Generality refers to the content of the copy. Guests staying in the hotel can see what kind of services they will get after their stay through your copy, including food, accommodation, transportation and play. Your writing is very detailed, giving people a feeling of fog. After reading it, they don't remember anything. This is the taboo of copywriting.
The form of layered food copy is unclear and the context is chaotic. I don't know which paragraph you are talking about, and I don't know what paragraph you are talking about. The language of "Xingye International Hotel currently has 236 rooms of various types" should be said at the beginning, "It can easily meet your needs" should be mentioned at the end, which is also the reason for the confusion.
Suggestion: Because we don't know exactly what your client's hotel looks like, we suggest that you modify it yourself, make an outline first, and then add the content. It is best to have several meanings, just a few paragraphs, and the more words, the better! ~.~