1. Writing around the central meaning

What is a scene? Scene generally refers to the scene presented to people in a certain period of time in collective activities.

it's just like a scene or a scene we see in a drama. What scenes have we participated in or seen in life? Here are some examples for your reference.

labor scene. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school, and there are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor and good deeds in labor.

We often visit factories, villages and shops, ask questions and see how uncles and aunts work. These are the working scenes. Game scenes.

Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very active and interesting, and they are also familiar entertainment scenes for students.

In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in cultural performances, get-together activities and watching movies and TV shows that are worth remembering.

ceremony scene. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony.

in your city, village or town, what new buildings are completed, and ceremonies are often held. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and educational, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.

sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.

scenes of life. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive.

For example, shopping for goods, family reunion, travelling by boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc., all have a strong atmosphere of life. Meeting scene.

class meeting, team meeting and school meeting; Meeting with heroes and model figures, participating in various celebrations and commemorative meetings, the scenes of that meeting often leave a deep impression on us. In a word, practicing scene description can improve our ability of observation and cognition and narrative description. 2. Writing around the central idea

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In ancient times, there was a scholar who never wrote an article to the purpose. Once, he went to ask a teacher for advice. The teacher took him to a small forest and pointed to a spider web and said, "Please worship it as a teacher!" " After reading it for a long time, the scholar suddenly understood the mystery, and since then, his article has made rapid progress. Someone asked him why, and he said, "There is no spider web without a center in the world. Spider webs are woven with a center first and then a circle. The same is true for writing articles! "

so how to write around the central meaning?

first, write a paragraph around the central sentence.

The composition of middle school requires that one thing be written concretely around the central meaning. Students in this section can practice with fragments at ordinary times-write concrete sentences around the central sentence.

what is a central sentence?

The central sentence is generally the first sentence in a paragraph, which summarizes the main content of this paragraph.

Example: The fog is really heavy and beautiful this morning! There is a vast expanse of whiteness between heaven and earth, as if there is an incomparably wide gauze garment floating. Mountains, houses, fields and trees in the distance are all shrouded in milky fog, looming and beautiful. I walked on the way to school, and it seemed to be in a misty fairyland, which was very interesting.

The first sentence in the example is the central sentence, and the following three sentences revolve around "The fog this morning is really big and beautiful!" This sentence is described in detail: "white, milky white" first writes the color of fog, and the metaphor of "incomparably wide gauze clothing" writes the beauty of fog and fog. Through my feelings and the dialogue of the characters, the fog is very thick and heavy. 3. 5 words of Syaraku's composition around the central meaning

When writing a composition about music in the center, you can write about life, such as family life and study life; You can also write about a certain point in society or a certain type of people, such as sanitation workers, people's teachers, etc. No matter which direction you write, you must add your own feelings and experiences.

text: living in this colorful world, it is inevitable that there will be a drop of tears. If pain exists, then I deeply affirm: "Happiness is everywhere".

When you really fail, maybe you will say, "Why did I pay so much and end up with nothing? Why is God so unfair to me? " In fact, as long as you carefully taste the process of hard struggle, you can find that you are not so painful. Because you have really struggled, compared with those who never dared to fight, you have won the envy of others.

when you lament that your family conditions are not as good as others, you may say, "why am I so smart, but my conditions are not as good as others?" Why is God so unfair to me? " In fact, as long as you think slowly, you can find that you are not so unfortunate. Because God has given you quick thinking and rich imagination.

In the face of setbacks, thoughts give imagination, while imagination gives comfort and courage. Compared with those who only capture others with money and have no real skills, you also win the envy of others.

When you struggle with death, you will find happiness everywhere-success is a kind of happiness, failure is a kind of happiness, competition is a kind of happiness, frustration is a kind of happiness ... Even the insignificant ant has his own happiness, that is life. Don't say that God is unfair, and don't say that life is boring.

think carefully, if there is no pain in this world, will there be a wonderful life? It is because of these tears and laughter that we have a colorful life. If you really can't imagine, you can also find that you have one of the greatest happiness, and that is life.

Life is the greatest happiness, without life. Will you still be happy? Really, don't be so sad.

because-happiness is everywhere. 4. Write a composition around the central meaning

Write a composition around the central meaning

Describe the scene, so what is the scene? Scene generally refers to the scene presented to people in a certain period of time in collective activities. Just like a certain scene or scene we see in a drama.

what scenes have we participated in or seen in life? Here are some examples for your reference.

labor scene. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school, and there are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor and good deeds in labor. We also often go to factories, villages and shops to visit and ask questions, and see how uncles and aunts work. These are the labor scenes.

game scenes. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very active and interesting, and they are also familiar entertainment scenes for students. In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in cultural performances, get-together activities and watching movies and TV shows that are worth remembering.

ceremony scene. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony. Ceremonies are often held in your city, village or town, and when new buildings are completed. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and educational, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.

sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.

scenes of life. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc., all have a strong atmosphere of life.

meeting scene. Class meeting, team meeting, school meeting; Meeting with heroes and model figures, participating in various celebrations and commemorative meetings, the scenes of that meeting often leave a deep impression on us.

