In our daily life or work and study, everyone often comes into contact with writing, which can improve our language organization ability. How to write a composition to avoid stepping on thunder? The following is my dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition, hoping to help you. Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition. 1

Dad, although we get along day and night, I still have to tell you something from my heart during my homework.

in my mind, you are a good father. Although you are a township teacher and are busy with your work every day, you can always be seen after school in the afternoon. You know I study hard, so every weekend you will take me to beautiful scenic spots to enjoy the scenery; You know I don't like second-hand smoke, so I made up my mind to give up smoking. You also know that it is not convenient for me to take a bus when I go to school, so you will come to see me off and pick me up every time you go to a meeting in the bureau or study in a school in the city. Even if the company arranges a working meal, you will not go to pick me up. Your care for me is meticulous. In my heart, you are a "four good fathers" who don't play cards, smoke, drink or lose their temper.

but you know what? You also have a fly in the ointment: sometimes you don't pay attention to what I'm saying.

do you know, dad? When you are thinking, talking to others, watching the news on the computer. I am very sad that you ignored me when I spoke to you. I remember once, my family of three went to see a new car. After I saw it, I expressed my opinion. I said it several times, but you ignored me. Finally, I was impatient and shouted, "Dad, do you listen to me or not?" "Don't listen!" I didn't expect you to answer me like this. At that time, my eyes were in tears and my heart was bleeding as if I had been pricked by thousands of needles. Another time, one of your colleagues asked me to bring you something, and you were watching the news on the computer. I called you several times, but it didn't work, so I shouted at you: "Dad!" "ah!" You finally came to your senses, and I don't want to tell you, but I can't, so I have to tell you again.

dad, in order not to break my heart, get rid of this bad habit! Try to be a good father, okay? Dad, I want to say excellent composition 2

Mom and Dad, first of all, I want to thank you for bringing my sister and me into this beautiful world. You have given us life and made us grow up healthily.

Mom and Dad, you always let my sister and I eat better and sleep better than you. Once, when you came home from work, you bought eight baked wheat cakes and ate them with us. Each of our sisters ate two baked wheat cakes, but each of you only ate one. I asked you to eat another one, but you said sadly, "Yinyin, Yiyi, each of you has one of the remaining two baked wheat cakes!" We are not hungry, let's eat while it is hot! " Also, the bed you sleep in is always so hard, while the bed of our sisters is always as soft as cotton. How comfortable we sleep, and how uncomfortable you sleep.

mom and dad, you are so loving. Every Friday, when we come home from school, you always put delicious snacks in front of us, so that we can eat our fill. At this time, you always stand quietly and stare at my sister and me. That look is undoubtedly saying: as long as the daughter eats well, mom and dad will be the greatest comfort.

Mom and Dad, although you have some nagging at ordinary times, I know that every nagging is a love.

Every day when you come home from school, you always ask us, "Is there much Chinese homework? Are there many math homework? " When I brought my schoolbag into the room, you said, "Go and do your homework!" " When I took out my exercise book, you said, "Write neatly and hold your head higher!" " When I was in the middle of writing, you said, "Have you finished your homework? Hurry up!"

Mom and Dad, at ordinary times, there will inevitably be some small frictions between us, but these will not affect our love. Mom and Dad, I want to say to you, "I love Mom and Dad!" " Dad, I want to say excellent composition 3

Dear dad, you have worked hard! Today, I want to tell you something from my heart.

Dad, you are so busy at ordinary times that you have no time to rest, let alone spend time with me. As soon as you get up in the morning, you rush to the company. You have to talk to a lot of customers about the house, and you have to train employees. In the evening, you need to have a meeting with your uncles in the company. It will take two or three hours to start. When you get home, I have already slept. Sometimes it's too late and you have to sleep in the dormitory. If you're hungry, you can eat at any restaurant outside. If you have entertainment, you can't go home. Sometimes I envy my uncles in the shop because you are with them every day.

One day, when you came back with a tired body, I said sadly, "Dad, you are so busy every day, you must be very tired. Why don't you take a few days off and go to work? Stay with me for two days. " But you said, "I'm not tired. I'll accompany you when I'm free." I was sad and distressed when I heard this. I am sad that my father can't accompany me, and I am distressed by my father's hard work. I made up my mind in my heart that when I grow up, I must repay my parents and let you live in the best environment, wear the best, eat the best, live the best, and everything is the best. I must study hard in the future, so as not to let you worry about me and be an excellent student.

