Narrative writing based on people can directly explain the characters or directly get to the point by describing their portraits, dialogues and actions. 1, beginning of memory:
Example 1: "There is such a good monitor." Her name is Wang Jinghong. She is my monitor in grade four. Although we have met many times, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable.
2. The beginning of the description of appearance: Example 1: "My favorite little friend"
I have a good friend who is inseparable. Her fleshy little face has a pair of slender arch eyebrows, and there are a pair of watery big eyes under the eyebrows. There is a smooth cherry mouth under the delicate nose. All in all, this is a lovely little face. You know who she is. To tell you the truth, she is my good partner-Zeng Yushu.
Example 2
Example 4: Little musician
My little friend Zhang Mengyao has big eyes and neat white teeth. She's cute. Tell you, she is still recognized as a "little musician" by her classmates!
Example 5: My grandfather
My grandfather is in his sixties, with a thin face and a high nose. Although his temples are gray, he looks very energetic. He always has a smile on his face. My cousin and I both like to be naughty with him and tease us. I nicknamed him "the old urchin".
4, the beginning voice description+character characteristics:
Example 1
6. Direct narration begins: Example 1: "Mom, you did something wrong."
I sat at the dining table and spilled soybean soup all over me. I cried sadly.
Example 2 1: I can't forget you, Miss Wang.
"There are stars in the quiet night, and the teacher's window is bright all night …" A melodious song flew out of my window. I'm learning to sing this song and I'm going to dedicate it to my dear teacher Wang at the graduation ceremony.
Third, lyrical description begins:
Start the essay with a few short and appropriate lyrics, or infect the reader, or point out the main idea and lead to the following.
1, narrative lyric:
Example 1: "I love grandpa"
Grandpa is my favorite relative, where I spent my childhood. Grandpa took my hand and taught me to walk. It was grandpa who made me understand a lot of truth since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood growth.
Example 2: "Thank you, teacher! 》
Time flies, the sun and the moon fly, and six years of primary school life passed quietly. How can I be willing to leave my alma mater, which raised me for 6 years, and my amiable teacher?
2, parallelism and lyricism:
Fourth, contrast and contrast, set off the moon.
Through comparison or elaboration, this kind of opening can make the content to be expressed more prominent and eye-catching in contrast with other things, thus giving people a very clear and profound impression.
1, self-comparison:
Example 1: a careless good friend
My good friend Sun Chao is my classmate. He has many advantages, such as quick thinking, quick response, good study and love of exercise. I remember that every time the teacher asks a question in class, he is always the first to raise his hand and answer it correctly; Every time the teacher asks us to write a composition, he can write a particularly good article in a very short time; Whether it is hot summer or cold winter, he keeps swimming and never stops. But he has one of the biggest shortcomings, that is, he is a bit careless.
Example 2: Dad is a sewer.
Fifth, the question is suspicious and suspenseful. Beginning: Time is like the water in a small river, flowing away in a long laugh. Time flies, but I can dilute my feelings for Teacher Chen without punishment. I want to sing a song in my heart. End: The spring of the motherland is so beautiful that the teacher is the sower on the fertile soil of spring. I want to sing a song deeply hidden in my heart for all the teachers in my village. -"Song in My Heart" begins: I would like to be a scalper and work quietly for the autumn harvest; I am willing to give anything for a green leaf and a gorgeous red flower. End: "As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place." In order to make the branches and leaves of this big tree of the motherland more lush, we are willing to be roots buried deep in loess; For the sake of the country's strength, we are willing to be silkworms that "spring silkworms must be woven until death"; For the vastness of the sea, we are willing to be a drop of water! The dedication of love is happiness. The article written by the ancients should be colorful at the beginning, as beautiful as the phoenix head. "All happy families are alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way." Lev tolstoy made 65,438+05 revisions to the beginning of War and Peace, and finally became famous. "A good beginning is half the battle", and the beginning is the facade of the whole article. A beautiful shop facade will attract more customers, and a good article will attract more readers at the beginning.
For the exam-oriented composition of "dancing with chains", reading psychology (influenced by timing, opportunity, openness, energy, vision and other factors) often affects the score of the composition. The beginning of a good composition is the string that provokes the examiners and makes them fall in love at first sight. But many students will not start: either reinvent the wheel and explain the materials, or mystify and beat around the bush, or lack personality and become a staple food. This paper introduces several methods at the beginning for reference, hoping to improve candidates' composition scores.
First of all, cut to the chase and hit the nail on the head
In today's information age, time is precious. For the exam-oriented composition, the marking teacher bears a heavy task of marking. If you beat around the bush from the beginning, you will get off topic. It can only reverse the evaluator's psychology, and it is difficult to leave an excellent impression on the evaluator. "One trick to invite Buddha" comes straight to the point, hits the nail on the head, directly reveals the main idea, and often has unexpected effects. For example:
I haven't seen my father for over two years. What I can't forget most is his back. (Zhu Ziqing's "Back")
From the beginning, I entered the topic, crisp and neat, without branches or vines, pointing out the narrative object, and pinning my "back" with deep fatherly love.
In just a few lines, the talent is revealed and the theme is clean and neat.
