Watch the sunrise and sunset, listen to the river flow long gone, feel the flowers and frost fly, realize the true meaning of life, taste and smell the fragrance of life.
River? No regret
"The road is long, I will go up and down to seek", he chanted the poem, jumped into the rolling waves of the B汩罗江. He went far away with the river, leaving only his tears, condensing his grief, scattered in the air crystal. His name is Qu Yuan, is a poet, but also as a courtier, countless times to advise the loyal advice, only because of the villain's slander and not adopted, now, the country will not be the country, he could not bear to see the great mountains and rivers handed over to the people, had to throw himself into the river with tears.
The river took him away, and the people on both sides of the river, the whole world remembers him in the river that he had no regrets, bearing in mind the fragrance he emitted.
Mountain? Firmness
He was upright and unyielding old man, perhaps a little whimsical in the eyes of others. Some laughed at his foolishness, some sighed at his fearlessness, an old man can have such vigor, but also so firm, let me sweat. His name is Yugong, Yugong is not stupid, because he understands what is a thousand years of foundation, what is the former planted trees, the next person to enjoy the cool; he knows that he can not go out of the closed mountains, can not communicate with the outside world to develop; he understands that he can not wait for that day, but he wants to let his children and grandchildren to realize.
Let us remember this story with the mountain, feel the fragrance in the old man's firm spirit and spread her.
Hai? Obsession
The bird with the stone goes back and forth between the sea and the mountain, bringing stones from the mountain to be thrown into the sea. She is a bird transformed into a beautiful girl who has forgotten the ruthlessness of the sea just because she is close to it. Her name was Jingwei, and she vowed to fill the sea and protect all innocent people from being swallowed by the sea. From then on, a weak bird between the sea and the sky came and went obsessively, and so time passed for thousands of years.
Sense her spirit and interpret the fragrance she left behind. In my heart engraved obsession.
Flower blossoms and falls, a few touched a few true, ghostly history of silk incense, touched the ancestors far away, feeling the legacy of aroma, but I hope the aroma is still the same, looking forward to the aroma is more intense, more true, more long-lasting.
Full Score Revealed
Qu Yuan threw himself into the river, Yugong Yishan, Jingwei reclaimed the sea, far away from a figure knocking at our hearts. The fulfillment of Yugong's wish let us know what is firm; Qu Yuan's leap let us understand what is called no regret; and the girl who reclaimed the sea let us know the connotation of persistence. The author's elegant writing style is like flowing water, meticulous thinking is like pulling silk from a cocoon, and the resounding language is like a battle drum in the sand. Inadvertently, we smelled the aroma, subconsciously, we read out the moving. As an examination essay, it is a masterpiece with far-reaching meaning and rich literary flavor. (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay two
Ruined
Nantong City, a candidate
When the story of "Farewell my concubine" in the land of God, when the long years of the river can not be washed out of the blood and tears of the body, when a lot of public opinion come to a lot of time, you, Xiang Yu, is still a hero in my heart. The hero of my heart: the voice of your life sings a majestic hymn, your blood condenses into a most beautiful flower, and your spirit is like the fragrance of flowers, which will last forever.
Yuji horizontal knife, a flower of life blossomed into the blue of the blade, I saw your grief, helplessness, infinite depth ......
Remember when the force to lift the tripod you, majestic; remember that "give up my who" of the A broken shout; still remember the "block my person death" of the heroic ......
You have achieved a hegemony. Unfortunately, you met Liu Bang. You led the army into battle, with integrity, refusing to attack the unformed army, resulting in a great defeat. You guarded the Chu River and Han Han Border, thinking that from now on the well water and river water do not offend each other, who knows that the treacherous Liu Bang even openly repair the inn road, secretly crossing the warehouse. After all, Liu Bang is the monarch, and you are the hero!
Heroes, with integrity, in the yellowed annals of history like flowers as fresh and beautiful, pleasing to the eye. The fragrance of the flowers is faint.
"You can't make a name for yourself," said Mao Zedong. Mao Zedong said you sell your name, I have not felt, I see, only your integrity. "This is said to be the words of the public left horse Cao Wu injury." When you said this, you were facing none other than Liu Bang. So Cao Wouxian was killed, and the question is: Who would dare to help Chu again?
