Stylistic innovation

[ Review Guide]

In recent years, the composition of senior high school entrance examination is mainly topic composition, with few restrictions on genre, and other propositional forms, such as full-proposition composition, semi-proposition composition and material composition, have few restrictions on genre (only a few areas restrict poetry genre), which encourages candidates to be bold and innovative. However, most candidates often write narratives and argumentative essays, which are the same and have no new ideas. The following mistakes often appear in the choice of genre.

1. When I see a composition topic related to my life experience, I blindly choose a narrative. For example, Haidian District in Beijing takes "learning to be a man" as the topic, Huanggang City in Hubei Province takes "sincere apology" as the topic, Anhui Province "Cherish what you have" and Guangzhou Province "If you give me another chance", etc., many candidates write narratives to describe their experiences.

2. When you encounter a material composition or a topic composition of "prompt+topic", you should first choose to write an argumentative essay (after reading it). For example, the material composition in Hebei Province, the composition in the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province with the topic of "commitment" and the composition in Nantong City, Jiangsu Province with the topic of "listening". Many candidates express their opinions and opinions on the materials and write argumentative papers.

3. Genre innovation means choosing diary, letter and other forms mechanically. For example, Shanghai's My Sight, Tianjin takes "worry" as the topic, and Sichuan takes "treasure" as the topic. Many candidates write it in the form of a single diary and letter, which is not only original in form, but also feeble in content.

The composition of the senior high school entrance examination advocates innovation. Here, we will focus on genre innovation, which is what we usually call stylistic (formal) innovation. Style, we roughly divide it into two categories: literary and practical. Literature and art include: prose, poetry, novels, plays, fables, fairy tales, science fiction works, etc. Practical essays include: narrative essays, argumentative essays, expository essays, and practical essays (letters, notices, contracts, advertisements, diaries, diagnostic reports, dialogues, news reports, program records, etc.). The common styles of senior high school entrance examination composition are narrative, argumentative, prose, etc. The innovation of genre we are talking about here mainly refers to writing styles other than common styles. Students can start with the following aspects when they innovate in style:

1. Dramatic sketches. Writing short plays requires concentrated and sharp contradictions and conflicts, and the time and space of characters' activities are relatively concentrated, with little change in scene. The characterization is not much, but vivid. Topics related to family life and school society can choose this style, such as "family", "family education" and "friendship".

2. Communication report. The third volume of the new junior middle school Chinese textbook published by People's Education Press has two units of composition training, which requires students to learn to write communication reports. Using the characteristics of the authenticity of communication reports, the article is true, touching and more convincing. This form can be used in all articles that praise the excellent qualities of characters and report their advanced deeds to avoid the monotony of narrative.

3. Fairy tales and fables. Fairy tales and fables, with imagination and association, form illusory images of what is reflected in people's minds in real life and contain profound truth. This can avoid the simple narration of general narratives and the boring reasoning of general argumentative essays, giving people a refreshing feeling. This form can be used for composition topics related to personal ideological quality, values and philosophy of life.

4. Dialogue and interview. "Words speak from the heart" can show a person's personality characteristics through character language, at the same time, the dialogue is free and flexible, and the conversation content is all-encompassing. Common forms are interview questions and answers, face-to-face communication, and telephone conversation. Many excellent short stories are also optimistic about this form. Controversial issues with social hotspots and people's lives can be written in this form. Take "network" and "small and big" as topics.

5. New story. This form is often based on a well-known person or event, integrated into people's real life, and achieves the purpose of reappearing life. Most of the articles are full of fun and bitter irony, which makes readers educated and enlightened in laughter.

6. Alternative style. Alternative style is the form that we seldom use when writing, such as notices, contracts, advertisements, diagnostic reports, instructions, electronic announcements and so on. This kind of style should be based on the specific content, not blindly selected, and generally suitable for satirical articles. For example, in the senior high school entrance examination composition with "family education" as the topic, a candidate chose the form of contract. This senior high school entrance examination composition is novel and lively, and it is heavy in light humor. The perfect combination of content and form got full marks.

Family Education Contract

Contractors:

Hu Dashuang (father) Wang Damei (mother) (Party A)

Hu Xiaoshuang (son) (Party B)

Party A entered into this contract through mutual negotiation in order to improve family education and improve the academic performance of Party B Hu Xiaoshuang.

1. If Party B fails to score 8 points in each test, Party A will punish Party B for sweeping the floor for one week, deduct the pocket money 5 yuan, and deduct the living expenses 5 yuan if he fails, and Party B will unconditionally obey.

2. If Party A's relatives and friends come to play mahjong at home, Party B shall not interfere positively. Party B can go out and find a quiet place to study by himself, and the specific situation will be negotiated temporarily.

...

