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1. My inner thoughts When I was conceiving this article, I thought about flying a kite with my father a few days ago. Normally, my "big eagle" is very obedient, and my kite flying skills are not bad. But this time, it confused me. I tried to release it many times, but I was so busy and sweating that I couldn't send the "big eagle" to the sky. Later, after my father’s guidance, it turned out that the kite’s “tail” was missing a strip of cloth and lost its balance. How could the kite fly into the sky? This made me understand that flying a kite also requires balance. I felt that this case fit the theme of “discovery” very well, so I picked it up and wrote this essay. Since it is something I have personally experienced, I feel comfortable writing about it.
The "big eagle" took off in Oluwei today. The weather is sunny, the sky is cloudless, and the warm spring breeze is blowing gently. It is really a good day to fly a kite!
I hurriedly took the kite and went downstairs excitedly. Soon we arrived at the "old base" for kite flying - the Four Seasons Garden Square near my home. Hey, there are so many people coming here to fly kites. There are already many kites flying leisurely into the sky. It's time for my "big eagle" to take the field. I raised the "Eagle" above my head with my left hand and let go. At the same time, I began to release the line with my right hand and quickened my pace to run quickly forward. My "eagle" began to fly into the sky. Just when I was happy, suddenly, like a drunk, it spun a few times in the sky and fell down heavily with a "snap". What's going on? Is the wind calming down? It seems not. His kite is flying vigorously! Come for a major inspection! I gave "Big Eagle" a comprehensive "physical examination." I found that there was a piece of cloth missing from the tail of the "big eagle". It turned out to be three, but at some point the one on the left disappeared. Other than that, there's nothing wrong with it. I didn't care and continued to fly my kite. I tried it many times, but the "big eagle" just wouldn't take off. I was like a deflated rubber ball, looking frustrated.
At this time, my father came over and seemed to understand something. He waved his hand to me and told me to stop. "Put the middle tail to the left and try again." Dad said with a smile. I did as my father said honestly. Then, with the help of my father, I carefully released the "big eagle". This time, the "big eagle" flew steadily into the sky. Looking at this lively "big eagle", I was really unconvinced, so I fiddled with a tail... Dad seemed to have seen my thoughts, and said cheerfully: "Think about it, the two wings of the airplane Why are they the same size? There are also dragonflies, butterflies, bees and many other insects..." It suddenly dawned on me that kites also need to be balanced!
2. My inner thoughts This composition requires us to write about some new discoveries we have made in life. At first, I found it a little difficult because I didn’t know what to write. I was originally going to write that I discovered that spring is so beautiful. But I feel that this content is a bit empty and doesn’t offer anything new. Later, the teacher suggested that I write down some findings of my own experience and asked me to consider it. I thought of one time when I was playing catching ants in the yard. When I caught the fifth ant with great effort, I accidentally discovered a black beetle. At that time, I caught it, and it suddenly retracted its six paws and antennae and became motionless. I thought it was dead, but I didn't expect it to move after a while. I told this content to the teacher. The teacher thought this topic was very good, so I wrote this composition. It seems that in order to write an excellent composition, you have to pay attention to choosing the right content.
I found that beetles will pretend to be dead. There are many self-defense methods for insects, such as escaping, attacking with poisonous juice, discarding their tails, etc. But I have never heard of it. Some will use the method of pretending to be dead to cover up. Self. Students, have you heard of it? If not, come with me to discover this secret!
Once, I was playing in the yard, and suddenly, I saw a beetle. I saw it was wearing a big black robe, and its two tentacles were very short but very strong. Eight little paws stick to the ground.
It is only five or six centimeters long, and it really looks like a black warrior from Lilliput.
I liked it very much and was very curious, so I stared at it intently. I couldn't help itching my hands, so I picked it up carefully. "Huh? Strange, why doesn't it move?" I said to myself. I wanted to test it again, so I touched it gently with my hand. But it still doesn't move. I simply turned it over, but it was like a wooden man and showed no resistance. Dead beetle, boring. I was just about to walk away when something strange happened. Haha, the "Black Marshal" is slowly moving! So, I got more energy and wanted to catch it. As soon as my right hand touched its body, hey, it stopped moving again. No matter how I touched it, it still didn't move, as if it was drunk. That’s interesting, could beetles pretend to be dead? This was really a big discovery. All of a sudden, I was very excited. I wanted to confirm my idea, so I deliberately avoided it and stepped up my "reconnaissance." After several minutes, it came back to life. It turns somersaults and crawls forward, just like an acrobat giving a wonderful performance!
