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The blue planet, the endless rotation, the magnificent sea, the white waves; the gurgling creek, the fields, villages and towns flowing through. The vitality properties of these.

(Excerpted from "Life is in Your Hands" by Hebei Provincial Candidates)

The wind chime of youth blows the heart, the color flute of youth blows the dream, the note of youth leads me to hope. Youth, this beautiful season, is when we sow hope, cherish it, and grasp it. It emits dazzling brilliance in our hands

(from Hebei Province, grasp the youth students' ")

Life is not an ideal sail, not a boat.

It is said that the ideal life is for the ideal life.

The happiest time of ideal life is in full bloom.

(Dreams blooming from candidates in Jingzhou City)

In winter, love is a ray of sunshine that drives away the frost and sword. Love is a long-term A blessing after drought, nourishing a cracked heart, love is a beacon in the ocean, pointing out the hope of a new life.

(Test master from Jingzhou City, "Put love on others.")

I don't know if it ever passed by you and followed Bo Yun gently, Like the horizon, even if it is rare, my heart has taken away the attention...

(Candidate from Guangdong Province "My Focus")

In life, everyone will Encountering unpleasant things, such as suffering setbacks, being misunderstood, and being criticized. It felt like an insurmountable obstacle without a doubt. But in the future, when I look back, it only needs a gentle spray, a colorful ray of fragrance in the river of life.

(Excerpted from "Xinxianglvlv" written by candidates in Chongqing)

Life requires applause.

Many people often lament that it is difficult to find educated young people. What concert? Is the concert lifeless applause?

(Anhui candidate "Life needs applause)

Like the sail of the wind, like temperature on seeds, sun and rain on the growth of all things, praise is our spiritual food in the growth process An integral part.

(Excerpted from Anhui Provincial Candidates’ Desirable Praise)

A world without withering flowers, this is a smiling face. It knows that there is no season, south or north, and will be open wherever there are crowds. A nobler mind, the flower of smiles, America.

(Bringing smiles to the lives of candidates from Jingzhou City)

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Life is a burning flame, and the ashes will emit the same light, because Life is in your hands, you just need to grasp it.

(Excerpted from "Life is in Your Hands" by Hebei Province Candidates)

What is youth? What does youth need? Youth needs to take advantage of it. Youth without regrets is the perfect answer. Until the spring breeze of time blows, go back to the past and do everything you should do. At least, "it is the fact of our life to admit it." The hands of youth, my heart will keep in mind, with hopes and dreams, to pursue, to struggle, to create a brilliant youth.

(From the mastery of young students in Hebei)

Blooming, I hope I can always remember this great training from the sage:

In Life on board cannot be without the ideal sail.

The ideal in life is for the ideal life.

(The candidates from Jingzhou City bring dreams to bloom)

< p>Let us take action to bring love to those children who are out of school, and to those who live alone...to everyone around us. When you give love to others, you can also get great happiness. Believe that as long as everyone gives a piece of love, the world will become a beautiful world.

(Candidate from Jingzhou "To make others love.")

There is no hypocritical attention, only attention to the seriousness and persistence that cannot be enjoyed, just like a butterfly Flying into the sky, my attention, inadvertently filled with messages of life and love, was given to my little life!

(From "My Concerns", a Candidate in Guangdong Province)

Every time I think of it, my heart feels sour, but this grievance has not sublimated into hatred, but I have created A strong character, I also understand the teacher's mood. If not, then once I can appreciate the taste of grievance? Ha ha! The years have no trace, just the fragrance.

(Excerpted from "Xinxianglvlv" by Chongqing candidates)

Can the applause of life never stop? Always inspired to pursue the nobility and perfection of the soul, applause is more important than love and money.

In applause, life needs applause.

Dear teacher, I am so eager to get your praise, even if it is just a few simple words!

(Excerpted from the eager praise of candidates in Anhui Province)

Live with a smile, and embellish your life with a smile. There is no time to find happiness or ask for mercy, but walk through the four seasons with a smile on your face , and then store them into wine for happiness and enjoy life.