7. If Party B is admitted to a key high school, Party A will reward Party B with a mobile phone (Motorola 998++). If Party B fails the exam, Party A has the right to deprive Party B of the right to go to school.

8. this contract is made in duplicate, with each party holding one copy.

Contractors: Hu Dashuang and Wang Damei (signature) (seal)

Hu Xiaoshuang (signature) (seal)

April 1, 24

[ Typical title 1]

Students are in the period of gradually forming their outlook on life and world outlook, and will inevitably be influenced by various temptations in society, such as the temptation of money.

please write an article of about 7 words on the topic of "facing temptation", or narrate your experiences, express your feelings, make comments, or make up a story, with your own topic and style.

In fact, in some cases, most people can't stand the temptation, but we can't directly write articles to satirize or criticize them. We might as well shift our perspective to the animal world and write fairy tales and fables to alert the world.

Many people in the society are struggling for fame and fortune. Is this the case with their relatives? Do relatives of their friends have this situation? We might as well choose a specific occasion and focus on it in the form of dramatic sketches. Describe their actions, words and deeds, and demeanor in a subtle way.

"Facing temptation", different people have different opinions. We might as well write it in the form of electronic advertisements, and concentrate on selecting the opinions of representative people. As for who to choose, students should pay some attention.

This topic is most suitable for innovation in the form of a new story, relying on a historical figure or a figure in myths and legends, blending into modern people's concept of life and satirizing ugly things. Students choose the person who is most interested and give it a try!

[demonstration example]

Bajie became an official

Cangsong

It was said that Bajie came back from the Western Heaven to learn Buddhist scriptures and was named the messenger of the altar. Although he is a top official, he has no real power. Every day's work is to clean up the Buddha's offerings. Most of these offerings are vegetarian horns, but in a few months, the pork loin has lost two laps. I want to go out and play some sumptuous food many times, for fear that the Buddha will find out, and secondly, the monthly salary of a few taels of silver is really not enough to let go of my belly and eat. When Wukong saw it, he sneered, "What a fool! He really wants to be a new breed of lean meat!" Listening to this damn sneer of Bi Mawen, Bajie made up his mind to change his position.

flattery is the strong point of Bajie. In order to make further progress, Bajie bought a pirated copy of the "Asshole Classic" from the stall and watched it for three days and nights. Seeing Pig's sincerity, Wukong pointed out, "Now it's not like a few good words on the way to the West, which will coax our stupid master into obedience. Haven't you ever heard of' it costs more than 2, to upgrade a minor course to a major course'? If you want to do things, you can't do it without money. " Wukong then secured for Bajie a loan of 22, silver from Marshal Zhao Gong. Six months later, Bajie was appointed as the governor of the absurd state.

the absurd state is a famous state in heaven and a land of wealth. As soon as Bajie arrived, local mountain gods and land gods came to welcome Bajie, enjoying delicacies every day and sauna massage every night. The squire and the rich wanted to invite Bajie to "sit down", but they couldn't get in line for ten and a half days. "Busy," Pig sighed. "I was looking forward to a bowl of hot rice on the way to the West, so I became Amitabha. Unexpectedly, eating and drinking became a burden today." In order to cope with all kinds of banquets, except personnel and finance, all other things in the state were shared with the first deputy governor, Jin Mao Lion.

On this day, Bajie drank too much and vomited, and was admitted to the hospital. The governor is in hospital, which is a big deal, and people come to visit him in an endless stream. After a "illness", Bajie made a net profit of 4, ... On the way to the West, everyone called Bajie a "idiot", which was really wrong. This eight quit, don't look at a day of partying, his mind is very clear. Even summed up such an incisive "secret" of officialdom as "if you want to be rich, move cadres, only study and not announce". After three years, the waist has gained weight three times and the villa has been built five times. Brother Wukong came to visit, and the meal of "Forget Me Zhai" was 12 thousand silver, which surprised the monkey head.

What makes Bajie proud most is that Chang 'e in the Moon Palace has come to me and wants to make up with Bajie again. Pig said, "At the beginning, I was handsome, and you were the marshal of the canopy, but Miss Chang 'e still didn't like me. Now I am born in the wrong place, and I look like a pig. Why did you come to me? Did you take the wrong medicine?" Chang' e said, "The governor pig is not a villain. At the beginning, it was a little girl as blind as a bat. Besides, in those days, loyalty, filial piety and chastity were the things. Now, money and power are heroes, and looks are nothing.

In the fourth year of Bajie's tenure as governor, Heaven was constantly being reported that Governor Pig of Nonsense was corrupt and took bribes, while Governor Lion was extorting bribes. Li Tianwang's order was checked, and the Jade Emperor was also surprised. I didn't expect such a corrupt official in my name. Bajie took bribes of 5 million taels of silver and 4 million taels of golden lion, and they didn't like anyone, so they swallowed them all at once. Over the past few years, the number of people in Wuzangzhou has been greatly reduced, businesses have closed down, and beggars are everywhere ... Wuzangzhou has become the poorest place. Bajie and Jinmao Lion were each sentenced to fixed-term imprisonment.

