writing points: grasp the center of the article, and use examples to be realistic and clear.

when it comes to "round", I think of delicious doughnuts. Donuts may be just a sweet and delicious ordinary food in other people's minds, but in my heart, donuts are of great significance.

I remember that in the second grade, when my mother took me to the shopping mall, I saw a sweet shop with a beautiful and attractive doughnut. The pink and delicious cream was spread on the soft bread, and the lovely candy was lying on it. I wanted to try it. It must be sweet but not greasy!

Mom seems to be a mind reader, and I can see my little thoughts at a glance. She told me with a smile: "Baby, if you can to be no.1 in the next exam, doughnuts will be your lunch!" " After listening to my mother's words, I nodded cleverly and kept this sentence in mind.

Because donuts make my mouth water and have great temptation to me, I study hard and study hard every day. I also try to learn something new by reviewing the past, never waste a minute, devote myself seriously and never be half-hearted.

Sure enough, "Everything comes to him who waits", and I got 1 points successfully. On the day of handing out the test paper, I looked at the bright red "1 points" on the test paper and the red tick on the test paper, which was particularly sweet in my heart. Now you can get a delicious doughnut as you wish!

when I got home, I handed my test paper to my mother with a big smile. Mom smiled with relief and said to me, "Baby, you succeeded this time. I'm proud of you. Let's buy doughnuts!" "

I couldn't wait to go to the dessert shop with my mother and bought this doughnut for hard work. Holding a doughnut, I couldn't wait to take a bite. Besides the sweetness of cream, I also tasted the "sweetness" brought by success!

from "circle", I think of not only delicious doughnuts, but also the joy of success through hard work.