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Recently, Pea asked for many book reviews and received many photos, so she was in no mood and depressed for a long time. The sunshine today has swept away the unhappiness of the previous days. Learn from these mistakes, clear your mind and look back. In fact, those comments are very pertinent, and some even hit the nail on the head! So, turn grief into strength, start introspection and start maintenance!
First of all, I will sort out all the comments I get. I think there is this problem. I hope parents can urge Doudou to whip Doudou, so that we can see the veritable "food, color and taste"!
1, lacking sense of substitution, realism and persuasiveness.
There is no trace of food in the introduction, which is different from the title "Eating and Eating".
3, no suspense, no conflict, no bright spot; The hostess has a heart that is always excited, and her psychological state has no ups and downs. The whole article feels impetuous.
4. The description of food is too blunt to arouse people's desire for food, and it is suspected of copying recipes.
5. There are too many psychological descriptions.
The above are the general problems of the whole and the bugs in the specific plot setting:
1. The description of how the hostess crossed is very vague.
2. The sudden clear and clumsy description of the dynasty makes people feel false enough.
3007' s love is too superficial and jumping. ...