The structure includes the style, integrity, organization and level of the article. Structure is the shape and skeleton of an object, just like the shape and skeleton of a person.
A good structure makes the article "coherent" and "structured".
For example, when you don't have big materials in your hand, but only small materials, combine several small materials with combined or plate-type structure subheadings to express a central idea together, which can not only "add up small to big" and "see big from small", but also make the style of the article fresh, flexible and distinctive; Without spending a lot of energy and time, we can change the monotonous way of writing in the past.
The following articles have various styles. Learn the idea of imitating its subtitle structure and open up new ideas.
First, the 2007 Shanghai senior high school entrance examination perfect composition
Topic: There is always a memorable day in life, and it is this day that enriches our lives. "This day" may be so extraordinary from early morning to dusk, or it may be a moment that makes "this day" extraordinary. ?
Please write an article of about 600 words on the topic of "Remember this day". ?
4 1, remember this day
Seeing this topic, my heavy heart relaxed a lot, because it is too familiar to us, and everything yesterday is vivid.
Lens 1
It's past five in the morning. Many people are still sleeping, but I can't sleep for a long time. The stuffy nose makes it difficult for me to sleep, and my mind is in a mess. For a week, the pain of rhinitis has been bothering me. Although it is not a serious illness, it can often cause nosebleeds and congestion all day long. The senior high school entrance examination will be held tomorrow. If the nosebleed can't stop in the examination room, if the stuffy nose affects the exam, if … a series of problems make my parents and I fidget all day. How can you not be in a hurry? Is the hard work and sweat paid on weekdays in vain? When I think about this, my head gets hot. I feel my nose. Oh, no, it's bleeding again!
Lens 2
Hospital. In the morning, my parents took me to the hospital to see a doctor. They anxiously told the doctor about my illness. The doctor gave me medicine, comforted me not to worry, and taught me many ways to stop bleeding. "If it really bleeds, don't worry. Hold the bleeding point with your hand and apply the powder I prescribed for you. It will be fine soon." Although it is useless for my parents to comfort me at ordinary times, the doctor said that I seemed relieved. Before leaving, the doctor held my shoulder and said, "Have a good exam and wish you success!" " "What a good doctor. I really appreciate him!
Lens 3
At night. After an afternoon of preparation, my mood has stabilized a lot and my confidence has increased a little. After taking a shower, I calmed down and remembered tomorrow's exam. "Ring-"The phone rang for a while. I picked up the receiver and heard the kind words from the class teacher: "XX, are you all ready?" "Almost, don't worry, teacher." I answered. "Almost impossible, be sure to get ready. You have a bad nose recently. Don't catch cold when you sleep at night. Bring more toilet paper tomorrow, just in case. " Like a motherly exhortation, every word is printed in my mind. "XXX, come on! You are strong and believe in yourself. Since you have applied, you will definitely be admitted. " As a father's encouragement, I keep every word in my heart. Thank you teacher!
Lens 4
Late at night, I lay in bed thinking about everything in the day, kind doctors, caring teachers and my parents, who gave me the strength and confidence to overcome everything. My heart is like a flame, illuminating the rugged road, the bright road and the victory road I will take. ...
An unforgettable day!
Seven, in 2007, Jinhua City, Zhejiang Province, perfect composition.
Title: What is happiness? Happiness is sometimes a kind of possession, sometimes a kind of waiting, sometimes a kind of touching. Harvest is a kind of happiness, and giving is also a kind of happiness; Success is happiness, and indifference to tranquility is also happiness ... In fact, happiness is around us, in every bit of our life, in every footprint on our growth path.
Please write a composition on the topic "This is happiness".
42. This is happiness.
Happiness is sometimes a moment, sometimes a kind of happiness, a kind of pleasure after tacit understanding.
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This is a "masterpiece of heaven and earth" between my father and me, which is a party for my mother in the middle of 10!
I. Confidentiality
The family sat at the dinner table, and my mother ate quickly. While eating, she said, "I'm going home late today, and I have to work overtime in the factory." "Mom, today ..." I said anxiously. Dad kicked me and gave me a look to keep it a secret. I see. So dad lost no time in singing Su Diao, "Go, wife, wait for you at home!" " Before my mother went away, my father and I high-fived each other and said, "Let's start!" " We have a big surprise for your mother. "
Second, "the combination of heaven and earth"
So, I work with my father: he cleans and I decorate; He gave me instructions and I carried them out; He cooks and I wash the vegetables. Father and daughter hummed a ditty in unison, and they sang in perfect order. After a while, the room was full of birthday atmosphere, but there was still a big cake missing. Dad asked me to be the "second child" and then run errands for him. Then we got busy again. "You wash the dishes, I cook, you wash the dishes, I serve ..." A string of lyrics popped up from time to time in Dad's mouth. After some slapstick about pots and pans, "everything is ready except the east wind." We watched TV, ate melon seeds and waited for the surprise picture.
