunderstood … how could I not love our class?"

Two. "structure" skill

There are many ways to construct a perfect senior high school entrance examination composition, such as writing a narrative, using things or feelings as clues to construct articles, asking and answering questions, arranging articles in chronological order, flashback, inserting, or adopting the structure of "peeling bamboo shoots". Here, the structure of the "fen"-"tiger's mouth" part of the full text is interpreted in the general way of total score.

1, parallel segment type.

For example, the composition "I live in a challenge" in 2005 is a semi-proposition of the curriculum reform area in Hainan Province. At the beginning, it puts forward an argument and discusses the four objects of the challenge from four angles: challenging inferiority, challenging laziness, challenging jealousy and challenging greed.

Interpretation: Using one sentence at the beginning of each section to guide the whole section actually has the function of dividing the argument. Or summarize the whole section in one sentence at the end of each section. This kind of parallel structure has distinct layers and symmetrical structure, which is refreshing and pleasing to the eye.

For example, in 2005, Changzhou, Jiangsu Province wrote "Beautiful Mood Four Seasons Edition" with the theme of "Have a Good Mood". There are four sentences at the beginning of each section: Spring-kites fly first, and spring warms bloom; Summer-Xiao He's first appearance, dragonfly; Autumn-Taoxiang, fruitful; Winter-silent snow, rich snow.

Interpretation: Many students like to write subheadings of spring, summer, autumn and winter, but the candidates added eight words at the back to prompt the following content. This is an innovation, and moving it to the beginning of the paragraph will definitely give people a fresh and beautiful feeling.

2. Prompt paragraph type

Example: In Yichang, Hubei Province, in 2005, the perfect composition "The Small Street is Really Beautiful" with the theme of "Beauty" began with the method of promoting and suppressing first, and then wrote his dislike of the tranquility and obsolescence of the small street, and praised it from three aspects: First, the small street is really beautiful, and the beauty lies in nature; Second, the beauty of small streets lies in harmony; Third, the beauty of small streets is simple; Finally, it ends in poetic language.

Interpretation: As an independent unit, each aspect of the prompt is placed in front of the level and made into a separate plate, which not only plays the role of attracting the following, but also plays the role of emphasizing and attracting the attention of others.

3. Summary paragraph type

For example, in 2005, the full score composition "Taste of Jiangnan" in the semi-proposition of "Taste of Jiangnan" in Shenzhen, Guangdong Province also adopted the total score structure. At the beginning, I wrote "How many literati are haunted by sentimental Jiangnan", and in the middle, I wrote four poems according to the poems I learned: First, the taste of Jiangnan is the sweetness of clear water; Second, the taste of Jiangnan is the bitterness of first love; Third, the taste of Jiangnan is the pain of leaving home; Fourth, the taste of Jiangnan is the pain of pity. Finally, the full text is summarized.

Interpretation: Contrary to the suggestive paragraph type, the summative paragraph type takes the summary words of each layer as an independent unit, puts them behind each layer, and sets up a separate section to emphasize and summarize this layer.

4. Subtitle style

There are many kinds of subheadings. Let's interpret several common ones.

First, comparison

Example: In 2003, the perfect composition "Ears are picky about food" with the theme of "change" in Nanping, Fujian used four subtitles: change one: eat soft but not hard; The second change: eating hemp is not spicy; The third change: eat fat and not eat thin; Change 4: Eat or not.

Interpretation: Smart candidates have a deep vision and rely on their ears. Each subtitle satirizes the bad phenomenon of bureaucracy, panders to Ma Su, puts money first, deceives the superior and deceives the inferior, and reveals the reason why the truth disappears.

figurative

Example: In 2005, the perfect composition "Farmers Friendly Music" in Henan Province was titled "Friendly", and three subtitles were used in the middle: one tidbit-first meeting friendly, two tidbits-dissolving enmity and three tidbits-connecting friendship.

Interpretation: three subheadings, compare what you wrote to tidbits. Three friendly tidbits make up a friendly world. Dashes play an explanatory role. Dashes are also used, such as "Laugh-amuse children, laugh-increase courage, laugh-turn around life" in a friendly smile.

C, poetic style

For example, in 2004, Zibo's perfect composition "Water Sacrifice" was titled "Scenery", and four subheadings were used: Scenery 1: It rained in succession during the Qingming Festival; Landscape 2: pedestrians on the road want to break their souls; Scenery 3: Excuse me, where is the restaurant? Scene 4: The shepherd boy points to Xinghua Village.

