How to examine questions
★ Write one thing or several things.
★ What happened during the holiday.
★ Things that are personally experienced or seen, interesting and deeply emotional.
★ Pay attention to writing the story in detail.
How to select materials
1.You can write interesting things you saw or experienced during your trip. For example, catching crabs in Beidaihe in summer vacation and going to the seaside to play in the water.
^a2．. You can write interesting stories about your daily life during the holidays. If you are bored during the summer vacation, cut the beard for the cat at home; Go out to watch and play dragon lanterns in winter vacation, and so on.
3. You can write interesting stories about your study and entertainment during the holidays. Such as snowball fights in winter vacation and dragon boat races in Dragon Boat Festival.
How to write wonderful
Key points 1 Write the story of holiday fun in a certain order, in detail.
Dad held a colored magic wand and asked me to light a twist. I gently pressed the button with a lighter, and the flame suddenly shot out. I put the flame close to the twist, and the twist was ignited with a bang, and the sparks from it almost burned my hand. I screamed with fear and quickly drew my hand back.
Then, I took the magic wand from my father and pointed it at the sky. I saw red sparks jumping on the nozzle of the magic wand, and blue smoke was emitted at the same time. I think it's been a long time, but the magic wand still hasn't moved.
Point 2: Use detailed description to write lively and specific holiday fun.
I thought, well, I'm dead this time. Suddenly, I had a brainwave and made an action to throw a snowball. When my brother saw it, he quickly threw a snowball. At that moment, I dodged cleverly, and at the same time threw a clenched snowball and hit him. My brother was dumbfounded. It was ridiculous.
Point 3: Write the holiday fun vividly and vividly through the scene description.
God seems to take care of me, and those "idiots" are hiding in the chicken shed for a lunch break! Some are pecking at their feathers, some are dreaming sweet dreams, and some are enjoying themselves ...
I took the opportunity to pounce, only to hear a bang, and I fell heavily to the ground. The chicken left screaming "fly" at the sound of "cluck-cluck", and the pile of chicken excrement in front of it was "laughing" at me! Scared me, too. Look at those chickens, they have already gone "thousands of miles away".
Holiday fun
This summer vacation, I went to my grandmother's house and saw the pigsty built by the river, so I wanted to see the lovely pigs. (★ Beginning method: a simple beginning, indicating the time, place and person. )
Before I came to the pigsty, several fat pigs were resting leisurely. I found a strange phenomenon: all pigs have a round thing on their ears, which is like an earring in both shape and size.
No way, grandma didn't put earrings on these three pigs, did she? It's not an earring. What could it be? I am puzzled. After thinking about it, I'm sure it's earrings. Anyway, grandma loves to keep some cats, dogs and so on. She must also like these lovely pigs!
Thinking of this, I couldn't help but be happy with my discovery. I jumped to the river and shouted to my cousin, "Cousin, I found a secret." My cousin didn't look up and said, "What's the secret? Don't scare my fish away." I panted, "Do you know, grandma likes those pigs so much that she put earrings on them all!" " After listening to my words, my cousin was stunned first, and then burst into laughter. (★ Detail description: "stunned" and "laughed", which naturally showed my cousin's reaction after hearing "I". ) He threw away the fishing rod and sat by the river with his belly in his hand and laughed for a long time before he stopped. He lit my forehead and said, "to tell you the truth, it's not an earring, but a sign: any pig with such a ring on its ear means that it has been vaccinated when it was a child and is a healthy pig."
Ah, what a thing! After listening to my cousin's words, I couldn't help laughing when I remembered my stupidity just now. It turns out that there is so much knowledge in raising pigs, but today I have learned a lot. (★ Ending method: simply summarize the ending, point out the fun of the holiday, and learn knowledge. )
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The story that "I" saw a pig wearing "earrings" at my grandmother's house during the summer vacation was close to life and really interesting.
◎ Conception: The beginning of the article indicates the time and place where things happened, and then I write my own new discovery, and then I write my cousin's explanation. Finally, I sum up: this is the harvest of "I".
◎ Language: The details are just right. When I wrote to tell my cousin about my new discovery, I jumped and ran breathlessly, but my cousin didn't look up, vividly writing out the different reactions between me and my cousin.