In a word, practicing scene description can improve our ability of observation and cognition and narrative description. 5. Write a 5-word composition around the central meaning to help

find the night light like water. The bright moonlight shines on the sofa, and I stand on the balance car and whimper through the living room.

alas! The sky is grey and wild, where can I find my English book? English book, where are you? Without you, my mother will skin me! I'm flying in every corner of my home. I'm not in my schoolbag again, am I? I ran to my room, opened my schoolbag, rummaged through one by one, and rummaged through one by one. I still can't find my English textbooks, not in the closet. I opened the cupboard door and rummaged through the clothes, alas! How I wish I could see English books! I jumped on the balance car and flew to the kitchen, opened the refrigerator, opened the cabinet and lifted the lid, huh? Where did the English book go? I sat on the sofa and thought about it carefully. When I asked the teacher to dictate the words in the make-up class, the teacher put the book on another table. After that, I finished my composition and left … Well, so my English book is in the make-up class! Oh, my god It's really dumb to eat Rhizoma Coptidis. I can't tell you how bitter it is! At this time, the "Queen Mother" mother came, "Read English quickly, what are you doing here!" I don't move, "what's the matter? What can I do for you? " "I forgot my English book."

"where did you forget it?" "Make-up classes." "Oh, then go and read a book and find it tomorrow!" I took a deep breath of relief, and "Hoo-"finally escaped from the Temple of Hades. I went back to my room despondently, took the biography of Hulan River and watched it.

The challenge of dying this time is really frightening. Next time, I'd better check my schoolbag and stop being so careless. 6. Around the central meaning, Syaraku wrote 5 words

Trees bear fruit and enjoy it. A seed is buried in the ground and takes root. It takes a long time to grow into a big tree with lush foliage, and it finally blooms with flowers. In autumn, the trees are full of fruitful results. People picked the fruit and ate it beautifully. The next year, it still blooms and bears fruit, and people pick the fruit and eat it. I asked Uncle Shu, "Uncle Shu, aren't you wronged?" Uncle Shu's answer came from the wind: "No, I am happy when I see you eating happily!" "

bees make honey and enjoy it. Bees have to fly a long way and collect a lot of pollen to make a little honey. And those who enjoy honey are not hard-working bees, but others. Bees are still picking flowers and making honey. I asked brother bee, "Brother bee, don't you feel bad that your work has been dedicated to others?" Brother Bee buzzed and replied, "I am very happy to offer sweetness to everyone!" "

Grandma enjoys cooking. Grandma's homework every day is: buying vegetables, washing vegetables and cooking. Running out and running in, I worked so hard, I was so tired that my back ached and I was sweating all over, which made me greasy. And all those delicious foods are poured into our stomachs. When grandma sees us eating her cooking with relish, her tired face will be filled with a contented smile.

teachers enjoy teaching. Teachers have to prepare lessons and correct homework every night, and give us lessons the next day, tutoring us until we fully understand it, and we are the ones who benefit from the knowledge. When the teacher sees our progress, she will nod her head and praise us repeatedly, as if we had given her happiness.

dedication is happiness. Trees, bees, grandmothers and teachers have all given their fruits of labor, and they all enjoy it. 7. In the sixth grade, 55 words were written around the central meaning.

In the sixth grade, writing a composition around the central meaning was beautiful. Once, our family went on a trip.

As the mountain is very high, we went up by cable car. The cable car is rectangular and green.

it doesn't stop at the foot of the mountain, so it can only climb quickly, and it must be at the speed of light, otherwise it will be missed, because the platform is only five meters long. On the cable car, the cable car slowly climbed to a higher place, higher and higher.

With the cable car getting higher and higher, the things on the ground are getting smaller and smaller. Looking at the things on the ground, there is a magical feeling. People have a kind of fear and a sudden sense of beauty, which is both mysterious and nervous.

The space inside the cable car is very small, only a little bigger than the palm of your hand, and it is ventilated on all sides, so it is easy for luggage to fall down. There are four handles in the car, and there is an alarm device, so you can get in touch with the ambulance personnel on the ground at any time.

everyone is nervous, mainly afraid of falling. Mom's hair stood on end, and she was as nervous as an electric shock.

I was sweating on my forehead, as if I had been caught in the rain. Her hand is holding mine, and my hand hurts like it's going to be broken by her.

dad huddled in the corner of the carriage, staring at the roof, sweating like a downpour, rubbing his hands back and forth, and feeling scared. The cable car rose to another height and climbed over a hill. At this time, our nervousness eased down.

We looked out of the window, and looked from the glass window like a distance. The things on the ground were very tiny, and we needed a telescope to see them clearly. The mountains in the distance are high and low, and you can vaguely see a beautiful landscape painting.

The cable car has reached the highest peak, and the white clouds are beside us, like soft cotton candy; White clouds are beautiful and poured into the cable car; White clouds are very light, and I want to ride them to higher mountains. White clouds are so fragrant that I feel like swimming in a sea of flowers. White clouds decorated our cable car, and in this short span of ten seconds, we came to fairyland and walked through Xanadu.

The cable car has reached the top of the mountain. It is really "not afraid of clouds to cover your eyes, just because you are at the highest level." It's really beautiful to take the cable car this time. 8. sweet writing 5 words around the central meaning

sweet, sometimes it is a taste, sometimes it is an emotion.

There are five flavors in life, which are sweet, sour, bitter, spicy and salty. The most experienced thing in life is bitterness and sweetness. As an old saying goes, only when you eat bitterness can you be a master.

Only when you don't lose heart and don't give up in difficulties will you have talents and wisdom beyond ordinary people, and people will achieve amazing results. Only when you have experienced hardships can you better appreciate the value of success. Candy, fruit and chocolate all have a sweet taste.

But for emotion, I thought of that thing. In September 218, when I stood on the podium, the sweetness of that moment could not be expressed in words. I remember that I was in poor health before learning to swim, and I often had a cold and fever when I first started training, but I still insisted on training. Although I couldn't go into the water, I still kept my physical fitness and training level through land and other training methods.

Although I am very bitter and tired, I am still working hard.