Grade 7 | 1000 words or more | After reading |

Although the story of The Old Man and the Sea is short, it has profound implications. It is written that Santiago, an old fisherman, finally found a salmon weighing 1500 kilograms on the 85th day without catching any fish for 84 consecutive days, and began a struggle for three days and three nights. Finally, the big fish surfaced exhausted and was killed by him. On my way home, I was repeatedly attacked by sharks, and finally I returned to Hong Kong with only a fish head and tail and a spine. This is a classic tragic novel with far-reaching influence and a heroic symphony. Hemingway said: "I tried to describe a real old man, a real child, a real sea, a real fish and many real sharks." However, if I can write realistically enough, they can also represent many other things. Santiago, the old man described in the story, is an unfortunate man. He didn't catch a fish for 84 days, but other fishermen regarded him as a loser. But this seems to indicate the beginning of a battle. Sure enough, on the 85th day, he really found a salmon weighing 1500 Jin, knowing that the other side was better than him, he was still determined to fight to the end. He said to the big fish, "I will accompany you to the end!" " ",finally won. After the old man worked hard to catch the fish, the test was not over. Because the fish was so big and long, he had to tie it to one side of the boat. On the way back, the bloody smell of big fish attracted sharks to attack again and again. So, he used all his personal means to fight back. The harpoon was taken away by the shark, and he tied the knife to the paddle and stabbed it. The knife was broken and he used a short stick. If you lose the short stick, hit it with the rudder handle. Although the fish was bitten off as a result, nothing could destroy his will. God seems to have pity on such a great old man. He brings bad luck to the old man again and again. In the end, his tenacious will failed to get a good result. When he returned to Hong Kong, he only had a fish head, a fish tail and a spine. Why didn't Hemingway let the old man win in the end? Wouldn't it be better to show the greatness of heroes? The story of the old man not only symbolizes the relationship between man and nature, but also symbolizes the indestructible spirit of all mankind. In reality, although he failed, mentally, he is a winner, and his tenacious fighting spirit shows human dignity and dignity. Throughout life, who hasn't experienced failure? Even the most successful people. The reasons for failure can be different, but in any case, failure will always be an unbearable blow to you. If we go out to sea again, there is hope of victory. I think this sinister living environment and this tough attitude towards life are the reasons why this work is more and more attractive. Life is an endless pursuit. In the story, the old man once said, "But people are not born for failure. A person can be destroyed, but not defeated. " This sentence reminds me of Beethoven's symphony of destiny. Beethoven once said, "I can be destroyed, but I can't conquer." They explained the meaning of heroes and the meaning of life. And this sentence in the article also points out the idea of the article: people should face failure bravely. In this respect, this book is not a fable, nor a fairy tale, but a realistic work. Victory is not important in this novel, what matters is the value of one's life. The old man dares to challenge the limit and surpass it again and again, so we have to admire him. What he brings to mankind is a kind of self-confidence and a powerful spiritual strength.

2. How to write "How to feel after seeing the results" The mid-term exam is as important as the final exam, and sometimes it is of great significance. After doing well in the exam, my heart is full of sweetness, followed by the praise of teachers, the envy of classmates and the joy of parents; If you don't do well in the exam, your teacher will be disappointed, your parents will be angry, and you may face contempt and irony from your classmates. In my humble opinion, if you do well in the exam, don't lose heart. If you want to consider the praise of your elders and the cynicism of your classmates in class, you will lose. Don't be arrogant if you do well in the exam, don't be discouraged if you don't do well in the exam, but you can do well with a calm mind. However, it is easier said than done.

Take this mid-term exam as an example. I took the exam with confidence. From morning till night, after the exam, I was very tired and worried. Time seems to have stood still, and the days have passed like a few years. The words "good in the exam" and "bad in the exam" are always in my mind, and I feel much better after a deep sleep at night.

I am as nervous as a few rabbits, and I can clearly feel the rhythm of my heartbeat.

