Author: Yipin Wolf King

Content introduction:

The storyteller knows that the wing is the best in the whole Xinghua Pavilion, and that the person who can own this room is either rich or expensive. His mind wandered, and he looked cautious when he spoke again.

At this time, the spectators' interest also rose, pricked up their ears to each other, and even the sound of eating on the surface was much smaller.

Novel evaluation:

The examples are vivid, and the words and deeds of specific characters conform to their respective identity characteristics. The article comes from life, so the language is not so beautiful, but it is really interesting and well written. The article is very detailed and the language is lively and interesting. The extensive use of spoken English in daily life makes the article more natural and friendly. The ending was just right China's language is simple, profound and intriguing.

It ends with feeling switch and feeling. In this way, the article is coherent and the theme of the article is also very infectious. The praise for the characters at the end is really touching. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing. Concentrate on expressing emotions at the end, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text. The vivid description of the details from beginning to end is just the opposite to revealing the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this paper.

The article thinks that the ending is concise and the taste is endless. Finally, the article reveals that the central sentence is really a touch of sunshine, and the concluding sentence is short and powerful. The ending is full of expectations, the words are exhausted, and the meaning is still unfinished.