I like Xiao Mianzi best, with white fur, long ears and ruby-like eyes. He has a strange temper and is picky about food.

He is a tame lamb, a crowing rooster, a dog who can look after the house, a nimble and lively white rabbit, a singing bird and a pigeon who can tell the news ... So, how to describe them truthfully? First of all, you must be familiar with them and observe them carefully. Only by careful observation can we describe it concretely. When observing, you can generally look at it in order from the aspects of appearance characteristics, activities and living habits. When writing, we should describe the observation results in a selective, focused and orderly way. Specifically, we should pay attention to the following two points when describing small animals:

1. Describe the appearance and activities

To describe a small animal, we should first describe its appearance, and carefully look at what its head, tail, coat color and limbs are like, and what its shape, characteristics and color are like. For example, write a paragraph about a puppy as follows:

1 "On Sunday, I came back from my grandmother's house and saw a big sister carrying a cute little black dog in a purple bag on the bus. The little black dog has a pair of triangular ears like a piece of fur on its head, which droops softly downwards, which is very interesting. Two round black eyes kept looking around. The round black nose looks like a fluffy ball. Mouth tightly closed, without saying a word, more like a quiet boy!

I really like this little black dog lying in the bag. "

This exercise was written by a pupil who is only in Grade One. Although the article is short, it gives a comprehensive description: time, place, description of animals and their own love. All metaphors and modifiers are vivid and appropriate.

Then look at its life habits, how small animals eat, play and sleep, and make a detailed observation and description. For example,

Goose

"Oh, oh, Goose is out of its shell! The gosling is out of its shell! " I clapped my hands and shouted happily, I love goslings best.

These newly hatched goslings are dripping with water, and their fur is not good-looking, but their red feet aroused my interest.

the next day, I let these little guys out to feed. Their hair is dry, golden and soft. Although their feet are still soft and they can't stand up, they are all very lively. When they put down the ground, they jump on the ground, like wrestling. How funny!

When the gosling sleeps, its small neck is shortened, and its head seems to be covered with velvet. They wake up easily, tread lightly, and they will open their eyes to see, and then go to sleep when there is no sound.

more than ten days later, I just opened the cover of the goose cage, and they were about to rush out. One gosling stood on another gosling and jumped out! Their hair began to turn white and their feet were not soft. I ran to my feet and asked for food. I first put some rice on the plate and held two large leaves in my hand. Their mouths were sipping rice, but their eyes were staring at my leaves. Vegetable leaves seem to be more delicious than rice. A gosling just jumped up and sipped and fell down! Made me laugh.

These little guys are very human. As soon as I got home, they ran around at my feet, making out very much. I often talk to them, and sometimes they answer! Therefore, I regard Goose as my friend.

The article vividly shows the gosling's hatching, eating, sleeping and temperament. The language is lively, clear, vivid and childlike, and the feelings between the author and the gosling are contained between the lines.

3 description of the appearance of small animals focuses on static description, describing the activities of small animals, focusing on dynamic description. According to the orderly observation and description from static to dynamic, small animals can be written clearly, meticulously and touching.

Please read the following composition:

Monkey

I like monkeys best. It is probably the cleverest among animals. A monkey stared at us with bright eyes when we came to them. It looks very strange: a small nose is concave, a raised mouth makes a squeak, and its hair is not only bright but also black and yellow. Small ears stand upright, and two small claws scratch the scalp from time to time, making people laugh. I took out a piece of bread and threw it to it. Unexpectedly, it didn't pick it up. It just felt it with its claws first, then shrank back and looked at me with its eyes. After a while, he grabbed the bread and wolfed it down. After eating, he looked at me with pleading eyes and extended his paw to me for food, so I threw him another piece of candy. It quickly peeled off the candy paper and put it in the mouth to chew it. After reading this composition, the cute image of the little monkey will be vividly displayed in front of us. Therefore, this touching effect is the result of careful observation and careful description by the young author from two aspects: static-appearance and dynamic-life habits.

when describing the appearance, the composition first summarizes the general impression with the phrase "looks very strange", and then describes its concave nose, protruding mouth, black and yellow fur and scratching claws in order. After reading this, we will definitely have a love for the little monkey. Then, with a change of pen, he wrote about the little monkey eating bread. The author threw it a piece of bread. The little monkey first "missed it", just "tested it with his claws" and looked at me with his eyes. Finally, he "wolfed it down." This step-by-step description, detailed and specific, has a touching effect, and also truly shows the cuteness of the little monkey to people.