"I found a beetle that was pretending to be dead!" I couldn't help shouting. I quickly told my mother this important discovery. After hearing this, my mother praised me and said, "You are such a little inventor!" I was very happy after hearing this. At least after I made this discovery, I particularly enjoyed observing small insects.
3. As the saying goes, good articles are all revised. This article was written after I carefully revised and supplemented it. The content of the newly written article is very dry and not vivid enough. I just briefly wrote about the situation when I discovered that the chalk was blowing bubbles, and the number of words is less than 300 words. Inspired by the teacher, I made a comprehensive revision of the article, not only paying attention to the accuracy of the wording, but also adding some descriptions and writing out the process of discovery. First, he explained the "trigger" of the matter. When he was doing chalk painting, he knocked over the chalk powder; then he wrote about how he found that when washing his hands, the chalk powder floated into the water and small bubbles appeared; and then he wrote about putting the chalk tip into the water and seeing what happened. phenomenon; finally, I wrote about searching for answers by checking information. Throughout the process, I wrote down my own experiences and thoughts on the phenomena I discovered. The revised article is vivid, interesting and very interesting to read. This shows how important it is to revise the article after it is written!
I discovered that chalk can spit bubbles. Zhou Tao's cousin came to my house to play on Sunday. After we watched the cartoon, we had nothing to do and felt very bored. I thought about the chalk drawings that our art teacher taught us to make. It was so fun. Why not play again? "Then let's make chalk paintings for fun!" I suggested to my cousin. My cousin disagreed at first, but how could he stand up to my "strong firepower"! I was so stubborn that my cousin had no choice but to agree.
The first step in making chalk paint is to crush the chalk into powder. We were both busy and happy. Suddenly, my cousin raised his buttocks. I couldn't sit properly, staggered and almost fell down. However, I knocked the basin of chalk dust to the ground. When I looked again, I saw that my hands and body were all covered with chalk dust, and I became a "chalk man". I quickly went to the bathroom. I put down a piece of chalk in my hand, picked up the rag and wiped the chalk dust on my body. And rinse with water. At this time, I discovered that there were many small bubbles popping up in the noodle pool. These bubbles are very small and can only be seen if you look closely. What's going on? I observed further and found that as long as some chalk dust fell into it, some small water bubbles would appear. This phenomenon caught my attention. I simply cut the chalk into small pieces and put them into the water one by one. Strange! Small bubbles erupted from the surface of each chalk tip. "It's really strange. How can chalk bubble when it falls into water?" A big question mark appeared in my mind.
At this time, my cousin came over, and I quickly asked him, but my brother just didn’t answer, which made me anxious. I had no choice but to ask a computer guru for help. I searched the Internet for information and finally found the answer. It turns out that the chalk contains a small amount of air, so many bubbles will appear when the chalk falls into the water.
My brother later praised me for not only being good at finding problems, but also for being able to solve them. Only then did I understand my brother’s intentions.
4. My inner thoughts Li Xingxing: I originally planned to write about discovering that there are more and more varieties of kites, but then I thought about it and decided to write something more realistic! Then I thought of the topic "Students are making progress". When writing the first natural paragraph, I thought it would be better to write it in a total score format! Therefore, this section generally reflects that the students have made progress in all aspects of learning. For the following content, I think it’s best to choose a few typical examples to write about. Writing one or two is too monotonous and impossible to compare. And four or five are more annoying. So, I wrote about the cases of three classmates: Xu Qian, Feng Yang, and Ye Changqing. When writing about Xu Qian, I considered her beautiful handwriting and seriousness, and also because I have always admired her, so I decided to write about her first. The second person who came into my mind was Feng Yang. He was very special and changed the fastest. I chose him. The last one is Ye Changqing. He has strong language expression skills and is very active in doing things, so he became one of the materials for my writing.