1. Enlightenment from the examination

Another exam is over. I will get a lesson or some experience in every exam. The enlightenment of this exam is that negligence will always exist.

After I finished the math test, I felt good. The test paper is simple and the questions are smooth. Then I checked it carefully. After I got all the answers, I always had a hope: I got full marks in the math exam.

Out of the examination room, the hope of getting full marks is getting closer and closer to me. I boldly checked the answers with my classmates, and the questions were correct. Seeing that some students were depressed and annoyed because they found the wrong questions in their answers, I thought to myself: It feels good to have all the answers right. I'm really glad that I checked carefully after I finished the exam. At that time, I was happier than ever.

But before long, this special joy turned into my unprecedented sadness and disappointment.

"I painted that picture very big." I'm a little happy to say.

"No, well, not much.

I was shocked. Did I draw it wrong? Impossible, I have drawn this picture twice. It should be that the other party made a mistake, or it is a personal emotional difference. Am I so comforted? Myself. But my heart is still very uneasy.

I dare not answer confidently any more, but I overheard another group of people report the answers that disturbed me in unison. I was dumbfounded. I was really wrong. It's really my fault! I can't believe I crossed the picture with the text! I can't believe I didn't check out that this is a thousand calculations, but it is still ignored! The hope of full marks suddenly burst in my heart like a bubble. 3 points just slipped away from my test paper. Such an easy test paper, such a big loss of 3 points!

In this way, I regretted it all afternoon.

This is negligence, you can't hide it. However, because the ranking is calculated according to the total scores of the four courses, the results of other subjects have finally lived up to my efforts. So we can draw a second revelation: learning needs all-round development. Perhaps because of the Excellence in other aspects, the overall score has improved. Of course, if we try our best to reduce negligence and improve the Excellence of other subjects, the total score will be greatly improved. Therefore, all-round development is very important.

Generally speaking, negligence is inevitable, but it can be minimized. All-round development is a shortcut to make up for negligence.

3. The feeling after extracting the composition is how to write a good composition and the importance of extracting it. It only takes about 350 words to extract the feelings after writing.

People who write articles express their thoughts and feelings in words, but what readers see is far more than plain words. They turn words into three-dimensional pictures through imagination, so the sound, color, taste, change and contrast in composition are particularly important.

A good cook should not only cook well, but also know how to arouse the appetite of diners, so that people who see it will want to eat and those who eat it will be satisfied. Therefore, the chef pays great attention to the arrangement of food and makes the food look delicious.

1, sound

Can you imagine watching a silent movie? Without sound and color, the effect will be greatly reduced.

In a composition, voice is definitely not the protagonist, but it is necessary and appropriate to add sound effects to make the article more vivid and friendly.

In the writing of scenery, sounds reconcile too many defects in the picture, so that the sounds of nature, such as raindrops falling, wind blowing through leaves, insects singing and birds singing, waves lapping on the shore, and different sounds of the city, can explain what you want to convey.

You can also add sounds to other topics, such as crying, heartbeat, clearing your throat, footsteps and so on. As long as you listen attentively, you will feel the sounds of words, and with a little thought, these sounds can embellish your composition.

Step 2 color

We live in a colorful world. It is impossible to write articles in black and white, but there are many compositions in black and white.

Color composition depends on observation, and what color should be highlighted under what circumstances; What color sets off what mood, there are certain rules in the world of words. It is necessary to read more books and think more, so as to grasp it accurately.

For example, the wind has no color, but we can bring out different colors through the wind. The wind blows through the green trees and grass, the blue sky, the red roof and the blue sea. The wind even blows your black hair and melancholy heart.

Of course, you don't have to. If it's not the right color, it will look out of place.

Step 3 smell

In real life, the smell is invisible, but it definitely exists. Just like the smell of a delicious food, it can't fill the stomach, but it makes people's appetite increase greatly. Smell replaces sight, hearing and touch at critical moments. For example, if the food goes bad, we may not see it, but we can definitely smell it.

The smell of composition makes the expression more diverse and vivid.