(Bringing smiles to the lives of candidates from Jingzhou City)

The high-level overview has rich connotations, meaningful quotes and intriguing meanings.

In the past, Bitter and sweet, the smell of blossoming spray, the wisps of fragrance are like flames that will never go out, the lights of my hope are on, letting them see the way forward

(From Chongqing Candidate "A wisp of fragrance." ”)

Ordinary life dance music is a common thing. Success is the positive heartstrings plucked melody, success is the calm emotional lake falling to the chair with little progress throwing bursts of ripples. The flavor, even the smallest minimal Small success, no one applauds, so why not?

Excerpted from Anhui Province Candidate "Applause to myself)

Praise others with the fire of your own soul, ignite the fire of your soul? To discover the hearts of others is like the gentle spring breeze that moistens things silently.

(Excerpted from the eager praise of candidates in Anhui Province)

The prosperous winter, spring and summer publicity, there is no autumn, fruitful sharing of her unique holiness, perseverance, selflessness Quality.

(from Zibo City, Shandong Province, candidate for personality "Winter")

Yes, love blows away the gloom of life in Xinjiang and sows a bright sunshine. Next. If we say that happiness is fire, love is burning, love is water, love and happiness are together, ah! ).

Innovation is a break with the past, innovation is to grasp the present, and innovation is to welcome the future.

(Examinee "Cool" from Chongqing)

How about it. , there are a lot of troubles, but I always believe that the rainy weather will make it clear

(Candidate from Linyi City, Shandong Province "Growing Pains")

I reorganize the old. The luggage holds its own dust, and replaces the old illusory dignity, taking a deep imprint of the former company at its feet. Go forward, without regrets, to welcome the glorious life and create the red color of life.

( Candidate from Henan Province "When I face the sunrise")

I thank nature and appreciate its angelic notes, it gave me the wind, gorgeous, grass-like character, it makes me intoxicated In another happy world

(Candidate from Yiyang City "Grateful")

In the long history and development of human society, no one will easily reach the other side of the ideal. , there will always be ups and downs, and there will always be storms. In this way, you always need to grasp the coordinates of life and find your position. In this way, a better tomorrow and a better future will belong to you.

(From Hebei Province, the candidate grasps the coordinates of life)

Life should not only be lived in a complete and reasonable way, but also should make their lives meaningful.

(Excerpted from "Life is in Your Hands" for Candidates in Hebei Province)

Use a sincere heart instead of having secrets to every corner of the living space, in the world Spread the word, the brightest smile, and your life will bloom with colorful flowers.

(Bringing smiles to the lives of candidates from Jingzhou City)

The terrible display without applause, who can endure the deathly silence? Life without applause is sad, people Do you want to live in depression?

(Anhui candidate "life needs applause")

Art is beautiful, but cooperation in artistic creation is even more beautiful because people understand how to cooperate. Create a more beautiful world.

(Candidates from Nantong City "Cooperate")

Love is the most precious soul of a nation and the most powerful fortress of a country. Love survives, no matter how difficult the encounter is, it can turn the tide from the crumbling thread.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by a candidate in Jingzhou City).

The wave of love ripples in my heart, and I am also very concerned about this silent love with my heart.

Not mediocre, an ordinary little one in the United States!

Life also has the value that people pay attention to.

(from the candidate "My Concern" from Guangdong Province)

The blue sky, just as I face it, silence, a powerful call, transforms the blue light into my body and mind , a voice said softly:

Fly! Being backward and ignorant should not cooperate with your wings and fly towards the blue sky and your ideal! "

(from Henan Candidate "When I Face the Blue Sky")

The lyrical statement by the King of ADS Quotes.

Facing Difficulties , lazy, because? In a harsh environment, they may have a temporary comfort and tranquility, but at a price, in exchange for self. Some people choose to escape, they hide in their own small space to escape the predicament, they may have a peaceful life , but there is no flying personality, but it is inevitable that there is a type of people existing in this society. They are unwilling to be mediocre, and they do not want to work hard to change the harsh environment around them, follow the trend, and ultimately own the personality and charm of the entire environment.