We use an outline to express the idea of this composition: Monkey: 1. Appearance: 1. Generalization-strange appearance; 2, specific-nose, small mouth, trade color, ears; Second, life habits: grab bread.

By reading the original text and reading the outline, you can better understand the thinking and writing order of this article. From it, we can learn the methods of observation and layout.

2. Write your favorite feelings in your composition

Writing is to write my heart with my hands. Write your own emotions. We love small animals, and when describing them, we should also fuse our favorite feelings between the lines with a pen. Let readers feel our affection as soon as they read the text.

There are also various ways to express feelings: sometimes describe the appearance and shape of small animals in detail, and blend their feelings into it; Sometimes express feelings directly with concise sentences; Sometimes, the two methods are used interchangeably. The writing is flexible and eclectic.

Please read the following composition:

Frogs prey

I like frogs very much. In summer, I often go to the pond to see frogs.

Frogs like to hide in the grass and bark occasionally. The happiest time for them to call is after the heavy rain. Whenever there is a bark at this time, the next one will bark with it. Dozens or even hundreds of frogs "croak" incessantly, and the sound can reach miles away, much like a magnificent symphony!

Frogs are chubby, and some are as long as seven or eight centimeters. They are dressed in yellow-green or dark green clothes, showing their white bellies. Their heads are wide and flat, like a triangle. It has big round eyes on its head, a big mouth and a small nose.

Frogs love to eat small insects, so it's interesting to watch them hunt. One day, I squatted quietly behind the big tree by the pond and watched carefully. A frog squatted on the ground, waiting for something with his mouth open and his face upturned. Suddenly, a bug flew over and saw the frog jump up suddenly, hook its tongue and fall to the ground again. The bug disappeared, and the frog returned to its original appearance and waited patiently.

Frog is really an expert at catching insects. According to the farmer's uncle, a frog can kill at least 11,111 pests in one year. It's really our good friend!

This composition is about frogs preying, which is slightly different from the previous monkey: this composition summarizes the center of the whole text with the sentence "I like frogs very much", and then it writes the frog's singing, appearance and insect catching scene in turn. The context is clear and the paragraphs are clear.

So, how does the writer express his feelings?

at the beginning of the article, I use the phrase "I love frogs very much" to express the author's feelings and express his love. Then I used "often" to go to the pond to see frogs, which showed the author's "love" for frogs. When he heard the frog cry, the author felt that it was like "a magnificent symphony!" " There are not many sentences, but the frog's cry is loud and beautiful, from which we also feel how deep the author's feelings for frogs are! Why does the author have such deep feelings for frogs? Because frogs can catch at least "11,111 pests" in one year, this is why the author loves frogs. Finally, the author said with emotion: "Frog" is really our good friend. At the end, the pen is powerful and the emotional expression is true.

"Although there are rules to follow, there is no fixed method." There is no one way to write a small animal. Only by mastering a basic writing method and using it flexibly can we truly and vividly describe our favorite small animals.

When describing a small animal, we should also pay attention to:

1. Focus. Describing a small animal, like writing a composition with other contents, can't cover everything, and it will go on like a "running account", so we must highlight the key points. Some can focus on the appearance of small animals, and some can focus on the habits of small animals. No matter how you write, you should grasp the typical, highlight the key points and describe in detail.

2. Describe it in detail. To describe any kind of small animals, we should describe them carefully and portray them carefully. No matter how you write about your appearance or your life habits, you can't take a few strokes and summarize them. Especially when describing the living habits of small animals, we should pay attention to the accurate use of verbs, reproduce the scene of small animals' activities, and give people the feeling of "things in front of us"

3. Be organized. Describing a small animal is the same as writing other compositions. You can't write one sentence in the east and one in the west, and you lack discipline. Think about what to say first, then what to say, and then what to say before you start writing. How to link sentences and how to connect layers. How to start, how to end, and how to combine the whole article. Think about these things before you start writing, so that the article can be organized and structured.

