I believe that many people have had the experience of writing, and they are all familiar with writing, especially the narrative which plays a very important role in writing. The narrative is about what they have seen in life, and it is necessary to express the author's true feelings about life. What are the characteristics of an excellent narrative? The following is a narrative of the little zoo that I have carefully arranged. I welcome you to learn from it and hope it will help you. Little Zoo Narrative 1
My home is a small "zoo", if you don't believe me, I will show you.
My grandmother is a big rooster and gets up at five o'clock every morning. She went to water the field first, and came back just after six o'clock. She came to my bed and woke me up like a rooster crowing. I was woken up in my dream and said in a daze, "what are you doing?" I haven't woke up yet! " "Get up, you'll be late for school!" This "big cock" cried. Look, I'm up. "Rooster" went to call my father again: "Get up quickly, I'm going to cook breakfast!" Dad completely ignored the cock's crowing, so grandma had to cook breakfast first, and then call after cooking breakfast. Look, this "rooster" is really hardworking!
My father is a very busy bug. He is busy with his work every day. During the day, he goes to work immediately after breakfast, and sometimes he comes to eat lunch. After ten minutes of dinner, he has something to do again, and he doesn't go home until I fall asleep at night. I finish school at 4: 3, but he basically won't pick me up until 5: 3. Besides, he has no weekends. You see, this busy bug is busy enough! But dad is so busy with work, so that we can live a better life. I love dad, a busy bug.
My mother is a big lazy pig. She works from Monday to Friday and only has weekends off, so she always says to me before every Friday and Saturday off, "Don't bother me tomorrow, I want to have a good sleep!" " I looked at the clock when my mother got up. It was eleven o'clock. Wow, mom, this lazy pig really knows how to sleep!
I am a little tiger who loves meat. I like braised pork cooked by grandma best, and I can eat a lot of it every time. But I only eat meat instead of skin. This little tiger is really picky about food.
Look, isn't my little "zoo" very interesting? Everyone works, lives and studies very hard, all for the happiness of this family! Narrative 2 of Little Zoo
Speaking of our home, it's a small zoo! Come and see if you don't believe me!
Grandma Bee
My grandma got up at 5: 3 in the morning, and then started a busy day. First of all, she cooked a delicious breakfast, including my favorite soybean milk fritters, my father's favorite rice congee poached eggs, my mother's favorite milk bread, and grandma's breakfast can always start our energetic day. Then grandma, who had finished breakfast, was busy in the kitchen. She was tidying up the dishes. After we left, grandma's figure was busy in the living room again. She was busy mopping the floor and cleaning the tables and chairs ... You see, grandma is like a hardworking little bee. Her figure shuttles around the house and works hard for our family.
"Big Brown Bear" Dad
Why do you say my father is a "Big Brown Bear"? Because of my father, he looks like a big brown bear, simple and lovely, and his love for us is as warm and practical as a big brown bear. Every time we ask dad, "What do you like to eat"? Dad always smiles and says, "I can do it all, I like it all"! Then all the things we didn't like to eat flew to dad's bowl. He was always in a good mood and ate them all. Then my stomach quietly grew into the size of a basketball. Whenever my brother and I encounter any difficulties, we always like to talk to our father. He can always give us a hug and then say with a smile, "Don't be afraid, children. Dad will accompany you to solve any problems." "Big Brown Bear" father, cute and honest, warm and practical, is the strong backing of our family.
"tigress" mother
"Hurry up, hurry up, dawdle ..." Hey, my mother has started her nagging day again. When I do my homework, my mother always sits in front of my desk: "Keep your head up, pay attention to your handwriting, pay attention to the questions, and check them carefully ..." Whenever I fail in the exam, my mother says, "What's the matter, don't I ask you to be serious?" Come, show me the test paper. " When I was wearing a beautiful little skirt and carrying a schoolbag to go to school, my mother's voice came from my ear: "How can I exercise in this way and change my pants?" Although my mother exists in my life like a tigress. But I know that my mother is the mother who loves me the most in the world. Her love, though fierce, is very beneficial.
this is our home, a little "zoo"-warm and lovely, interesting and sweet. We live at home, happy, and we all love it. Narrative 3 of Little Zoo
Hello everyone! My name is Lin Xiaoai and I have a happy family. There are four people in my family: father, mother, brother and me. Next, let me introduce my lovely and interesting family "animals" to you!
