Demonstration of composition topic guidance and material application in Yichang City, Hubei Province

In 2113, Yichang City, Hubei Province, guided writing of composition questions and demonstration of using materials

Wang Daifu, Hubei Province

Replay of real questions

People's life is a process of constant walking. Walking is not only walking, but also a life attitude and a spiritual journey. When we are young, we often walk in the natural scenery, in the streets and lanes, in the art gallery, in the vast sea of books, in the warmth of love ... We are either happy, or moved, or wandering ... These colorful walking experiences make us realize, urge us to forge ahead and promote our growth.

Please write an article on the topic "Walking in

". Write your own walking experience, unique experience and sentiment.

Requirements: ① Complete the topic first; ② There should be no real names and places that reveal candidates' information in the text; ③ About 611 words.

Writing Guidance

This is a semi-proposition for the material composition, and there are many contents to fill in the horizontal line. According to the materials and tips, you can be realistic or imaginary; You can actually write about natural scenery, but you can choose books, art, kindness, warmth and so on, but you should buckle the word "walking" to reflect the process of growth.

It is very important to write this topic well, supplement the topic and determine the main idea. The "walking" in the title limits the object of writing; The title material indicates the content and scope of writing. Candidates can fill in the blanks according to their own ideas and determine the theme. Such as "walking on the road of youth", you can write a story of youth growth; "Walking in the art gallery" can write the course of soul edification; "Walking in kindness and warmth" can write about the goodness and beauty of human nature; "Walking on the road of dreams" can describe the process of pursuing struggle ...

Excellent work in examination room

Walking on the road of growth

A candidate in Yichang

Walking on the road of growth, my heart is full of expectations and longings.

—— Inscription

The day before I went to junior high school, my parents competed to send me to school.

I think I'm a 2112-year-old boy. I have to do my own thing and go my own way. Thought of here, I made up my mind-no one is allowed to send, and I will go to school myself!

The next day, I found a bamboo pole and went to school with my luggage. Although mom and dad insisted on sending it, I flatly refused. When we set off, they looked at me with extremely uneasy eyes. I pretended to be relaxed and went on the road, humming a cheerful song in my mouth.

Facing the morning sunshine and breathing the fresh air, I feel really grown up! Thinking like this, my heart is full of comfort and pride. Walking on the way to school, birds are singing, flowers are in full bloom, and my steps are getting lighter and lighter, as if the whole world is full of vitality.

When I walked more than two miles, I felt hot and dry, and my feet seemed to be tripped by something, so I couldn't move any further. I feel pain in my shoulder gradually, and the burden is getting heavier and heavier. It seems that someone is playing a prank and constantly pressuring my shoulder ... My breathing is a little blocked, my mouth is dry, and my throat seems to emit smoke. I gritted my teeth and insisted. Suddenly, I felt that the sunny weather was like a "total solar eclipse". In front of me, Venus burst into chaos, staggered and almost fell to the ground. I conveniently sat down on the ground, exhaled breath, touched my face, ah, all sweaty!

I don't want to get up once I sit down! At this time, I vaguely regretted it: I really shouldn't have let my parents send it, because I haven't grown up yet! Thought of here, my nose is not a acid ...

"Ha ha! How's it going? I said you can't. Does this taste good? " Just when I didn't know what to do, a familiar voice came. I looked up and found my father standing behind me, gloating at me. It turned out that he was not at ease and raced to "follow" me secretly!

"Hum!" I was ashamed and annoyed. I wanted to crustily skin of head and defend myself, but I was speechless at the moment, and at the same time a disappointing tear rolled down! When my father saw my sweaty appearance, he immediately turned into a merciful "Guanyin Bodhisattva", stroking my shoulder flushed with the shoulder pole lovingly, and solemnly praised: "Well done, Rain is falling! Although the taste of being involved is a little uncomfortable, you have been exercised. Dad believes that you will be successful in the future! " I turned my face away stubbornly, but my heart was as cold as ice water.