So the news of your siege came to you by the Wujiang River, and the songs of Chu from all sides hit your ear drums like wandering souls, and the strong men covered their faces, and the crows cried sadly. And so you ended the beauty of your life beside the waters of the Wu River.
When the colorful and tragic past faded into a page of yellowed paper, when the sun sets in the west, Hankou children playfully sang: "the wind rises and the clouds fly up ......" when your story to "refused to cross the Jiangdong "The tragic pen of the last pen is written. Your unique heroes lost sadness, integrity of the world's bosom, like a ghostly fragrance on the face, fresh, simple ......
Lu Xun said, success is to show the good things to others, and failure is the destruction of the good things to others. And you, Xiang Yu, are precisely that greatest destruction.
Your life, glowing with the most moving light; the petals fall out, the aroma still pervades ......
Since ancient times.
It's time for Xiang Yu to laugh a thousand years ago, because there's still a child who worships him so much a thousand years later.
Full Score Revealed
Skillful and witty clipping and harnessing of historical materials is the result of the young author's extensive reading accumulation. The ability of profound rational thinking is appreciated. Chu Ba Wang's brilliant performance, Han Gaozu's power to change the scheme, in the middle school candidates in the pen to move around and jump, any thing, everything is destroyed by the hero because of its bright and open-minded, was emitted by the beauty of the sadness of the unity of the purpose of celebrating the fragrance of honesty in life, conceptualization and expression of how subtle! The long and short sentences are staggered and mixed, like the drums of a thousand years ago, resounding and powerful. Short and precise comments, no longer a child's playful singing, atmospheric and profound. If it is a bit more smooth and mellow, it will be a "big weapon". (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay three
Smell the dark fragrance of life
Nantong City, a candidate
Life, precipitated by the struggle, enterprising, brilliant.
Let life blossom, must first smell the chicken dance, fight bravely, and finally stand out. Only by letting life blossom, can we feel the aroma permeated, the epiphany of the dark fragrance of life!
Taking trust as the root, life can blossom and brew the fragrance of flowers.
The Liangshan group of heroes, Wen Xiao let, wisdom rely on Wu, martial arts is elite, endless, but only Song Jiang as the first; three kingdoms, Shu Han account, Zhuge Kongming, wisdom, martial arts leaning on Guanzhang, Zhao Ma Huang is not inferior, but Liu Bei for the emperor; gold, wood, water, fire, earth, it can be said that the Eight Immortals across the sea, each show their skills, but the earth in the center.
To dare to endure the trials and tribulations of life as a stem, life can blossom, the fragrance of flowers.
Sun Bin endured the pain of knee digging, clenched his teeth, creating the "Art of War" that has been passed down through the ages; Bing disdain for the sadness of listening to the music of the mountain springs, "Two Springs Reflecting the Moon" in the period of the erhu, although it should come into being, the small zhengzhe'er command finish, but sighing, "this song should be only on the heavenly, where on earth a couple of times to hear it?" The "Thousand Hands of Guanyin", unique craftsmanship, deaf and mute suffering out of their several years of hard work, finally came to today's brilliant, can also be celebrated.
With self-confidence and diligence as the leaves, life can blossom, and the fragrance of flowers is strong.
Zhuge Kongming, Liu Bei's three Gu Gu fledgling end not regret, you make the group of Confucians can not argue, and you are at ease; three gas Zhou Yu, you rely on the dashing ease of mind; six out of Qishan, you are also unswerving; seven capture Mengwu, you are also calm from the bitter, worthy of the Nanyang Crouching Dragon is also.
"Floating like a floating cloud, as if the dragon" book saint Xizhi, wash ink stone day, ink pool remains scenery as before, "cover also to energy from the person, not the sky is also", hard work figure, happy to become one.
Pints of green tea, light carry Lang Lang wind, slow embedded point white clouds. The most important thing to remember is that you can't lose your poise, and you can be bold and moderate. The trust as the root of the dare to endure trials for the stem, self-confidence, hard work for the leaves, can make life bloom gorgeous flowers.
The flower of life has been so brilliant, why worry about the dark fragrance of life?
