The First Lesson
I. Telling Fairy Tales, Initial Perception
Students have read many fairy tales, in these stories, which story has left the deepest impression on you? Can you briefly talk about the story and your feelings after reading it?
Teacher summary; like the text we have learned, "The Ugly Duckling" is through the description of the ugly duckling into a white swan, telling us both to treat others well, but also to treat themselves correctly; "The Rose of the Fawn" is through the story of the fawn planted a bush of roses, telling us to create happiness for others, from which they can also get happy ... These fairy tales are all Through a vivid, interesting short story, tell us a truth about being a person and dealing with the world, so that everyone can be educated, fourth grade composition lesson plan: writing fairy tales. Generally, animals, plants and so on are written as people.
The teacher knows that children who love to read fairy tales have a curious and innocent heart, and learning to write fairy tales requires imagination. The first thing you need to do is to write a fairy tale, and then you need to write a story!
Second, the fairy tale, in-depth experience
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(1) Please read the requirements of the exercise, and then discuss the group to see how many aspects of this exercise requirements.
(2) You identified "Who is the main character? What happened between them? In the group to share. (You can make up your own, you can also make up a collective creation)
2. Teacher guidance to help students choose materials, determine the content.
(1) "The characters of the story should not be selected too much, can be provided in the book, or can be their own choice.
(2) Imagine the "story" should pay attention to say clearly when, where, how to happen, how to develop, and how the result.
(3) you want to tell a "story" through the "story" of what "truth", this "truth" can be written directly, can also be embedded in the story.
(4) teacher here has a fairy tale, want to hear? (The Fly and the Bee) Imitation is also a kind of learning, and my teacher would like you to be creative in imitation.
Third, write a fairy tale, try to write
Below, you start to write it, the teacher believes that you are the most outstanding fairy tale king. However, I would like to remind you to pay attention to the following points: 1. Write in a certain order, the process of the story should be written clearly, to see who writes interesting. 2. Statements should be fluent. 3. Read the story several times after writing. 4.
The second lesson
I. Exchange of fairy tales, mutual enhancement
When we entered the fairy tale world and felt the endless charm of fairy tales, we really want to spit it out.
1. The group first exchanged their own preparation of the fairy tale, listen to each other, evaluate, see who made up the most interesting.
2. The leader of the group recommended the students in the group, read their own creation of fairy tales, we appreciate.
3. Teachers recommend a few representative fairy tales, and everyone to share. (Purposeful evaluation)
Second, act out the fairy tale, deepen the sense
1.group elected "script".
2. Group collective cooperation: self-editing, self-direction, self-acting.
Attachment: Fairy Tales
The Fly and the Bee
One day, the fly was on the garbage when he saw a small bee coming back from collecting honey. The fly said angrily to the bee, "The people here are so mean, trying to harm me in every possible way, hitting me with swatters, spraying me with poisoned water...I've decided to move."
The bee said, "The people here are not as bad as you say, they treat me very well, and even build me a new house! The reason is that you are not hygienic, and you stop at dirty things all day long, and you specialize in going and eating people's food, and bringing germs to the food, and making people sick."
The fly was not convinced and tried to argue. The bee looked at him and said coldly, "If you don't change your behavior, you will be expelled and attacked by people wherever you move."
The fly listened to these words and stood dumbfounded and speechless. Finally can only hopelessly, long sigh.
Writing Fairy Tales 2Winter was coming, and the animals rushed to stock up on food. The squirrels stocked up on pine cones, the rabbits stocked up on carrots, but Lorca Bear couldn't find any honey anywhere, and was so anxious that he went round and round under the big tree.
Bees doo doo saw, asked: What's wrong with you? Lorca's eyes reddened, and after a long time he answered: I can't find honey, and there will be no food to eat in the winter! Dodo thought of a good idea and without saying a word flapped his wings and flew away.
The animals didn't see Toot-Toot for a few days, and they all thought he was missing. Just as they were about to call the police, Toot-Toot came back with a big pot of honey. It was so pale and tired that it couldn't even flap its wings. Everyone rushed to gather around and asked with concern: Dudu, where on earth have you been? Are you alright? Dudu took a few breaths, then slowed down, and wiped the beads of sweat on his forehead: I went to a distant place, to pick honey for the bear.
Dodo returned home and called Loka the bear to inform him to come and get the honey. The bear jumped for joy at the good news and ran right over to Dodo's house.