For example, the wind, the taste of the wind depends entirely on which direction it comes from. The wind blows across the coast, bringing a strong smell of salted fish;

The wind blows through the garbage chute, and you smell rancid; The wind blows through the happy people, and you can even smell the beautiful breath in their laughter.

Whether it is a beautiful smell or a disgusting stench, there is a beauty that makes the finishing point.

4, change and contrast

Changes can be identified with the naked eye, such as the shift of sunlight, people's emotions and expressions. Change can also be indirect, such as a person's change, or a process of growth and aging, which we may not notice in a short time.

But it has been going on all the time, and the application of changes can make the article hierarchical and deeper.

Contrast is often inseparable from change, but the use of contrast is stronger. Whether it is color, sound, darkness, emotion or behavior, the function of contrast is to create conflicts and make readers feel shocked. In contrast, the meaning we want to express will be clearer and the effect will be remarkable.

Using variation and contrast in composition can show the author's careful observation.

5. Summary

When a chef cooks a dish, he will not only pay attention to color and seasoning, but also reverse the light and heavy, destroy the characteristics of raw materials and make the food lose its original flavor. Similarly, when writing an article, we should not pay too much attention to the use of skills and cover up the thoughts and feelings we wanted to express.

A good composition should be balanced, important, sequential and primary.

4. What do you think after reading the composition? Hello: After reading the composition, write your thoughts from the following aspects.

Encouragement, a few words of praise from the teacher, "Please observe carefully": Beauty is everywhere and students can easily remember it. ""If we can make a long story short and criticize the advantages of students' writing skills, let students feel the teacher's concern for him in the humanistic atmosphere, which not only protects students' strong self-esteem, but also can say what they want to say. Thinking must be logical and famous aphorisms. If the writing is beautiful, patient and caring, it will become the adhesive between teachers and students-and it can achieve the effect of "laughing without understanding". Every sentence in teacher composition evaluation directly affects students' writing psychology, and strives to be vivid and novel. Every time a student writes, it is the crowning touch of this link. Writing evaluation, publicity personality, is actually a teacher's job, but it is very comfortable, can not play a guiding role, fascinating.

I deeply felt the greatest love. It is said that maternal love is the greatest love in the world, and I am deeply touched.

The corridor from the elevator to my door is very long, and I walk slowly with a heavy bag on my back. There was a light knock at the door, but no one answered, so I took out the key to the house.

When I got home, I felt I was going to collapse. I think of the scene when my mother opened the door to help me carry my schoolbag and help me enter the house on weekdays, only to find a person's loneliness. Mom was not at home, so she left a note on the refrigerator explaining her whereabouts and eating and other trivial matters. She even reminded me not to forget to eat apples.

Such a note has been kept in a thick stack in my drawer, and it always begins with: "Wenwen, I'm really sorry, another note greets you …" In my mother's eyes, I am a child who will never grow up. Unscrew the faucet and pick up the "clean &; Clear ",wash away the dust on your face for a day.

My mother gave it to me. She said that she should pay attention to cleaning her skin during adolescence, and she took out this bottle of foam facial cleanser like a magic trick.

Although I didn't have acne on my face at that time, I still insist on using it now. I am very moved by my mother's carefulness.

The effect of the potion refreshed me at once. I sat down at the table and began to eat dinner. The dinner is not heavy, but it is well prepared and reasonably matched. Maybe my mother is afraid of my malnutrition or something.

Grandma said that when I was a child, my mother wrapped cabbage in white gauze and squeezed juice for me to drink. She also said that it was an excellent thing. But I always don't cooperate.

Later, my mother took a bite and threw up, saying that she would try to improve the taste. Mom, you did your best for my growth! Sitting alone on the sofa after dinner, I miss sitting and chatting with my mother.

It has been a long time since then, because we are all busy. Now they just ask symbolically.

How can my mother be interested in the new things I said? After all, we are two generations. It's already 10: 30, and the senior high school entrance examination will be held tomorrow. I'm going to bed. Turn off the light.

