Rabbit transports pumpkin.

Yang kaijun

On a sunny day, the rabbit wanted to eat pumpkin pie. The rabbit came to the pumpkin garden and picked a big round pumpkin.

The little rabbit hugged the big pumpkin, which made a great effort, but the pumpkin lay lazily on the ground in the sun. The little rabbit thought, How many good companions have you found? Do you want the pumpkin to be divided into two parts? Why don't you find animals with infinite strength? The little rabbit was worried. The little panda hummed and appeared happily on a bicycle. At this moment, the little rabbit saw the tires of the bicycle rolling and rolling. The little rabbit had a brainwave and thought, I can just erect the big pumpkin. So, the rabbit put the pumpkin on end, and the rabbit kept rolling home.

Mother rabbit was surprised and asked strangely, "How did you bring the pumpkin back?" Bunny told her mother everything, and her mother proudly said, "Bunny, you are really capable."

From this story, I learned that everything should be done by hands and be good at thinking.

Instructor: Teacher Fang.

Comments: The little author tells the reader the process of a clever rabbit transporting pumpkins, grasps the main content of the picture, and vividly shows it. Finally, he tells the reader a truth and enlightens the theme of the article! Great!

Rabbit transports pumpkin.

Zhong Shaobin

On a sunny day, the rabbit thought that today was his mother's birthday. He decided to make a pumpkin cake. After that, he came to the pumpkin field happily. Rabbit sees a big pumpkin, which is really like a wheel.

Rabbit rolled up his sleeves and hugged the pumpkin, trying his best. After a while, the rabbit finally couldn't hold on, and the rabbit was so tired that he was sweating. However, the pumpkin was still motionless and lazily lying on the ground in the sun, thinking: How can I transport this pumpkin home? Why don't I get someone to transport it with me? Why don't I divide it into several parts and ship it home bit by bit? While the little rabbit was worried, the little panda sang and rode a bicycle, and rode past the little rabbit quickly, thinking: Pumpkins are as round as wheels. So the rabbit put the pumpkin on end and pushed it home.

Mother rabbit went out and found a big pumpkin, which was a big surprise. After that, the little rabbit told the story of transporting pumpkin carefully. Mother rabbit proudly said, "You are really amazing!"

I learned from this story to be calm when encountering problems, and to come up with solutions.

Instructor:

Comments: The article tells the story of a clever rabbit transporting pumpkins. It uses vivid movements and psychological descriptions to describe the process of transporting pumpkins in detail and tell people a truth. The article is complete in structure, clear in organization and great!

Rabbit transports pumpkin.

Zhang Bohan

One morning in autumn, the sun is shining and white clouds are flying in the sky.

The sun shines warmly on the ground, and the mother rabbit thinks that the rabbit has grown up. Let him transport pumpkins, the rabbit has grown up. Let him carry pumpkins, and the rabbit skips to the garden. I saw green leaves like green awnings, golden florets like gold, and Huang Chengcheng's pumpkin like a big tire. Little rabbit is dancing with joy. Little rabbit carefully selected the biggest pumpkin, tore the vine hard, and tried his best to take it home. Little rabbit was so tired that he was panting and sweating, but the pumpkin still didn't move. Little rabbit thought: How can I move home? When I was worried, I saw the little panda riding a bicycle and greeting him from a distance. It had a brainwave and thought: bicycles have tires, and pumpkins are like tires. So I stood it up and rolled it home. Mother Rabbit asked curiously, "How did you get it back?" Little Nutbrown hare said proudly, "I rolled it back. Mother rabbit gave it a thumbs-up sign. "

Instructor: Teacher Yu.

Guidance comment: The little author told the reader the story of a rabbit carrying pumpkins in fluent sentences, which was brilliant, clear-cut, rich in content and great!

Rabbit transports pumpkin.

Lou Yichao

In the afternoon when the sun was shining brightly, mother rabbit was ill. Little rabbit wanted to make pumpkin pie for her mother. Little rabbit came to the vegetable garden and saw a big pumpkin and said, "Wow! What a big pumpkin! "

Rabbit hugged the pumpkin and exerted all his strength, but the pumpkin did not move. Rabbit thought, "Why don't you ask Brother Elephant to help me carry it home? How about taking it home with friends? Why don't you ask dad to move home? " Rabbit is worried. Suddenly, the little panda is riding a bicycle, humming a song and listening to music. He says hello to Rabbit. Rabbit thinks: The wheels of the bicycle are round, and the pumpkin is round, so I can stand up the pumpkin and go home.

When I got home, my mother saw the pumpkin and asked, "Rabbit, how did you get the pumpkin home?" Rabbit said, "I rolled the pumpkin back." Mom said happily, "You are great!"

This story tells me that you can't do things by halves.

Instructor: Teacher Fang.

Comments: According to the content of the picture, combined with rich imagination, the author tells the story of rabbit carrying pumpkin in fluent language. In this paper, action description and language description are used to make the article vivid.