This is an excellent piece of beautiful writing, the author of the ancient and modern, from the "trust", "dare to endure the trials", "self-confidence and diligence" three aspects, "trust", "dare to endure the trials", "self-confidence and diligence", "confidence and diligence", "trust", "trust", "dare to endure the trials", "self-confidence and diligence", "confidence and diligence". "Three aspects," the "brewing fragrance", so that the "fragrance of flowers", "fragrance of flowers", "flowers", and then blossomed the gorgeous flowers of life, the line of writing like water, a cascade of water, from Liangshan Qunqun to the world. A stream, from the Liangshan group of heroes and the Three Kingdoms Kongming to the Spring and Autumn Sun Bin, and then the Sage of the book Wang Xizhi, all show the author's "spirit of wisdom" of the nature of the line of the article is magnificent, the drum to view the present, quoted, and narrated, all natural! In the 5,000 years of Chinese history, "the dark fragrance has no expiration date", one cannot help but feel a great deal of emotion! (Comments: Cui Yilin)
The full marks of the examination room essay four
In the fragrant place
Nantong City, a candidate
In the fragrant place, there are you **** the same home. It is from there that the aroma comes, and it is in the lungs and all over the heart.
I am going there, looking for the footprints of the fragrance.
I first found you - Xu Benyu, you could have been in the bustling metropolis to live a leisurely and happy days, but the mountains captivated your eyes, you went, from the mountains there is the sound of reading, there is the children's laughter, it is you with the youth of the children's dream of learning. Your aroma and not only in the mountains filled, the whole world is surrounded by your fragrance, like the night incense.
Yes, it is the flavor of the night, pure, pervading the hearts of people.
Flower residue, people also passed away, but the aroma is still diffused, your spirit will never be forgotten, because of you, the people can live in peace, you are like magnolia, pure white petals is exactly what you serve the people's heart, do not mix a trace of impurities, even if it is a little bit. You go, but there will be more Ren Changxia stood up, with a heart as hot as yours to light up the magnolia in the stamens like a lamp, fragrant, through the clouds, is you! In the cloudy sky scattered pieces of white petals, falling people full of body and heart, fragrant as a mist, such as a light veil covering the whole world, hazy.
Flowers quietly open, incense densely covered the entire city of Beijing, the whole of China, I recognized you at a glance - Li Suli, an ordinary bus conductor, for many years as a day of silent dedication, you are like a mast flower, right, with the general enthusiasm of the fire to light up the traveler's heart, the love of the silk is tightly tied by the tips of your hair! I think when you work, your clothes must be inserted in a mast flower, otherwise, how can the compartment filled with the soft fragrance, yes, must be.
This everything and everything ripples my heart lake ripples, fragrant with the four seasons, I want to stay there, that fragrant place, after growing up I became you: silent cleaner, selfless teacher ......
Look at it, in that fragrant place, the flowers bloomed, a group, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster, a cluster. Red as fire, green as blue, dazzling the heart with light.
This is an excellent piece of prose that shows the author's deeper literary skills. The most important feature of the article is that it is written with feelings, and the feelings are random. The author to look for the fragrant footprints as a clue, to three kinds of flowers (night to come incense, magnolia, gardenia) to the metaphor we are familiar with and touched by the characters, reveals the true meaning of life. The language of the article is graceful and elegant, and the touch of the pen is filled with a faint fragrance and a lingering aftertaste! (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay five
Permeable fragrance of soft
Nantong City, a candidate
The fragrance of human nature is a bit of moving ripples on the clear pool as flat as a mirror; it tugs at your heartstrings and shows the light. --Title.
I can't perceive you, Li Qingzhao, your graceful and fresh poetic style displaying softness -- the fragrance of your humanity.
Dream and you meet, holding a cup of light tea, leaning against the dangerous building to listen to the negative rain rotten, soft wind, light rain, wafting the breath of light tea, set off your thin face. "Do not say no soul, curtain rolled west wind, people than yellow flowers thin." Is the thought of her husband, Zhao Mingcheng, right, in the thought of also had leaned on the building to recite poetry, light look at life; also played with antiques, to solve the old-time flavor; more had candlelight night talk, long talk.
Following a wisp of fragrance - your lingering tenderness, indicating a wisp of sentimentality, a trace of desolation.
Late at night, often holding an oar of "Soyu words", close to your soul, easy to rest. Beige letters on the sadness that has not been left behind, is lyricizing the fragrance of your humanity.
Has it ever occurred to me that after two dynasties, the turbulent times, and whether it can stir up your heart lonely since the melancholy; under the silk tent, and remembered that the new marriage of the broken, and how is not a soul mournful?