Let's talk about my "giant panda" father first! Why do you say my father is a giant panda? Because, he wears a pair of glasses, and the black frame is like the black eye socket of a giant panda. My father is chubby, and his figure looks like a big fat panda. My father even dresses like a giant panda, because he likes to wear black and white clothes best. Isn't this the same as the black and white skin color of a giant panda? My father is as lazy as a giant panda. As long as he sits down, he likes to lie on the sofa and stare blankly, just like a giant panda. If my family has a giant panda, my father must be its best friend.
Then let me talk about my chameleon mother! Why do you say my mother is a chameleon? Because her mood is changeable. When my brother and I made her angry, she was like a chameleon, and her eyes were as big as those of a chameleon, which scared my brother and I to hold our breath. When she is in a good mood, she looks like a very happy chameleon. At this time, she is very gentle to my brother and me, and my mother is like a lovely chameleon. My mother also likes to wear colorful clothes, pants and skirts. She wore Chengcheng Huang's shirt for a while, a red coat for a while, a long black dress for a while, and long green shorts for a while. My mother dresses in "colorful" clothes every day, and her changeable dress style is exactly the same as the chameleon's ever-changing skin color. This is my mother, a strict and gentle "chameleon" mother.
The most naughty brother in my family is Monkey! Why do you say my brother is a monkey? Because my brother has good sports cells like monkeys. He likes jumping up and down at home, climbing doorframes and climbing trees in the park, like a naughty little monkey. He also likes bananas as much as monkeys and eats bananas with relish. The most similar thing between my brother and a monkey is his flexible head. He won a trophy in a calculation competition, and we are all proud of him. We like to tease our younger brother and say, "You are so fond of jumping and eating bananas, and you are so smart. Are you a monkey?" My brother stamped his feet with anger.
it's me at last! Of course, I am a lovely and docile "little koala"! I like sleeping as much as koalas. If you don't wake me up, I can sleep all day. Like koalas, I still like to hold the trunk, holding my father's neck and hanging on him motionless. My father is my big tree, and I am the koala on the tree. My mother often makes fun of me and says, "This is really the most clingy" little koala "in our family!" By the way, I also have a pair of conspicuous "ears" like koalas, so the "little koala" is mine.
The panda's father, the chameleon's mother, the little monkey's brother and my koala make up an interesting zoo. This is my family. It is a little "zoo" full of love, vitality and happiness. Narrative 4 of Little Zoo
My home is a small zoo, and the family members are all like all kinds of small animals, which is very interesting!
First of all, my father is a big bull. He is tall and thin, with great strength, and he is angry like a Spanish bullfight. Once, when we returned to Shenzhen from our hometown after the New Year, a big box full of luggage and clothes was so heavy that my father carried it to the sixth floor without a rest, as if it were filled with sponges.
Secondly, mother is a big tiger. My mother is usually very kind to us, just a little tiger. But every time we make a mistake and make her angry, she will be furious, and her angry eyes are more like a tigress's anger. Speaking more like a tiger growling, deafening. No, I made a mistake again. I talked in class. When I came back, my mother beat me up without saying anything, and I was black and blue.
"squeak", a little hamster keeps barking in the cage, looking for delicious melon seeds. This little hamster is her sister. She is so active that she can't stop for a minute. Also very greedy, as long as you are hungry, you will eat anything. Well, what a sweet melon seed! Look at her eating with relish.
actually, I am also a small animal-a puppy. Whenever mom and dad want to go out for something, I am responsible for watching the house and doing my homework; When my mother cooks, even through the door, I can smell the fragrance in the study early. I always go away smelling the fragrance. I pushed open the door at the first time, ran into the kitchen, pulled out a pair of chopsticks from the bamboo tube, and with a whoosh, a delicious piece of braised pork fell firmly into my stomach. I left contentedly, leaving no trace.
Our home is really like a small zoo. I love everyone in this zoo. Narrative 5 of Little Zoo
Our home is a small "zoo".
My mother is a peacock. She is tall and slim, with a slender neck, handsome appearance and fashionable dress. Every time I go out, I will put on beautiful clothes and make myself dazzling. She loves dancing. Whenever she dances in beautiful clothes, she is more like a peacock with a screen on. It's beautiful! My mother also loves shopping and traveling. She has visited almost all the famous scenic spots in China. Travel has made her more beautiful and beautiful.