I heard my mother come back in the dark, and her footsteps were light, perhaps for fear of waking me up. She came into my room, kissed me gently on the forehead while I was "sleeping", then turned with a smile and closed the door.

Although I can't see it, I believe it must be like this. Tomorrow is the exam. I will work hard, for my mother's love and for myself.

I will always love my mother, just as my mother always loves me. So in the examination room, I wrote this greatest love! I feel happy, happy, happy, looking forward to and curious when I start school. In short, my tastes are varied! I am here to register today. I will visit my new school by the way. I have many unknown tastes.

I think I will be as happy as a little dolphin! Walking on campus, I smiled inexplicably, so happy and so sunny. Although six years of primary school life makes me unforgettable, I yearn for middle school life more.

In that primary school, I found happiness, not friends. So what did I find in this key middle school? Is it happiness? Are you friends? Or the pressure of study? I plunged into this middle school with curiosity and expectation.

Walking into the campus, I feel mature even breathing. Looking at the teaching building, I can't help but imagine how I will study in this building in the future. God, I can't wait. I have never been in such a hurry.

Seeing my classmates walking around, I thought, will I be in the same class as my old classmates? Forget it. Forget it. You'll know what you need to know. This school is really beautiful and big. I think I must be smiling, otherwise how can I feel happy? I think the students must feel the same way! I can even imagine what my tomorrow will be like.

The wind here seems to be joking with me. I finally realized that before the exam, my teachers and parents wanted me to be admitted to a key middle school, but I was different from them. They are depressed, which will bring me pressure. I am very happy and curious, which will surprise me.

I like this school. It not only brought me honor, but also made me feel inexplicably relaxed. I like this inexplicably. I am happy, happy, happy, expecting and curious.

In short, I have all kinds of tastes.

6. I'm going to write how to write a review [how to learn to write a review? First, talk about the writing of post-reading feeling (1) What is post-reading feeling? After reading an article or a book, write down your feelings, experiences, education and enlightenment. The written article is called "feeling after reading". How to learn to write a review? .

2) What to read Jane Harry, a famous American educator, said, "Reading literary works to children for even 65,438+00 minutes every day is of great benefit to their growth." Read what? This question doesn't seem complicated, but it is quite difficult to answer.

Because, if the words are too general, such as "open book is beneficial", everything can be read, and the meaning is naturally good, but it is not practical; If we go to the other extreme and talk too specifically, there will be more difficulties. In a word, say "study hard". It seems like a cliche, but I have to say it, because if you take the method, you will only get it. If you take the method, you will only get it.

Legend has it that Wang Xizhi studied calligraphy with Mrs. Wei at first, but he was never satisfied. It was not until he went north and saw the famous Han and Wei inscriptions that he got married. In fact, Mrs. Wei is also the "top" hand, and Wang Xizhi is dissatisfied because there is still a "top".

Learning composition is a principle. To put it to the extreme, if the article you read is impassable or full of holes, even if you learn images, it is just impassable or full of holes. If you want to do it well, you must take the law, and it is best to go up.

Ancient Chinese writers, such as Gui Youguang in the Ming Dynasty, devoted their whole lives to Historical Records, which was based on law, so they were able to surpass ordinary people in their attainments. Here is just an example to illustrate that reading a good article is a necessary condition, even a sufficient condition.

At this point, students must ask, how to calculate? This is another long story. Du Fu said: "The article is eternal, and the gains and losses are well known.

"This is don't believe the world's comments. But whether the author agrees or not, since it has been shown to the world, the world always has to comment; Comments are often different, and the wise have different opinions.