I found that my classmates are making progress. Li Xingxing, do you want to know what I found? Can't guess? Let me tell you! This semester, many students in the class have made great progress. Whether they are better or worse; whether they are boys or girls; whether they are naughty or quiet... their progress is not small.
Let’s talk about classmate Xu Qian first! She rarely raised her hand in math class before, maybe because she was timid. But now it’s different, I raise my hand and speak positively! Every time she dictated words or dictated texts, she was correct, with only one or two mistakes at most. She writes beautifully and has a high accuracy rate. There are almost no "A stars" in my Chinese text, but Xu Qian has a lot of them in her notebook. I have always admired her secretly.
Feng Yang is a "special" person in the class. We have to recite the text at least five or six times before we can remember it, but he can recite it fluently in just a short time. Playing the recorder is a headache for boys, but he can actually play it with his right hand on top and his left hand on the bottom, and he plays it very well. Compared with Feng Yang before, he was completely different!
There is also Wang Huadong, who has also changed a lot. In the past, work dragging was famous and everyone called it "tractor", but what about now? When handing in homework, he is always the first to hand it over to the team leader. He also cares more about the collective and his classmates. If he encounters the problem of collecting information, he will bring a large information sheet for everyone to share. Sometimes, I also take the initiative to look up information on the Internet at home, and print out the information to share with my classmates without being stingy. This is really not easy. In the past, he was famous for being "difficult"! Although his pen handwriting is not beautiful, his attitude is correct and his handwriting is not bad. The compositions written are well-organized and of high quality, and are worth learning from.
You must also want to know more about the progress and changes of your classmates! Then please come to our class as a guest to inspect and discover for yourself. I believe that your classmates will bring you more wonderful discoveries.
5. My inner thoughts This is an article observing life. Generally speaking, for attentive people, Zhang Fei eats bean sprouts - a piece of cake. But I just happen to be a careless Madah. Writing this essay is simply more difficult than climbing to the sky! Think about it, I usually don’t pay much attention to the phenomena around me. what to do? Let’s go out and talk about it later! After going down the stairs, I felt much clearer. I breathed the fresh air greedily, but there was nothing in my mind. But when I think of the teacher saying: "You can't do things half-way." This sentence encourages me to continue looking for writing materials. I found that the parking lot was full of cars, and an idea occurred to me: Hey, there are more and more cars in the community. Why is this? I found out a lot of reasons. But he refuted it with another reason. Later, I conducted on-the-spot investigation, and I discovered that people had worked hard to get their happiness today. So, I wrote this article. It seems that paying more attention to observation is the key to writing this composition well.
I found that there were more cars in the community. Whenever Cai Huiwen came home on Saturdays, I found that the parking spaces in the community were full. Our "BMW" had to be aggrieved and went to the property management It "settled" on the small dirt floor in the back.
I found that there were a lot more cars in the community.
There are big ones, small ones, and there are many colors. Is there a car sales show going on in our community? Or was it driven by relatives from outside the community? But, it’s wrong to think about it. They won’t be guests from Monday to Saturday, right? I found that these cars were parked like this every day, always crowding the open space in the community.
In order to find out the truth, let’s do an investigation! I found a car approaching in front of me. As soon as the driver got out of the door, I ran over boldly and asked, "Uncle, is this your car?" Without replying, I said, "Of course!" I said politely, "Thank you, uncle!" I asked many people again, and the answers were all: It's mine! I went to the central intersection of the community again and counted how many cars drove back and forth in one minute. I counted carefully, and fifteen cars passed by in one minute. While I was counting the cars, an old lady came over with her grandson. She said to her grandson: "There are too many private cars in the community now. Be careful when crossing the road! Don't rush around!! Grandson, slow down!" I laughed happily and finally found out the answer. It turns out, There are more private cars in the community, doesn't it mean that the people's life is affluent? As they earn more and more money, buying a private car is no longer a big deal. This made me think, no wonder we often see traffic jams in communities now!
I hope that the community will be larger and have more parking spaces so that those weather-beaten cars can have a home!