There was a knock on the door, and it turned out to be Lorca. Knock, knock, knock, a drumming sound, this pair of good friends, happy to dance. This winter is no longer cold.
Writing Fairy Tales 3One day, a fox and a white rabbit met in the forest, the white rabbit was scared, it was afraid of the fox to eat it, it thought: how can I make the fox not eat their own? So, it turned its brain, and finally came up with a way, it saw a toy in his hand, and told the fox, "I'll give you the toy, you don't eat eat me." The fox promised. Play for a while, the white rabbit saw the fox's eyes have been staring at it, the fox said: "I'm lost, if you take me out of the forest, I will not eat you, but just in out of the forest, the fox grabbed the white rabbit's tail, ready to eat it, the white rabbit was anxious, asked rhetorically, "is not promised not to eat me? "The fox listened to laugh:" we fox talk is never count, haha, you fell for it. "After that, he pounced on the white rabbit.
This story tells us that we must not believe in people like foxes who do not keep their word, so as not to be fooled.
Writing Fairy Tales 4Fairy tales are a kind of imaginative leap, the release of thinking, to give students the wings of imagination, grasp the degree of guidance and release.
At the beginning of the new lesson, I asked students to share what places in the fairy tales they have read attracted you the most? I let the students recall what the most prominent features of the several fairy tales studied in this unit? Guiding students to exchange reports, the teacher points, to reach **** knowledge. Emotional fusion, in time to bring students into the classroom teaching scenarios in order to stimulate the students' interest in writing and guide students to write.
Clear requirements for students to read freely and draw down. Free exchange, the teacher guide pointing. Must be written according to the physical characteristics of animals. Fairy tales can not violate the physical nature of animals. Personify the animals, that is, use anthropomorphism to describe the story. In the fairy tale world, any animal can have human behavior, language and so on. But every fairy tale should be a complete story. In a story, you can describe the characteristics or knowledge of only one animal, or you can write about two or more animals together. Take care to describe the language of the story in a way that is interesting and easy to understand.
To open the mind, choose the material, I asked according to the requirements of the exercise, what do you intend to write about? Named to communicate, show several groups of things, the groups of students to discuss the selection of a group of things you are most interested in, try to use two or three sentences, say the title of the story, the main content, the significance (reason). See which group will be open-minded, can make up a few different stories.
Students work on their own, based on their own life experience, through the marvelous association, give things with human thoughts and feelings, actions and language, complete the first draft, write as much as you want.
But after the completion of the first draft, there are many problems, writing a fairy tale mistakenly written as a description of small animals, or send themselves into the article, real memories of the past. This requires teachers to have a variety of preconceived ideas before the class, less loopholes, so that the composition class is more effective.
Writing Fairy Tales 5In the vast desert, there is a pale and wounded century-old tree and a newly sprouted grass living in this desert in the middle of nowhere.
On this day, the desert sun was burning like fire, making the grass yellow and the tree about to disappear from the earth. Grass saw the old tree this way, heart like a knife, then hurriedly asked: "old tree grandpa, old tree grandpa, what's wrong with you? Do you need to be okay?" "I ...... I'm fine, you don't have to worry about me." The old tree grandpa said breathlessly. "But you look as if you are very weak?" Little Grass said anxiously. "'Alas, I ...... I'm actually ...... ""There is what you just say. " Little Grass interrupted Grandpa Old Tree. "Alas, then I'll give you straight, the desert was not much water, and people do not conserve water caused a large number of cups of water waste, and now I'm very thirsty, extremely want to drink water." Grandpa tree said breathlessly. The grass said, "So it's like this, I have some water in my body, give it to you to drink." Grandpa tree said sharply: "No no no, good boy your face is still a little yellow, how can you give me the water, you'd better keep it yourself and live on." Grass then said: "old tree grandpa, you do not excuse, I can not do something for mankind in this life, but if I give you the moisture, you can continue to absorb the carbon dioxide released by humans, for humans to spit out the oxygen needed for life, is also counted as my life for mankind to do a thing that I can do."
Grandpa Tree ............
"You are such a good boy who understands." The old tree said gratefully, "I ...... I ...... but ......" As he spoke, the little grass had already sent its moisture rapidly to the old tree grandfather. Grandfather tree sobbed, "child, how ...... you how so stupid ah! Hey, well, you can not show your beauty for human beings, then the old tree grandpa must continue to bring more fresh air for human beings, so that people in my branches and leaves under the tree feel incredibly cool."
