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Creative Rewriting of Mosquito and Lion (I)
Writing ability is the concentrated expression of Chinese ability and the comprehensive quality of Chinese. So famous experts say that writing makes people more like people. Professor Pan Xinhe said: "Writing literacy is not taught or practiced, but realized and cultivated." Based on this, a Chinese teacher should constantly introduce flowing water into composition teaching to reach the realm of "asking where the canal is so clear". On the basis of learning the article Mosquito and Lion, this issue changed the story that mosquitoes don't say anything when they appear, directly challenged the lion, and creatively rewritten Mosquito and Lion with infinite words. The children did the following exercises:

Wu Yuhang: On this day, Mosquito flew home angrily, even though he had just had enough to eat. It turned out that when he was sucking blood from a person's neck, he heard that lions were the most powerful and brave animals. This makes jealous mosquitoes feel uncomfortable. After a short rest, the mosquito went straight to the lion garden to compete with the lion. The lion was sleeping, and the mosquito swooped down like an airplane without hesitation, stabbing the hairless place next to the lion's nose with its slender mouth. The lion woke up and found that it was a small mosquito, so he disdainfully raised his paw, "pa", slapped it down, and the mosquito flew away nimbly. After flying several times over the lion's head, he retaliated by biting the lion a few times, and the lion slapped it wildly again, but unfortunately it didn't hit it at once, scratching its face bloody. The lion finally got discouraged and lay motionless on the ground, letting mosquitoes bite him. Seeing the lion like this, the mosquito dragged its round body and whistled away. Who knows, there are unexpected events in the sky, and people are doomed. As soon as mosquitoes fly out, they become dragonflies' lunch.

One day, a mosquito knew that the lion was the king of all animals and went to provoke the lion. He buzzed over and stung the soft hairless area around the lion's nose. The lion felt itchy and scratched it with its claws until it caught its face. The mosquito hit the lion and flew away humming. The fox saw it and accused the lion of being king and afraid of mosquitoes. The lion said, "I'm not afraid of mosquitoes, but his bravery surprised me." This story tells us; Even the strength of small people should not be underestimated.

Wang Hongkai: One day, mosquitoes wanted to challenge the lion, so they came to the lion, rushed up and stung the lion in a barren land. "How sweet!" It thought, so it stung again and found that the lion didn't notice it, secretly pleased. "Even the powerful lion was defeated by me. I am really amazing! " So it secretly put down its original vigilance and drank black and potbellied. However, who said that the lion didn't find it, just held back his anger. The lion knows that the mosquito's light body cannot be hit by itself. Until now, when the mosquito's stomach swelled up, the lion slapped the mosquito to death. Before he died, Mosquito sighed and said, Why don't I know enough is enough?

Wang Jiaqi: Mosquitoes heard from their compatriots that lions are the most powerful animals in the world. Mosquitoes don't believe it! In its view, the lion is just a piece of meat with simple mind and developed limbs. On this day, he met a lion. Seeing this pile of yellow fur balls, he couldn't help laughing and silently bit the lion's hairless place. The lion was very angry and patted the mosquito. The lion's face has turned into a mess and begged for mercy again and again. Mosquito raised his head, blew a victory song and left, stopping on a "grass hill". Unexpectedly, this "grass mound" stuck out its tongue and ate the mosquito.

Xia Yuxin: In the big forest, a young and experienced mosquito saw a lion foraging. The lion has his back to the mosquito. Mosquito thought, "I'm sure I can beat the lion." So it crept up to the lion and bit him on the cheek. The lion was in great pain and his paws caught his face. The mosquito dodged left and right, and the lion bit him several times as soon as he relaxed. The lion couldn't bear it any longer and scratched his face with anger. His face suddenly turned red and he ran away screaming. Mosquito defeated the lion and was about to go home. He found a spider web in front of him. Mosquito thought: "That spider must be unable to sit still, hehe, I don't want to be eaten, little spider, so you don't have to show it." I want to fly high into the sky and fly home with a trumpet.

This story tells us that no matter what kind of opponent we beat, we should be cautious.

Tian Qiyan: When mosquitoes saw the lion, they rushed up without saying a word. They only stabbed the lion where there was no hair. The lion rolled in anger, but he couldn't shake off the mosquitoes and had to jump into the water. Seeing the lion defeated by himself, the mosquito flew away happily.