I suck your fragrance, Qingzhao. Your softness brings me waves of emotion, brings me inner silence.
I appreciate your fragrance, Qingzhao. Your softness is a sign of strength to me, a sign of endlessness and cheerfulness to the world.
I praise your fragrance, Qingzhao. Your softness is passed on to future generations to be infinitely poignant, so that future generations will sing it forever.
Qingzhao, no matter whether it is turbulent or peaceful, quiet or noisy, soft - the fragrance of your humanity will always reveal business. Now or in the future, your soft breath prompted generations to run towards the deepest emotions of the heart.
Silence, is the sublimation of humanity;
Soft, is the emotional charm.
The apricot blossoms and spring rain of Jiangnan,
The breeze sticks to your thoughts;
The rain curtains entangled into lines,
The story is soft - the fragrance of your life!
Full Score Revealed
A famous person once said, "It is not the lack of beauty in life, but the lack of eyes to discover it." The author of this article has used his rich literary knowledge and keen eyes to capture the soft human beauty emanating from Li Qingzhao, a female lyricist of the Song Dynasty. The word "soft" runs through the whole text, condensing the woman lyricist's rough and uneven life, reflecting the lyricist's lingering and touching love story, and displaying the character's sentimental but strong and bright personality. The writing is well-written and neatly synthesized. The opening epigraph points out the theme, and the poem at the end has a lingering aftertaste that echoes the beginning and sublimates the theme. (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay six
In the harbor of the heart have you
Nantong City, a candidate
Eyes have you lingering into the tears, dreaming of you ravishing rain interwoven into the hang-ups, the heart has always followed your oath, y attracted by you, intoxicated by you, my favorite --- literature. -I've been a little bit lost, but I don't know what I'm talking about.
--Title
Immersed in the "draw the knife to break the water more water, raise a cup of sadness more sadness" pessimism, I feel the melancholy of Li Bai's ambition is difficult to fulfill, but also feel the aroma of his life--Sadness. I feel the melancholy of Li Bai's unfulfilled ambition and the fragrance of his life - the sadness of the sky. Immersed in the joy of "the long wind will break the waves sometimes, hanging straight from the cloud sails to help the sea", I have the feeling of "dark flowers and another village", but also feel the aroma of his life - heroic. I feel the fragrance of his life - heroic, worthy of the holy name of the drunken poet, heroic and full of love.
It is impossible to forget Lu You's "lying in a lonely village is not self-sorrow, still think of the country to garrison Lantai", will be dedicated to the court, although the old but do not forget to be loyal to the country, this is how loyal and patriotic ah! More will not forget Su Shi "will pull the bow such as the full moon, look northwest, shoot the wolf" of the heroism, I saw the brocade hat and sable fur of the Dongpo battlefield, suave and elegant posture. They put themselves into the country, I read the aroma of their lives - loyal patriotism, defending the border.
Through you - literature, I saw the city of Chang'an traffic, such as the real illusion of the prosperity of the scene, the Weiyang Palace in the long skirt like the wind, swaying posture of the palace maiden, like a painting of the brushwork of the birds, writing landscapes, loose characters scroll, aura and enduring. You will be the temperament of the gorgeous hidden behind, but how can you cover your proud and vulgar, how can I stop chasing your footsteps? I appreciate the fragrance of life - not for the sensational, but for the pleasure of the spirit.
Staying in the dense atmosphere of books, withdrawing from the luxury of the neon dress and colorful clothes swept through, wandering over the battlefield of grief and grudges, walking in the majestic mountains and rivers ...... Through you, I listened to the aroma of life - the pursuit of excellence, the pursuit of peace! and the pursuit of the true meaning of the soul!
A philosopher once said, "The most valuable thing in life is not to enjoy happiness, but to keep exploring and struggling again and again". I would say: the most valuable thing in life is not to enjoy happiness, but to enjoy the fragrance of life with literature.
Your sublimity hones my will, your candor stretches my heart, and your mystery inspires my quest ......
Being in your company, savoring the fragrance of life, feeling the aroma of life, and firming up my beliefs--love you. Love you forever.