Like Tao Yuanming's poems, Zhong Rong, who wrote Shi Pin, didn't think highly of it, and it became unattainable in the Tang and Song Dynasties. In this way, the article can't compete alone? Of course not. For example, Zhuang, Lie and Shi in ancient times, Han, Li, Du, Han and Liu in Tang Dynasty, and Ou, Zeng and Liu in Song Dynasty almost all admitted that they were great works or writers. As mentioned above, the criteria of this evaluation are: on the one hand, the content is good, profound, appropriate and fresh, which can enrich people's knowledge; On the other hand, good, accurate, concise and vivid expression can make people clearly understand and enjoy the beauty of language. I won't elaborate here.

The so-called extensive reading means reading the contents and expressions of the works thoroughly. Our compositions are written in modern languages, and of course we mainly read modern works, most of which are not written into the history of literature. What should we do? The solution is: (1). Of course, it is best to distinguish it by yourself.

(2) Turn to popular comments. This is often found in various forms of text, magazine and newspaper introductions, book introductions, income anthologies (including textbooks), and even advertisements of publishing houses. (3) those who seek knowledge give advice.

There are many knowledgeable people. Chinese teachers and the older generation of scholars are knowledgeable people. If you don't know, you can ask them After choosing reading materials and being able to distinguish between good and bad, there is still a question of determining the category, that is, what kind of works to read or read more, what kind of works to read less or even not to read.

Of course, you must read the works in the Chinese textbook and the required extracurricular reading materials first. That's not enough. In order to study composition, I want to read more books. When choosing reading materials, I should consider the following situations.

(1) style should be commonly used or easily transferred to composition. For example, prose in a broad sense (including notes and reasoning) is better than poetry and novels.

The language of poetry has its own characteristics. For example, sometimes it can be deliberately obscure, and the two sentences are often taken out of context and inconsistent. If you learn, it will do more harm than good to your composition.

There are many dialogues and descriptions in the novel. Some young people read novels more than other styles. When they pick up pens, they want to draw people and scenery. As for remembering trivial things and reasoning, even if it is very simple, they don't know how to write it. This is because they are disturbed by it without help. In my experience, in this respect, sometimes it is inevitable to pinch the scalp.

For example, reading Lu Xun's works, many young people will find novels more interesting and easier to read than essays. However, when studying prose, I still suggest that you work harder on prose. (2) Just read more domestic works; When reading translated works, it is best to choose works whose writing style is close to Chinese.

There is a simple reason. Our compositions and sentences should be from China, not foreign countries. (3) Don't just think about fun and labor.

I'd like to give an extreme example. As we all know, many teenagers and some middle-aged people are keen on reading, even in the car, but they always read picture books.

Of course, reading picture books is not a bad thing. However, if you always read this kind of books instead of others, it will be difficult for your composition to achieve anything, because the words in picture books are intermittent, and people who read them often have a quick mind, that is to say, they don't read them. If you want to learn composition, you have to give up the easy work and read more reasonable works.

This kind of work is difficult to read at first, and it is not interesting, but it can make readers increase their knowledge, exercise their thinking and learn reasoning skills, which is exactly what good writing always needs. Also, reading this kind of works often will arouse deeper interest, which is the most powerful guarantee for learning success.

(4) I just said that reasoning works are difficult to read. Here, we should also say "difficult" in general. When choosing reading materials, it is sometimes appropriate to deliberately find one or two beyond one's ability and read them by Tao Yuanming's method of "not asking for a solution".

I remember watching Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio when I was a child. Many words are unclear, but the general mood seems to be a common idea. In this way, there will be fewer problems when you look at it later. This is a kind of progress that does not seek solutions. The situation is that the more difficult it is, the easier it becomes, and the easier it naturally becomes.

Many young people don't understand this truth. For example, they also think that Lu Xun's works are very good and should be studied hard, but they dare not read essays and say they can't understand them. After reading it, they think, "How do you learn to write after reading it?" This evasive attitude is wrong and should be reversed. Because it is difficult, I have to read it.

Dare to meet difficulties and make them easy, and your study (including composition) will be greatly improved. (5) Flexible handling of miscellaneous and specialized problems.

The so-called miscellaneous, that is, content, expression, and screenwriter all require many aspects, so they are staggered.