(Candidate "Coffee Bean Personality" from Zibo City, Shandong Province)

If I were a little bird, I would remember the nest sapling where I was born. If I Forget my incompetence, the land that nourishes me, if I were a river, the snowy plateau would be imprinted in my memory, if...it doesn't matter to me, no matter what way can make me forget everything around me, even There is no lack of things to give up -

that is, to return.

(Return from the Guiyang Candidate’s Interpretation)

When winter rides and autumn arrives, it does not have the colorful, rich and beautiful summer of spring, but a more fruitful autumn . When winter is mentioned in the article, many people will immediately think of its cold depression and the residual grass blight. In fact, in this winter, it is a candidate for personality. People "winter")

Most of the roots and flower roots are not beautiful, the most dazzling flowers are beautiful, just because these are not the beautiful tree roots and flower roots, the green and lush trees. There are plum blossoms, snow-red colors, peonies, and sweet-scented osmanthus... because of the extension of the roots, the world is more colorful. In fact, our appearance is the same, it is just a decoration, and it really shows its extension.

(A candidate from Zibo City, Shandong Province showed "beauty")

Some people say that the silent sunshine brings warmth, and the earth is silent, showing a wide range of expressions. The ocean is silent but nurtures life. I have to say that love is silent but beneficial to the world.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by a candidate in Jingzhou City).

A person can survive independently in this world, and nothing is completely separated from the success of the whole society. In such a developing information society so quickly, we must have a better understanding of the importance of cooperation. sex.

(Candidates from Nantong City "Cooperate")

Attention, like a little angel, with a smile and a hint of naughty, my fingers gently slipped out , connected to form a beautiful piece of music called a rainbow. The annotated doughs, one after another, opened their small mouths, played mellow music, and sang softly. Therefore, the sweet notes seem to be full of scented flowers. All the cells in my body are like drinking sweet flower wine and being drunk on weapons.

("Gratitude" from candidates in Yiyang City)

I long to have the green heart of a teacher, exuding the colors of spring, full of vitality, infinite EI, hoping to have that heart In spring, lush and vibrant trees grow in the heart of the teacher. I hope to have a teacher who sinks and replicates the heart of the spring. The sunshine of spring, the flowing mist, the buds are green, and the blooming buds are pleasant. The breeze is blowing and the drizzle is rolling. Because of this dream, my blooming will never be indulged in sunny days...

(Dream blooming brought by candidates from Jingzhou City)

Winter breeds spring. Spring, when spring comes, her ice-clear skin gradually melts, and the trickling spring water of selfless dedication irrigates the greedy sucking seedlings. When the flowers bloom everywhere, full of vitality, and when we hear the sound of jointing of trees at noon, she. In the year of completing the historical mission, I quietly return to heaven in spring, waiting for the arrival of next year.

(From Zibo City, Shandong Province, a candidate for personality "Winter")

Hold it. My hopeful grass ring, watching him slowly disappear from my sight, I sat down with a smile, only to find the vibrant green on the grass behind him.

< p>(Photo from Taiyuan Candidate "God bless you, brother's acquaintance")

Praise is hope, praise is motivation. The goal without hope is like a bright light that goes out, and there is no difficulty in rewarding travel.

(Excerpted from the longing praises of candidates in Anhui Province)

Smiling life is like the sun shining on the earth, the breeze caressing the warm wood, the setting sun burning the heaven and the heat waves washing the rocks. Passion...

(Brings a smile to the life of candidates from the welfare city ")

A person who always likes the sunshine and cold wind will be hungry when eating dry and hot food Come gently bless... people's needs.

(Bringing smiles to the lives of candidates from the welfare city)

Life is like wild flowers blooming in the suburbs, with colors. The applause of gorgeous and fragrant life is like sunshine and rain, nourishing every petal. The gift is the warm applause that the cold and hungry people feel when the winter sun shines, and more importantly, the spiritual encouragement that inspires people's loneliness and helplessness than the gift.