Full Score Revealed
This is a beautifully written examination essay. The young author cleverly intermingles the love of literature with the feeling of life's fragrance organically with the title, bringing the reader into a profound literary atmosphere,**** with the experience of a colorful and varied life. Feel the gorgeous fragrance of life. At the same time, poetry and song references add color to the article, reflecting the author's rich accumulation, smooth thinking and the realm of humanistic unity, which is rare. (Review: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay seven
A flying leaf
Nantong City, a candidate
Autumn in all the silence quietly arrived.
I like to wander alone in the woods sprinkled with yellow leaves, because I love the bleak beauty of autumn, the loneliness of autumn, and especially the harvest of autumn.
On an autumn evening, I still came to the woods, to a tree, suddenly, I found a shaking struggling leaves, see her difficult look, my heart touched, then reached out to help her a hand, to pick her off. But then she spoke, "Please don't pick me off, I want to fly ......" "How can you possibly fly?" My heart touched once again. "People, this world is full of hope! I am confident! As long as I rely on the spirit of hard work, I believe I will fly! This time next year, I'll come back and I'll fly for you!" "Okay, let's make a deal, we won't see each other again! I'll come back next year, bye!" "Bye, remember! Don't forget our promise!" Autumn spreads, autumn leaves spinning ......
Time is like a flowing stream, never to return. The next year's fall came in a meditative wait. I prepared myself mentally and half-heartedly came to the tree, I searched for the leaf, she was still struggling. "O leaf, it's time to wake up from your dream! Give up, you can't possibly do it!" "No, I will do it, I will fight to the end! That's not a dream, that's a reality, and it's going to come true! Tough luck, come back next year, okay?" "Yes, I'll come back next year, and although I don't believe in reality, I'll sincerely pray for you! I wish you success! May you not be so hard next year and be happy!" "Thank you, it's getting late, go back! I'm going to work. Come back next year!" Autumn colors lingered, and the autumn leaves still swirled upward ......
Leaf, leaf, will you succeed? May my prayers bring you luck.
The autumn girl came fluttering in, and I flew to the tree, "Ah, Ye'er you're flying!" "Yeah, look I did it, clap for me!" In the blink of an eye, but Yeh landed on the ground. I ran to Ye'er and squatted down, gently picking her up. "What is the point of this for you? Losing your life for a moment's flight." I gently buried the leaf under that ground, wishing her a bright spring in the coming year!
People, living in the world should have the spirit like Ye'er, that is the fragrance of life! Her life is quietly opening, leaving the fragrance to the world, may the fragrance of this life can always grow in all things!
Full Score Revealed
Balzac said, "Victory is like tears, and that is life!" Autumn leaves, however, said, "Victory as life, this is life!" With the life of the song of flying, who does not top worship? We firmly believe that: the autumn leaves in the body of the unstoppable spring tide of life, the next year will be full of branches!
As long as the delicate heart to savor, the natural world is everywhere inspired wisdom. A mind enriched with wisdom will keep your life flying! (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay eight
Nails on the flickering dignity
Nantong City, a candidate
Monitoring
Today came a poor old man, dragging a snakeskin bag, said to pick up the garbage, hmph, don't think that I don't know, is not to pick up the garbage in the name of the goat! This kind of thing I have seen a lot, I do not allow him to go in, but this old man is very stubborn, said he is not at all the kind of person I think, he argued red in the face, no way, let him go, I want to observe a while to say.
The old man
Alas, I am an old worker, helpless children do not support me, in a fit of pique I took my partner out to live, but because of the lack of money, I had to come out to pick up garbage to make ends meet, last week to a residential building, the doorman even thought that I would steal, he said that this kind of incident has already happened a few times, I am that kind of person? He said there had been several such incidents and that I was that kind of person. Isn't that looking at people through the crack of the door - looking down on them? I kept quiet and showed them! I guess the residents see me as a decent person. Today a kid came over and gave me some apples, but I refused to take them. I am a man with arms and legs, how can I do something so hurtful to my self-esteem? I don't think you can afford to be poor.
Residents
The old man who came here last time was not bad, and there was nothing missing from anyone's house for a month. I heard that the old man was stubborn and didn't want to look at his children's faces before he moved out, and we sympathized with him, but he didn't want to accept sympathy, so what should we do? Later Wang said, why don't we nail a nail in front of the house, the useless things hanging on it, so that the old man as a garbage collection, we all agreed, so the old man collected the garbage in the past few days will be nailed on the bag collection.
