One Saturday afternoon, after finishing my homework, I stayed at home alone, wanted to watch TV, and there was nothing good, so I rummaged around at home, hoping to find something new. I rummaged around and finally found something-a red photo album.
Open it and there are some tiny photos. Who is she? I turned a few pages and saw a photo of my mother and the little one.
I think: the little man in the photo may be me. There is a picture of the little guy eating the cake with relish.
Once, my mother said to me, "You were very greedy when you were a child!" " "I was very angry and asked my mother why. Mom said, "When you were young, you liked cookies very much. Let me buy it for you as soon as you see it.
Every time I eat cookies, I always ask for a piece first to see if it's delicious. If it's delicious, have a few more pieces.
However, at that time, when you were young, you couldn't take a few pieces at a time, so you put the biscuits under your arm, and there was really no place to put them, so you began to munch. "I think this photo of me eating cookies should have been taken at that time.
After reading many photos of my childhood, I suddenly felt that I was so innocent and lovely when I was a child.
2. The story composition of old photos begins with an oblique way. These old photos have been stored for a long time, which is a true record of the past years.
One Saturday afternoon, after finishing my homework, I stayed at home alone, wanted to watch TV, and there was nothing good, so I rummaged around at home, hoping to find something new. I rummaged around and finally found something-a red photo album.
Open it and there are some tiny photos. Who is she? I turned a few pages and saw a photo of my mother and the little one.
I think: the little man in the photo may be me. There is a picture of the little guy eating cookies with relish.
Once, my mother said to me, "You were very greedy when you were a child!" " "I was very angry and asked my mother why. Mom said, "When you were young, you liked cookies very much. Let me buy it for you as soon as you see it.
Every time I eat cookies, I always ask for a piece first to see if it's delicious. If it's delicious, have a few more pieces.
However, at that time, when you were young, you couldn't take a few pieces at a time, so you put the biscuits under your arm, and there was really no place to put them, so you began to munch. "I think this photo of me eating cookies should have been taken at that time.
After reading many photos of my childhood, I suddenly felt that I was so innocent and lovely when I was a child.
3. Unforgettable story. Write an unforgettable story in 400 words.
In my mind, there are many things like countless little stars, and each little star is a thing. One of them is an insignificant little star, but it reminds me of endless memories.
It was noon on a Thursday and it was raining. After lunch, I walk to school with an umbrella. A little girl suddenly got into my umbrella and said to me, "I forgot my umbrella." Shall we hold an umbrella together? " Thank you. "Although I reluctantly agreed, but I don't want to do so. I thought to myself, "my umbrella is not big, so it is not enough to fight alone." One more person is not enough now. "Along the way, I always secretly moved my umbrella to my side, and the rain soaked half of the little girl's clothes.
I always walk carelessly along the way. If I am not careful, I am knocked down by a small stone on the road and my pants are dirty. Now I'm in trouble. It's too late to go home and change. My classmates will laugh at me when I get to school. Just when I was in a dilemma, the little girl took out a white handkerchief and said to me, "Come, I'll wipe it for you." As soon as I heard this, I quickly said, "No, you will get your handkerchief dirty, and your mother will talk about you." Hearing this, the little girl smiled and said, "No, my mother is a teacher. She taught me to help others when they are in trouble. Besides, didn't you help me? " After listening to the little girl, I felt ashamed and didn't speak for a long time.
It's been a long time, but I remember clearly that every time my selfish thoughts reappear, the little girl's words will ring in my ears.
4. An Unforgettable Event 400 words written obliquely. Many unforgettable events happened when I was growing up.
One of them is the most unforgettable thing for me. I remember one night in the third grade, the teacher assigned a lot of homework, which made me very depressed.
I was distracted when the teacher assigned homework, so I ignored one of them. I finished my homework quickly that day.
I was very happy and tired at this time, so I went out for a walk. When I passed my classmate's house, I saw many classmates still doing their homework on the table. When my classmates' parents saw me coming out to play so early, they were all surprised at how I could finish my homework so quickly. I proudly looked up and said to them, "I did finish my homework!" " "The next morning, I went to school.