In the days to come, the old tree grandpa really did not disappoint the expectations of the grass, continue to send fresh oxygen for humans, send a cozy sense of coolness, for humans to bring the green of life.
Writing Fairy Tales 6Although the deer's family was poor, it was dishonest. As a result, the other animals looked down on it, not to mention the fact that they were not willing to do business with it. So the fawn made up his mind to clean up his act and become an honest businessman again.
The deer decided to go to the "forest barbecue school" to learn barbecue technology, to open a "roast duck store" in the forest. It can be hard-working in the school, to the barbecue masters humbly ask for advice. More than a month later, the deer finally learned to barbecue duck, from the barbecue school graduated.
After the deer returned home, all the family's valuable things are changed to buy, and finally set up a shed in the forest, opened a duck store, store name "honest duck store". Just opened a few days, some small animals are not willing to come to patronize, it is really deserted, business is very slow. Later, Grandpa Elephant and Uncle Orangutan passed by and tasted the deer's duck, which tasted good, so they told the other animals in the forest. After hearing this, they all came to taste it and thought that Fawn's duck was really good. From then on, the deer's "honest duck store" every day, small animals to patronize, often full of guests. The forest of the rich son of the bear decided to invest in donations, so that the deer will be "honest duck store" bigger.
So, a month later, the deer's "honest duck workshop" was born in the forest. At this time, the deer is ready to develop a new species - "beer roast duck". However, it costs a lot of money to introduce the production line and stock up on beer and other ingredients. So, Fawn took the production plan to the "King of the Forest", the tiger, and asked for help. The king of tigers listened to the idea of the deer, and carefully read the production plan, think it is good, and then go to the forest of the rich sons to pull sponsorship. A week later, the animals came to the Honest Duck Shop to taste the new Beer Roasted Duck, and praised Fawn, "You're getting better and better at roasting ducks. Later, more and more new varieties of roast duck, the bear united with several other rich son, decided to help the deer set up an "honest roast duck group of companies".
After a few months, "honest duck group of companies" opened, the deer when the company president and general manager, and recruited a large number of employees, those who were laid off from the small animals and found a job again, are very hard to work. The president of the deer personally to the front line to inspect the work, and sometimes also guide the barbecue technology.
At the end of the year, many animals came to participate in the annual "forest conference". At the meeting, the king tiger to the deer "honest duck group of companies" awarded the "honest business" award, the deer was also the forest barbecue association named "forest barbecue king".
The next year, the business of the Honest Duck Group of Companies became more and more prosperous. ......
Write Fairy Tales 7The little chicken lived in a broken chicken nest, he felt that it was not good here, and he wanted to sell his house and move to the city for some money. So the chicken put up a sign on the side of the nest that said "Sell Your House".
"Sell the house, sell the house!" The chicken stood by the sign and yelled loudly, a little bird flew over, looked at the house and said, "This little nest, in which to lay a few eggs is quite suitable, but this nest is too small, not enough for me to lay three eggs." The chicken thought, "If I can enlarge the nest a little, I can sell it. So he ran around to find some hay to make the chicken nest bigger.
When the nest was finished, the chicken stood by the sign and yelled, "Sell the house, sell the house!" A field mouse came along, looked at the house, and then looked around and said, "This place is close to the field and gives me hibernation, but it just doesn't keep me warm."
The field mouse didn't buy the house and walked away.
The chicken thought, "If I take out something warm and lay it on top, I can sell it. So he went around and found cotton and laid a thick layer of it in the house. When the house was ready, the chicken stood under the sign and yelled, "Sell the house, sell the house!"
But the house was not sold. Butterflies fly to say that there is a lack of flowers; monkeys run to say that there is a lack of playground; rabbits run to say that there is a lack of road; ducks run to say that there should be a fish pond; puppies say ...... Every time I listen to the words of the critters, the chickens think: right, right! If that happens, the house will surely sell.
So he planted flowers, built a playground, repaired the road, and built a fish pond by the house. "Sell the house cluck, sell the house!" One day, the chicken yelled up again under the sign, "What a nice place, with flowers and a fish pond, a playground and a house. You can watch the butterflies fluttering in the flowers, see the fish swimming freely in the fish pond, you can play endlessly in the playground, and there is a road here that leads to the city. ......" The chicken suddenly froze when he said, "Such a nice place, it's quite nice to live by yourself, so why do you want to sell it? So the chicken no longer sell the house.
