Common sentences and modification methods 1
(1) component is incomplete.
Incomplete composition refers to a kind of ill sentence in which the sentence is incomplete and lacks a certain component, which makes the meaning of expression unclear. For example:
1, "Class is over, () playing games on the playground." This sentence lacks the subject part of "Who". Who is playing games on the playground? I don't understand.
2. "Our school calligraphy competition." The meaning of this sentence is incomplete because the predicate "what to do" is incomplete.
3. "The teacher is correcting () for us seriously. The second half of this sentence "correcting for us" is incomplete, lacking the object that matches the central word "correcting", which makes people wonder what the teacher corrected for us.
The sentence (1) lacks a subject, the sentence (2) lacks a predicate and the sentence (3) lacks an object. These three phenomena have caused the problem of incomplete components.
(B) improper use of words
Improper use of words refers to a sick sentence caused by improper use of a word in a sentence, or improper praise or criticism, or improper size, or improper weight, or improper use of synonyms. For example:
1. In this competition, he achieved excellent results.
He is always hesitant and not arbitrary at all.
3, through the fog, the scenery in front of you (smearing).
The words "achievement", "arbitrariness" and "scribbling" in these three sentences are all improper words, and the meaning of the sentences is unclear, so they all make mistakes in using words improperly.
(3) Improper collocation
Improper collocation refers to the improper collocation of subject-predicate or verb-object which makes the meaning of the sentence unclear.
For example:
1, "Autumn in Beijing is a beautiful season." The backbone of this sentence is "Beijing is a season", "Beijing" is a place name, "season" refers to time, and "Beijing" is not a season. This sentence is guilty of improper collocation of subject and predicate.
2. "We should improve our learning attitude." "Improvement" means "changing the original backward situation and making it progress", which often matches "method" and "technology" rather than "attitude". This sentence makes the mistake of improper collocation of verbs and objects.
(D) word order confusion
Word order disorder refers to a kind of sick sentence in which the words in the sentence are not arranged in a certain order or the meaning to be expressed, resulting in ambiguity or confusion, which makes the meaning of the sentence unclear. For example, "Be sure to correct it carefully and carefully check the mistakes in your homework." We must carefully check and seriously correct the mistakes in our homework. However, the word order of the original sentence is reversed, which makes the sentence unclear and causes language barriers.
(e) duplication and cumbersome.
Repetitive redundancy refers to a language disease in which words with the same meaning are repeatedly used in a sentence, which appears redundant and cumbersome. For example, "We are watching a beautiful dance." "beautiful" and "beautiful" in this sentence are two words with the same meaning. If it is used repeatedly in a sentence, it will appear verbose. You only need to choose one of the meanings to understand, but if you use two words repeatedly, the meaning is not clear.
(6) Inconsistent
Inconsistency refers to a kind of ill sentence in which the meanings expressed before and after the sentence are contradictory, making the sentence unclear. For example, "I'm sure it may rain today." In this sentence, "affirmation" and "possibility" are contradictory, and "affirmation" is fixed; "Maybe" means maybe, maybe. These two meanings are obviously contradictory, which makes people wonder which one this sentence is trying to express.
(7) The reference is unknown.
Unknown reference refers to pronouns (such as "you, me, him, her, it, this, that" and so on. ) used in sentences, but the things they refer to make people unable to determine the objects they refer to, resulting in ill-defined sentences. For example, "Xiao Fang and Xiaoli are neighbors, and she often goes to her house to play." Does "she" in this sentence mean "Xiao Fang" or "Xiao Li"? The meaning to be expressed is unclear and puzzling.
(8) Unreasonable
Unreasonable refers to the meaning expressed in one sentence, which does not conform to the law of development of things and objective facts. For example, "the sunset glow fills the lake." Sunset gives off "afterglow", while "Zhao Hui" gives off the morning sun. The meaning expressed in this sentence is unreasonable.
