1. A composition written around the central meaning

Original publisher: Longyuan Journal Network

In ancient times, there was a scholar who could not write articles. Once, he went to ask a teacher for advice. The teacher took him to a grove, pointed to a spider web and said, "You should worship it as your teacher!" The scholar looked at it for a long time and suddenly understood. Since then, his articles have advanced by leaps and bounds. Someone asked him why, and he said: "There is no spider web without a center in the world. Spiders always have a center first, and then weave it round and round. This is the same principle when writing articles!"

< p> So how to write around the central meaning?

1. Write a paragraph around the central sentence.

Middle grade composition requires writing one thing in detail around the central meaning. Students at this stage of learning can supplement their daily routine with fragment exercises - writing specifically around the central sentence.

What is the central sentence?

The central sentence is generally the first sentence in a paragraph, which summarizes the main content of the paragraph.

Example: The fog is so thick and beautiful this morning! There is a vast expanse of white between the sky and the earth, as if an extremely wide gauze garment is floating. The mountains, houses, fields, and trees in the distance are all shrouded in thick milky white fog, looming, and extremely beautiful. When I was walking on the way to school, I seemed to be in a fairyland shrouded in mist, which was very interesting.

The first sentence in the example article is the central sentence, and the following three sentences all focus on the specific description of the sentence "The fog is so thick and beautiful this morning!": "White, milky white" First, I wrote about the color of fog. The metaphor of "incomparably wide gauze clothes" expresses the beauty of fog. Then through my feelings and the characters' dialogue, it is further reflected that the fog is very thick. 2. Write a composition around the central meaning

Write a composition around the central meaning

Describe the scene, so what is a scene? Scene generally refers to the scene presented in front of people during a certain period of time during collective activities. Just like a certain scene or scene we saw in the drama.

In life, what scenes have we participated in or seen? Here are some examples for reference.

Labor scenes. In school, we often participate in school-run factories, farms, or service labor. During the labor, everyone is enthusiastic and energetic, and there are many good people and good things that appear in the labor. We also often visit and ask questions in factories, rural areas, and shops, and see how uncles and aunts work. These are labor scenes.

Game scene. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very active and interesting, and they are also entertainment scenes that students are familiar with.

Recreational activities are a very important part of our colorful extracurricular life. There are many vivid scenes in theatrical performances, party activities, and watching movies and TV shows that are worth recording.

Ceremony scene. At the beginning of each semester, we hold an opening ceremony. When new buildings are completed in your city, village or town, ceremonies are often held. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and educational and should be carefully observed to record this memorable moment.

Sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase each other, fight hard, and strive to create excellent results; the audience applauds and cheers for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.

Life scenes. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car or boat, seeking medical treatment, building a house or building a wall, decorating a living room, etc., all have a strong flavor of life.

Meeting scene. Class meetings, team meetings, school meetings, meeting with heroes and model figures, participating in various celebrations and commemorations, the scenes of those meetings often leave a deep impression on us.

In short, practicing scene description can improve our ability to observe, understand, and describe. 3. Write a 500-word essay with the title of "Help" around the central meaning.

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The night light is like water, and the bright moonlight shines on the sofa. I stand on the balance car, whirring. shuttled through the living room. well! The sky is vast and the wilderness is vast, where can I find my English book?

English book, where are you? Without you, my mother would skin me! I was flying around every corner of the house. It couldn't be in my schoolbag again. I ran to the room, opened my schoolbag, and flipped through the books one by one, one by one, but there was still no English textbook. , wouldn’t it be in the closet? I opened the cabinet door and turned over the clothes one by one, alas! How I wish I could see English books!

I jumped on the balance car and flew to the kitchen, opened the refrigerator, opened the cabinet, and lifted the lid of the pot, eh? Where did the English books go? I sat on the sofa and thought about it carefully.

When I asked the teacher to dictate the words in the tutoring class, the teacher put the book on another table. After that, I finished writing the composition and left... Well, so to speak, my English book is in the tutoring class! Oh my God! He is really a dumb person who eats Coptis chinensis and can’t express the pain!