Passers-by
Today, I passed by a residential building and saw an old man collecting garbage, oh, he is the stubborn old man who doesn't want to accept gifts, right? I heard that a few days ago we thought of a way ...... that old man from the nails to take down the garbage bag, open a look inside there are a lot of old books, old clothes, and fruit and so on, the old man did not say anything, but wiped his eyes and walked away. Yes, if you send fruit and so on the old man will not accept, but these old things can be used, but also can be exchanged for a few small money, no wonder the old man so grateful. I remember the other day I read a sentence, yes, "give others some respect, the fragrance of life", how good, so that the aroma of life sprinkled all over the world!
Full Score Revealed
Beauty and dignity shine through in ordinary reality. In the glistening tears of an old man who lives in poverty and does not want to accept gifts, we see: the child's smile on the dignity of the offer, the residents of the dignity of the pious respect, the passer-by on the dignity of the profound interpretation ......
The small author in the narrative of the witty change of narrative angle. Exquisite snippets, without traces of drawing the world of hearts and minds, expressing reverence for dignity, thickly expressing the praise of the fragrance of dignity in life.
The small nail carries the interpretation of such a significant topic, and the skill of the young author is excellent! (Review: Cui Yilin)
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Examination full marks essay nine
Searching for spring in the winter
Nantong City, a candidate
"Spring is full of color, a branch of red apricots out of the wall." --Title
The fragrance of roses is the message of love transmitted by men; the fragrance of chrysanthemums is the boldness of Tao Jinming after he returned to the mountains; the fragrance of lotus exudes the subtle frost and snow of the gentleman "out of the mud and not dye"... ... "The small lotus is only showing its sharp tip" is the painter's happiness, "the fragrance of rice flowers says a good year" is the farmer's joy, "the darkness of the flowers in another village" is the explorer's victory. The victory of the explorers.
As long as there is fragrance, who says winter cannot find spring?
The exam room is silent, but my thoughts are skyrocketing.
The bright weather has been replaced by "a flurry of twilight snow", I stood on the balcony, looking to the left, looking to the right. The arrival of the snow didn't stop parents from picking up their children. The white snowflakes were hitting the buildings, cars and faces like nails. God, what am I going to do, wait so anxiously or brave the snow?
Would I have to apologize to my mother? That wasn't possible.
The snow kept falling, and suddenly a cold hand slid quickly over my shoulder, and I turned to look closely, the mist having long since blinded my glasses. I vaguely saw her - mom, she took one hand has been wet by the rain raincoat, one hand carrying a convenient bag, the bag is clearly a few books. Oh, it dawned on me, wasn't that the book I was clamoring for at noon? I was touched, moved by a pungent aroma and pampered by a warm current.
I am ordinary, but God has brought me strong affection. It has made me happy, I am not angry with my mother anymore, and now, as I sit in the examination hall, I write this small thing to thank my mother for her upbringing and the affection she has given me.
At that moment, a few lines of poetry came back to my ears:
The thread in the hands of a loving mother, the clothes on the body of a wandering son,
The line is tightly sewn, and I am afraid that I will be late to return,
Whoever says that the heart of an inch of grass is the heart of the grass, it repays the three springs of sunshine.
Please stretch out your hard-working hands, weave an example of the heart, store your weaving sunshine and the fragrance of life!
Full Score Revealed
Using simile to introduce the topic and reveal the center, this method is unique; from the content point of view, the author is contrary to the traditional cliché, the use of reverse and set up the sentence style, a natural paragraph, cause the following, promote the development of the plot; lens-type picture, describing the mother in the snow, waiting for "me" scene, the words permeate the lines. The scene of the mother waiting for "me" in the snowstorm is permeated with the author's deep gratitude; the jumping of the narrative language leaves space for the reader's imagination; the writing is fresh and fluent, and the use of ancient poems in line with the theme shows the author's profound literary skills and ability to skillfully master the written word. (Review: Cui Yilin)
Examination full marks essay ten
Those flowers
Nantong City, a candidate
I have always believed that every smile is a flower, which will make one's heart fragrant. --Title
The first flower?I was just four years old. On a clear morning, I went to the milk station to get milk. Just out of the station door, perhaps my hands are too small, the bottle slipped out of my hands, accompanied by an ear-splitting "bang", the milk scattered all over the ground. I was so shocked that I cried for a while, not knowing what to do. Suddenly, a pair of soft hands pushed a bottle of milk into my hand. I stopped crying and stared blankly at the aunt who worked at the milk station in front of me. Auntie's eyes were curved and the corners of her mouth were curved upwards. Auntie was smiling at me! In an instant, my aunt's smile turned into a brightly blooming flower, fragrant in my heart. I can not help but break into a smile.