Third, happy moments.
I don't know how many ticks the alarm clock rang, but the heroine finally appeared, only to see a figure coming in the dark. "Hey? Why are people not here? The light doesn't work. " I turned on the light excitedly, and in an instant a man hummed "Give me all my love, give you the world …" and came out with a big cake: "Happy birthday to you!" Mother suddenly realized that she was deeply moved. At this moment, I seem to see the tears of happiness in my mother's eyes. Our family is enjoying the happiness brought by happiness in this beautiful atmosphere.
Conclusion: This brief moment makes me feel extremely warm. I hope happiness will always be in the world!
Nine, in 2007, Longyan City, Fujian Province, got a perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination.
Topic: Choose a composition from the following two questions. Except poetry, the style is not limited, not less than 650 words, no real place name, school name, person name, no plagiarism.
(1) There are many stories about the earth and the moon ... basketball, table tennis. ...
Please write an article on the topic of "Ball".
(2) Question: How did _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ do it?
Tip: Please fill in the appropriate words in the blank and deduct the topic for your composition. Examples of topics to be selected: how miracles are produced, how friendship is established, how contradictions are solved, and how oxygen is made.
43. How to read love?
Love is a thousand things, but if you love me, who are my parents?
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It was a lonely night. The sunset faded the last ray of light, and the autumn wind sent away the last wild goose. The last train today took me far away. Seeing my parents disappear before my eyes, I couldn't help crying again. ...
Thread in loving mother's hand, daughter's clothes.
God, I don't know why it is so cold. The night is deep and the cold is biting. No wonder the poet said that the day and night are as cool as water. In fact, is the night in the daytime order as cold as water? I can't sleep tonight on a cold night with a thin blanket. Tomorrow, I will say goodbye to my parents and go to the county high school. My mother is still sewing buttons for me under the lamp.
I got up and said to her, "mom, stop sewing." How can the buttons of clothes be loosened so easily? " She said, "If the button is really loose without you, who will sew it for you?"
Looking at my mother's blue hand with cold, my tears rolled down my cheeks involuntarily. ...
Before he left, he was worried that it would delay his time to go home.
I don't know when, dad got up, too. I can see that he is not asleep either.
"Lingling, mom and dad don't send you to school this time, in order to give you a test. If you can't solve anything, just call grandpa. Grandpa is with your second uncle, which is close to your school. If you can't do it again, you can also ask teachers and classmates for help. Don't be brave. Everything is hard to support. " Dad repeated the old saying that he had said many times.
Seeing his worried eyes, I had to say to him again, "Don't worry, Dad, I have only been to the county town once."
"But this time is different. You are going to study and stay there for a long time. "
"Isn't it that there are grandfathers, teachers and classmates who can help me?"
Dad finally smiled confidently and said, "yes, I mean we must find them more." Remember to call home often and come back to see mom and dad when you are free. "
Grass can't repay the kindness of warm sun.
"Looking up, I found that it was moonlight, and it sank back, and I suddenly remembered home." Li Bai's poem suddenly caught my eye. Now, the train has taken me far away. Outside the window, the bright moonlight poured quietly on my face like running water. In this case, how can I not think of my mother's figure and my father's baa?
Dear mom and dad, I know I will never finish reading your deep love for me. However, I still want to say to you affectionately: "Dad, Mom, my daughter has grown up, and I love you. I will certainly live up to your expectations. "
Ten, Nanping City, Fujian Province, in 2007.
Topic: Please write on the topic of "Cheer yourself up".
44. Cheer up
Don't be discouraged when facing difficulties. Please don't be proud in the face of success. Cheer yourself, you don't need a reason.
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There is no choice but to spend money.
A disturbing riot finally came. Perhaps, this moment of silence is a precursor to the storm. My parents finally went to court. They want a divorce. Facing the court's inquiry, I shed tears of helplessness and pain. Life will be better with my father, but I can't bear to part with my mother. Looking at the traces of time and the anxious tears on my mother's face, I feel distressed. I encourage myself to be strong, so I choose a lonely and helpless mother. In the face of the past, although I was helpless, the flowers still fell behind. Facing the future, I want to go up a storey still higher and cheer myself up. I believe that single-parent families can be very happy.