(9) Improper classification
Improper classification means that things that do not belong to the same category are mixed in one sentence, which leads to improper classification. For example, "Mom bought a lot of vegetables such as melon, eggplant, lentils and pork." This sentence is obviously wrong to attribute "pork" to vegetables.
(10) Improper use of related words
Improper use of related words means that the two clauses before and after are not in harmony with the related words used. For example, "We can only get good grades if we study hard." The relative word "only" in this sentence cannot be matched with "JIU". Only "only" or "only" can express the meaning of the sentence clearly.
Common sentences and modification methods II
1.(20 1 1 Yiwu City, Zhejiang Province) The sentence that is not bad is (C)(2 points).
A. An ideal education should cultivate students' level of being good at discovery and exploration.
B. It is conceivable that you can get good grades without studying hard.
C. We should not only learn Chinese in the classroom and textbooks, but also learn Chinese outside the classroom and in life.
D. Students should carefully observe all kinds of things and phenomena, have real feelings and avoid making things up.
(2011Huzhou City, Zhejiang Province) Read the following paragraph and answer the questions as required. (2 points) Xu Xiake was a traveler, geographer and writer in the Ming Dynasty. He traveled more than half of China and wrote many travel notes. (1) May 19 is the opening month of Xu Xiake's Travels, and the State Council designated this day as "the tourist port of China". (2) This shows that the country attaches great importance to tourism and is conducive to continuously improving people's quality of life.
(1) There are punctuation errors in the underlined sentence ①, please write out the correction opinions. Change the first quotation mark to the title of the book.
(2) The underlined sentence (2) has obvious language defects, please write out the suggestions for revision. Replace "increase" with "improve" or "promote".
3.(20 1 1 Jinhua, Lishui City, Zhejiang Province) Choose the one without speech disorder. (3)
A. Many people are deeply interested in the surrounding environment in Xinjiang and want to go out for a walk on weekends.
B. Japan stopped the operation of Unit 4 of Hamaoka Nuclear Power Station to prevent major nuclear safety accidents caused by the earthquake and tsunami.
C. With warm applause, * * delivered a keynote speech entitled "Promoting the Common Development of * * * and Promoting * * to Build a Harmonious Asia".
D. The use standard of food additives includes 23 14 varieties such as food processing AIDS, gum base and edible spices.
(20 1 1 Zhoushan, Jiaxing City, Zhejiang Province) Every underlined sentence in the following paragraph has language defects. Please correct it in the original sentence. (4 points)
(1)1May, the Criminal Law Amendment (VIII) and the revised Road Traffic Safety Law came into effect. ② Through these two new regulations, it has played a great deterrent role for drunk drivers. (3) According to the statistics of the Traffic Management Bureau of the Ministry of Public Security, as of 15, Zhejiang * * * investigated and dealt with drunk driving incidents 1 100, more than double the same period last year. ④ Not only has the number of drunk driving been greatly reduced, but the number of drunk driving in various places has also been greatly reduced.
(1) The second sentence lacks a subject, so delete the word "through". (2) In the third sentence, reduce the multiples that cannot be used, and change "once" to "half" (or "50%" or "half").
5.(20 1 1 Hangzhou, Zhejiang) The following passage has three sentences, each with language defects. Please correct it. (3 points)
(1) The Millennium Canal gives Hangzhou a unique charm as a water town with "canals and rivers everywhere, east-west bridges and north-south bridges". (2) In recent years, with the comprehensive promotion of canal protection measures, a large number of historical sites on the west bank of Chen Gong Bridge have been protected. (3) There are many rich historical and cultural relics here, and cultural and creative industries such as media and animation are developing rapidly.
(1) Add "resort" after "charm" or delete "become". (2) Change "measures" to "projects" or change "promotion" to "implementation". ③ Delete "numerous" or "rich".
