My friend, writing a composition on the subject of labor is more in line with the current education curriculum. Today, I will share with you some things about writing a composition on labor. Let's take a look ~

First, why do you want to write a composition on labor?

second, the writing strategy of writing a composition on labor

second, three essays on labor

first, why do you want to write a composition on labor?

In April this year, the Ministry of Education officially issued the Curriculum Scheme and Curriculum Standards for Compulsory Education, which completely separated labor from the original comprehensive practical activity curriculum. Among them, according to different classes, the goals of "sorting and storage, family cleaning, cooking, home beautification, daily life labor" were formulated, and they were implemented in the fall semester of 222.

second, the writing strategy for writing labor-related compositions

We will provide you with writing strategies from three daily aspects: "cleanliness and hygiene", "cooking delicious food" and "planting observation"

Theme 1: cleanliness and hygiene

Pay attention to your key actions and use some metaphors or exaggerations to write out the twists and turns of things. It will be more interesting to have twists and turns in the labor process, and you can use the rhetorical devices you have learned before to express them. Take "mopping the floor" as an example. If you don't drag it or drag it less, there will be twists and turns. What is the state at first, what is the state after a while, and what is the final state. Such twists and turns can be amplified by rhetoric.

The ups and downs can be the things themselves, and sometimes they can also be psychological. Because of the twists and turns, the article is lively and easy to arouse readers' interest in reading.

theme 2: cooking food

if students want to write "cooking food", they can write "new ideas" and "connotation" from the following angles.

1) Pay attention to the ingredients and cooking methods

The forms of cooking include stir-frying, boiling, frying, frying, steaming, etc., and the key to cooking lies in mastering the temperature, the timing of cooking and the use of seasonings. Every dish has its own way, and every dish has its own flavor. Take the "stir-fried vegetables" that students often write as an example. We can't just say that the vegetables are cooked, but we should make it clear how to stir-fry the vegetables, and whether there are any tips to make them oily or green.

2) Pay attention to parent-child communication

I believe that many friends' introductory tutors are their own family members. In the process of writing and cooking, they can pay attention to parent-child communication and make the dialogue between parents and children gentle and lovely. "Hurry up, hurry up, the oil pan is smoking!" "Did you spill oil on your face?" "The first time I ate my daughter's cooking, I was so happy ..."

3) Experience self-reliance and self-confidence

In fact, most children are not schoolmasters. But cooking is different. The cooking of ingredients depends on your own control, and the color, flavor and shape depend on your own creativity. In the process of cooking, especially exercise a person's overall planning ability. Whether you are in a hurry or in an orderly way depends entirely on your thinking ability and practical ability. From stupid to clever, from slow to fast, from bad to good, are all manifestations of improving our ability. You might as well write these feelings and think about the meaning of labor.

topic 3: planting observation diary

keeping an observation diary is to record what you encounter and do every day. Often from the perspective of the first person-"I". Write down what you saw, heard, did or thought in your life that day.

1) Observe carefully

When observing, you should not only look at it with your eyes, but also find its appearance characteristics and changes; You can also smell it with your nose to see how it smells; You can also listen with your ears and feel its voice; You should even taste with your tongue and touch with your hands, and pay attention to feeling things, especially the changes of things, from multiple angles. ?

2) Accurate image

Accurate means writing what you observe. The characteristics and changes of the things written are accurate, and you can't make things up and be whimsical. Image is to write out the changes and characteristics of animals and plants in vivid language by means of metaphor, personification, parallelism and other rhetorical devices. For example, you can write "Planting bean sprouts" most often, and you can write "After two or three days, the bean sprouts spread out around your waist, drilling out of the ground, three or four centimeters long, and wearing a beautiful green skirt." Vivid image, so that readers can see and hear.

two, three articles about labor model essay

one about labor model essay:

Today is May Day, and I want to be here? An ordinary day? Take part in a very meaningful labor. I learned from my grandfather in the morning that he was going to give vegetable fields? Fertilize the vegetables. I think: this should also be counted as a labor. So I ran to grandpa and tried? "Handcuffs".