At this time, the "Queen Mother" mother came, "Read English quickly, what are you doing here!" I remained motionless, "What's wrong? What's the matter?" "I forgot to pick up my English book. "Where did you forget it?" "The supplementary class." "Oh, go read it and find it tomorrow!" I took a deep breath, "Huh--" I finally escaped from the Palace of Hell. I returned to the room dejectedly, picked up "The Story of Hulan River" and started reading it.

This challenge on the verge of death is really frightening. Next time, I’d better check my schoolbag carefully and stop throwing it away like this. 4. Write a 500-word composition based on the central meaning.

Enjoy the trees bearing fruit. A seed is buried in the ground, takes root and sprouts. It takes a long time to grow into a big tree with lush branches and leaves, and it finally blooms with flowers. In autumn, the trees are full of fruits. People picked the fruits and ate them deliciously. The next year, it still bloomed and bore fruit, and people picked the fruits again and ate them. I asked Uncle Shu: "Uncle Shu, aren't you aggrieved?" Uncle Shu's reply came in the wind: "No, I see you eating happily, and I am happy!"

Bees make honey , enjoy it. Bees have to fly a long way and collect a lot of pollen before they can make a little honey. And those who enjoy the honey are not the hard-working bees, but others. Bees continue to collect flowers and make honey. I asked Brother Bee: "Brother Bee, don't you feel bad that all your labor has been dedicated to others?" Brother Bee replied buzzingly: "I am very happy to be able to dedicate sweetness to everyone!"

Grandma enjoys cooking. The homework that grandma must do every day is: shopping for vegetables, washing vegetables, and cooking vegetables. Running in and out, hard work, so tired that my back hurts, I sweat profusely, and my whole body is greasy. And those delicacies were poured into our stomachs. When grandma sees us eating the meals she cooked with relish, her tired face will be filled with a satisfied smile.

Teachers enjoy teaching. The teacher has to prepare lessons and correct homework every night, and the next day he has to teach us and tutor us until we fully understand it, and we are the ones who benefit immensely from acquiring knowledge. When the teacher sees our progress, he will nod in approval and praise us repeatedly, as if we gave her happiness.

Giving is joyful. The big tree, bees, grandma, and teachers all contributed the fruits of their labor, and they all enjoyed it. 5. Write a 400-word essay based on the central meaning of the word "sweet"

When I was a child, I loved eating candies. Whenever I kept crying, my mother would always give me candies to eat. It tasted so sweet. I was quickly silenced.

As I grew up, I began to carry a schoolbag to school. I gradually discovered that "sweet" is not only the taste of candy, but also the joy of being praised by the teacher, and the 100 points on the test paper. Satisfaction is the happiness after helping others... sweetness comes in many forms.

I still remember that time, the teacher asked us to go home and ask parents to pay attention to the QR code she posted in the class group. When I got home, I immediately told my mother about it. She said with a worried look on her face: "Oh, I don't know how to do this! Why don't you do it yourself." So I picked up my phone and followed the screenshots sent by the teacher step by step. It took just one step and I was successfully logged in in no time. My mother came over to take a look and couldn't help but praise: "Wow, it's great!" My heart felt sweet.

When I was about to report to the teacher in the class group that I had logged in, I saw a parent in the group send a screenshot, saying that she had tried many times but could not log in. I clicked on the picture and saw that her username was the name of her child, not her ID card, which was wrong. So I @ her and told her in text: "The user name needs to be filled in with the ID card, not the name." This aunt quickly @ me and sent: "Thank you, I will try again." I thought in my heart I was very happy and immediately replied: "You're welcome."

After a while, I went to the group to check the situation, and the aunt had successfully logged in. What I didn't expect was that the head teacher also @ me and sent me a thumbs up emoticon. I was so happy, and my heart was filled with sweetness.

It turns out that as long as you give with your heart, "sweetness" will always linger in your heart. 6. A 550-word sample essay for the sixth grade focusing on the central meaning.

A beautiful essay for the sixth grade focusing on the central meaning. Once, our family went on a trip.

Since the mountain is very high, we took the cable car up the mountain. The cable car is rectangular and green in color.

It does not stop at the bottom of the mountain. You can only go up quickly, and you must go at the speed of light, otherwise you will miss it, because the platform is only five meters long. After getting on the cable car, the cable car slowly climbed higher and higher, higher and higher.