Write Fairy Tales 8The king has seven beautiful daughters, their shiny black hair is known far and wide, so the king gave them each 100 beautiful hair cards.
One morning, the first princess woke up, as always, with a hairpin to organize her hair, but found that there is a missing hairpin, so she took away the second princess's hairpin; the second princess found that there is a missing hairpin, so she took away the third princess's hairpin; the third princess found that there is a missing hairpin, so she took away the fourth princess's hairpin; the fourth princess took away the fifth princess's hairpin; the fifth princess took away the sixth princess's hairpin; the sixth princess had to take away the sixth princess's hairpin; the fifth princess took away the sixth princess's hairpin. Hair card; Sixth Princess had to take away the hair card of the seventh princess. So, there are only 99 hair cards left for the seventh princess.
The next day, the neighboring country's prince came to the palace, said to the king: "My lark brought back a hairpin, I think it belongs to the princess, this is a destiny, which princess dropped?" When the princesses heard of this, they thought, "I dropped it. But only the seventh princess had a hairpin missing from her head.
A gust of wind blew, and her long hair, missing a hairpin, fell down, and the prince was dumbfounded.
Finally, the prince and the princess were married.
The years do not pass by, and the time is lost. Juvenile song, has become yesterday's memories, but there is a book in the heart into a permanent frame, that is, "Fairy Tales".
The first time I read "Fairy Tales", probably in the fourth grade, I was y attracted by the stories in the book, "Snow White", "Cinderella", "Little Red Riding Hood", "The Frog Prince", "The Three Amigos" and other stories, accompanied by me to eat, accompanied by me to sleep.
I cried for Snow White and I was happy when the wicked queen died. In the stories, I read about goodness, evil, and beauty, and understood that good is rewarded with good and evil with evil.
A good book can change a person's life, may every child become a friend of the book!
Write Fairy Tale 10Heart and Lele are a pair of good partners in the car kingdom. One morning, the residents of the car kingdom were sick, cough, cough, cough ...... Heart said, "We have to think of a way to do it quickly, ah?" Lele said, "Yes, let's go to the human world to find our old friend Lao Li ah! He will definitely help us."
Heart and Joy found Old Lee, and they said to him, "Our `inhabitants' are sick, and we don't know what's wrong, so please help us?" "Children, don't be too sad." Old Li comforted them, "Let's go to Wang Quan, he will have a solution."
Wang Quan checked them both out and said, "Oh, it turns out that one of your important pipes is blocked by something, don't worry, just change your gasoline to eco-friendly gasoline."
"But where do I find environmentally friendly gasoline?" Joy asked anxiously.
"I know, but I can't take you guys in." Wang Quan said, "Let me give you a map."
Xinxin and Lele cloaked themselves in thorns and went through a lot of trouble, and finally came to the location indicated on the map. Suddenly they saw a small blue river glowing in front of them. The glowing is the environmentally friendly oil that Mother Earth gave to the car. They were so excited to find it.
In the end, all the inhabitants of the car kingdom recovered their health.
One day, the kitten went out to play, met the bird, the bird rode on the kitten's tail Play games, fairy tale composition. They played and played, do not remember the way home. At this time the fox came, it is playing hide-and-seek with the puppy in the game, played over and over again, always can not catch the puppy, the fox angry.
The fox was sweating and was hungry and wanted to eat. The fox then said, "I'm not playing anymore, I admit defeat." The fox then sneaked to the kitten's house to steal fish, meat, etc. ...... The fox patted his bulging stomach and said happily, "How delicious, eat something to have the strength to do so, I still want to eat, but unfortunately no more."
At this time the kitten was hungry, so it said, "Today I treat, I specially made a lot of delicious things for you." They arrived home only to find that the fox had stolen all the dishes the kitten had made. The kitten and the bird were furious and pushed the fox overboard.
From then on, no one stole any of the kitten's cooking, and they lived a happy and contented life.
Writing Fairy Tales 12I like reading Fairy Tales very much, and there are many good stories in it. One of my favorites is the story of Cinderella. Cinderella's mother died. Her stepmother and two sisters often bullied her and made her do the dirtiest and most tiring chores. The fairy gave Cinderella nice clothes and shoes.