Interpretation: The examinee's four subheadings skillfully quoted four ancient poems written by Du Mu in the Tang Dynasty, and wrote four landscapes, comparing ancient and modern, demonstrating the advantages and disadvantages, and deepening them layer by layer, telling people that the pollution and destruction of water resources are worrying and should arouse people's high vigilance.

For example, in the perfect composition "Applause Again" written by Suqian, Jiangsu Province in 2005, the three subtitles used three words quoted by Wang Guowei's "Three Realms of Learning and Thinking": last night, the west wind withered the trees, and I went upstairs alone to see the horizon; I will not regret that my belt is getting wider, and I will languish for Iraq; When I look back, I am no longer under the dim light. Write a story about your study.

D. Situation

For example, in 2005, the perfect composition "Scenery on the Heartstrings" in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province, took "Scenery" as the topic, and used four subheadings: Lonely when people went to the building, Chun Qing in the old days, affectionate singing with me late, and two lines of tears were intense.

Interpretation: From the four subheadings, it can be seen that the author, as a lyric hero, highly integrates "emotion" and "scenery", which is worth learning.

There are many forms of subtitles, which can be one beat, two beats and three beats, the first, second and third acts of a drama, or the diary, so I won't go into details here.

E, small

Example: In 2005, the perfect composition entitled "From scratch" in Nanjing, Jiangsu Province used three sub-headings: the head of the king, the head of the brave and the head of the winner.

Interpretation: These three subheadings are considered from three smaller entry points. In the text after the first subtitle, the famous saying "Legends come from Jiangshan generation, each leading the way for hundreds of years" was used, and then the story of Chen Sheng was written; After the second subtitle, the poem "A thousand hammers cut out a deep mountain, and the fire burns idle" was used. Then he wrote the story of Xu Xiake's hard search for the source of the Yangtze River and opening up the road of exploration for the brave. After the third subtitle, I used the famous sentence "I will ride the wind and waves one day, and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea", and then wrote the story of the champion of athlete Liu Xiang. These three points closely revolve around the "head". Finally, the local materials are used to call on candidates to be confident, open this wonderful "head", the wonderful "head" and the dancing "head" are simply wonderful.

There are also materials selected from family life: "leaders" who earn money (for dad), "leaders" who manage money (for mom) and "leaders" who save money (for themselves), and the structure is also very reasonable.

F, sensory type

For example, in 2005, the perfect score composition "Wonderful Moment" of the semi-proposition composition "Wonderful" in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province, used three subtitles in the middle: Look, the sunny sky is rising; Listen, water lilies are in full bloom; Products, the true meaning of life.

Interpretation: The first subtitle, full of hope, not only writes about the young aunt giving birth to a child, but also writes about the rising sun. The second subtitle is hard to understand at first glance. After careful reading, we know that the candidate once closed his eyes slightly and listened to the crisp sound of "bang" when listening to the lecture in Bloom. This detailed description is convincing. The third subtitle is about the intoxicating girl who blew away a dandelion flower while she was still thinking about donating her cornea. Three exquisite moments are showing the true meaning of life, giving people hope, smiling and helping, which is worthy of readers' taste.

Three. Ending technique

If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and sipping fragrant teas, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an unhappy ending at the end of reading! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the beginning, which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.

Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted a slogan unrelated to the content of the article, which is a major theme at the end. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.

1. Highlight the theme. This way of ending is at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text, using concise language to express the theme clearly, or at the end of the full text, explaining the writing intention clearly, so this way of ending is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of the senior high school entrance examination composition "Special answer sheet": "Six years later, this special answer sheet has been treasured in my drawer. I want him to warn me all the time: knowledge can't tolerate any falsehood. "

At the end of the paper, the theme is highlighted with refined exposition, which gives people profound enlightenment.

2. End-to-end echo. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, "a precious shirt" begins with "at my home, there is a white dacron shirt". Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" "

3. Lyric argument. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency. For example, at the end of the senior high school entrance examination composition "Moved by Happiness", "I remember a poet saying,' How can I thank you? When I came to you, I wanted to harvest a spring breeze, but you gave me the whole spring; How can I thank you? When I came to you, I wanted to hold a handful of waves, but you gave me the whole ocean.' Yes, how can I thank you, mom and dad? You gave me life, you gave me strength, you gave me happiness, but I got nothing in return. There is a feeling called happiness, and there is a kind of happiness called moving. I understand your hardships, I understand your hope, and I will try my best to give you happiness and let you learn to be moved! "

4. Wonderful introduction and clever connection. End with famous sayings, aphorisms, poems, proverbs, lyrics, etc. The intention is to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' minds and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". For example, at the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Postal Road", it says "Pears in the Postal Road are everywhere." Another example is the ending of "How I Want to Have You, Childhood": "If time goes back, I would like to go back to my childhood, mom, you are still standing at the door of the hut ..." The song is still so crisp and sweet. The ending of the lyrics adds charm to the work and arouses the readers' aesthetic feeling.