The second flower?In the blink of an eye, I had grown up a lot. Once, the school and the library organized a speech contest. And I, as it happens, was chosen as a player in our class to participate in the competition. Before the match, I was very well prepared, and I was determined to win honor for my class. However, just before the competition, I suddenly became extremely nervous, and my voice even trembled a little. This made me panic even more. It was time, I was next! I nervously made my way from backstage to the podium. Just as I was walking through the door, a teacher I didn't know smiled faintly at me and touched my head. However, this smile was the biggest encouragement to me, I gradually relaxed my mood, and finally, the more I spoke, the more comfortable I became, and finally won the first prize! Yes, the teacher's smile is like a flower, in my heart emit fragrance, never dissipate.
The third flower?
Entering the third year of junior high school, my grades have been unstable, and my mood also fell into the trough. A dusk, I wandered alone in the street, the heart is full of bitterness. A strange girl of a similar age walked up to me, and I was filled with silence. However, just as she was about to pass by, she gave me a bright smile! I was stunned and stood there for a long time. Those smiles, just like a flower, with its fragrance drove away the bitterness in my heart. Why should I be bitter? As long as there is a tomorrow, you can still continue to work ah! I was relieved.
At one time, so many smiles overlapped together, transformed into a beautiful flower, bloomed in my heart, those flowers, fragrant, moved me.
The author is a person with heart in life, very good at paying attention to life, feeling life. In the eyes of ordinary people, the details of life are extremely ordinary and even unnoticeable: the "curvature" of the aunt's mouth, the "curvature" of a strange teacher, the "curvature" of the teacher's mouth. The "smile" of a strange teacher, the "smile" of a student who passes by, is so touching and profound in his eyes.
The full text structure is complete, clear, three very common details of life, metaphorical "flower", strung together as a whole, harmonious and unified, forming a kind of ethereal aesthetic mood. The use of the inscription is also very clever, laid the emotional tone of the whole text. The ending and the title, the epigraph echoes, more so that the work seems to be natural. (Comments: Cui Yilin)
Examination of the full marks essay eleven
Wutong? Memory
Nantong City, a candidate
That a secret orchid hidden in the deep valley, that a spiritual grass hidden in the stars. The swaying willow is like a dream or smoke, blocking my eyes from looking at the end of the world, but I can't tie it up in a hurry like a white horse passing years.
The fragrance of life is tied to that season.
Kiki's crystalline teardrops hung on her beautiful eyelashes. "Yat, what should I do, parents' expectations, teachers' love, friends' help, but I ......" Teardrop drops on the sycamore leaves at my feet, the crisp sound pierced my heart.
"Kiki, it's not your fault. Believe me, life is beautiful, the sun will nourish us, the rain will cleanse the soul. There will be times when the wind will break through the waves, and the clouds will sail straight through the sea. Let me compose happiness for you and sing passion for you." Kiki looked at me with those ethereal and deep eyes, "Yat, you can do it, I believe in you."
Kiki always bought a bunch of snacks to my house and then took out the information of each subject, claiming that it was a payment for me. I didn't push back, and then again as leisure food, and share with her, I know, she needs to be happy, need to relax, after all, carry too much. I always invited her to play in the park, to go for a walk in the field, to go to the stadium to skate ...... She was much happier and much more relaxed. I know that my efforts will be rewarded, because I smelled the aroma of life, I saw Kiki's confident smile.
Another year in the fall, under the sycamore tree is the figure of Kiki and I chasing and playing. In the shadows of the trees, Kiki laughed and played happily.
"Yat, you know what? My grades are rising step by step, but I feel that I am living an easy life, no more worries as before, but a light step, light wings, a comfort that I have never felt before." She held my hand tightly, her eyes filled with gratitude and joy. My heart released, the aroma of life hit the olfactory nerves, and I knew it was the flower of life blooming.
The meaning of life is not how much he has, but how much he has given.
Aroma lingers in the heart, the heart of the flowers bloom, and then see the scene under the sycamore tree, my life of the scattered aroma!