7. After reading the composition, write clearly the name, author, brief content and feelings of the composition (less than 100, I don't know what kind of book you want. Please recommend it: the first paragraph: the title named at the beginning: such as (after reading this book, my mood is surging ...) The second paragraph: there are two methods, and I suggest you write the second one. Take your time. For example, after I read this paragraph, I ... (very realistic. Write down its moving points and your feelings. If you choose the first one above, talk about your feelings and connect them with real life. If you choose the second one, it's over. Summarize the full text. For example, (this passage makes me understand that I must be like XXX people ... (write down her benefits) so that I can write 100-200 words. It's simple. The form of A+B is narrative first and then lyrical. Let me give you an example: I read the novel How Steel was Tempered several times during my holiday. It is mine. How should people live to be meaningful? Pavel Colta King answered this question with action. After his disability, Paul didn't lose heart, but also studied hard, worked hard and started literary creation. Later, he went blind, which will be a heavy blow to those who have been paralyzed! But he resolutely picked up the pen, groped and insisted on writing. Every time he writes a word, he has to work extremely hard. After tenacious efforts, he finally succeeded in writing the first chapters of the novel Born in the Storm. I can't help crying when I watch it. Pavel Kochakin's determined face seemed to be right in front of my eyes. Ordinary soldiers like Paul are surprisingly better than. After reading this book, I finally understand that this is the greatest and most magnificent communist cause calling him to create miracles, which is the driving force for his tenacious struggle against the disease. It is difficult to extract what he wrote. Excerpt: Report! Tired. . .

8. Growing up in life, how should I write this composition? Generally speaking, my life is not happy, but I am very busy. I feel that I am growing up and living a dull life, but I always feel that something is missing. Sometimes I think it is not a good thing to live too exquisitely, but I choose to get used to it. A good friend once said: You always look like sunshine, and everyone wants a piece of you. Light up and warm my heart. I was a long time ago, just like my name. Now I don't know where to slip away. I lost a childlike innocence in the fleeting time. Next month is my birthday again. I still remember a few weeks ago, when the monkey came to see me, I had a quarrel with it. I said I always wanted a book as a birthday present, but no one ever gave it to me. He said he would give me one this time, but I don't believe him. In my imagination, only puppies will be sent. I haven't laughed happily for a long time. Although many people always tell me why I always see your silly smile, I didn't realize it myself. Most of the time, I'm just used to bringing happiness to everyone, just smiling, right? One year older, can life change a little? Always miss the past, miss old friends and relatives, write something to them and give it to yourself, hoping that everything will get better soon. For Lulu, I think it is my greatest happiness to know you as a friend in my life, and I think you will feel the same way. I will cherish it very much. Needless to say, I want to tell you quietly that I have you in my collection, no more or less. I am very happy to grow up with you. "I miss her, too, somewhere." I have no ability to repay anything, but I will try my best to do it well, although it may not be excellent. One day, I will come back to visit you with my most sincere wishes, holding my favorite boy and full of gold. For my dearest friends, I often ask myself why I always miss our days together. As friends, we can be friends again, but you are different. Don't forget that in order to commemorate, life will be very angry, and we have too many memories together. For the present life, I think we should make our own decisions more firmly and bravely, stick to our beliefs at all times, don't blindly follow others and do what we like, even if we are likely to fail. Don't relax our standards for anything, even if we can't get it. For the future. Just like sitting on a bench and watching the stars all over the sky when I was a child, just like telling stories with my mother, simplicity is beautiful. Well, for my ideal, although I always feel that my present ideal is dying, many friends have already begun to prepare for my work two years later, and it is not a bad thing to start running for the future. I vaguely saw a little effort and helplessness in everyone's eyes, for growth and for the so-called future. If you get something, you have to lose it. Keep a good attitude and let the rest go. For tomorrow, I only hope that when I look up at the blue sky, I can relax and shout with open arms. I am no longer disappointed ... I think I will bring happiness to everyone and myself. Keep everything going and wait for the next year (for reference only).