Dear Dad, I want you to have a rest and not be so tired. Dad, my biggest wish is to see you every day, so that the whole family can have dinner together and you can play with me for a while. Dad, spend some time with me. If you don't, I'll grow up. Dad, I want to say excellent composition to you. 4

Dad, you are like a big tree to shelter me from the wind and rain. You have to work hard for us every day. I want to say to you: Thank you! Besides, I still have a lot of heartfelt words to say to you, but I haven't had a chance to say them. Let's take this opportunity to get them off my chest today!

dad, I want to say to you: stop drinking. Long-term drinking will anesthetize your brain, and the alcohol contained in the wine is not good for your health. Do you remember the neighbor who lives next to us? It was he who drank ten Jin of wine and died suddenly in his sleep. And every time after drinking, kind you will swear at me inexplicably and beat me. Do you know how much it hurts me? I hope you don't drink any more!

Dad, I want to tell you: Stop drunk driving. After drinking, I feel dizzy and can't walk steadily, let alone drive. That time, you drove very fast in the street. It didn't take long for you to rush towards a big truck. At that time, I was frightened: I'm dead. What should I do? Fortunately, you turned the steering wheel to the right in time to avoid the big truck, so there was no danger to your life. Dad, for the sake of life safety, stop drunk driving, okay?

dad, I want to tell you: you must wear a seat belt when driving in the future. I still remember that you showed me a video in which a bus stopped suddenly without wearing a seat belt, and all the people on the bus flew. Because of this, some people were injured. After watching that video, I realized that the role of seat belts was so great. So, you promise me that you must fasten your seat belt when you drive!

dad, I know it's not easy for you, but you must take care of yourself. Dad, I want to say an excellent composition to you. 5

Dad, your position in my mind is already very high. However, I still want to give you some advice. Do you mind?

dad, in recent years, you often go out to eat and drink at night and come home late. But you know what? This not only affects your sleep, but also at night, many cars run red lights! When you see this, you must think: the police just detained those drivers who ran red lights! However, you should know that all the people who ran the red light happened without the police!

Also, once I cut the sofa at home. I know you like that sofa very much, but you must understand your daughter's mood! I know, Dad. I won't scratch the sofa at home or destroy other furniture next time. Here's another suggestion. Dad, since I learned calligraphy, you've often read my pen words. When I come back, you'll write a few examples and draw legends. I don't have any opinions on which words should be written properly. But, Dad, I want to tell you that now that I'm writing, can you write examples instead of drawing legends on my work paper?

well, dad, now that I'm grown up, such as drawing a sofa, I won't make it again, and my handwriting has made great progress. When I win the prize, you can teach me to write Chinese calligraphy. Can you make a deal? Dad, I hope you can do everything I say. When you correct my opinion, I have grown up!

Mom's comment: This is an essay that the child learned Chinese test questions a few days ago. First of all, thank the teacher for giving the child a chance to express his heart to his father. After reading this article, my father was deeply touched and wanted to "repent". I didn't expect the child to laugh and laugh with him all day, and there are so many opinions, all of which are very pertinent and worth thinking about and correcting. Dad, I want to say excellent composition 6

Dear Mom and Dad, thank you! Thank you for raising my sister and me. You are the lofty mountain. You are the big umbrella to shelter us from the wind and rain. In my heart, you are the greatest, and there is no greater person in the world than you.

In retrospect, I was always disobedient and caused you a lot of trouble. I remember that time, my family went to climb a mountain, and the mountain road was steep. When I climbed halfway up the mountain, I accidentally stepped on it, and I was very scared at that time. Seeing that the stone under my feet was about to fall, at this moment, a pair of big hands propped up the stone under my feet. At first glance, it was Dad! Dad told me to slow down, but because of that stone, my father's hand was scratched, and I was very sad. I finally got to the top of the mountain, and our family sat in the open space to rest. I saw a beautiful wild chrysanthemum again, so I was going to pick one. My father said, "It's too steep there, so you'd better not go, or I'll go with you." Say that finish, dad got up and went with me. I'll go ahead, and dad will go behind to protect me. Just when I was happy to pick chrysanthemums, a mosquito flew and I reached out to fight. As a result, my other hand didn't hold well, and I fell. My father immediately hugged me, but the wildflowers were gone, and I was very sad. My mother comforted me and said, "Life is more important, or wildflowers are more important?" I said that life is important, so I was not so sad. Down the mountain, my mother said, "Go down first, I'll go down later." After a while, my mother went down the mountain, but she brought me a bunch of beautiful wild chrysanthemums. Look at mom, her face and legs are cut by weeds. I hugged my mother and cried and said, "Thank you!"

