The first thing to understand when writing a commentary is to be passionate and rational. Passionate writing is like a blowout of natural gas and oil, rushing for nine days, and being rational is to proceed from facts and treat it rationally, and not to fantasize.

first, quote events, be concise-deduction of materials is the first point

When commenting on articles, you must quote news events at the beginning, which is the root of writing and the point of argument. It is equivalent to quoting materials in material composition. In material composition, quoting refers to quoting materials as a topic, revealing arguments or asking questions. It belongs to the part of "Introduction". It is best to proceed from the need to put forward an argument, grasp the gist of the material, and quote it accurately in concise language. Generally speaking, different materials have different ways of quoting: narrative materials with many words should be summarized, incisive famous sayings and aphorisms should be repeated, words with profound meanings and rich connotations should be expounded, and comic materials should briefly introduce and briefly elaborate the pictures. For the commentary, the quoted events should have a source and source.

quotation, usually written in the first paragraph, requires that an appropriate central argument be drawn from the event. So from which materials do you draw the central argument? We can consider the following aspects:

One sentence: mainly a famous saying, aphorism, epigram, common saying, even proverbs and philosophical words. For example, from Mencius's "I am old, and people are old; Young people and young people "can lead to the argument that" respecting the old and loving the young ". Another example is "but you widen your view three hundred miles, by going up one flight of stairs", which leads to the argument that "you can only see far if you stand high".

a phenomenon: for example, from "on holidays, eating and drinking, extravagance and waste" can lead to the argument that "frugality leads to failure and extravagance"; Another example is the argument that puppy love is a stumbling block to success from the phenomenon of puppy love among middle school students.

One thing: For example, a serious traffic accident can lead to the argument that "a car accident is fiercer than a tiger". The price of life is higher. "

of course, in recent years, the college entrance examination is almost all about material composition. And the material itself writes a phenomenon or a thing. In particular, we should read the materials carefully and deeply understand them. In a few words, hit the point, crisp and neat, properly and quickly lead to the central argument.

second, analyze the reasons and root causes-the best way to discuss materials

Cause analysis, also known as causal analysis. This kind of analysis is to link arguments with arguments from the causal relationship. Specifically, it is to explore the root causes, discover the essence and deepen the content of the behavior and results in the case along the idea of "why".

To prove the argument that "one should be determined", tell a story like this: It is said that Newton was not clever when he was young. Once, his father told him to make a hole in the door to make it easier for the big cat and the kitten to go out, but he made two big holes, saying that it was because there were two small animals. Nevertheless, in the process of Newton's determination to explore the mysteries of science, he achieved fruitful results because of his hard work. Then the causal analysis method is used: if a person sets his mind, it is like pressing the engine on a machine, and he will have inexhaustible energy. It is precisely because of this "inexhaustible strength" that Newton made great achievements and became a famous scientist.

This is precisely after citing examples, along the thinking of why Newton became a scientist, to explore its roots, thus proving the argument that "people should aspire to it".

this kind of analysis often uses "what caused this? Originally ... "leads to explore and analyze things.

The advantages of the causal analysis method are: firstly, it can be discussed closely around the material, and it will never deviate from the meaning of the question; secondly, it completely conforms to the test site of "not deviating from the center of the material"; Thirdly, it strengthens the speculative nature of material composition.

Third, to explore the essence, philosophical speculation extends and expands the discussion space

Fundamentally speaking, the main body of argumentative writing is to answer a "why" question. When we demonstrate an argument, we should start thinking and ask more

"why". In other words, it is to take the central argument as a conclusion to trace the conditions and reasons for this conclusion, or to penetrate into the essence through the phenomenon, or to reveal the reasons for the problems, thus forming a sub-argument. Because causality is a universal connection between all things and phenomena, the method of "tracing back to the source and exploring the reasons" is also a widely used method in argumentative writing.

if you analyze the reason, you can know the gain and loss and distinguish the truth from the falsehood. What is the most bitter thing in life? Poor? No. Frustrated? No. Old? Dead? Neither. I said that the hardest thing in life is to carry an unfinished responsibility. If people can be satisfied, they are poor and not bitter; If you can be quiet (don't make extra hopes), although you are frustrated, you are not bitter; Old age and death are inevitable things in life, and it's nothing to be bitter for a philosophical person. It's just that as long as one is alive, one should do something. If you don't finish what you should do, it's like having a few thousand pounds of burden on your shoulders, and there is no more pain. Why? Because of the conscience, there is no place to escape! (Attachment: The central argument of this article is that life is the most bitter thing, and Mo Ruo carries an unfinished responsibility. )

In this paragraph, candidates can quote the classics, give full play to their social knowledge, dig deep into the roots and social influence, expand and extend the materials and viewpoints, and deepen their viewpoints.

Fourth, contact with reality, take a clear-cut stand-see the big picture from the small, and extensively cover it

(1) The position where the contact with reality part appears in the full text

The contact with reality part is often in the middle or the second half of the article; It can also be used in the whole article. The argumentative essays written by our middle school students can also be related to vivid examples in reality, but not to history, which is rare; Most of them are in the second half of the article, that is, after quoting some typical cases or famous sentences in ancient times, they are connected with vivid examples in today's society; Others demonstrate the central point of view only before the end of the article, connecting with the current reality or their own actual situation, which enhances the persuasiveness and sense of the times of the article.

Part of it is connected with reality and appears in the middle or the second half of the article.

Features are the catalyst for success.

Zheng Banqiao's calligraphy is famous and called "Banqiao Style" because his works have its own characteristics, which are unique and irreplaceable. Imagine that Zheng Banqiao only used official script or running script at the beginning, even if he imitated the handwriting of celebrities.

For example, the competition in the catering industry is fierce now, and it may be eliminated by the times at any time. According to online statistics, most of the restaurants with good performance and popularity are theme restaurants. There are restaurants that eat in the dark, and restaurants that specialize in white-collar women. Considering the troubles of white-collar women, they specially provide free nutrition and weight loss packages and disposable slippers to get rid of their discomfort in wearing high heels. The reason why these restaurants can maintain good performance under the influence of the financial crisis is that their supervisors are well-run and know how to highlight the characteristics of their stores and meet the needs of customers.

Another example is George Moran, a famous British painter in the 16th and 7th centuries. When his oil paintings were first shipped to China as tributes, people thought that they were ok from a distance, but when they looked closely, they were nothing but patches of pigments. It is precisely because of this feature that his oil paintings are gradually accepted by other countries, and he is even proud of his collection.

actually, aren't we?

As Shanghai is now focusing on building an international financial center and an international shipping center, the University of Finance and Economics, Maritime University and Ocean University are very popular this year. Many people have herd mentality, and even if their children don't like it, they are forced to fill in this school. I don't think it is advisable to do this. When our own characteristics are the same as those of others, it can't be called "characteristics". On the contrary, as long as you fill in the school according to your favorite major, even if this major is unpopular, you can learn well as long as you are interested, and maybe you will become the talent that companies compete for after graduation! (Connecting with the reality of life and adding personal opinions makes the article not only have the existence of "I", but also enhance the sense of the times.)

The same is true of being a man. There is a proverb that says, "Go your own way and let others say it!" As long as you think something meaningful and worth doing, then let go and do it hard, why care about other people's eyes! Live high's characteristics are good.

But characteristics are not equal to individuality. Before you do anything, you should consider whether it infringes on the interests of others, and it should be within the scope permitted by law.

By cultivating my own characteristics, I believe I can live a more exciting life and life will be full of fun.

(2) The whole article is connected with reality. You can organize the article with multiple current affairs hotspots, or you can use one current affairs hotspot to run through the whole article.