My father, like an old ox, sends me to school on time every morning. Before going to school, he always asks me, "What do you want to eat tonight?" Just tell him, whether it's windy or rainy, dad will always buy my favorite food back. When I sleep at night, I always like to lift the quilt. Dad always gets up and covers me with the quilt, which has never stopped for many years.
My brother is like a lion. He likes to eat meat. Every time he comes home, he will be the first to ask, "What are you eating today? Is there any meat? " He is tall and strong with a handsome face. He eats all kinds of meat, including chicken, beef and mutton. He especially likes eating duck meat. Sometimes he has a bad temper. Before he bullied me, I fought back, but he beat me angrily. What a proud lion!
This is my family. I love my little zoo. Narrative 6 of Little Zoo
Speaking of my mother, she is like a "hardworking" little bee. She is a teacher. She goes out early and comes back late every day. She has to deal with a group of children and help me with my homework when she comes back. But she keeps the house in good order every day. If mom gets angry, she will sting like a bee! I remember one time, I was half-hearted when I was doing my homework. When my mother saw it, she severely criticized me, and I was scared to talk to my mother all night.
Look, this man with big eyes is my father. His brain is so flexible that he can solve any problem, just like a clever monkey. Once I was stumped by a math problem, and I still didn't have a clue after thinking for a long time. So I went to consult my father, but I didn't expect my father to do this problem in a short time with a quick turn of his eyes. Not only that, but dad also loves bananas, so the image of "monkey" is perfect for him.
and I think I'm a cute little white rabbit, with two big dies that stand out. Jump like a rabbit when you are happy; Love to eat snacks, grandma often says that my mouth can't stop like a rabbit. Narrative 7 of Little Zoo
Home is not only a warm harbor in my heart, but also a happy "zoo".
In my "zoo", the most famous one is my "Hedong Lion" mother. The first sound you hear every morning is definitely "Hedong Lion"-get up! Let's eat! I'm going to be late for school ... isn't it awesome enough?
actually, in the "zoo", what I really fear is not the "Hedong lion", but a "beautiful snake". This "beautiful snake" is my sister. My sister and I are natural enemies, and we will fight to the end as soon as we meet, but every time we fight, it is the "beautiful snake" that wins, and I, the snake-eating frog, will always be defeated.
And my father is like a "gorilla" with a square face, but he is not as flexible as other "orangutans". He only watches TV while smoking.
As for me, I am a free "tourist", so envy me.
this is our "zoo". Narrative of Little Zoo 8
If my home is compared to a beautiful animal kingdom, then there are four lovely little animals living here: a little pig who can eat and sleep-a little brother; Handsome and clever monkey king-me; An early and dedicated rooster-Dad; A majestic and kind tiger-mother.
My younger brother has all the good qualities of a "little pig". First of all, he can eat very much. Although he is only over one year old, he can eat two tablespoons of rice, three vegetables and four big ribs in one meal. After a short rest, you can eat another big banana. Secondly, he can sleep very well, and he can sleep from 1 pm to 5 pm. Most importantly, he likes playing with dirty things, stepping on mud, picking up leaves and picking up bark ... What a naughty little pig!
I am similar to a monkey in many ways. For example, eating-peaches, bananas; I am also very flexible. There is a climbing rope in my bedroom. I can climb to the top and then come down in one minute. I am also a fencing master, a braggart and the best player in practical jokes. Most importantly, I am as smart and capable as a monkey. For example, although I used to be a programming boy, I borrowed a programming book from the library, and after only two afternoons, I made a perfect animation.
My father is a standard cock. He gets up early every morning, cooks breakfast for his family and wakes me up. He works hard and devotedly, and revises students' papers at his desk every night. In the process of work, even if my brother makes trouble nearby, he will not be affected.
The last one to appear is our majestic tigress-mother. She made many rules for us, and we can't break them. For example, you must go to bed at ten o'clock; No homework after nine o'clock; You can't leave leftovers in your rice bowl; Write your homework neatly, or you will tear your book. Poor me, I've been through too many storms. However, I still appreciate my mother's strict requirements for me and help me get rid of many bad things.