The swallow I may know is back.
After my father left, my family was penniless, and my mother and I had to rely on 400 yuan's salary every month. Because of the huge contrast with before, I began to get grumpy. I, a carnivore, will become a vegetarian overnight. The problem of catering has become a big worry for me. Because of this, I am often angry with my mother. She had no choice but to cry quietly. How should I bear this? One night's comparison made me lose confidence in life. I rushed into the room and cried after school. Before long, my mother came in and patted me on the shoulder. "Green, mother sorry for you. Our mother and I live alone. You can't give up! Mom has confidence in you! "
This sentence illuminates the darkness in my heart. Shouldn't I cheer myself up more? I still have my mother, and I still have hope. What's so terrible about being poor? The terrible thing is that I thought I had only poverty, and I wiped my tears. I believe in myself. Suddenly, deja vu's happiness came back. You should cheer up, and your life will be very happy in the future!
I'm still alone in the fragrant garden path
I am walking alone on the incense road of the exam. Cheer yourself up, cheer yourself up. I believe that one day I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight and cross the deep sea! Cheer for yourself!
Whether it is the past "helpless flowers falling" or the present "wandering alone in the small garden", we must cheer ourselves up and learn not to be discouraged in life. Only in this way will the other side of happiness get closer and closer to you!
Cheer for yourself.
The road of human growth is the process of moths breaking cocoons into butterflies. When you become a butterfly, you need your self-confidence to cheer yourself up.
Eleven, Jilin province in 2007 full marks composition.
Composition: mom's hand
Tip: You can write a narrative, descriptive, lyrical or argumentative essay, or you can write your thoughts on Qi Jun's mother's hand.
45. Mom's hand
No matter how deep the wound is, mother's hand will heal; No matter how bitter the tears are, my mother's hands will dry; No matter how cold your heart is, your mother's hands will be warm.
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Heal a deep wound
Accidents will happen. When I was eight years old, I was unlucky and was bitten by a puppy. When I came to the hospital, every shot of rabies vaccine was stuck in my heart, and it was useless for the doctor to comfort me. It smells like adding fuel to the fire. At this time, my mother will touch my head with a gentle hand and say, "Men should be strong!" " "At this time, the hospital will be much quieter. From then on, I knew that my mother's hands could heal deep wounds.
Dry the bitter tears.
Life is often unhappy. In the exams from primary school to junior high school, I have always achieved excellent results, which made teachers, me and my family "sigh". Depressed, ashamed, didn't go home. In the small street, I cried so sadly for the first time as a tough guy. At midnight, my anxious mother finally found me crying and sleepy under the tree. My mother wiped the tears from the corner of her eyes, took me home, held my hand and talked with me until dawn. My eyes are finally dry. After that night, I knew that my mother's hands could dry the dry tears.
Cold and warm heart
History is always strikingly similar. The results of the "second model" in the third grade are as heartbreaking as three years ago. Looking at the poor report card, I froze. For the next few days, my heart was like being thrown into the freezer of the refrigerator. I made a naive decision: since there is no hope of further study, I will drop out of school and work. When my mother heard this "great" decision I made, she flatly raised her hands that touched me countless times and gave me a loud slap. After hitting me, my mother cried. Her two lines of tears awakened me, and my cold heart was awakened by maternal love. I put a hundredfold energy into my study again. Today in the examination room, I knew it was my mother's hand that warmed my cold heart.
Mother's hand, mother's love; Mom's hand, my soul home.
Fifteen, in 2007, Changsha City, Hunan Province, full marks composition.
Title: 1. Leave some gratitude in your heart? 2. I want to change it to _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ (I'll write it after I finish the topic)?
Requirements: 1. Choose one of two questions to write; 2. The style is not limited, not less than 600 words; 3. There must be no real name, school name or place name in the text;
46. I want to be a wandering cloud?
I want to become a floating colorful cloud and soar in the sky of classical literature. ?
Bank of Miluo River
When I arrived at the Miluo River, I stopped unconsciously. I saw Qu Yuan crying by the river and sighed, "I am alone in the cloudy world, and everyone is drunk and I wake up alone." With a bang, the world of giant Lei Zhen is shaking. Lao Jiangfeng combed his hair like a shower of bangs, and he trudged along the lonely river. So "I" propped up the boat with the rhyme of Li Sao, shook the oars of nine songs and nine chapters, and raised Tian Wen's dissatisfied sail, beside the Miluo River. Who knows that the pain and justice of life are intertwined in his heart? He stood by the river, and the wind blew gently on him. Between life and righteousness, he finally chose righteousness. In the turbulent wind and waves, I am willing to accompany him to feel the patriotic passion that shocked ancient and modern times. ?