When I got to school, the group leader asked me to take out my homework. I listened to his words and took out all my homework. I was very surprised when the team leader asked me to take out the last one. Isn't there only four? The team leader proudly said, "Of course not. You missed one of the five pieces. " The team leader immediately ran to tell the teacher.
The teacher was very angry and immediately came over and asked me to go to the window to do my homework. At that time, my classmates laughed at me and said, "Hahahaha, it was because you deserted in class and forgot your homework that you were punished by the teacher."
Ha ha ha ha ~ ~ ~. "At that time, I felt very wronged.
I thought: it's nobody's fault, it's all my own fault. I didn't listen to the teacher carefully in class, which caused today's mistakes. I walked back to my seat and handed my homework to the teacher for examination. After the teacher checked, I made up my mind that I must listen to the teacher carefully in the future and not be punished by the teacher as I am now.
Whenever I think about it, I regret it very much. It taught me to listen attentively in class, to be meticulous in my homework, and to be down-to-earth in my future study.
At the beginning of my mother's composition, I have a wise mother. She has black hair, a high nose, bright eyes, curved eyebrows and a round face. Don't look old at all.
Mom can't make up, dance or play mahjong. She has a pair of dexterous hands, and mother's hands are flexible and white. I always keep my home clean and feel comfortable. Mother knits sweaters with flexible fingers. See things in a blur My mother is not beautiful, but she is smart. This sentence was said by my violin teacher. Why? I still remember when I first learned the violin, I was only five years old. Playing the violin is the creak of my strings, and I can't listen to it anymore, let alone beautiful. But my mother listened carefully. I saw a trusting look in her eyes. In this way, accompanied by my mother, a loyal listener, I persisted and fell in love with the violin. I passed CET-4 in less than a year, and now I am preparing for CET-6. My mother always said, "Baby, there is no road in life. We should take every step step step by step. "
Every time I get sick, my mother will always be with me, because my father works in other places, and my mother will comfort me and take care of me. It gives me the feeling that I am not afraid at all with my mother around.
My mother often teaches me to respect my elders. Have a tolerant and grateful heart, so that you can live easily and happily. This is my mother. I love her very much. Under her care, I grew up happily. When I grow up, I will take care of her wholeheartedly and let her enjoy her old age.
6. Flashback the composition that echoes from beginning to end. Once, it was those thick and powerful big hands that took me into kindergarten, and it was also those constant big hands that took me through primary school for six years.
I remember when I was very young, one spring, my father took me to the airport to fly a kite. At that time, I was not sensible, and my little hand dragged the kite on the lawn, but the kite just couldn't fly high. Naughty, I ran to my father's side and pulled his clothes and said, "Dad, kites can't fly high. Can you make it fly? " Father smiled and said, "OK, let's let him fly, let him fly very high." So, my father gently picked him up with warm hands and held him in his arms. Then, my father picked up the kite on the lawn and handed it to me, letting me hold the thread in my left hand and drag the kite in my right hand. Then, he ran against the wind, and when the wind got stronger, he put his right hand into my little hand and threw the kite into the air together. Then my father slowed down and watched the kite fly into the blue sky with me. At that time, I always thought that my father's warm hands gave the kite strength and made it fly to the free blue sky.
7. Take the topic of "transposition" (you transpose with your parents) In this hot summer vacation, cicada is called "cicada". In this summer vacation, cicada is in this summer vacation, cicada is in this summer vacation, this summer vacation, cicada is in this summer vacation, this summer vacation, this summer vacation, this summer vacation, this summer vacation. My first thing is not to wait for dinner, but to cook, because it's my turn to be a "mother" today. I'll wash rice at once, cook it in a rice cooker and then cook it. What can I do? By the way, let's make scrambled eggs with tomatoes. My mother and I like them. First, I washed two red tomatoes, put them on the chopping board, held them down with my left hand and cut them with a knife. "It doesn't matter, all things are difficult before they are easy? "I comfort myself as I do it. After a dozen knives, two tomatoes turned into grotesque puddings, no less than the lions in Lugouqiao. Just make do with it. It's time to beat eggs. The first egg was not beaten well, and all the eggshells went into the bowl. The second egg white all flowed to the ground, and the third egg, ha, succeeded! The eggs are finally ready. While I am proud, I also have an idea: It's really hard to be a mother! Keep cooking, fire, put the pot on the stove, pour oil into it, and the pot will boil after a while? Huh? I am afraid of la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la la Please ask mom to taste it first. Mom frowned, like eating bitter gourd, looking at me carefully, bitter gourd face turned into chrysanthemum. "Husband, come and try. Is your daughter creative? "What's the matter, I picked up some" huh? "How is sweet? God, I used sugar as salt! " Dad enthusiastically joined in and said, "Not bad, careless scrambled eggs have added a new landscape to our menu."
