The so-called excellent composition for college entrance examination is nothing more than flowery ancient prose.
However, you may not be unable to write a composition with true feelings, but you must do what you can. If you are not careful, your true feelings will not be reflected, and you will fall into the stereotype, leaving both people and money empty.
If you really want to write a composition with true feelings, it can't be used as an exam composition, but you are writing an exam composition, and the so-called true feelings will inevitably be affected by the exam, some of which are true and false. Therefore, the pure description of things in life is rarely seen in the current narrative. Narratives are mostly new stories and the like, striving for innovation.
Observation is very important when writing a composition. What can two swallows accumulate when they fly over? What sentences come to mind? How do you describe their flying posture, like what? Like mutually exclusive magnets? Or a double helix structure of dna separated by an arm? Imagine where they are going and what they can learn from them, which can arouse the admiration of those ancient poems.
Always accumulate, look at the composition topic during the exam. Try to relate what you have figured out and try to fit the topic. If the topic seems to have its own ideas, you can add appropriate real feelings and write your own opinions.
Talking too much usually means writing down what you think and flowing like a knife.
Too much discussion can easily make the marking teacher bored. You should know how to add plots to make the article active, but before you start writing, you should first determine what style you want to write. Writing an argumentative essay is bound to accumulate material. Four classic novels, a celebrity, with beautiful sentences. He usually reads books on the Internet and can consciously write down any excellent sentences he sees. For example, I once wrote a sentence describing Liu Che: "I am buried here. Please don't feel sorry for passers-by, because I am alive and none of you can live. " What can this sentence be used for? Xiang Yu, Cao Cao ...
Another time, I saw the story of high mountains and flowing water. What can I write? A lot, such as friendship, such as music, think of music, and what can you associate with it? "A song by He Manzi, see how hard she tries to hold back her tears." "Strong women in business don't know how to hate the country, but they still sing backyard flowers across the river." What can you think of? High mountains and flowing water, high school flowing water, you can write that three years of high school have passed like flowing water and write a good title for your composition.
Therefore, many compositions are usually accumulated, so read more books. Any book, any book can be used, but you should read it carefully, such as the romance of the Three Kingdoms, with so many plots. Remember, you can use almost any topic. How much can you write with a chop of Masu? Discipline, innovation, trustworthiness, emotional intimacy and rational choice can all provide good argument materials.
But when writing an argumentative essay, you should not have too much material. Generally speaking, there are positive and negative materials, or multiple materials are combined into a paragraph, with parallelism, metaphor and beautiful words, which is also a way to highlight the color of the article.
This is just a personal idea. Writing a composition has its own tricks. Let's go
Oh, there is another scene. In fact, it is easier to write a scene than to tell a story. Once you are proficient, you can write like a wild horse.
Writing about scenery is generally not just about writing, such as poplars. Have the desire to promote the first, metaphor, personification, vivid writing. Write about the scenery, such as spring, pink and willow green, blue water and sky blue.
What are the characteristics of the scenery written? Can you describe it in other ways? Poplar, for example, is written as guard. How to write poplar? Accumulation, "live for 300 years, but not die for 300 years, and die for 300 years." It can be associated with strength and perseverance. Pay attention to the contrast of environment when writing scenery. Poplar, for example, can write about the harsh environment in Gobi.
Exercise meticulous brushwork, for example, I can give myself a chance to exercise my language organization ability by answering the landlord's questions.
First, the composition should learn to accumulate.
The ancient summaries of "Reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "A clever woman can't cook without rice" illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects. "Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room.
(A) language to establish a "vocabulary". Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards. The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.
(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials. Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery. The article written in this way is flesh and blood.
(3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation. Opinion is the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful. "One more miss, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens. So you can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time. The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms.
In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand.
Second, learn to observe before writing a good composition.
