Writing instruction:

1 You can only write one thing, whether it happens at home or at school.

It must be meaningful, not boring.

According to the six elements of the narrative, describe the process of this matter and clarify the significance of this matter with a simple discussion period.

Example: a meaningful thing-cleaning.

(Author: Qian Shan Bibi)

This afternoon, after finishing my homework, I was idle. At this time, my mother said that she would go upstairs to clean up. As soon as I heard this, I suddenly had a whim and thought: Why not help my mother do some work!

So I said to my mother, "Mom, shall I clean with you?" Mother said, "well, I can give you some exercise." I'll clean the floor, and you clean the TV cabinet, writing desk and so on! "

At this time, I can't wait and say to my mother, "Mom, let's go up quickly!" " "So, my mother and I came to the children's building. I picked up the rag and soaked it, and then I started to work.

I came to the living room first, cleaned the TV cabinet, and immediately felt dissatisfied with the dust, as if the enemy had occupied a piece of land. At this time, I launched an "attack" on them, killing all the "soldiers" and regaining the "territory".

Then, I "swept" the "enemy" on the tea table. In a short time, these "enemy troops" were defeated by me.

After a while, the rag became dirty. I went to the swimming pool, washed the dishcloth and went on working.

After about half an hour, I cleaned all the windows, lamps and tables. At this point, they are as good as new. Put your hands on it. There's no dust at all.

I hurried to find my mother and reported my "record" to her.

Today, I finally did something meaningful for my family. I am indescribable happy.

Meaningful things

On Sunday morning, the sun is shining and there are several white clouds floating in the sky. Grandpa Sun smiled and seemed to be waving to the children.

On this day, my mother has to do a lot of housework. As soon as I looked, I saw my mother cleaning the table, and sweat flowed on her forehead like pearls. Seeing that my mother was so tired, I went over and said, "Let me help you!" " "Mom agreed.

I went to the pool to imitate my mother. First pour some water into the basin, put some washing powder, and put the clothes in for a while. Grab the clothes and rub them with your hands. As soon as I saw it, I wiped off a lot of dirty water. After washing, I looked for stains. Suddenly, I saw that there were still many stains on the collar, so I put on soap and wiped it hard.

Finally, wash it repeatedly with clear water until there is no sewage, then wring it out and hang it on the hanger shed.

I'm glad to see my own clothes.

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[How to write something meaningful]

Exercise requirements: check the meaning of the question, choose a personal experience and write a story in detail.

Practice instruction:

1. What questions should I pay attention to when examining the meaning of the question?

The basic requirement of propositional composition is to closely follow the meaning of the topic. If the composition is divorced from the requirements of the topic, there will be a phenomenon of "irrelevant text", which is very inappropriate.

In order to achieve the writing purpose closely related to the meaning of the topic, we must first examine the meaning of the topic. "Examining questions" means carefully observing and thinking about problems. To examine the meaning of the question, we must first try to figure out the meaning of each word in the question and make clear the object and scope required in the exercise. For example, in the essay topic of this training, "thing" is "thing", so remember one thing. "Requirements" must be experienced personally, but hearsay is not enough, let alone fiction. Scope is one thing, not two or three things. At the same time pay attention to the genre of the composition. From the proposition, we can roughly know whether it is "writing people" or "taking notes", "things" or "painting scenery", "discussing" or "explaining" ...

In addition, we should also pay attention to the key words in the topic, which are often the center of the article and need to be emphasized by the author. For example, the "prefix" in this exercise proposition should be "personally experienced", which is the key to whether this article can be written vividly.

2. How to correctly understand "fiction and reality"?

Writing a composition should be true. This "truth" mainly refers to true thoughts and feelings, that is, it is one thing not to tell lies, not to confuse people, and not to write a composition, but to think about something else.

"Truth" is not all "true stories". For example, "composition with pictures" and "conditional composition" are all prescribed by others. If you write according to the given "picture" or "condition", it will definitely not be true. However, the thoughts and feelings you express in these compositions should also be true, that is, write your true understanding and feelings. In this way, although the materials provided by "pictures" and "conditions" are not true, your understanding of the materials provided and your feelings reflected are still true. On the other hand, even if the "thing" you wrote is really a "real thing" that happened in your life, it can't be regarded as "real" if your understanding and attitude towards it is not true.

Therefore, as long as the true feelings are expressed in the composition, it meets the requirements of "truthfulness". As for some composition topics, it is obvious that people and stories must be portrayed, so they cannot be fictional. For example, the training proposition of this exercise has stipulated that "one thing you have experienced personally" must be "experienced personally".

3. How to make the material selection "meaningful"?

It is not easy to choose the material for "recalling a personal experience". Because for everyone, there are many things to experience. Whether to write one casually, of course not, it is important to choose "meaningful" things to write. In order to be meaningful, some students often start from the concept of "theme first" and then make up a story, either picking up a wallet on the road or giving up their seats in the car. Such a composition violates the requirement of "personal experience" and will not have true feelings. Therefore, it is very important to correctly understand "meaningful". First of all, meaningful things are not just doing good deeds, but reflecting the harmony of neighbors, the new scenery of streets, the health of the whole people, and making money harmoniously ... all of which may be meaningful. The key is whether students can have a meaningful vision.

In fact, it is meaningful to do anything, whether it is success or failure. If it is written, readers will feel energetic after reading it. So, how to write "meaning"? Here are two methods by way of example:

The first is the lyric method. Expressing the meaning of things in a lyrical way is the key place to remember things. For example, there is an exercise entitled "Mom and Dad Stop Noisy", the main content of which is to describe a quarrel between the parents of the little author. What's the point if you just write out the whole process of the quarrel, and when the quarrel is over and the article is finished? And the little author wrote at the end: "Mom and Dad, stop your fierce quarrel!" " Do you know how much trauma this will cause to our young hearts? "You see, the little author's sincere and urgent advice to mom and dad's quarrel makes people feel how serious the bad influence of parents' quarrel is on the next generation. This shows the meaning of the matter. After reading this meaning, you will also have * * * sound.

The second is the discussion method. It is in the process of taking notes that the meaning of things is explored through discussion. Because meaning is contained in things, it can be revealed through discussion, otherwise, it will not be easy to reveal. For example, there is an exercise called "Shopping on Holidays", which describes the process of shopping with my father. From the time I went to the vegetable market to the time I got home, I bought food and wrote something about it. How can we attract people? Just say something like this at last: "I spent more than 12 yuan on shopping today, but my father worked hard all day to get 10 yuan." How difficult it is to get the money. I think I must cherish the fruits of this labor. " This is the meaning of writing in a positive way. With these remarks, the significance of buying food is obvious and readers will be deeply educated.