Li Tianwang said, "That idiot, at first glance, is not a good thing. To be an altar cleaner, just feed a pig. Can he stand all kinds of temptations? Who agreed to put him out of office and arrange him in a place where nonsense is so important? "

the court was silent and no one answered.

[ Comment]

This article is an excellent and innovative work. It depicts the image of Bajie, a victim of fame and fortune slaves, in the form of a new story. It is better to write about corrupt officials in our real life than to write about Bajie. The unique style and humorous language make people applaud. This style is much better than the general satirical argumentative essay, which contains the theme to be expressed in humor.

[ Typical Topic 2]

Take _ _ _ _ _ _ _ or _ _ _ _ _ _ as the topic.

requirements: ① choose a topic to complete the topic, and then write a composition.

② The style is not limited, with more than 6 words.

③ Strive for innovation

[ Ideas]

Write an imaginary composition with the theme of "Walking into War-torn Iraq", and write that you understand the dangerous situation in Iraq and the tenacious resistance of the people through news reports, and write that you have become a reporter in a "dream" way to interview Iraq, and report on the tragic situation of Iraq's bombing and the anger and resistance of the people to the war, expressing your desire for peace and opposition to the war.

Write a narrative with the theme of "Entering the Internet", and write your real feelings about chatting online in the age of science and technology. Chatting online with a classmate in the class on Valentine's Day reflects the inner world of adolescent middle school students and the interest brought by high technology in the internet age to people's lives, so as to tell the truth and express the true feelings.

Taking "Into Lu Xun" as the topic, this paper objectively evaluates Mr. Lu Xun from the perspective of middle school students and combines his works to reproduce the broad mind and lofty spiritual world of great writers, thinkers and revolutionaries.

Write a philosophical essay on "Out of the Strange Circle of Self-restraint". Starting with the touch of the idiom "draw the ground as a prison", the main part is: psychologists have done the same experiment for primary school students, middle school students and kindergarten children in the third grade. The rule is to draw five circles on the ground, and then let any five children stand in the circles respectively. The educational psychologist walked away without saying a word, watching from a distance. I found that three of the children were at a loss and stood in the circle dumbfounded, while the other two children ran out of the circle, chasing and fighting without scruple. The educational psychologist conducted the same experiment on middle school students. Surprisingly, all five middle school students stayed motionless in the circle for half an hour. They just looked at each other and regarded the circle as a prison. It was not until finally that educational psychologists invited them out of this circle. These two experiments have aroused the enthusiasm of educational psychologists. So he conducted the same experiment on five children in kindergarten. Miracle appeared. The five children didn't stand in the circle for ten seconds, but ran out of the circle almost at the same time. Finally, the theme is: we should keep the unfettered free thought in our childhood, so as to always stimulate the spark of innovation.

In fact, this form of interview is also a good writing form to walk into someone and communicate with them, which is conducive to depicting characters. Students may wish to use them, such as Walking into Qin Shihuang, Walking into Chen Shimei and Walking into Einstein ... Of course, they can also be written as travel essays, such as Walking into Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes and Walking into the Mountains. You can also write your own understanding of a work, such as Walking into Grimm's Fairy Tales, Walking into Les Miserables and so on.

we should think about the topic of "going out of _ _ _ _ _ _" from two aspects, one is going out of a real place, and the other is going out of the invisible shackles, that is, the old patterns and frames that exist in people's understanding, concepts and thoughts, and even some wrong things, such as "Going out of the misunderstanding of men's and women's communication" and "Going out of the shadow of inferiority".

[ model example]

Don't do it, Esme will fight one-on-one on the Internet

-Go into the animal kingdom and fight happily

(Dadaan's aggression against Lala is going on fiercely. In addition to the head-on confrontation between the troops, the heads of the two countries also fought a fierce battle on the Internet. Now extract some contents. )

Esme (head of Lala country): Bubugan (head of Dada country), why did you openly send troops to invade our country without the authorization of the Anton Rio Congress?

Bu Bu Bu: Does this need authorization? We suspect that there are a large number of chemical and biological weapons in your country, and we have repeatedly stated that you should destroy them, but you didn't listen, which is simply self-inflicted. Smart Mr. Esme, you should understand that the authorization of the Anton Rio Congress is just a form, and we Dadaan can ignore it.

esme: that's good! We Lala people will definitely use shotguns to drive away jackals!

Do you want to do it? You know the "Red Fox" operation a few years ago. This time, we will occupy Lala in an hour and make you come to a bad end. Perhaps, you surrender voluntarily, automatically.