Wujiang shuibian
I lamented, I'm sorry, the wind gently pushed me to the water's edge of Wujiang River. The wind swept Xiang Yu's face. He looked dignified, stroking the mane of Wu Zhui horse, and watched the Han army surround him, and his followers fell one by one. I remember when I was a child, my uncle said to him, "Sacrificing one person for Qian Qian is different from sacrificing one person for Qian Qian. You have to choose! " He has the heroic spirit of a stag burning his bridges, and he has the great benevolence and righteousness of not killing Liu Bang at the Hongmen banquet, but he does not have Cao Cao's earth-shattering rhetoric: "I would rather teach the whole world to betray me!" Maybe someone is scolding you and blaming you, but I have been in song for you, singing for your boldness and boldness. Yes, otherwise, how can there be a hymn of "I miss Xiang Yu so far and refuse to cross Jiangdong"?
At the foot of Nanshan
Flying over the starry sky of history, I saw Yunfeng and Qiuju in Nanshan. I know, that's where Tao Yuanming lives in seclusion. Although he "planted beans in the south of the mountain", all he got was "the grass is full of beans and the seedlings are sparse", but he "greeted people with love stories and wrote books on the piano to get rid of worries". Yes, to be a man, you should learn to stick to yourself. It is not a poetic life to "go to Dong 'ao to relieve worries and write poems in a clean stream" like him. In him, I felt another beauty of life.
I want to become a wandering cloud, wandering in the long river of classical literature, witnessing the glory of every hero and great man's life, and harvesting the moving enlightenment brought by every hero and great man. ?
Twenty-one, in 2007, Jiangxi Province got full marks in the senior high school entrance examination.
Topic: Please write with "Highlights" as the topic.
47. Highlights in life
The highlight of life is discovery, so I take my camera to find the highlight of life.
alley
This is a bright spot. "Dad, why should we pick up grandma?" A childish voice came into my ears. "Oh, grandma is dad's mother. What makes you think you should answer it? " "I see, the teacher said to respect the elders." "Yes, dad's son has grown up?" Dad excitedly picked up his son and turned twice. I raised my camera and photographed the first "new social fashion".
street
Out of the alley, I went to the city center, where the crowd was bustling. I bypassed the platform and sat down there. A young mother walked in front of me holding her bouncing son's hand. Suddenly, the son broke free from his mother's hand, picked up a piece of advertising paper lying flat on the ground and threw it into the trash can. The son turned and rushed to his mother, who held his son with open arms and smiled brightly. I raised my camera and took the second photo of "New Social Fashion".
The bright spots in life are not hard to find. They exist in society and shine on people's hearts.
In the shop
After sitting down, I plunged into the shop again. The waiter standing at the counter greets you with a smile. They have been smiling to introduce the goods to you and watching you leave with the same smile. I stood there for a long time, and finally remembered that I took a picture of Eternal Smile with my camera.
on the way home
Twilight is getting darker, but the afterglow of the sun still shines on the earth. On the way, I photographed one "eternal smile" after another: the satisfied smile of my parents who came back from work, the relaxed smile of the students who came back from school, the warm smile, the cheerful smile … one smiling face after another, one bright spot after another.
That day, I found many bright spots in my life and sat at the window to meditate. In fact, the bright spots in life are everywhere. As long as you are good at finding them, there will be a bright flash in every smile, which will bring you not a moment, but a permanent memory …
In 2007, Ningxia Hui Autonomous Region entrance examination got full marks.
Tip: 1. Choose one of the following two topics and write an article of not less than 500 words, regardless of style except poetry. 2. True personal expression, all plagiarized and plagiarized articles will be deducted as appropriate. 3. The names of people, schools and places in the text are all pseudonyms, so as not to disclose relevant information and affect the score.
Title: Writing on the topic of "Vision".
48, the teacher's eyes
Teachers' eyes, sometimes frightening, sometimes happy, sometimes sad, sometimes full of power ... teachers have a pair of talking eyes.