Hearing this sentence, bursts of laughter echoed at home like a silver bell. ...
This time, changing the identity of myself and my mother brought not only joy, but also a firm belief that "I must help my mother more in the future, because it is too difficult to be a mother!"
8. the composition "tilt and balance" finds the balance point of tilt or overflow.
Everyone is magnifying what they want in their hearts.
Zi Gong, a disciple of Confucius, once talked with Confucius about the merits and demerits of other disciples' personalities and suddenly asked Confucius a question: "Sir, which is better, Zhang Zi or Xia Zi?" Confucius thought for a moment and said, "The child has reached too far, and the child is not up to standard in summer." Zi Gong went on to say, "Is Zhang Zi better?" Confucius said: "Too much is not enough, which is a sign of not grasping the right proportion." This is the origin of "going too far".
The ancients said: "if you don't pay too much, you won't continue." If you don't continue, you will complain. " Love is inseparable, long-term intimate communication is difficult, and interruption is doubtful. "It means that kindness cannot be excessive, because excessive charity cannot last forever. Once charity is interrupted, there will be resentment. Friendship should not be too close, because close communication is difficult to last forever. Once interrupted, it will make people feel alienated and indifferent. From this, we understand that everything should pay attention to a "degree", and how to achieve the golden mean is really a very profound knowledge.
Once, Confucius led his disciples to visit a temple in Lu Huangong and saw an object that was particularly prone to tilt and fall. Confucius walked around it several times, looked around and touched it with his hands. Still not sure what it was for, he asked the guards in the temple, "What artifact is this?" The temple keeper replied, "This is probably the object placed on the right side of the seat." Confucius suddenly realized, and said, "I have heard of this kind of vessel. It is tilted when it is empty, upright when it is properly installed, and overturned when it is full. The king regards it as his best warning, so he always puts it next to his seat. "
Confucius quickly turned to his disciples and said, "Try pouring water in."
Lutz hurried to get water and slowly poured it in. Just poured a little water, it's still tilted; Pour in the right amount of water and it will stand upright; Fill it with water, let it go, it turned over again, and the extra water spilled out. Confucius lamented, "Alas! I see, how can there be something full but not falling down! " Lutz stepped forward and said, "Sir, is there any way to keep it full without falling?"
Confucius said unhurriedly: "Smart and wise, stupid and adjusted; The works cover the world and are adjusted by concessions; Extremely powerful, adjusted by cowardice; Be rich and adjust with humility. This is a way to achieve a moderate state through excessive injury suppression. " Lutz nodded again and again, and then asked, "What measures did the ancient emperors take to prevent their behavior from going out of line besides placing such items next to their seats to warn themselves?"