Second, set suspense, exciting
"Infinite scenery is on a dangerous peak". As soon as you start writing, it is dangerous, the scenery suddenly appears, and a stone stirs up a thousand waves, leaving the first impression on the critics that you are alert, honest and frank and extraordinary; Or, tell the reviewer the unusual result at the beginning, make the reviewer eager to know the whole process of the matter, read with questions, stimulate their interest in reading, and at the same time increase the faltering of the article and present the beauty of the layout of the article.
It's cold. I'm always alone, with no one to accompany me. The cold river is soaking my body and my heart. My heart is dead and I don't jump. ("Choice" Hebei examinee) Unusual grades suddenly rose, and there was a strong suspense, which made the raters confused at first, and then their eyes shone, their hearts vibrated and they were quickly attracted.
Before going to America, an old classmate sent me an airmail letter and repeatedly entrusted me to bring her some jujube stones. It's not heavy, but it's used strangely.
Why do students want unremarkable and worthless jujube stones? The mystery is on the rise, and the mystery is very heavy and exciting.
Third, write about mountains and rivers and enjoy the moon.
When a painter draws the moon, if he only draws one moon, it will be particularly monotonous and even lack of expression. If a few clouds hook around the moon, it will be full of charm and amorous feelings. The same is true of writing articles. Most exam-oriented compositions are narratives, and such a moon-shaped beginning is conducive to setting an emotional environment and atmosphere for the characterization of characters and the narration of things.
⑤ I can't remember the autumn dusk. The autumn wind blew and there was a slight chill. Yellow leaves fluttered helplessly in the wind. Looking at all this, I can only cry silently, and all this is caused by myself.
(A candidate in Shanxi, "If Time Can Go Back")
"Emotions move with things, words are sent with feelings", and landscape words are all emotional words. Sad scenery sets off sadness, bleak weather and bleak mood, and naturally a sad thing will happen-confessing one's dishonesty increases the appeal of the article and deepens the penetration of the article. Fourth, make good use of rhetoric to add color.
The clever use of rhetoric, just like the theory of "using a pen like a citron", makes the words gorgeous, arouses the interest of examiners and shows their talents.
6. What is honesty? Honesty is a clear spring flowing in the wilderness, honesty is a wintersweet that blooms proudly and alternately in the cold winter, honesty is an immortal beacon in front of the road at night, and honesty is a beacon for navigation in the floating sea of people.
The comprehensive application of questioning, parallelism and metaphor is poetic and philosophical, vivid and literary.
⑦ Your jumping spirit, running happily, flows slowly from here, with endless stories flowing into my mind. Oh, water, I saw it, I saw your past.
The application of personification is extremely interesting and unique.
Birds are flying, clouds are walking, and the sky is leisurely.
The wind is blowing, people are walking, and the wind chimes on the shore are ringing.
There is a kind of beauty I can't see, a kind of feeling is wonderful, and a kind of happiness is accompanied by you. Hit the sky together and show your elegance. ("Rising, the wind chime on the other side")
Neat duality, conciseness and implication, endless aftertaste, symmetrical structure, clear rhythm, harmony and beauty.
Five, clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme
The excusable inscription does have the special effect of "skillfully borrowing a wisp of plum blossom fragrance", pointing out the theme, revealing the object of description and opening the meaning.
Pet-name ruby the meaning of tears
Inscription: The smile of the world has only one meaning, but the tears contain a lot.
-San Mao
The fish said, "You can't see my tears because I am in the water."
Water said, "I can feel it because you are in my heart."
-Inscription ("My heart remains the same")
Profound connotation, dialectical thinking, a little literary spirit and a little philosophy.
Sixth, quote famous poems, with a high starting point.
Famous sayings contain philosophy; Poetry, words and expressions. Poetry and famous sayings are cultural treasures, which come from ancient and modern philosophy. Ancient poems and aphorisms are the beginning of the article. Thousands of years of thinking show the author's witty grasp of life and his incisive understanding of the essence of things and the true meaning of life.
For example, the ancient poem says: those who seek things in darkroom are not good at fire, and those who use ropeways in this world are not sincere. Ceng Zi's word for killing pigs is "faith", and Kong Ming's word for "trusting orphans" is "sincerity"; Because of the word "sincerity", the century-old shop has always been full of customers, and Liu Bang's three chapters of the contract have been passed down as a beautiful talk for a thousand years.
("Return of Integrity")
Appropriate quotation adds poetry and reveals profound meaning directly.
⑿ "Born as an outstanding person, died as a ghost male. I still miss Xiang Yu and refuse to cross Jiangdong. "
As night fell, he and his horse stood alone on the cold bank of the Wujiang River. The autumn wind lifted his messy hair and his resolute face was full of fatigue. He recalled what his uncle said when he was a teenager, "Sacrifice one person for Qian Qian and one person for him".
Exam-oriented compositions vary from topic to topic, and camera quotes have a sense of suddenness, majesty and loftiness.
Seven, the story is clever and fascinating.
Wonderful stories and concise narratives are easy to arouse readers' interest and attract readers to think along the author's ideas.
[13] Remember the story of the mermaid and the princess? Facing the prince's sacred invitation, the mermaid accepted it with tears and a smile. Even though her soft feet seemed to slide on the tip of the knife, the little mermaid didn't disturb her dance steps. Every time I read this story, I can't help crying. The little mermaid fully realized the depth of the witch's babbling about the prince's sincere feelings. It is deep feelings that give her the deepest understanding of love and survival.