Fragment 1
The classroom was quiet, only the rustle of students and the heavy and slow pace of the teacher could be heard. We are having an English exam. The examination paper was very simple, and I finished it soon. Suddenly, my roommate sent me a "signal". I turned around and saw that the teacher was still far away from me, so I moved the paper without scruple. Being a thief always has a guilty conscience. When I look back, a pair of eyes, a pair of stern eyes are shooting two sword lights. My face turned red. Come on, I pulled the paper back. The teacher's eyes, how scary!
the second part
Send Chinese papers! I sat in my seat in fear, waiting for the teacher to read the imperial edict. "He Lei, 92 points-"The teacher paused slightly, and her gentle eyes immediately gave me an appreciative look. "He has the highest score in the class!" Ah, I was so happy that I quickly took the paper from the teacher. The teacher smiled, and so did I. How beautiful the teacher's eyes are!
the third part
No, I'm in trouble! Just now, I deliberately blew chalk dust into a female classmate's eyes. She cried and told the teacher! Sure enough, a little later, I was called into the office. Dare not look into the teacher's eyes, dare not bow their heads and listen to the teacher scold. I feel very guilty in my heart. I only feel sorry for my teacher and my classmates, especially the female classmate. I secretly looked into the teacher's eyes with tears in my eyes. Alas, only disappointment and disgust. I was so sad that I couldn't help crying. Teacher, I'm sorry! Don't look at me like that
part four
The cleaning work has already started. The teacher gave me a task to clean the first window of the classroom. I took the rag and jumped on the windowsill to complete the glorious task given to me by the teacher. Through the glass, I saw my classmates working in full swing outside, and the teacher looked at them with envy and made suggestions from time to time. Not to be outdone, I thought: I must work hard to let the teacher know that I am not just naughty. I cleaned the glass, and my anxious teacher didn't turn around to see me! The teacher finally turned around. I thought he would praise me, but he didn't say anything and went straight to the office. Oh, what bad luck. I'm not in the mood to clean the remaining half window, just wait for the teacher to check it! "Hey, who cleaned the window? Too clean! " I don't know when the teacher came to the classroom I'm so happy. "I wiped it, teacher!" "The teacher looked at me. What powerful eyes. Appreciation, love and liking all blend in. I just feel full of blood and energy. "But there are two pieces ..." I looked up. Oh, it's half a window that I didn't clean just now. I jumped on it with a brush, and in a short time, two pieces of glass gave off dazzling light. "Well, not bad. "The teacher thumb up. This time, the teacher's eyes are the most beautiful!
Three, in 2007, Jianghan Oilfield City, Hubei Province, full marks composition
Write a composition from either of the following two topics. Requirements: style is not limited; No less than 600 words (if writing poetry, no less than 20 lines); There should be no real names such as names of people, schools and places. No plagiarism.
Topic: Write a composition on the topic "Where there is no scenery on the earth".
34. Where is there no scenery on the earth?
What is a landscape? Is it a tree in two streets, a gorgeous flower, or is there beauty and warmth in the world?
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one
The night is already deep, and the stars are twinkling in the black and blue sky. Senior three students who have just finished the evening self-study are walking on the dark road with their schoolbags on their backs, and their yellow eyes are full of fatigue. An old man at the corner of the lane is still collecting roadside stalls. At the moment when a student rode his bicycle into an alley, a lamp lit up his way forward. Looking back, it turned out that grandpa was holding a small electric light, and the faint light lit up the road. The light in the alley, the light at night, I think I will never forget this emotional landscape.
two
"One, two, three, four, skate with me." Every Saturday, my grandparents come to the beach with their lovely grandchildren and learn skating from their teachers. Grandchildren are still immature in footwork, but they finally stand firm. Watching their baby grow up, grandparents' faces are full of excitement and pride, but there is still a trace of worry on their faces. Be careful! Son, don't break the glue, grandparents are really worried about you!
It was here that I heard a "sigh" and two children fell heavily on the ice. Suddenly, tears flashed in their eyes. Looking at the baby's poor fall, grandpa wanted to help them, and the prompt on the wall suddenly came into view:
Dear parents, I hope you can let go of your hands and let the fallen children get up by themselves!
Grandpa stopped and motioned for his grandchildren to stand up by themselves.
Children's self-reliance is a beautiful and infinite love landscape.
three
"You come here, ok! I'm going to take pictures! " The photographer instructed a group of newly graduated college students to take a group photo at the gate of Wuhan University. Although it was very hot and everyone was sweating, they all smiled at their alma mater and the students who were leaving. I think what emerges in their minds must be a bright future and a new journey. ...
In the near future, maybe I will stand among them, standing at the first end and the starting point of life, cheering for myself!
postscript
In fact, there are landscapes all over the world. When you have a pair of eyes that pay attention to life, you will find all the beauty and scenery in life!