mom and dad, I love you forever! Dad, I want to say an excellent composition to you. 7

Dad, I want to say a thousand words to you, but I am afraid to talk to you every time because I am nervous. Today, I borrow this composition to tell you something.

Dad, you are a good father and you are very patient. Whenever I talk to you about the Olympic math problem, you won't be angry because I don't understand it or disagree with you. You will take the trouble to teach me until I fully understand it.

Dad, the wrinkles on your face are the traces left by years and the testimony of your hard work. Therefore, your temper will become irritable from time to time. A grumpy mood can make people irritable. I'm in the fifth grade. Whenever I try to finish my homework and want to talk to you, you always say, "Don't you see I'm busy?" Or "leave me alone and go away". At this time, I miss you so much! Companionship is the best gift. Dad, I will go to junior high school in two years. At that time, our communication time will be greatly reduced. So, please spend more time with me now and don't always work overtime, ok?

It is a well-known principle that you should not drink while driving, and you should not drive while drinking. Although you have done this, Dad, there is still one basic principle that you haven't done, and that is not to get angry while driving. Anger is the taboo of driving. I remember once on Gongrui Mountain Road, you were furious because the other side almost wiped our car, and rushed out of the car with the Swiss army knife on it, as if trying to find the other side desperately. This scared me to death! It's not worth it to be so impulsive for a little thing. The cause of this incident is actually road rage. Road rage will endanger each other's safety, but also affect the safety of the whole family. Peace is a blessing! So, dad, please try to correct it. Long live understanding, okay? Dad, I want to say an excellent composition to you. 8

Dear Dad:

Hello!

Dad, I have a lot to say to you, but I'm afraid to tell you. This time, I'll make it clear by writing to you!

Dad, I am here to thank you for your kindness in nurturing me.

Dad, I want to give you some suggestions now, I hope you can listen. Dad, I hope you will smoke less and stop thinking about smoking all the time. I remember once, my mother and I begged you several times not to smoke, but you just wouldn't listen; On that occasion, my mother banned you from smoking. Although you agreed at that time, after a while, I smelled the smoke again, and I walked over with it. "ah! Why do you smoke in the toilet? Aren't you afraid of smelly? " Just then, my mother came over and angrily scolded you: "What do you want? All you think about is smoking, don't you think about the health of the whole family? ..... "At that time, you were scolded by your mother as" dog blood dripping on your head ",so you had to surrender temporarily and reluctantly quit smoking.

Dad, I hope you can not only quit smoking, but also spend more time with me.

Dad, please don't turn on the TV as soon as you get home from work. Sit on the sofa and watch TV while smoking or drinking tea. Please spend more time with me. When I have a holiday, take me out to play when I have time: play basketball and badminton, and go to the mall to buy snacks; Take me to travel more during the summer vacation or winter vacation, and go to other cities to see the scenery and eat delicious food.

Dad, I hope you can listen to my advice and be the greatest, best and best dad in the world.

I wish you

smooth work and good health! Dad, I want to tell you an excellent composition 9

Dad, I love you very much! In the process of learning, it is you who have been encouraging me up to now, and it is you ... I have grown up gradually, but I used to indulge me and encourage my father to become very strict, and even the gadgets I cherish especially won't let me play. Why?

Once, I was doing my homework. Suddenly, my sister came in and knocked over my little box. "Sorry, sister." Just finished, she ran out to play. "Hit my things don't help me away, is really of. "I said as I put the box away. "Hey, what is this? "I was attracted by a shiny thing. I picked it up and saw that it was a small piece of iron that I had never found. It was a part of my toy go-kart. I put a small piece of iron on my toy car and began to play. After a while, my father came in, and I didn't know at this time. But I felt a cold wind "blowing" in my body.