5. Lens editing. That is to say, the ending draws a vivid image, with a sense of lens and full of poetry. For example, at the end of the composition "Little Parrot, Fly" in the examination room: "It has gone, wearing a colorful coat, flying towards its own vast and boundless sky."

6. Natural bunching. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the end fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness, which is concise, lively and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination. The atmosphere in the composition examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "method". As long as you are full of passion, write freely and fully express your feelings, it is a good article. But paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development.

For example, "My Teacher" ends with: "It's a pity that I didn't finish my primary school, so I transferred to the fifth primary school in the county. Since then, I have separated from Teacher Cai. " Between the lines of the full text, the author's sincere and deep feelings for Teacher Cai are everywhere, and the author's nostalgia for Teacher Cai is everywhere. This difference at the end expresses the author's feelings for Teacher Cai more deeply.

7. Sublimate the theme. This method is a way to reveal the essence through phenomena. Sublimation theme should be appropriate, just right, don't send it at will. For example, "Missing Mom" ends with: "Mom has left me now, and I will never see her again. This kind of sadness is irreversible. Mother is an ordinary person. She is just one of the millions of working people in China, but it is these millions who have created and created the history of China. How can I repay my mother for her kindness? I will continue to be loyal to our nation and people, and to the hope of our nation and people-the Chinese Production Party, so that people living with their mothers can live happily. This is what I can do, I will do it. May mother rest in peace underground! " At the end, the author sublimated the theme to a new height: from loving mother to praising ordinary working people in China, with profound thoughts.

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1, life is a winding path in the mountain, bumpy, with cliffs on the side. If you fall, cry if you want. What are you afraid of? Stop pretending! This is honesty, not weakness, because crying does not affect the road, but it can increase a sense of caution. The mountains are full of flowers and the scenery is pleasant. If you are intoxicated, smile happily, don't pretend to be reserved! This is honesty, not pride, because smiling does not affect the road, but can increase self-confidence.

2. Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which makes people who are hungry and cold feel the warmth of the world; Love is a clear spring in the desert, and people who are on the verge of despair have seen the hope of life; Love is a shower sprinkled on the long-term arid land, which makes the lonely and helpless people get spiritual comfort immediately.

3. Days always pass through your fingertips like spun yarn, and slip away inadvertently. Those sadness and misuse, with the waves gently faded, leaving the joy and smile, will always remain in the depths of memory.

4. Some memories are burned, and some memories are buried in the bottom of my heart. The age of innocence is like running water across the golden age.

5. Motherly love is a masterpiece that I can't finish reading all my life; Motherly love is the sky that I can never fly out. ..... Zhang Weiwei

6. When yellow autumn leaves are swaying in the wind, late autumn floats outside the school gate. In the moonlight, my father's shadow is very long, and my skinny father is wrapped in a huge windbreaker, and my heart is sour.

7. True feelings in the world are like a big net, which warms people's hearts all the time, just like maternal love, which is endless.

8. Time is a poem, a philosophical poem of the richest man. Time is a camel carrying the dreams of countless people.

9. The fate of a ship lies in drifting; The fate of sails lies in chasing the wind and waves; The fate of life lies in grasping, grasping and believing that life can lead to youth and innocence.

10, the past is like a song. In the journey of life, despite ups and downs and full of regrets, the beauty of youth has not been lost. Believe in yourself, there is always hope. Let's remember that sentence: I won't cry if I miss the sun, otherwise I will miss the moon and stars.

1 1. If you fail in life, please don't write sad tears on your face. Failure is also a gain. The most important thing in life is to have full courage and the courage to start a business.

12, once thought that a helpless cry, a memo is all the vicissitudes of the world; A small setback and a memo are all failures in life. When I was fourteen, I told me ...

13, the moonlight is quiet. Raindrops pattered on the hut. In the dim light, mother sewed the homeless clothes tightly. Suddenly, a cold wind squeezed into the window gap of the hut. My mother seemed to have caught a cold and coughed a few times with deep tiredness. I woke up in my dream and stared at my old mother under the lamp. ...

14, at night, the spring breeze blows gently. I sat on the colorful steps of death with my chin cupped, and another unforgettable thing came to my mind.