Beautiful sentences

The rabbit's ears are big and long. As long as it hears a slight sound, it will "swish" and turn around deftly, looking for the place where the sound comes from, and then return to normal until the sound is gone.

When the white rabbits are full, the three of them run around in groups on the sand, rolling like little snowballs.

Xiaohua Mall's head is round, with a pair of small pointed ears, and his big green eyes stare like two small green lights.

Mimi's big ears stand upright all day long. Wherever there is sound, turn there immediately, just like a radar with special performance.

This cat is covered with black spots on a white background. From a distance, it looks like a mass of snow-white floating, carved, smoked, smoked, Dan-smeared cotton with a few drops of ink.

There is a herringbone mouth under the kitten's nose, and there are six white beards on both sides, often one by one, which is quite impressive. The cat's beard is very hard, like a steel needle, which can measure the size of the hole.

The long tail of the little black cat swings from side to side like a small whip.

The kitten has a pair of bright and flexible eyes, and the black pupil will change: in the morning, it looks like a jujube pit; At noon, it becomes a thin line; At night, it turns into two green bulbs, round and shiny.

Xiaohua Mall stretches himself in the morning, then sits up, licks a little spit on the tip of the tongue with his two front paws, washes his face like a human, and licks his fur with his tongue until there is a little light.

that puppy is covered with golden hair, shining as if it had just been oiled.

This innocent and lovely poodle, with its little black tail swinging, looks like a rolling ball.

That little black dog has a shiny black fur, as shiny and smooth as black satin. Snow-white paws, like four plum blossoms; That little pouting tail is always swinging leisurely.

The black dog doesn't bark or growl, just like a warrior with great status, dignified and sophisticated, sitting there motionless, trying to correct the fluffy hair on his chest.

The barking of a dog is not as weak as the meowing of a cat, nor as horrible as the barking of a tiger, but full of gas, which makes people sound magnificent and crisp.

This big fat pig has a round ass and a big belly. Because of its excessive fat, it has to walk slowly, just like a big man.

When this pig eats, his ears are fanned like big fans, his head is jerked and his eyes are fixed on the food.

After eating, the pig obediently walked into the pen, lay down lazily, and grunted twice from time to time, so he looked satisfied. This horse, with black hair and red hair, is bright and shiny, as if it had just jumped out of the oil tank.

this bordeaux horse, with its long mane hanging freely, runs like four hooves don't touch the ground.

This tall horse is so well matched in every part of its body, and every muscle shows strength, which makes people feel so soft and fit at first sight.

In an instant, "a thousand miles of snow" rose smoothly into the air, almost gliding over a deep ditch, landed gently on the other side and continued to run forward.

The little donkey is so cute, its black eyes dribble around and scatter joy like a deer.

"Quack, quack, quack ..." The hoof of a donkey is even and monotonous, like the weight of a clock on the wall swaying. The mule lifted its head back, and the red tassel on the leather halter looked like a brilliant red cockscomb in the autumn rain.

These cows are black and white, as if wearing cotton-padded jackets.

This cow's eyes are as big as two bells, and its two corners are bright in the blue, especially its yellow hair, which is as bright as silk.

that black cow is violent and fierce, with eyes as big as table tennis and red as flames, and two sharp horns on his head, which are sharp as blades.

Snow-white sheep are scattered on the green grassland, like flowers, clouds and holy Hada.

Sheep wandering on the grassland are like piles of rolling silver.

The snowstorm became more and more fierce, and the sheep rolled like cotton balls.

Camels in other peaks are slowly moving in the lonely smoke in the desert, like boats sailing in the sea, riding the wind and facing the waves. Camel's eyelashes are double. When the wind blows in shian, the double eyelashes, like guards, block the sand and prevent it from blowing into the eyes.

The sunbird's mouth is very strange, like an awl, sharp and long, slightly curved.

The sun came out and shone on the feather of Huang Chengcheng, a bird, and his whole body became golden, just like the golden winged bird in the myth. In the forest, the noise of birds seems to play a never-ending movement, and even the trembling leaves seem to be singing.

goldfinches sing, jump and sometimes beat, like a group of tireless children, adding more interest to this quiet villa.

The birds in this forest have all colors and tones. Listen, high-pitched, medium-pitched, rough voice.