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20 14 Spring Festival couplets in the Year of the Horse 14 begged Gao Ming to revise them.
Couplets have a set of basic rules, and the key point lies in the word "right". Six couplets: the number of words is equal, the content is related, the part of speech is equivalent, the structure is commensurate, the rhythm is corresponding, and the balance is harmonious. "Horseshoe Rhyme" is usually used for the purpose of balance and harmony, and ancient and modern rhymes cannot be used together. Although your masterpieces are basically in pairs and have good artistic conception, it seems that there are still some details that can be considered. We novices should try our best to conform to the law. The following is my humble opinion for reference only. The fallacy, please also ask Haihan.

1.

The scenery is boundless with the spring exhibition; The scenery is mighty in Ma Chi

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Seven words, flat and flat; It' s flat and flat, and it' s just right.

2.

Flying across the universe; Jade rabbit writes spring and autumn on the moon

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It's flat and flat, flat and flat. The rabbit word is out of the law.

3.

Eight Jun winds gallop near Qian Shan; Hundreds of flowers bloom and thousands of families celebrate.

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The word "mountain" tells the law.

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Laughter is everywhere during the Spring Festival; Xing Zhonghua's horsepower is soaring.

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Welcoming the Spring Festival is good for rejuvenating China.

5.

Show great ambitions, Kyushu talents whip and leap; Showing magical powers and flying boats with royal sails.

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It's illegal to be flat and level. Grand plan nine (state talents whip), five even in the sentence. Lian Wei San Lian Ping.

6.

Liangju welcomes the spring breeze; Firecrackers are blessed with blessings.

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Then, the ancient rhyme is a faint sound, but this rhyme is flat, and young people may not be used to it.

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Celebrate the lion's solo dance in the prosperous times; Create great achievements and gallop together.

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Great things come from the law.

8.

BMW gallops thousands of miles; Dapeng goes straight to the sky.

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The rushing into the sky is a flat sound, and the law is out.

9.

Spring breeze sends warm flowers to spit; A fine horse will stand on its feet.

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Flat and even, flat and even, flat and even is positive. Speak out the law.

10.

Hold one's head high and bristle with pride; Step on the snow and soak up the spring breeze

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Basically in pairs. The word "hiss" can also be changed to "Zhang".

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Take the lead and keep pace with the times; Vientiane renewal random strain

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Image, innovation, machine and transformation law.

12.

The spring breeze is proud of horseshoe disease; When the rain is silent, the plum buds are idle.

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Ancient rhyme?

13.

Spring breeze warms thousands of trees; Laoji Dust Road Wan Cheng

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Basically in pairs. If young, Lao Ji seems to be less energetic than Shen Jun and Qi Ji.

14.

Ten thousand hoof flowers are stained with morning dew; Willow waves reflect the setting sun.

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Basically in pairs. Evening, ancient rhyme. The setting sun is facing the morning dew, but the connection is a little far-fetched. Besides, willow waves are mostly summer scenery.

Shawn Yue with ten thousand hoof flowers; Liu Lang weighs a thousand Huang Xiaoming. (theatrical association)

It seems that the landlord is very attentive, please continue to work hard.

I wish you a happy Spring Festival, and everything will be auspicious!