Writing idea: simplify the task language directly. In narration, we should turn direct narration into indirect narration and simplify the language of characters as much as possible. In this way, even if the plot is coherent, the sentence is "concise".

My hometown is Nankang. There are many bridges in my hometown, including charming Furong Bridge, lovely Dongshan Bridge and magnificent Nanshui Bridge ... But my favorite bridge is a magnificent bridge on the Rongjiang River-Nanshui Bridge. According to my grandfather, Nanshui Bridge used to be a pontoon bridge. It was very narrow, only more than two meters wide.

It's paved with wooden boards, and people are swaying on the bridge, just like swinging. It's really appall. Old people and children dare not cross the bridge as soon as they hear the creaking of the boards. When children cross the bridge, they have to lie on the bridge and climb over it like puppies, especially those who go to the city to sell vegetables in the countryside, which is even more difficult ... What an inconvenience the ancient pontoon bridge has brought to their hometown!

Now, Nanshui Bridge has taken on a new look. Look, the pontoon bridge in the past has become a magnificent reinforced concrete bridge. The side of the bridge is wide, and three cars can pass side by side, with sidewalks on both sides. There are bridge railings on both sides of the sidewalk. There is a lamp post on the bridge railing every 4 meters. There are beautiful neon lights on the lamp post. At night, there are many pedestrians on the Nanshui Bridge.

Therefore, the Nanshui Bridge has become a resting place for people. When you stand on the bridge and look down, the Nanshui Bridge is even more magnificent when it is reflected in the clear Furong River under the illumination of lights. Many billboards are also decorated on both sides of the bridge to make the Nanshui Bridge more beautiful. In the morning, Nanshui Bridge became a busy market. Passers-by bought their own vegetables on Nanshui Bridge.

The lovely Nanshui Bridge not only connects the traffic between city dwellers and people outside the city, but also closely bonds the hearts of city dwellers and people outside the city. Ah! Nanshui Bridge, what great convenience you have brought to people in my hometown. I love my charming hometown, and I love the Nanshui Bridge in my hometown even more!