Confucius Kan Kan said: "Heaven gave birth to ordinary people and set a monarch for them so that he could govern them and prevent them from losing their nature. With the monarch, an assistant was set up for him to teach and protect him and prevent him from doing excessive things. Therefore, the emperor has public office, the princes have ministers, and the ministers have side officials. Doctors have deputies, scholars have friends. Even the handyman and the shepherd boy have close friends to help each other. Reward meritorious deeds, correct mistakes, save in trouble, and correct mistakes. From the son of heaven down, everyone has his father, brothers and children to observe and remedy his gains and losses. Taishi recorded the annals of history, musicians wrote poems, musicians read admonitions, doctors persuaded them, scholars sent messages, civilians made suggestions, businessmen discussed them in the market, and craftsmen from all walks of life showed their talents. People of various identities remonstrate in different ways, so that the monarch will not ride on the heads of ordinary people and indulge their evil. "
Lutz still asked, "Sir, can you name a specific monarch?" Confucius said, "Duke Wu of Wei is a typical figure. At the age of ninety-five, he also ordered that officials at all levels, from the Qing Dynasty onwards, should not consider me stupid and old as long as they hold state salaries and hold official positions, and they must constantly admonish and enlighten me. When I got on the bus, the guards standing by advised me; I am in court, want to show me the laws and regulations of the previous generation; When working at your desk, you should set up a motto to remind yourself; When I rest in the bedroom, the waiter around me should remind me; When I deal with government affairs, I have to be enlightened by people like history and history; Let me listen to Bai Gong's satire in my spare time. He often uses these words to warn himself that his words and deeds will not go to extremes. "
Hearing this, the disciples all showed joy on their faces. They understood a truth from Confucius' words: in any case, people should adjust themselves to make their words and deeds conform to the standards, and they should not go too far or fail to meet the standards. The doctrine of the mean, in Confucius and even the whole Confucianism, is both profound knowledge and profound cultivation. It is enough to pursue the right thing. This is a realm of life, a philosophical concept, a life wisdom, and a balance point that people should always look for.
9. How to write the roller ring in the roller ring composition?
In this winter vacation, I learned to roll a hoop.
Before the Spring Festival, my parents and I were cleaning at home and found an iron ring. So I asked my father, and my father told me that it was the "iron ring" he played when he was a child. I'm curious. Let my father teach me to play.
Dad made an iron bar out of thick iron wire and told the essentials of rolling the iron ring: holding the iron ring in his left hand and the iron bar in his right hand, and then putting the iron ring on the ground, with the iron ring under it. Then push it forward with an iron, and the hoop can be rolled up obediently. Say that finish, dad made a demonstration. Before my father's hoop stopped, I couldn't wait to grab it. I thought: it's so simple, who wouldn't? Look at me.
I took the hoop, learned from my father's appearance, carefully put the small iron on the lower part of the hoop, pushed it with the hoop, and the hoop turned. Just as I was complacent, the hoop suddenly tilted to the right and fell with a clash. I think it's strange. Once again, but not as far as last time. Suddenly, my mood fell from the clouds to the bottom. "Is it not so roll? How did it fall? Is that how dad rolled just now? " My heart is full of doubts.
I thought about it carefully, why the hoop won't roll up. There must be something wrong. Oh, it turns out that I just gave it a push. Of course, the hoop was boring when it rolled, so it naturally fell off.
This time I learned from the last experience and ran at the speed of iron ring rotation. Finally, I succeeded.
Gradually, I became a little skilled. Now, all I have to do is hook the hook to the iron ring, and with a gentle push, the iron ring will stick tightly to the hook. It is like a well-trained animal, and it obeys my orders very much.
Through this study of tires, I understand a truth: no matter what you do, you must master skills and learn lessons. Only in this way can you succeed.
Have you ever played Roller Ring? This is an unforgettable game.
In the activity class that day, the teacher brought us "rolling hoop" equipment-hoop and hook. Everyone rushed there as soon as they saw the equipment, scrambling to grab it. I finally grabbed the equipment, pushed through the crowd and ran to the side to enjoy myself.
I hold the hook in my right hand and roll the hoop forward on the ground with my left hand. Before I could hook the hoop, I twisted like a slacker and fell to the ground. It seems that the strength is too small, I thought. This time, I pushed the hoop forward hard, and it immediately rolled forward quickly, but before I came to my senses, the hoop went somewhere. . I rolled the hoop again, and this time the hoop finally caught up with the hoop, but I didn't run a few steps, only heard a bang, and my hoop collided with another classmate. Suddenly, I was like a deflated ball. Alas, such a difficult guy doesn't have to play.