6.(20 1 1 Dazhou City, Sichuan Province) One of the following sentences is (a)
A. The whole classroom has an unusually serious atmosphere. What surprises me most is that there are many people sitting on the benches in the back of the town. They are as quiet as we are. (Dude, The Last Lesson)
B Sometimes I put my hand on my chest. I know my heart is still beating, and my heart is still spewing blood, because I often feel that it is overflowing with enthusiasm. (Duanmu is red and bright, the oath of the land)
C. this kind of bridge is not only beautiful in appearance, but also firm in structure. It can cross rivers for decades, hundreds or even thousands of years, and play a role in transportation. (Mao Yisheng's Stone Arch Bridge in China)
D. I think: I hope nothing, nothing. It's like a road on the ground. In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. (Lu Xun, hometown)
7.(20 1 1 Meishan city, Sichuan province) In the following sentences, C is chosen not badly.
A. In order to prevent the recurrence of drunk driving incidents, Meishan City stepped up inspection and rectification efforts.
B earthquake safety education activities in schools can enhance students' safety awareness and self-protection ability.
C. It is urgent to improve food safety laws and regulations, standardize food safety supervision mechanism and raise people's awareness of food safety.
D. Students' proficiency in writing block letters is a standard to measure whether students' writing Chinese characters meets the requirements of Chinese curriculum standards.
Misuse the negative word "no"; B: Lack of necessary object "consciousness"; D: Inconsistent, one side and two sides don't match, and the "whether" behind it should be removed. )
8.(20 1 1 Neijiang City, Sichuan Province) One of the following sentences is wrong: (b) The word order of several attributes is wrong.
A. In more than 20 years of acting career, almost no one remembers Yu-Ching Fei without a suit on the stage.
The crashed passenger plane was a Saab 340 Sol Air plane with a short-range twin turboprop engine.
C. "Red Classics" refers to works that eulogize the China Revolution and the China * * * Production Party and show revolutionary heroism and idealism in the early days of New China.
D. Even if you don't like Chinese very much, it's a success that you didn't let Chinese drag your feet at the last moment near the senior high school entrance examination.
9.(20 1 1 Ziyang, Sichuan) Tong Yaling's mother borrowed a novel "Red Rock" from the county library in order to participate in the school's red classic reading activities to commemorate the _ _ anniversary of the founding of the China * * Production Party. The following is a short message he sent to Yaling's mother. After reading it, complete the following questions. (4 points)
Aunt Wang, I'm Fang Ming, a good friend of Yaling. Although I haven't met you, I am familiar with your name. I have one thing to trouble you now: (2) Recently, in order to commemorate the _ _ anniversary of the founding of China * * Production Party, every student was asked to read an extracurricular book praising revolutionary martyrs. I really want to read the novel Red Rock and observe the struggle course of revolutionary martyrs in detail, but neither our school library nor our classmates have this book. I wonder if there is this book in your library. If so, please ask Yaling to bring it to me; If not, be sure to tell me in time. Thank you for your help.
The word "familiar with" in the first sentence is improperly used and should be changed to. Know very well
The second sentence is incomplete and should be changed to. Recently, in order to commemorate the _ _ anniversary of the founding of the China * * * Production Party, the school asked every student to read an extracurricular book praising the revolutionary martyrs.
The third sentence should be changed to. I really want to read the novel Red Rock and learn more about the struggle of revolutionary martyrs.
The inappropriate word in the fourth sentence is that it should be changed to. Must be "trouble" or "trouble" (change it to "please" to give points) (4 points, 65438+ 0 point for each correct sentence. )
10.(20 1 1 Shaoxing city, Zhejiang province) There are typos and sick sentences in the following paragraph. Please find out and help correct it. (3 points)
Reading is a learning process. A book has a story, a story tells a life, and a life reflects a world. Nicholas Nikolai Gogol said that books are the windows to the world. Whipple said that books are lighthouses that stand in time. Reading every book will yield certain gains. But why do some people spend the same time reading the same things, but get little? An important reason is because there is no intention to feel.
(1) Correct the typo: change "You" to "Le"
(2) Modify the sick sentence: One of the most important reasons is that you don't feel it with your heart (or: it's useless because you feel it).