An unforgettable anecdote
During the summer vacation, my mother took me to the Gold Coast to play, and I was so happy. I have never seen the sea, nor have I heard the sound of the sea at high tide. Only when I visited the Gold Coast this time did I realize the mystery and joy brought by the sea, which is really unforgettable. (★ Cut to the chase: point out at the beginning what is unforgettable, so that the following will get to the point directly. )
The Gold Coast is indeed as beautiful as its name: the golden sand shines in the sun, the sea is as far as the eye can see, and the sky is connected with the sea, and the sea is connected with the sky. I don't know whether it is the sea or the sky in the distance. Walking on the beach, I suddenly felt itchy under my feet. When I looked down, it turned out to be a small crab. I held it up and looked at it carefully. It stared at me curiously, too. The little pliers swayed as if to say, "Let me go back." I bent down and put it back in the sea. (★ personification rhetoric: personification is used to write the interest of small crabs, and at the same time, it also shows the innocence and cuteness of "I". )
My friends dragged me into the sea, and the waves came one after another. I was really scared. I took a few steps into the water and just put the lifebuoy on my body. Suddenly, a big wave pushed me back to the shore, and the shoes on the shore were washed away by the sea. I quickly chased them back, put them in a farther place and tried to go into the sea again. I was sitting in a boat prepared in advance with a few friends. The boat had just been rowed a few meters away. I accidentally fell into the water from the boat and cried with fear. I thought to myself, this time it's over.
I struggled desperately, my hands and feet swayed wildly, and my mouth kept shouting: "Help! Help! " At this time, I heard someone say, "The water is not deep, stand up!" " I tried to stand up, but the water didn't reach my waist. The little friends on the boat burst out laughing when they saw my embarrassed appearance. I thought it was funny, too, and I laughed. (★ Scene description: It reproduces the scene that I was fresh and scared when I went to the sea for the first time. The psychological description is in place. The description of "I" when I fell into the water from the boat is vivid and interesting, which makes readers laugh. )
I climbed into the boat, talked and laughed with my friends, and jumped and jumped against the big waves. I was really happy. This trip is really interesting.
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The author is good at capturing life materials, paying attention to observation, and writing this vivid and interesting composition based on the interesting experience when he went to the sea for the first time. The materials are novel and interesting.
◎ Conception: At the beginning of the article, the theme of the article is pointed out by the feelings after playing in the sea. Then, two details are written: walking on the beach and meeting a small crab, falling into shallow water while rowing and desperately calling for "help". Finally, the fun of playing is revealed and the full text is closed. Rigorous conception and clear thinking.
◎ Language: The narrative of the article is clear and smooth, and the language is vivid and beautiful, full of childlike interest. The detailed description in the article is very successful, which enriches the content of the article.
Dad was embarrassed.
One evening during the Dragon Boat Festival holiday, my father took off his coat and trousers when he got home, and went into the kitchen wearing only shorts to cook with his mother. (★ Bury the foreshadowing: The description of dad's behavior of taking off his coat and trousers and wearing only shorts at the beginning lays the groundwork for the story of dad staying in the kitchen and not getting out later. )
They tinkled in the kitchen while I was doing my homework. At this time, "Dangdang Dangdang", someone knocked at the door, and I ran to open the door. It was my aunt across the hall. She said, "Tianzi, isn't your mother at home?" Mother came out of the kitchen after hearing this. Aunt said, "When your brother went to the countryside, the villagers gave you some peppers, melons and lunches." Mom took it happily. They chatted together, from growing vegetables to how to educate their children, and they talked very speculatively. Dad didn't talk and was busy in the kitchen.
(★ Detail description: Don't talk to dad, busy with this description in the kitchen, and continue to gain momentum for the climax. ) Auntie and mom talked for a long time, and Auntie left.
Dad put his hand on his head, sweating like rain, and even his back was covered with sweat. He stared at his mother and said, "Why don't you talk without a head?" (★ Detail description: Describe dad's demeanor, language and other details, and write out his physical heat and inner strangeness and dissatisfaction. ) Mom said in surprise, "Let's say a few words. What's wrong with you?" Dad pointed to his shorts and said, "wife, don't you know I'm naked?" You stay in front of the stove for half a day and try. I didn't offend you. You can't be like this? " My mother burst out laughing when she saw my father's shorts.
Dad is facing the fan, fan fan ...
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The article tells a little thing that happened during the Dragon Boat Festival-Dad wore shorts to cook in the kitchen, didn't want neighbors to visit, and chatted with his mother. Dad had to be "bored" in the kitchen, which made people laugh after reading it. The materials are novel and interesting.
◎ Conception: unfold according to the sequence of occurrence, development, climax and result of the event, and show dad's embarrassment incisively and vividly, highlighting the interest of the event. Ingenious conception and prominent center.
◎ Language: The article is smooth and concise. The little author is good at using detail description to gain momentum for the plot, create a "joke" and firmly grasp the reader's eye.