Just when I was at my wit's end about the hoop, the teacher seemed to see through my mind and came up to me and said, "You must have skills in everything you do." Without a skill, you are busy with your work. "I listened, touched my scalp and asked inexplicably:" Skills, do you need skills to play this? "The teacher patiently enlightened me and said," Of course there are skills. First of all, when you start rolling the hoop, pay attention to the word' steady' and don't panic. "I followed the teacher's instructions, and gradually, the hoop obeyed: I held the hook in my hand and pushed the hoop while walking. The hoop followed me like a little pet. After class * * * rang, I really felt wanting more. I can't help but sigh: "Thanks to the teacher's guidance, the hoop was conquered by me! "
Students, it seems that if you want to conquer the toy in your hand, you have to know its habits like the back of your hand, cooperate tacitly, and build a deep' feeling' with it.
10. What do you mean by oblique manipulation? Flashback is a method to put the end of an event or the most important and prominent fragment in front of the article according to the needs of expression, and then tell the story from the beginning of the event according to the original development order.
For example, in the article "Never forget", the narrative method of putting the ending of the plot at the beginning and then describing the occurrence and development of the plot is adopted. This is the most typical flashback method. In the first part of the article (from the beginning to "She spoke emotionally, which made her sob"), it was written that Teacher Pan and Wang Xiang's father and sister went to the station to send Wang Xiang to college, and Wang Xiang took a selfie for Teacher Pan. Infinite affection is condensed on a pencil drawing with a child selling sorbet and the words "Never forget, thank you, teacher". What is the meaning of painting? Never forget anything. This way of saying the ending first is not only interesting, but also fascinating. It also creates suspense and attracts readers' urgent attention. Here, the dialogue between the characters explains that the child in the painting is Wang Xiang. He is a rare child who can go to college with the help of Mr. Pan. It will naturally cause flashbacks.
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Types of flashbacks: There are three types of flashbacks: one is to advance the ending, such as "Never Forget" and "Wuthering Heights"; Second, like the brothers in Class 61, advance the wonderful part in the middle; Third, the memory of the past is caused by immediate things, such as a precious shirt and a girl who repaired shoes.
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Flashback refers to the end of the event or the most prominent fragment in the event to the beginning of the article, and then to the development order of the event. Flashback is not to tell the whole event in reverse, but to tell it in sequence except for a certain part in advance. There are generally three kinds of flashbacks: first, in order to express the central idea of the article, the part that can best express the central idea is mentioned in front and highlighted; The second is to make the structure of the article changeable and avoid straightforward narration; Third, in order to show the effect, the article twists and turns, causing suspense and fascinating. Explain the starting point clearly when flashback. There should be clear boundaries between flashback and sequence, necessary text transition and natural connection. Pay special attention not to toss and turn aimlessly, making the article unclear.
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The function of flashback and the problems that should be paid attention to;
The use of flashback method can enhance the vividness of the article, make the article more suspenseful and fascinating, and avoid the flat narrative and monotonous structure. For example, the article "Uninvited Guest" is written in flashback around "Uninvited Guest". Focus on the second part, describe the story told by the uninvited guests in detail, and show the difficulties of China oil workers in starting a business and the deep affection of class friendship; The full text is flawless and impeccable.
Flashback should be based on the needs of content and form; Or in order to express the needs of the theme, or for the needs of structural changes or to cause suspense, fascinating, and play a special expression effect. Never flash back for the sake of flashing back. To use flashback, there must be a transitional sentence or a transitional paragraph. The flashback part of the narrative is finished, so we should explain it clearly when we return to the direct sequence. Otherwise, the article will be unclear and ambiguous, which will affect the expression of the content.
This method is often used in film creation. Start with the results of the story development, and then begin to describe the occurrence and development of the previous story. The old captain of the former Soviet film "The Dawn is Silent Here" led several young people to sweep the grave, and then told the touching story of the young female soldier who died under the tombstone in the British War. The end of the film goes back to the tombstone. The films Schindler List, Bridges of Madison County, Titanic and so on all adopted this method.
Flashback is to put a paragraph or sentence in the text in front, and then proceed in sequence.