Fengshadu (2011 Gao Kao Perfect Score Essay) In the mainland's college entrance examination, the essay accounts for the largest portion of the total score. In the June battle of "one exam paper for life", it is important to get points for the essay. In this regard, final year language teachers are more nervous than their students. They strategize in advance and make every effort to simulate a number of essay questions to help candidates prepare in advance, which is called "guessing the questions and betting on the treasure" in the jargon. When you open the question paper and see that you have hit the mark, the teacher will immediately become a living Kong Ming, and the principal will double his or her price. This year, however, there was a breakthrough in this practice: Wang Xi, a student at Yixing Middle School in Jiangsu Province, was driven by his mother to the exam center when he happened to see a snack bar with the signboard "Fengshadu". He
seemed to realize something, but didn't take it to heart. When he sat down in the exam room, he opened his exam paper and saw that the essay question was "Refuse to be mediocre". Wang Xi had a flash of light in front of his eyes, let this essay topic and the snack bar sign gently touched, an 800-word essay was completed. The news of the perfect score essay in the reading room spread, and the Peking University admissions team was ordered to fly to Yixing to snatch people, sign it, young man, from this moment on, you are our Peking University students! Before the opening of the snack bar, a female relative of the neighboring family, Song Xingfen (lawyer and writer), saw the boss and his wife struggling to start their own business, such as through the heavy sands, casually said the name of the store. Now, a piece of writing like a thunderbolt, for the attention of the Chinese people of the world.
"Fengshadu" domain name (fengshadu.com) has been snatched up, selling for 24,000 yuan online, and investment experts predicted that "Fengshadu" will become a restaurant chain brand. There are even some parents who bring their children to dine in this store in order to draw aura and win the future examination. Essay papers are different from math papers. A math question is indisputably full marks if you get it right and zero if you don't. When an essay paper randomly reaches the hands of the initial assessor and is awarded full marks, it requires not only the eye of a musician, but also the guts to take responsibility for it! Why? You gave full marks, a moment of other teachers to review, spot check. If you compare the scoring rules, find a typo, one or two "improper use of punctuation", "improper use of words", "unclear meaning" and other faults, it is very easy. Marking teachers are temporarily drawn from all over the world, not acquaintances, the surface polite, it is inevitable that the literary contempt, pointing out the omissions of others, it shows their own level. Instead of letting others nitpick, it is better to deduct a few points,
plugging other people's mouths. The first time I saw this, I was able to get a good score, but it's not easy. Therefore, the teacher who first assessed Wang Xi's essay, decisively gave full marks, and broke through the layers of gatekeepers review, and now has been placed in front of the world and won praise, we have reason to first pay tribute to this unsung hero who has the courage and knowledge! Many accidental factors have brought Wang Xi to prominence, but there is inevitability in accident. Such angular intention, even if the mainland well-known newspaper articles, not often seen. The literary style is not bad, two or three hundred words in the clear use and the use of Xin Qiji, Du Fu, Cao Xueqin, Lu You, Sima Qian, Zhuangzi, Li Bai's essence of the words and phrases, smooth and clear, high level, not see axe traces.
No unremitting hard reading and independent thinking, plus the talent of the wisdom, is not written. The full text is as follows:====
Refuse mediocrity ------- Yixing Middle School Wang Xi
I can't help but think of the morning when I came over to catch the exams, I saw a small restaurant, called the "wind and sand ferry". The only three words, the meaning of all out, that messy storefront also seems not too crude, but has a rough far from the feelings in the chest stirred up.
Just a signboard, but can make this ordinary restaurant from a dry "a restaurant", "so-and-so snacks" stand out, this is beyond the power of mediocrity.
Can not help but think of a group of people, they also sat in the examination room, but also for the ideal and struggle, and they are now, called "ants"; their residence, called "snail house". When the wind and frost of society blew cold blood smoothed out the edges, when the learned knowledge has no use discarded in the end of the mind, they have forgotten the pride of being a highly educated person, silence, mediocrity. The most pathetic is not living in less than a foot of room, not food and clothing do not keep warm, but the loss of ideals and pursuits, only left to tolerate obedience. No one is born to be trampled on by the grass and ants, but if there is a willingness to mediocrity and willing to lowly heart, then the only destination is just ants.
To be strong, there must first be a strong heart; to look down on the mediocre beings, there must first be a "climbing intention". Yes, the ascent, is Xin Qiji "the Wu hook looked, railing shot all over, no one will, the ascent of the intention" of the ascent, is Du Fu "will be when over the top, a glimpse of the mountains small" of the ascent.
Whether there is a strong heart, a heart beyond mediocrity, is the watershed of mediocrity and excellence. Man is but a reed that thinks, and the noblest is that which thinks. So the nobility of man comes from the soul, from the nobility of the thought level. With a heart that refuses to be mediocre, someone will eventually see from the determination in your eyes, from your vulgar speech and clenched fists that you are extraordinary. Even if the result is still not satisfactory, even if there will be "the heart is higher than the sky, life is thinner than the paper" slander, even if the "fall into the mud into dust", there will still be "incense like the old".
The "ant tribe" and how? If you have a swan's will, looking down on the bird with a favorable situation, I firmly believe that: one day, can "rock up 90,000 miles", "swim in the North Sea and twilight Cangwu", with the long wind, and the vastness of the go.
I believe that the owner of the "wind and sand ferry" will not be a mediocre, secular businessman, right? If it is not a man from the Loess Plateau, it must also be the belly Tibetan poetry but had to be confined to the world of literature. Otherwise, how could there be a signboard with such a bold, ancient flavor?
I must go to the "wind sand ferry". The food is not important. After a small drink, and the boss smiled at each other and went out, my generation is not the people of Artemisia? Refuse to be mediocre, the world is wonderful with you.