Interesting things in winter vacation
Although the winter vacation is over, I can't help showing my white teeth and laughing at the thought of it. (★ Cut to the chase: explain the time when the event happened-winter vacation, and interest, and point out the theme of the article. )
It was noon one day, my mother was going to the market to buy steamed bread, and the task of washing vegetables was given to me. After my mother left, I began to take action. While washing vegetables, I hummed happy songs. After a long time, several songs have been sung, but the food has not made much progress. I thought to myself: this is over. When my mother comes back, she will definitely say that I am lazy. What should I do? (★ Psychological description: It reveals the inner thoughts of "me" well, and lays the foundation for the following idea of washing vegetables with washing machine. ) Just then, the washing machine hiding in the corner caught my eye. Yes, clothes can be washed in the washing machine, and vegetables can be washed, of course, and it is time-saving.
Think about it, just do it! I immediately picked up the food and poured it into the washing machine, and then added some water. Twist the switch and start the automatic vegetable washing work. And I proudly sat on the sofa and began to enjoy myself-watching TV. After a while, the washing machine stopped. I ran to the kitchen, turned on the washing machine and saw that the food was gone, but the water turned green. I thought: Is the food faded, too? Thinking about it, I fished it with my hands. It was all vegetable juice, and there was no complete vegetable. While wondering, my mother came back and asked me if the dishes were ready.
After that, I was sure to be scolded. I had no choice but to tell my mother everything. Unexpectedly, my mother looked up and laughed, and I laughed with her. More importantly, my mother touched my head kindly and said, "You are really my happy treasure." Although things are a little silly, can I be unhappy when I see my mother's face full of laughter? (★ Character description: The description of the mother's manners and language is very suitable for the identity of the character, reflecting the gentleness of the mother and her love for her children. )
This thing is really interesting!
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The author describes the childlike innocence and childlike interest in winter vacation life by using a washing machine to wash vegetables because he didn't want his mother to scold him. Novel material selection.
◎ Conception: The article starts with a topic, which leads to the narrative of the event; Then describe it according to the sequence of events; Finally, point out the interest of the event again and deepen the theme. Well-conceived and well-organized.
◎ Language: The article is fluent and the language is simple and simple. The little author is good at describing the psychology of characters, and every psychological description pushes things forward.
Interesting story of "catching ghosts"
During the summer vacation, I came to my grandmother's house in the countryside, and a friend said that he would take me to "catch ghosts". Catch ghosts?
How to catch it? How can ghosts be caught? I was both delighted and scared. I've heard of ghosts before and asked my mother, but my mother said there are no ghosts in the world. So I decided to find out. (★ Set suspense: at the beginning, a series of questions are used to set a puzzle in the reader's mind and stimulate the reader's interest in continuing reading. )
In the evening, a few friends and I prepared tools, and a small "ghost hunting" team was formed. The night is getting dark, and the moon shines faintly through the clouds. We lay in ambush by the cornfield. The wind rustled the corn and made my head sweat. Suddenly, through the dim moonlight, I saw a white shadow moving slowly in the distance. This may be what friends call a "ghost".
I stared at the "ghost" with wide eyes. That white shadow is like a ghost, fast and slow for a while. When the "ghost" got a little closer, I saw the appearance of the "ghost". I saw that the "ghost" was all white, his face was full of blood, and his long tongue hung down from his mouth and kept walking around the corn. (★ Character description: The description of the appearance and actions of the "ghost" is vivid and concrete, which renders the atmosphere of terror. )
In this quiet cornfield, the "ghost" suddenly gave a terrible laugh.
My heart trembled when I heard this, and I thought: It's all death anyway, so it's better to give it a try and fight once! We people set, and the "ghost" launched a struggle, grasping the hand, holding the leg holding the leg ... After all, there are many people, and we soon gained the upper hand. I took the opportunity to open the cloth on the "ghost" face, and a familiar face came into view: Ah, it's Uncle Wang!
It turns out that someone stole corn recently, so Uncle Wang tried to pretend to be a ghost to scare those who stole corn, but unexpectedly it attracted our ghost-hunting team.
This ghost hunt left a deep impression on me. After the summer vacation, I came home, and this interesting story of "catching ghosts" came to my mind from time to time. (★ Echo from beginning to end: The ending stated that this ghost-catching incident was interesting, which impressed me deeply, deepened the theme, and echoed with the beginning, and the beginning and the end were in harmony. )
Full mark reference point
◎ Material selection: The author narrated a ghost-catching incident after going to grandma's house in the summer vacation, and wrote the interest of the incident itself-it turned out that Uncle Wang was pretending to be a ghost. Novel material selection.
◎ Conception: The article begins with doubts, which leads to the narrative of the main part of the "ghost catching" incident, and finally points out the deep impression this incident has given to "me" and summarizes the full text. Rigorous conception and clear thinking.
◎ Language: The language of the article is concise and vivid. Through the description of the environment, characters' movements, demeanor and psychology, the horror scene of "ghost hunting" is vividly reproduced.