(Anhui candidates "need applause in life)"

The relationship between the first closed market in the VIP segment and the transitional market in the segment.

In the blooming season, I am having a beautiful literary dream...

In the blooming season, I am having a wonderful celebrity dream...

Bloom, I am dreaming of a colorful teacher dream...

(Dreams blooming brought by candidates from Jingzhou City)

Winter is a sacred symbol...

Winter is a respectable strict teacher...

Winter is the cradle of spring...

(from Zibo City, Shandong Province, is Personality candidate "Winter")

A middle school student who lacks book knowledge and practical ability in today's era is not a qualified talent... < /p>

A worker’s knowledge-based economy, the coordinates of the market economy, find the right position...

A businessman, but also keep up with the times and change their ideas... < /p>

For leading cadres, life-oriented, coordinate quadrant, we must grasp...

(from Hebei Province, candidate’s grasp of the coordinates of life ")

I don't look at Amazing Language as an excellent teacher...

My talented but poor cousin...

An ordinary hard-working and frugal neighbors.

(Excerpted from Anhui Provincial Candidates’ Applause for Myself)

Do you think this is my character, a high school student whose heart is full of negativity, sighs, and helplessness? No, in life, I have a new look!

(A candidate from Zibo City, Shandong Province, said: "My personality")

That river meanders In the forest, this is the lifeblood of the town, the only channel for the town to communicate with the outside world. The vicissitudes of the ship reveal a simple and touching story of the people in that room. .

(From Xuzhou City Candidate Du Laoya)

Strip off the dazzling and gorgeous appearance of success, look for success, and achieve success everywhere 11

< p> (Excerpted from the applause of candidates in Anhui Province "")

Wait a minute and talk about coolness in a small way. It can only be superficial coolness. Look at the great era and talk about coolness and you will find the true meaning. Cool.

(Candidate "Cool" from Wuhan

The whole casual combination has a neat form and a unique trend meaning momentum.

Tranquility and tranquility Prose-led celebrity biographies, mysterious science fiction novels, humorous and lively foreign classics "In the dead of night, there is only love" (candidates from Wuxi enjoy the fun of buying books)

I am very. Appreciate the subtle appearance of "Sigh", Zhu Ziqing's "Hurry" is profound, Qiong Yao's "Misty Rain" is "romantic", Lu Xun's "Friends are surprised" is sharp.

(Dreams blooming brought by candidates from Jingzhou City ")

The floods ravaged, many towns and villages were buried in the devoured fields, how many people were displaced, and many people were struggling in the floods. At this time, the party cadres, the cutest people, the young volunteers Withstand the attack of the flood again with flesh and blood

(Excerpted from Jingzhou City Candidate "Bringing Love to Others")

The composer who wrote them down, played. Let them flow in his mind. Listen carefully! The shadow of the moon on the treetops and the moving singing from the grassland gently spread to all directions. /p>

Smile, you will find that this is such a noble virtue -

In autumn, people like the sun help;

Confusion gives people The wave of courage;

The lost time, it gives people the breeze like comfort;

The pulse, it gives people the like-minded sky...

(from Jingzhou City candidates bring smiles to their lives")

When you feel lost and frustrated, you hope someone will give you courage, you hope someone can understand you, when you hesitate, when your spirit is poor , you want to give you a warm applause

(Anhui candidates "need applause in life")

The innovations of this era are changing with each passing day: the creation of a special zone, from an ancient small fishing village to a prosperous modern era. In the city, since the reform and opening up, the ancient civilization has been injected with new vitality. One country, two systems, and two "sons" have returned to the motherland.

("cool" candidate from Wuhan)

I guess you may also need to format it, plus I'll give it to you myself. Ha

Make your article "beautiful"

Exam composition, if a married girl, the girl's hair is not combed, the face is not washed, even if the physical labor is still good, I Will your husband be too happy and want to marry a sloppy wife? Besides, this is disrespectful to you from my husband.