Mr. Lu Xun emphasized two points when answering the question of "how to write good articles" for young artists: one is to read more books, and the other is to practice more. Here, "seeing more" means observing more. This shows that in order to write a good article and master skillful writing skills, it is necessary to observe more and learn to observe, and observation is the necessary premise and foundation of writing.
Russian novelist Chekhov earnestly warned beginners: "A writer must train himself to be a keen observer and never give up! -It is a habit to exercise your own observation, as if it were second nature. " It takes time to hone observation into habit and second nature, which is very useful and remarkable.
Pay attention to the people, events, sights and things around you, and hunt for the materials needed in the composition: be interested in some seemingly insignificant but meaningful things, and pay attention to the cause, process and result of things; You should pay attention to how the plants in the campus flower beds change their colors all year round, and learn to get to the bottom of it and find out the ins and outs of these changes; You should go out, enter the society, meet more people, observe their words and deeds, think about some things, and integrate into your own thoughts at any time. This is the process of observation, and the following points should be paid attention to in the process of observation:
(a) Observation should not be limited to "eyes". Broadly speaking, more practical observation refers to mobilizing all the five senses of people: listening with ears, feeling with the body and, more importantly, thinking with the mind, so that the observation will be more delicate and profound.
(2) Pay attention to the use of "bad writing" in the observation process. As the saying goes, a good memory is better than bad writing. Many students see a lot and think a lot every day, but they are not good at writing it down at any time, which will waste the observed materials and a lot of valuable things.
(3) Pay special attention to perseverance in observation. Don't make "brain fever". Three minutes of heat is not conducive to writing a good composition. You should observe life and think about every day in your life, so that you can write wonderful articles.
Learning to observe plays a great role in laying the foundation and promoting a good composition. Without observation, you often find it difficult to write. May you learn to observe, constantly cultivate and improve your ability to observe, and make great progress in your writing practice.
Third, the meaning is high, and the text wins. '
Intention is to establish the center and intention of the article. So what problems should the article pay attention to when expounding ideas?
(A) the idea should be correct
Correctness is the first meaning of the article. The so-called correctness is to ensure that the feelings and thoughts of the article are correct, in line with the nature and laws of objective things, in line with China's basic political principles, in line with people's basic moral requirements, and can give people positive inspiration.
(2) single-minded.
"The problem of composition is more expensive than being single. Specialization is fine, and dispersion is stupid. " No matter how complicated things are, the main idea cannot be dispersed. An article should explain both this problem and that point of view, and it is ambiguous to ramble. In fact, if you want to cover everything, it is definitely not in place. Moreover, an article can only have one center. Instead of "biting off more than one can chew", it is better to concentrate on expressing a center with pen and ink. Even if we express the center through several things, we should stick to the center, keep the same goal, pay attention to the combination of materials and centers, and let all the forces contained in materials point to the center.
(c) Ideas should be novel.
The article is the most taboo to echo others' opinions, and the novel angle is the core of composition innovation. The novelty of the idea requires jumping out of the old box and not following the advanced thinking, habitual thinking or the original psychological formula, but examining the alternative content contained in the topic from a unique perspective to avoid what others often write and what others have not written. Even if the same writing object can always be cut in from multiple angles, as long as we break the mindset, stand at the height of the times, avoid "vulgarity" and seek "difference", think from multiple angles and sides, or associate, expand, analogize or reverse, and build your most beautiful rainbow in the colorful sky.
(4) be profound.
Profound conception means that the established theme is not the superficial truth that people are familiar with, but to look at the essence through the phenomenon and dig deeper meaning.
(5) ingenious conception.
In limited words, if you want to express profound thoughts, you can only see the world from a grain of sand, reproduce the whole picture of life from one branch and one leaf, and describe and think about society and life from one drop, one fragment, one moment and one phenomenon, that is, you should focus on the big picture and put pen to paper in a small place, but you can see great dullness from a small angle.
The composition is written, so everyone should practice more and pay attention to the direction and method of practice. This is the right way to improve the level of composition.