Translation: I miss you walking on this late autumn night and lamenting how cold and frosty it is. I think the pine nuts are falling in the empty mountain at the moment, and the friends who live in seclusion must still be awake.

Appreciation: This poem expresses the author's yearning for his secluded friend on autumn night. The writer of the first half is himself, that is, the person who is pregnant; In the second half, I wrote Qiu Dan, who is studying Taoism in Linping Mountain, that is, the person I was pregnant with. The whole poem does not attract readers with strong words, but calmly puts pen to paper, shallowly touches ink, is light and affectionate, short and profound, and its style is simple and elegant, leisurely and tranquil, giving people an endless artistic experience.

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autumn night to send a message to the 22 nd member of Qiu

as I walk in the cool of the autumn night, thinking of you, singing my poem.

I hear a mountain pine-cone fall, you also seem to be awake.

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Appreciation of works

Wei Yingwu's five-character quatrains have always been highly praised by poetic theorists. Hu Yinglin said in "Poetry": "There are five words in the middle Tang Dynasty, and Suzhou is the oldest, which can follow Wang and Meng." Shen Deqian said in Shuo Shi _ Yu: "Five-character quatrains, the naturalness of Youcheng, the sublimity of Taibai, and the antiquity of Suzhou are merged into the realm." The above poem is one of his masterpieces.

the artistic enjoyment it gives readers is, first of all, this quaint and carefree style beauty. Shi Buhua once praised this poem in "Poem on the Servant", saying that it is "quiet without reducing friction, and it is also hidden in the five absolutely beautiful things". It doesn't impress readers with strong language, but just writes calmly and lightly, while the language is shallow and affectionate, concise and long, which makes people feel lasting and endless.

in terms of conception and writing, this poem has something else worth distinguishing. It's a poem that cherishes people. In the first half, the poet himself, that is, the person who misses his friends; The second half is about Qiu Dan, who is studying Taoism in Linping Mountain, who is missed by the poet.

The first sentence "as I walk in the cool of the autumn night" points out that the season is autumn and the time is night, and the scenery of "autumn night" and the feeling of "cherishing the king" are just a contrast to each other.

The second sentence, "thinking of you, singing my poem", follows nature, and pays no attention to it at all, but closely follows the previous sentence. "Walking" is in harmony with "Huaijun": "cool weather" is in harmony with "autumn night". These two sentences are both realistic, writing the scene that the author lingers and ponders on a cool autumn night because he is pregnant with someone. Next, the author does not express his feelings, describes the scene, and flies his poetry into the distance.

in three or four sentences, imagine the situation of the person you miss at this time and there. And these three or four sentences are closely related to one or two sentences. The third sentence, "pine nuts fall in the sky", refers to "autumn night" and "cool day" from the cool autumn night in front of us, inferring the autumn colors in Linping Mountain tonight.

The fourth sentence, "you also seem to be awake", is a distant expression of "Huaijun" and "Walking", because I am thinking of people far away and wandering, and I suppose that the other person should be awake. Out of imagination, these two sentences not only originated from the previous two sentences, but also deepened the poetic sentiment of the previous two sentences. From the perspective of the whole poem, the author uses the combination of realism and fiction to juxtapose the foreground of the eye and the middle scene of the mind at the same time, to connect the person who is pregnant with him with the person who is pregnant with him, and then to express the deep affection of lovesickness in different places.

Resources: Baidu Encyclopedia-an autumn night message to qiu.