At the ball, Cinderella and the prince danced happily. Twelve o'clock came and Cinderella had to hurry back. Otherwise the beautiful dress will disappear. Cinderella lost a glass shoe in her haste. The prince found Cinderella with this shoe, and Cinderella became a beautiful princess.
After reading the story of Cinderella, I think it was Cinderella's kindness that touched the fairy, and the fairy helped her to fulfill her wish. We should be like Cinderella, no matter what kind of environment, we should keep a kind heart.
Writing Fairy Tales 13Methods/Steps
First of all, you need to have a rich imagination. Imagination is called fantasy, that is, some marvelous idea that comes from the mind. Imagination is diverse, anything can be imagined out of thin air. For example, you can imagine that the moon is plowing and sowing, the sun has a group of people are using the sun's heat to make steel, the stars are lined up to prepare for the governance of the river in the sky, the earth's people in space in the blocking of the sun's black hole, the animals learn to govern the environment, etc., as long as you can imagine out there will be a story.
Secondly, the intention to be new. The so-called intention is the theme or central idea of the article. Writing a narrative needs to be intentional, writing a fairy tale also needs to be intentional. Some teachers will make this comment after criticizing the essay: the idea is not new. This means that this idea has been written before, or copied from someone else's article. The idea of a fairy tale is similar to that of other articles, and before you write it, you have to think about whether the point of view of the article you want to write is new, and what you want to tell people, and what you want to get from it, etc.
This is the first time I've ever seen a fairy tale in the world.
Pay attention to the characters and the story. Most of the characters in the fairy tale are animals, in the story they can be free of time and space and geographical restrictions, but pay attention to the design of the character character personality to have personality, reflecting the authenticity of the animal itself, so as to make the reader feel real and intimate. Such as writing about the lion, you can show that it is fierce, mighty; writing about the wolf can reflect its ferocity, greed; writing about the fox reacts to its cunning, pretending to be kind; writing about the mouse can highlight its timid and fearful, but also quick-witted characteristics.
Writing fairy tale plot is also very important, if there is not a good story fairy tale is not wonderful. The story among the animals is similar to human beings, it just depends on whether you use your heart to observe and think. There are families, relationships, fights, hatred, harmony and quarrels, whatever humans have they have too. It's up to you to skillfully weave a story out of everything that happens among them. Although it is all virtual imagination, but your story well made, as can be infected with others.
Also pay attention to the language of the vivid image, not a long speech is a big reason, to learn to use easy to understand words to express the idea that you want to illustrate the theme.
Writing Fairy Tales 14During the summer vacation, I read a lot of extracurricular books. Do you want to know? If you want to know, then read on! It's wonderful oh.
I read Andersen's Fairy Tales, Fairy Tales, Water Margin, Childhood ...... In Fairy Tales, the one that impressed me most was Cinderella. Cinderella had a whole family, but her mother died soon, and her father found her a stepmother.
The stepmother and her daughter treated Cinderella badly, treating her like a slave and making her do things. But Cinderella treated her stepmother and her daughter very well. This fairy tale tells us a basic truth of being a human being: we must cherish our love, don't care how others treat us, no matter how hard we have to insist.
Partners, I believe you have read a lot of extracurricular books in the summer vacation, then quickly move the pen!
Writing Fairy Tales 15The cat learned to climb trees, and even the tiger couldn't do anything about it, and he thought he was terrific.
One day, while sitting on the branch of a small tree, he heard a passer-by talk about how the little monkey in the circus was a "great" tree climber, and how he could perform all kinds of funny tricks in the tree. After hearing this, the cat was very unconvinced and thought: "What is the skill of the monkey, is it better than me to climb the tree?
So, the cat found the monkey, and wanted to compete with it to climb the tree. The cat found a flexible branch, with paws holding the branch of the tree up and down swaying, said to the little monkey: "You can? See how skillful I am!"
Without saying a word, the little monkey swung back and forth with his tail hooked on the branch. Cat looked at the eyes straight, also like the little monkey to hook the branch with his tail, "pop" fell down from the tree.
The fox saw, pointed at the cat cat laughed: "This is not your class to show off? Really self-importance, the little monkey was born to be a master of climbing trees, you are in front of the connoisseur to show off their skills, and there is not to make a fool of themselves?"