I didn't expect grandpa to readily agree? Probably because grandpa wants to exercise myself. Arrive? In the afternoon, we were full of interest. I ran fastest and rushed to the vegetable field? , see? Green vegetable seedlings, including lettuce, cowpea, four-season beans, peppers, tomatoes, cucumbers, eggplant ... They are thriving, but our food? Pesticide guy! Let's pick farm manure first.

grandpa came to the septic tank with a bucket in his hand, and I began to exert my power? , to the first bucket? Scoop? A lot of farm manure, and the result is spilled? Half, this is equivalent to drawing water from a bamboo basket-with a sieve, I think? One way is to scoop only a little more than half per scoop (because of me? Gas? Big), so it's ok? , but? I think it's full and realistic, so I have to scoop a lot of scoops to be ok. Can I? I'm willing to waste my time like that. I frown and think about it. I just take a few leaves as a prodigal son. To prevent it from spilling out, I didn't expect it to work, so the second bucket was accelerated? Speed. But, come out on your head? Beads of sweat, clothes are wet? . Then, grandpa picked the farmyard manure? Vegetable field? I saw a lot of sweat on my grandpa's head, and I was very tired? . I volunteered to say to my grandfather, "Grandpa, take a break first and let me water the vegetables."

grandpa told me? Why don't I follow grandpa's instructions on the essentials of fertilization? Practice. After all, practice makes perfect, grandpa. Are they all? Hands? But I'm still a rookie. As soon as you come up, finish dumping a spoonful of farm manure? Grandpa told me again: "When it falls? How much can you pour? Otherwise, the food will drown. " I tried to pour it carefully again, but I didn't expect it to be much better in the future? Grandpa also praised it? Me.

labor is a kind of effort and hardship. For example, today, I shed? A lot of sweat, after all, "weeding at noon, sweat dripping down the soil"! It is glorious to work hard, and the working people are great. Labor is also equal to serving the people. I will serve the people today? Service.

On labor model II:

On May Day, I went back to my hometown with my parents. On both sides of the road, trees are shaded, and small wildflowers in dribs and drabs are so dazzling and bright. We couldn't help singing, and the birds sang along with us.

When I get home, my parents watch TV, so I invite my friends to play. After playing for a while, I felt bored and went to the field to play with my grandmother. When I came to the field, I saw some vegetable seedlings cooked by the sun, so I decided to save them-water them and let them have a good time!

I found a bucket full of water, asked my mother to help me lift it to the ground, and used a small bowl as a ladle. My mother saw that I was so serious and said, "Son, I will water with you." I said, "OK." We began to work. I first scooped up water from the bucket with a small bowl, and then gently poured it into the roots of the seedlings. The water soon ran out, and I asked my mother puzzled, "Mom, why did the water I just poured disappear?" Mom told me: "Because it hasn't rained for a long time, the seedlings are thirsty. They are just like you. When they are thirsty, they want to have a full drink at a time." After listening to my mother's words, I poured a bowl of water for the seedlings. The seedlings were full, and the leaves were fresh and shiny in the sun.

The sun is burning on the earth, and my mother and I are so tired that we are sweating and out of breath. Mother said, "son, let's have a rest. We are so tired." I said, "No, today is Labor Day, so we should take a good exercise. Besides, you often teach me that I should stick to it if I don't give up halfway. " Mother had no choice but to accompany me to water the seedlings.

after a while, I was too tired to complain, so I said, "mom, have a rest." Unexpectedly, my mother raised her hands in favor and said loudly, "I agree!" " We sat in the shade and enjoyed the cool, and a breeze blew by, which was really comfortable! Miao Miao is also dancing gently, as if to say to me, "thank you, little friend."

Before we knew it, it was dusk. When we got home, I said, "Although I was very tired today, it was very interesting, because I experienced the hard work of the farmer's uncle in farming and the joy of labor!

On labor model essay III:

May 1st is the International Labor Day, and people will not miss this wonderful time to play, and our family is no exception. Want to know where we went? Then go on reading quickly!

at six o'clock in the morning, I was woken up by my mother and asked if I would climb the Phoenix Mountain. I flipped up and said, "Yes! Of course I want to go! " We set off when the things were ready.

As soon as I set foot on the Phoenix Mountain, I smelled a faint smell of earth. Looking around, grass, safflower and green trees were lush and full of vitality. Birds chirped in the sky, as if to say, "Ah! How beautiful! How beautiful! "

in a short time, we came to the "Erlongtan" halfway up the mountain, only to see two lifelike "faucets" spraying water into the pool, splashing water half a meter high in the pool, which was really beautiful. I asked my father puzzled: "How many years has this faucet been flowing?" Where does its water come from? " Dad smiled and said to me, "Son, this water is from the mountain reservoir, and it is connected to the" dragon mouth "with a pipe. Because of the big drop in water level, the spectacle of" dragon spitting water "is formed. Know it? "

After Dad solved the mystery, we continued to climb up. Ten minutes later, our family was walking in the mall of the Agricultural Bank of China cadre school. Wow! It's really beautiful here. The tall eucalyptus trees stand neatly on the sidewalk, like soldiers being inspected. The flowers are blooming all over the ground and the grass is dazzling green. It really makes people forget themselves and enjoy this intoxicating beauty.

Don't say that people went out to travel during the May 1st Festival, but many people still came to visit Phoenix Mountain. Ah! How cool it is to be close to nature!