Flying and flying, he suddenly became hungry. He saw a group of people staying in the house. He flew in and thought, I have defeated the lion, but am I still afraid of humans? So he went straight to a fat man, rushed forward, took a sip of blood and flew away, took another sip and flew away. Just as he was secretly pleased, the fat man took out a bottle of insecticide, and poof, the mosquito saw Yan!

Fu yueqing:? An experienced mosquito heard that the lion is the king of the forest, and no animal dared to provoke it. He didn't believe it, so he went to challenge the lion. When he saw the lion, he didn't say anything. He just found a hairless place around the lion's nose and took a bite. Seeing that the lion was angry, the mosquito ran away with interest. Walking, he saw a spider web in front of him. He remembered meeting it before, so he cleverly bypassed it and went home humming a triumphant song.

The so-called wisdom comes more from experience and summary.

Tang Xinyi: One day, a mosquito heard people say that the lion is the overlord of the forest, and no one can hurt it. Not convinced, the mosquito flew to a burly lion and bit the hairless area around the lion's nose. The lion scratched his face and bled, and the mosquito won the final victory. The lion jumped into the river so that mosquitoes couldn't bite it. Seeing this, the mosquito proudly said, "Isn't the lion the overlord?" I still beat you. "Finally, it flew to the arm of the man who said the lion was the overlord, and wanted that man to taste its power. However, I didn't expect the man to slap the mosquito who was carried away by victory.

Maggie Cheung: In early spring, the weather was clear, Wan Li was cloudless and the forest was quiet. Buzz, a small mosquito stops on a crystal dew. Just standing firm, the rough roar scared him to a tingle and dropped the dew. "I hate it," he thought. "The lion is just taller than me. What is worse than me? " Thinking about it, he took advantage of the lion's unprepared and took a bite at the hairless place next to the lion's nose. He took a bite here and a bite there, and the lion scratched his face angrily. But mosquitoes rely on their own flexible advantages to escape the lion's attacks again and again. After enjoying a big meal, the mosquito left leisurely.

Shu Liqi: Mosquitoes want to challenge the lion, the king of the jungle. Seeing the lion sleeping, he crept up to the lion. Because of their size, mosquitoes decide to be smarter than them. He turned around the lion's body several times and found that the place with the least hair was around the nose. So he stretched his muscles and suddenly stabbed the lion in the nose. This time, the sleeping lion woke up, and the itchy feeling was unbearable, so he scratched his face with his claws. Looking at the "dancing" lion, the mosquito attacked again, but the lion wanted to resist but could not start. I can only watch mosquitoes flying around my head. Mosquito jokingly watched the lion scratch his face in various ways. Just as he was about to return home in triumph, the lion's tail suddenly swung over, and with a bang, the poor mosquito died in battle? .

Yao Xinpeng: One day ... mosquitoes were flying, and suddenly they heard the fierce roar of lions, scaring animals to flee and hide everywhere. An inexplicable anger welled up in my heart-"Why is he so powerful, why should we run away, lest he fail!" So the mosquito quickly ran to the lion and shouted at him. But the sleeping lion didn't notice the mosquito and didn't take him seriously at all. The mosquito got angry and flew to the lion at full speed. In the blink of an eye, he stabbed a red pimple on the lion's face. The lion was furious: "What are you, dare to touch this king's face?" So he rushed over angrily, grabbed it with his hand and bit it with his mouth! But mosquitoes used their small bodies to avoid these attacks and scratched the lion. After winning, Mosquito walked away triumphantly. He came to the land of mankind and became fearless because of the victory of justice. He bravely flew to people, while he was sucking delicious blood, an unknown big object-the mosquito that defeated the lion, the king of beasts-died!

Yan Li: Mosquitoes are looking for the lion. Suddenly, the lion appeared in a meadow. Mosquitoes remember that their son died at the lion's paw. Without saying anything, he rushed up. The mosquito learned his son's lesson and bit the hairless place around the lion's nose. The lion roared with itching, scratching his face with his paws. Mosquitoes beat the lion, avenged their son, blew horns, flapped their wings and flew away. When he flew to the branch, he suddenly saw the spider web in front of him, so he wrapped it carefully.

Zheng: Mosquitoes will challenge lions. It blew its horn and ran to the lion. There was only a bang, and the lion's face was covered with blood. Mosquitoes kept sucking blood on the lion, and the lion ran away helplessly! Mosquito proudly sang the song of triumph, showing off: "I am the king of the forest!" " I am the king of the forest! ..... "Just when it got carried away, it hit a spider web, and a spider swallowed it in one bite. The spider proudly declared" I am the king of the forest " ...