As the cable car gets higher and higher, the things on the ground become smaller and smaller. Looking at the things on the ground, there is a rather magical feeling. It makes people feel scared but also has a sudden sense of beauty, which is both mysterious and nervous.

The space inside the cable car is very small, only about the size of a palm. It is ventilated on all sides, and luggage can easily fall down.

There are four handles in the car and an alarm device that can contact the ambulance personnel on the ground at any time.

Everyone is very nervous, mainly because they are afraid of falling. Mom's hair stood on end, and she was so nervous that she felt like she was getting an electric shock.

There was sweat on his forehead, as if he had been caught in the rain. Her hand held my hand, and it hurt as if my hand was about to be broken by her.

Dad huddled in the corner of the car, staring at the roof, sweating like a downpour, rubbing his hands back and forth, and feeling scared. The cable car rose to another height and climbed over a mountain. At this time, our nervousness calmed down.

We looked outside the window. From the glass window, it looked like a distance. The things on the ground were very small. If we wanted to see them clearly, we needed a telescope. The mountains in the distance are high and low, and a beautiful landscape painting can be vaguely seen.

The cable car has reached the highest mountain peak. At this time, the white clouds are beside us. The white clouds are like soft marshmallows. The white clouds are beautiful and fill the cable car. The white clouds are very light. I want to ride on them. It goes to higher mountains; the white clouds are very fragrant, making me feel like I am swimming in a sea of ??flowers. White clouds decorated our cable car, and in just ten seconds, we came to wonderland and walked through the paradise.

The cable car has reached the top of the mountain. It is really "not afraid of the clouds covering my eyes, just because I am at the top." This time, riding the cable car is really beautiful. 7. Write a composition based on "treasured memory" 1. It is best to write around the central meaning and write down your cherished memory of this

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< p> Time flies, the sun and the moon fly by, and in a blink of an eye, I have climbed onto the ladder of twelve years old. In the past twelve years, I have left deep and shallow footprints on the road of life. I nodded and looked at the mottled footprints, showing my colorful life. Among these footprints, there is one that is the deepest and largest. It emerges in my mind and lingers...

It was a sunny afternoon. I hummed a song and jumped up and down into a swimming pool. The arcade has several water slides and a swimming pool that's almost as big as a lake. Although I couldn't swim at that time and didn't dare to go to the center of the big swimming pool, a few water slides were enough to excite me.

I entered the swimming pool, ran to the top of the water slide with ease, sat down and slid down. Enjoying the long-lost sex and listening to the whistling wind in my ears, it is really indescribable pleasure! After I skated dozens of times and became slippery, I walked along the circular waterway beside the "lake" and saw a gap in the waterway leading to the vast water surface of the "lake". I quickly walked toward the gap in waist-deep water. In the blink of an eye, I was standing at the edge of the gap.

I saw that the depth of the water in the swimming pool seemed to be about the same as the depth of the water in the waterway. I walked to the gap and was about to step into the "lake", and suddenly I felt that the water was getting deeper! I was shocked. Unexpectedly, I missed my footing and fell into the deep water.

I sank to the bottom of the water and came up again. I found that I was in the center of the "lake", which is the deepest water! After a few ups and downs, I got a lump in my throat. Unable to struggle, I had no choice but to let myself float in the water, with darkness in front of my eyes...

I felt like I was no longer floating, but sinking.

Suddenly, a strong hand grabbed me and lifted me to the shore. I felt that those few seconds of ups and downs were as long as years.

I opened my eyes. In front of me is a strange uncle. Seeing that nothing was wrong with me, he said to me with concern, "Are you okay, please be safe" and left.

It turned out that this uncle saw me struggling and swam over to save me without thinking. Throughout the twelve years that I have traveled, this incident has always been cherished deep in my memory and cannot be forgotten. Those medals and red flowers representing honor will be forgotten by me as time goes by. However, I will never forget this incident, nor will I ever forget this lifesaver whose name I do not know - it made me understand what love is and what love is the most precious. 8. Write a 500-word essay based on sweetness.

Sweetness is sometimes a taste and sometimes an emotion.

