Different moonlight
("different" is too general. How about changing the title to "Half Moon Into My Heart"? It's more poetic, and it can also link my relationship with the moon. )
At ten o'clock in the evening, I walked into my room.
Maybe because I only come once a week or more, I seem to be getting rusty on it. There are some strange smells in the air, but they are more familiar.
There is no light, it is dark. There is a lamp on the windowsill and bed to keep me from falling into complete darkness. Looking out of the window along the light path, it turned out to be the semicircle of the moon. The moonlight is very bright, slightly illuminating a nearby area in the sky. I went to the window, opened it and stuck my head out.
Look up at the moon. As far as I can see from my limited perspective, the moon is a bright plate in the dark. I can't see any stars. I wonder if the moon is high, will it be lonely, will it be lonely? It is expected that with the jade rabbit and osmanthus tree as companions, the loneliness all day long will be somewhat alleviated.
Suddenly a bleak autumn wind blew, and I couldn't help feeling refreshed. Although it is1early February, it is not winter yet. The wind was blowing and I didn't feel the biting cold. This kind of wind is not as cold as the cold season, nor as mild as the spring breeze, but refreshing and tenacious. I suddenly perked up.
Keep looking at the moon. I stared at the faint mottle on the moon, like a scar on the moon. I am surprised that this is the first time I have come up with this idea. Suddenly I feel that the moon is staring at me like this. Maybe I saw her inner sadness.
(The sentences in bold are all good sentences, which incorporate imagination and self-emotion. Only people with delicate hearts will feel this way, which is good. I have read it several times. If we can add more vivid descriptions about the sun, the moon or the surrounding scenery, it will not only enrich the content, but also appear thin. )
Bow your head, but feel a deep fatigue. But this paragraph always feels that there is a lack of natural transition from above. Can we change this way: bow our heads and sigh, maybe it's not just half a moon that's sad. )
Physical and mental exhaustion. I always go home in this state. A week's hard work, from Monday to Saturday, from day to night, from body to mind. Finally, I have such a relaxing time to enjoy the moonlight quietly. The fast rhythm that has been oppressing the nerves has gradually slowed down in this moonlight. The moon is slowly moving westward every minute, and I have no feeling at all; In physics class, I can calculate its speed of several kilometers per second. (and now) I feel that time is gradually cooling down, and it is very slow, very slow.
I don't know how long it's been since I sat down so quietly and looked at the sky. Accustomed to ordinary, but lost ordinary. (Wonderful, intriguing. The noisy heart gradually calmed down, even if it was only for a while.
Look up again. I still see a bright yellow wheel. The willow shoots on the moon, although the tree in front of me is not a willow, (these two sentences do not seem to constitute a turning point. ) But the night is really deep. I slowly moved the window, closed the curtain and turned away. ...
Comments: "Moment of Beauty" is actually more of an instantaneous induction of the mind, and the blending of scenes is well used. Although your scores in several compositions are not high this semester, I am glad to find that you are a student who can write a good composition and has the potential to write an excellent composition. See if I can work harder. This article scored 85 points)
Analysis of test questions: hint of composition intention;
There are beautiful things everywhere in life. Don't miss them because you are busy. Please slow down and enjoy them in a hurry.
Don't ignore the tiny and exact happiness in life, happiness is around us, and we should grasp it in time;
(3) Some people spend their whole lives in a hurry and anxiety, only with pale and poor memories, and don't know what a beautiful moment and eternal life are;
Poetic life is suitable for any era, especially in impetuous moments, where the expansion of material desires leads to mental exhaustion, and people who are in a hurry need the nourishment of noble spirit;
Examples of deviating from the test questions:
Most people have no musical literacy;
Playing musical instruments should be in the theater, not the subway station or the street;
People would rather spend $200 to go to the theatre for a concert than stand on the street and listen to music for free.