Li Guowei: The sun was blazing. Because mosquitoes were dissatisfied with the fact that the lion was the king of the jungle, they suddenly bit the lion hiding in the sun in the distance. The lion was stung badly because it was too late to guard against it. Mosquito is very happy. Unexpectedly, a spider web stuck in front of him and was about to be eaten. A gust of wind messed up the cobwebs and blew out the hope of mosquitoes. It took the opportunity to escape. This is a lot more cautious, but it still keeps its edge and shows off its great achievements in defeating the king of the jungle everywhere. Of course, who would believe a mosquito? So in order to prove to everyone, mosquitoes once again challenged the lion. This time, the mosquito called many animals to visit. Just as it was about to stab the lion's face where there was no long hair, the lion quickly pressed its paw on its face, and the mosquito almost died. But in order not to let everyone see the joke, it swollen its face and acted like a fat man, and it happened again. This time, the lion leaned against his face and killed the mosquito. Poor thing.

Hey! Arrogance comes to no good end.

Liang Xuanrui:? A mosquito flew into the zoo. I heard that tourists praised the lion as the king of the jungle. Not convinced, the mosquito went to compete with the lion.

At first, he quietly took a bite on the lion's head and sucked blood. The lion is itchy, jumping around and accidentally hurting his head from time to time-look, he jumped over, slapped the mosquito angrily, jumped over and slapped the mosquito again, but because the mosquito reacted in time, he hit his head and knocked himself unconscious. Mosquito proudly said, "Is that all you have?" But at this time, the lion had a brainwave and came up with a clever plan. At lightning speed, he jumped into the air, and mosquitoes jumped up with him. Then the lion waved his tail like a racket and killed the mosquitoes in the cage like playing tennis. In this battle, the lion finally won. When the mosquito was dying, he said regretfully, "Hey-I really-don't-should-don't-measure the force!" No sooner had he finished than he died with his eyes open.

Fan: One day, Mosquito saw a lion in the forest and thought, "I don't think it is better than me, but I heard that this lion is very powerful. We should be careful." Mosquitoes try not to make a sound, quietly looking for the lion's weakness. Finally, it found the hairless place around the lion's nose, seized a good opportunity, bit hard and swooped down. The lion was disturbed by mosquitoes and tried to drive it away, but it escaped with its small body and was helpless. Mosquito is very proud, it is satisfied with the result, and it also knows that its caution is the key to success, so it is more careful and tries to avoid threatening places as much as possible, and has won a long-term victory.

If you want to win, you can't win for long by your own wisdom. You need to be careful everywhere to win step by step.

Liu:? When the lion was sleeping, mosquitoes flew to the hairless place on the lion's nose and hummed while flying. When the lion stopped moving, mosquitoes immediately bit the lion's flesh, sucked the lion's blood, and changed places from time to time-enjoy it more! Unexpectedly, the lion woke up at this time, the mosquito flew away at once, and only the lion scratched in place. Just as the mosquito flew away, it got stuck in the spider web. Mosquitoes are waiting for that terrible moment. A drop of turpentine from the pine tree landed right on the spider's back. The spider was wrapped in turpentine, the net was torn and the mosquito was saved.

This story is suitable for those who beat the big man, but were almost defeated by the little man.

Wang: There is a mosquito. It is used to sucking human blood, but it wants to taste the blood of another creature. (I strongly suspect that this mosquito is sick ...) So I flew to the zoo humming a ditty. Its first goal was a lion, so it flew to the edge of the lion cage. When it saw the lion sleeping, it took a hard bite. Then it flew to one side and saw that the lion didn't respond, so it went up and took a bite ... and repeated it five or six times. It is too full to fly, but it can't fly. The result was accidentally trampled to death by the breeder.

? This story applies to those who fail because of greed.

Li Xinyi: One day, mosquitoes were flying leisurely on the road. Suddenly they heard people say that lions are the most powerful animals in the world. Mosquito didn't think so, thinking I'd like to see how powerful that lion is! Mosquito quietly came to the lion house in the zoo. It got into the cage carefully and suddenly stung the lion when he was not looking. The lion didn't respond, and the mosquito got carried away and stung several times. The lion became angry from embarrassment, but because the cage was too small to use his hands and feet, the mosquito flew away triumphantly. On the way, he saw a group of people, so he wanted to lie down on one person and have a rest. I didn't realize that humans are not like lions. Bang, the mosquito died.

(Thanks to Wu Yuhang for finishing before! )