The five flavors of life are sweet, sour, bitter, spicy and salty. The most experienced things in life are bitterness and sweetness. There is an old saying: Only by eating the most bitterness can one become a master.

Only by not being discouraged or giving up in the face of difficulties will one have talents and wisdom beyond ordinary people and achieve amazing results. Only by experiencing hardships and hardships can one better appreciate the value of success. Candy, fruit, chocolate...all have a sweet taste.

But as for emotion, I thought of that thing. In September 2018, when I stood on the championship podium, the sweetness of that moment could not be expressed in words. I remember that before I learned to swim, my health was poor. I would often catch colds and fevers when I first started training, but I still insisted on training. Although I couldn’t go into the water, I still maintained my health through land and other training methods. level of fitness and training.

Although it was hard and tiring, I still persevered hard. Slowly, my body became stronger and stronger, and my results improved bit by bit. Finally, I won the competition. Defeated the opponent and stood on the championship leadership stage. Think about it, it was the persistence and hard work at that time that brought the sweetness of final success.

Facts have taught me not to imagine that there is only sweetness and no bitterness in life. Bitterness - can make people sober and reflect.

Sweet - can inspire people and motivate them to make progress. Only by suffering hardship and enjoying sweetness can life be interesting and full of hope.

When I think of sweetness, the image of standing on the championship podium will come to my mind. This "sweet" thing is always around me, always protecting me and accompanying me. I. 9. How to write a composition around the center

Compositions must learn to accumulate

"After reading thousands of volumes, writing is like a spirit", "It is difficult for a clever woman to make a meal without rice." These summaries of the ancients, from the positive and negative Two aspects illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing. "Rely on accumulation in daily life, and rely on performance in the examination room." This is the common experience of students in the examination room.

In terms of language, a "vocabulary library" must be established. Vocabulary is the cell of the article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to build a "vocabulary": the first is reading. You should read extensively books, newspapers and periodicals, and take notes on your reading. Excerpt some beautiful words, sentences, and passages in a specific book, or make reading cards. The second is life. Usually, you should capture the vivid language in public speaking and write down these words in a small book or card that you carry with you. In this way, over time, you will be able to speak well and write wonderfully in your compositions. It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Because many students don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they often make up or plagiarize every time they write. The way to solve this problem is to accumulate materials. If possible, you can bring a video camera and a tape recorder to observe life in depth, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life, and social life in a timely manner through sketching, diary writing, and observation notes. When recording, you should grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects and scenery. In this way, the articles written will have flesh and blood. 10. Write a 500-word composition about music around the central meaning

When writing a composition about music that focuses on music, you can write about every bit of life, such as family life and study life; you can also write about a certain point in society or It is said that it is a certain type of group of people, such as sanitation workers, people's teachers, etc. No matter which direction the material is written, one must add one's own emotions and experiences.

Text: Living in this colorful world, tears are inevitable. If pain exists, then I deeply affirm: "Happiness is everywhere."

When you really fail, maybe you will say: "Why did I pay so much but end up with nothing? Why is God so unfair to me?" In fact, you only need to savor the effort carefully. In the process of struggle, you will find that you are not actually that painful. Because you have really fought hard, compared with those who never dare to fight, you have won the envy of others.

When you lament that your family conditions are not as good as others, maybe you will say: "Why am I so smart, but my conditions are not as good as others? Why is God so unfair to me?" In fact, you only need to If you think about it slowly, you will find that you are not so unfortunate. Because God has given you quick thinking and rich imagination.

In the face of setbacks, thoughts give us imagination, and imagination gives us comfort and courage. Compared with those who only use money to capture others but have no real ability, you have also won the envy of others.

When you fight against death, you will find that happiness is everywhere - success is a kind of happiness, failure is a kind of happiness, competition is a kind of happiness, setback is a kind of happiness... ...Even the insignificant ant has his own happiness, which is life. Don't say God is unfair, don't say life is boring.

If you think about it carefully, if there was no pain in this world, would there still be a wonderful life? It is precisely because of these tears and these laughter that our colorful life comes into being. If you really can't imagine it, you can also find that you also have the greatest happiness, which is life.

Life is the greatest happiness, without life. Will you still be happy? Really, don't be so sad.

Because - happiness is everywhere.