In Teacher Pingji's composition, he also has the spirit of loving his daughter-in-law. His eyes say a lot about the girl who wants to get married. It's not that I won't marry you unless you are the one! This is not pleasing to the eye, and tomorrow is not pleasing to the eye, next... My husband chooses his wife, sometimes due to the fact that older young people attending a wedding will be able to see this set of articles by grade teachers, whether he can Will you worry about whether he is in a hurry to get a wife or his relatives are blind to you? From this point of view, in writing, we really have "beauty, at least let yourself "at first glance, it is really beautiful", even if it is a little pockmarked, we have to let him check it carefully and look at it carefully. If you allow your grade level teachers to spend more time with you, it might not be such a bad thing. So, how can you do this? Consciously beautifying your writing is key, in my opinion.

Consciously beautify the article from the following aspects:

1. Pay attention to the appearance of the written text, yes. In hot weather (like midsummer at the time of the test), I am not very focused and look like a spider crawling through the mess of ink. How can I excite people? On the contrary, the article layout, you see, is this different? ? In addition, the score of the grader is very relativistic, and it is a reference frame. The person in front of your test paper looks comfortable, and it feels like it may be drinking iced mineral water! A few "beautiful" ones, and you won't be a bad example of not receiving an early break.

Please note that the title is often half the text of the title. "This makes no sense. Cross-overview of the excellent papers of previous exams, most of the projects are very special. So, how can the ability of the setter be improved? The following is combined with some students in actual exams in recent years , it is easy for candidates to learn and operate:

Parallel connection method: related or unrelated parallel words to make titles: "Yue·Ren" (Exam Excellent Paper Award in 2000), "Integrity·Life" ( 2001 Examination Outstanding Essay Award), "Blue Chrysalis·Golden Butterfly" (2003 Mid-year Examination Outstanding Essay)

Reference method: direct reference or indirect change of prepared poems, songs, movies and advertisements , causing a scream: "How is love made? "Excellent composition" (2000 exam question) "The cross ridge is on the side of the peak" (2000 exam excellent essay) Gains and losses know Pu Cunxin (2002 exam excellent essay), indifference to clear aspirations, tranquility to go far" (2000 exam excellent essay) ), "Excellent Composition Examination of "Touching the Flowers of Time" (2003).

Rhetoric: metaphor, personification, pun, metonymy, hyperbole, asking questions and other rhetorical methods to make titles: "What does a car" eat (2000 Examination Outstanding Essay Award), "Beauty and Ugliness of the Soul" "The Touchstone" (Excellent Essay Award in the 2002 Examination), "Excellent Essay Examination of "Flower of Life" (2002), "Excellent Essay Examination of Flying Inspiration Crane (2002)," Excellent Essay Examination of "Pick Up an Empty Shell" (2002) 2003), "Making Unrounded Pebbles" Excellent Essay Examination (2002), "A Ruler" Excellent Essay Examination (2003) Emotions

Perspective: Look directly at the title of the article: "Integrity, Completely Lost", Zui's excellent paper (2001), "Integrity---the foundation of career", Zui's excellent paper (2001).

Formula method: borrowing mathematical formula: XX + XX = happiness "Excellent Essay Test (2000), Excellent Essay Test 1:06 Revelation" (2001).

In general, the specific content and genre of the article begin to formulate, to be precise, concise, eye-catching, innovative and poetic.

4. Pay attention to the statement "Basket Weaving" as you close the essay. How to write the essay? I think that awareness is the key at the end as well. After the essay is completed, at least think about what I hope The final "trick". Several common endings are as follows: (1) The beginning of the discussion is incomplete, and the readers are not welcome. (2) The discussion ends well. It not only deepens the theme, but also inspires and affects readers. ③The subtle ending often gives people a lingering "sound wave" and "endless aftertaste" feeling. The implication and the implication make readers feel the charm of language. The ending of Lu Xun's "A Little Thing" is: "This little thing always floats in front of me, often more vividly, making me feel ashamed, urging me to recover, and increasing my courage and hope.

"Noble qualities," if it had been written like this: "Whatever he owns, stands tall and will always be an example to me, it would be greatly diminished because it is too blunt, too "straight" and too "exposed" Taste, but faded