In today's social life, we all have direct or indirect contact with the commentary. Through the visual description, the commentary makes the audience feel the environment in the story as if they were there, so as to achieve emotional * * *. How can I write a commentary to avoid stepping on thunder? The following is my commentary on the military training for freshmen for your reference only. Welcome to read it. 1

The students of the 11th District Team are coming to us with neat and powerful steps.

during the week-long military training, they overcame all difficulties and tried to break through themselves and improve themselves. Now, the 11th District Team has become a united and hard-working team. Military training has brought them not only hardship, but also a kind of tempering of will. They have a spirit of pursuing Excellence and always striving for the first place. I believe all the students in the 11th District Team will achieve greater success in their future study and life! Commentary on military training for freshmen 2

1. Prelude

Female: leaders and instructors,

Male: teachers and dear students,

Female: autumn is full of praise for Qiu Guang, and she is in full bloom.

male: radiant, full of pride, heroic and passionate.

female: In the youth flower season, with the dream of Wan Li Pengcheng and the heavy expectations of relatives, we are gathered in this hot land of Huangzhong.

male: autumn is September, which is a colorful season, a gorgeous season, a mature season and a harvest season!

female: Time flies like a song, and career is like a new picture.

Male: Huangpu Middle School is a provincial model middle school, and its college entrance examination scores have been ranked first in the county for many years. She is a bright pearl on the bank of the submerged river!

Female: Huangpu Middle School is a school full of vigor and vitality. Today, more than 511 senior one students will show their achievements in military training for a week here.

together: let's witness their brilliant medals forged with wisdom and sweat!

second, please welcome President Xia Chengyu to announce the start of the military training report performance.

Third, fire guns

Fourth, raise the national flag and play the national anthem

Fifth, divide the form

Female: Although a week is short, it is enough to be the most precious memory in my life;

m: five days' experience is limited, but it is enough to form the best habit in my life.

Female: Please enjoy the performance in discrete form

111

Male: First of all, the soldiers from the military training company are walking towards the rostrum. Look, they are like tall and straight pines, like galloping horses. Military training makes them understand the firm temperament, strong will and hard-working spirit of soldiers. The hardships of training have turned into the nectar of success, which is reflected in their firm pace. I believe that a row of soldiers will cherish today more and bravely embrace tomorrow!

112

Female: An eagle should fight the sky; If you are a dragon, you can swim around the world. Facing the morning sun, what is coming to us in high spirits is the phalanx of military training company in the second row. They are newborn calves, not afraid of hardships; They are the rising sun, thriving. In the next three years, they will adhere to the school motto of "respecting morality and learning, being realistic and innovative", constantly surpass themselves and continue the glory of Huangzhong!

113

Male: It's Class One (Three) of Senior High School. Through the training of military training, they know how to unite, how to be strong and how to persevere. They realized that only youth embellished with sweat is true youth, and only hard work can open the road of life. They will meet every challenge in the future with high morale and enterprising attitude. "It's a long way to go in Xiu Yuan, and I will go up and down for it." They will prove that they are enough to take over this era with their own strength!

114

Female: At the moment, there are four rows of squares that are uniform and imposing. Their eyes have the same enthusiasm as fire, and their pace is full of youthful vigor. Yesterday, they sweated and honed themselves under the training of instructors; Tomorrow, they will be down-to-earth and tempered into steel under the guidance of their teachers! Look, this elite division will surely triumph!

VI. Individual Training Actions

Male: The purpose of this military training is to "experience and temper", that is, to experience military life, exercise physical fitness and sharpen will and character.

female: the theme of this military training is "the style of interior discipline", that is, learn to tidy up the interior, be strict with campus discipline and develop a good style.

M: Please enjoy the individual training action performances brought to us by platoon 115, 116 and 117.

VII. Military Boxing Performance

Male: Stand like a pine, sit like a bell, lie like a bow and walk like the wind. If you are a soldier, you must have the style of a soldier; If you are a man, you must be a man!

Female: Young heroes, and China has magical powers. Practice the iron skeleton, and serve the country with a long tassel. Please ask the boys in rows 118, 119, 111 and 111 to perform military boxing for us.

VIII. Rhythmic Exercise Performance

M: Smart music, lively rhythm;

female: touching melody, graceful posture.

M: With melodious rhythm, they are like charming swallows;

female: They are like elves at a brisk pace. Please enjoy the rhythmic gymnastics performances held by girls in rows 118, 119, 111 and 111 for us.

IX. Conclusion

Male: The week-long military training activities have tempered the students' will and cultivated the spirit of being hard-working and overcoming difficulties. Through military training, students' political and legal consciousness and national defense consciousness have been established, and they know how to obey orders and management. Through military training, the students' spirit of loving the collective, unity and friendship has been cultivated, and their ability to live independently has been exercised, laying a foundation for their future study and life. I believe the students will never forget this rare military training activity. Let's express our heartfelt thanks to the military training instructors with warm applause.

female: goodbye, instructor who gets along day and night, goodbye, sacred national defense green! Students will definitely integrate the military spirit into their future study and life, and write a magnificent chapter for a colorful life.

M: Today, the students will bid farewell to the military training life, but the style and spirit of the soldiers will always inspire this team-

Together: brave-forward-forward!

Commentary on military training for freshmen on xx, XX, XX

Look! Coming with vigorous steps is the square of the tenth district team. The smiling face of youth shows the vigor and vitality of this collective; That firm and powerful pace, pour out the confidence and pride of the tenth district team. During the week of military training, you showed the elegance of the people in X with your hard sweat, mighty heroic spirit and loud slogans.

I wish you great success in junior high school, the golden stage of your life! Freshmen's military training commentary 4

Facing the morning sun, striding forward, coming head-on. They are energetic and heroic students of District 9 team! Look, that vigorous pace symbolizes their spirit of never giving up, that loud slogan represents their motivation to make progress, and that strict military posture shows their determination to always strive for the first place. They are brave, they are strong, they are fearless of the hot sun, and they can also withstand the wind and rain.

District 9's proud children are always determined to win! Commentary on military training for freshmen 5

Now, the young soldiers of the Eighth District Team are walking through the rostrum. Their neat pace shows their United heart; The bright eyes reflect the determination and courage of youth; Powerful movements are a powerful proof that they are real soldiers-it's time to win!

let's have a fight, team xx! Commentary on military training for freshmen 6

These sunny teenagers with high spirits and high morale are the students of the seventh district team. After a week of training and running-in, they have become a whole-a group with super fighting capacity. Look, their neat pace is the embodiment of their unity; Their confident smile is a sign of their strength.

victory must belong to them!