Dad dried my sweat with a towel on my shoulder, took out a bottle of my favorite "Shuang Bian" from his spacious pocket and handed it to me. Then he picked up the burden I left on the side of the road, put it firmly on his shoulder and turned to me and said, "Let's go, Dad will take you!" Say that finish, then strode forward.

The shoulder pole creaks on Dad's shoulder, just like a beautiful mountain tune. I trotted behind to catch up with my father's brisk pace.

I think, when can I practice my father's strong shoulders, shoulder the burden of family life and lighten the burden of my parents?

Walking on the road of growth, my heart is full of expectation and longing-grow up quickly!

Comments

This article closely follows the theme of "walking" and describes the story of "growing up". The article is typical in material selection, complete in narrative, clear in structure, natural in transition, humorous in language and lively and playful. In particular, the dialogue between the characters and the description of psychological activities in the text are vivid, delicate and touching. The image of a clever and sensible, filial to parents, considerate and grateful sunshine boy is vividly on the paper.

Learn flexibly

Guidance on the use of special materials for the senior high school entrance examination in "The Road to Success in Composition" in 2113

● Conception angle 1:

You can fill in "The Road to Youth" on the horizontal line, choose the story of youth and growth, write your own "walking" experience and express your uniqueness. Docking materials:

The Road to Success in Writing (junior middle school edition), No.1, 2113, the article "Out of the Misunderstanding of Growth" featured two themes: "puppy love" and "running away from home", which described the bitter youth stories of some middle school students who had fallen into the wrong path of growth; In the same period of the same year, in the article "The Story of Growing Up", the young author took watching the photo album as a clue to express his growing process and feelings; In the 4th issue of 2113, two articles, Gorgeous on the Road to Growth and Growing through Experience, can be called model essays on "Walking on the Road to Growth" ...

Application instruction:

The article "Waiting for bloom" in Out of the Mistakes of Growth involves a sensitive topic that people don't want to mention-"puppy love". Although the school explicitly prohibits students from falling in love, once the emotion arises, it will make those boys and girls who have just entered the world unable to extricate themselves. Fortunately, the boy in the article is very rational, and he clearly tells the girl to "wait for bloom". In the article "I traveled far at the age of eighteen", the girl fell out of the list on the eve of the college entrance examination because of distraction. In the process of "running away from home", her soul was washed away, and finally she overcame setbacks and conquered herself, from which she gained the feeling that life must experience setbacks and flowers must wait for spring. When writing a composition on the theme of "growth" or "youth", you can use these two articles as positive and negative materials. As for the three excellent works of students about "growth" mentioned above, they can be used as model essays for reference.

● Conception Angle 2:

Add the topic to "Walking in Kindness and Warmth", choose the kind and warm stories you encounter, show the goodness and beauty of human nature, and express your true feelings and experiences.

Docking materials:

The Road to Success in Composition (junior middle school edition) No.1 in 2113, in which there are two articles about affection, expressing children's gratitude for their parents' love and thinking about life; In the second and third issues of the same year, in the article "2113 senior high school entrance examination composition simulation test questions and writing instructions", the first simulation test question is to write a composition with the topic of "

warmth" or "warmth

", with specific and essential writing instructions; In the same period of the same year, the article "Warm Looking Back" expressed fatherly love and affection. These materials can express the theme of "kindness and warmth".

Application instruction:

In Walking in the Sunshine of Love, the "famous writer's beautiful essay" and "Love hidden in persimmons" describe the process of the country father sending persimmons and other items to his daughter in the city, and through extremely ordinary life details, the family relationship is enlarged, which makes people sing. "Students' Work" and "Hidden Love in Details" tell two family stories, which express parents' love for their children incisively and vividly from a subtle perspective, making people feel the warmth and greatness of family ties. Another exercise, "Looking Back Warmly", tells the story of my father riding a bicycle with me to go shopping for books. From my father's warm eyes, "I" understood the care and affection. These articles all express the theme of "kindness and warmth".