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How to write a composition for primary school students to comment on a poem

The annual Mid-Autumn Festival in my family is here. At night, quietly, a cool breeze passes through my window and gently touches my face; I stand in front of the window, looking at the fifteenth moon infatuatedly.

Outside the window, the black sky is sparsely dotted with a few stars. They shyly hide behind the clouds and appear and disappear. Accompanied by the stars, a full moon looks at the world with a smile. Its smile is

So gentle, so kind, in such a breeze, the earth is like a newborn baby... At this time.

My mother walked up behind me and said to me gently: "Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival. Mom has cooked a lot of your favorite meals, come and eat some." I nodded in response.

Saying "I'll be there soon" my mother said, "Do you know why we eat moon cakes during the Mid-Autumn Festival?" I thought about it.

Said: "Because... because it has been passed down from the past." Mom said: "Well, I am half right, but there is actually a legend about eating mooncakes - it is said that Chang'e secretly ate her husband Houyi from the Queen Mother of the West.

After begging for the medicine of immortality, she flew to the Moon Palace, but it was too cold up there. After expressing her regrets to her husband, Chang'e said: "Tomorrow is the full moon. You can use flour to make pills, and they will be like a full moon."

shape, placed in the northwest direction of the house, and then called my name continuously.

At the third watch, I can go home.

"The next day, do as your wife asked. At that time, the Chang'e fruit will fly from the middle of the moon and the couple will be reunited. The custom of making mooncakes to offer to Chang'e during the Mid-Autumn Festival was also formed from this." After listening to what my mother said, I realized that eating mooncakes also has a meaning.

It's legendary.

It dawned on me.

At this time, I snickered and said to my mother: "Mom, tell me what the fillings of the moon cakes Hou Yi made at that time were. Was it fresh meat or egg yolk?"

Mom was still thinking seriously at first, but then she realized something was wrong. How could there be so many traps at that time?

Then I realized I was teasing her.

Mom gently knocked on my head and said, "You little rascal." I pretended to be aggrieved and said, "That's right. Who knows what flavor Chang'e likes to eat?" I continued, "Mom. Then I'll do it."

Give it a try. Do you know "Shui Tiao Ge Tou"? "I know when the moon will come."

"I remember." I said, "Oh, I'm so young and don't work hard. I'm so sad. I'll tell you the original text." I stood up.

Looking up at the moon outside the window, I stroked my "goatee".

At this time, my mother secretly laughed behind her.

He said: "Where did the kid get his beard? He still imitates the ancients in stroking his beard." I said: "I'm brewing! Don't disturb me." I stroked my goatee and said, "When will the bright moon come? Ask the blue sky for your wine. I don't know the palace in the sky.

What year is this evening? I want to ride the wind back, but I am afraid that it will be too cold in the high place. How can I dance to clear the shadows in the human world?

When we say goodbye, people have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. I wish you a long life and a happy life." Mom nodded and said, "You little thing, you really know this.

There are so many. Let’s eat quickly. Let’s eat moon cakes together later.” I quickly said, “I want to eat what Chang’e ate at that time.” My mother pretended to be angry and said, “Go and find one for me.” I said.

Then I will reluctantly eat a handful of egg yolk and lotus paste." My mother said, "Reluctantly?" I said, "Yeah." Who knew that my mother would sneak up behind me and tickle me.

Said: "Are you still reluctant?" I said: "Ah. No, no. You know I'm ticklish and you tickle me." In this way, the dinner ended with our laughter.