composition title: sauerkraut in my hometown

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This composition is about 6 words in the sixth grade of primary school. The title is "Pickled sauerkraut in my hometown". Welcome to contribute. My hometown is rich in sauerkraut. All kinds of vegetables are produced all year round, and they are continuously transported to the nearby urban area. The vegetable market in the market town. There are many traditional vegetable processing technologies in my hometown, which make vegetables more delicious. Sauerkraut is a special dish with unique flavor in my hometown. The method of sauerkraut is very simple. Pick fresh radish leaves or Chinese cabbage, wash them, dry them, put them in boiling water for a while, fish them up, drain them and chop them up. Put it in the sun until it is 8% dry, mix with proper amount of salt, put it in the jar, cover it, and seal the jar mouth tightly with mud mixed with loess and lime. After about ten days, the vegetables in the jar will turn sour and you can take them out to eat. This is pickled cabbage. If the pickled cabbage is taken out, dried in the sun and collected, it is called dried pickled cabbage. Sauerkraut is yellow in green, smells fragrant, tastes sour and sweet, crisp and refreshing. Dried sauerkraut is sour, crisp and delicious, and has a special flavor. The soup cooked with it is especially delicious, and it is always indispensable on the table. Every time my father comes back from Yunnan to visit relatives, he always brings a few big bags of sauerkraut to share with his family and friends. Every time grandpa makes sauerkraut, I always watch. Now, I also learn to make sauerkraut. I love all kinds of unique specialties in my hometown, and I love sauerkraut in my hometown even more. Teacher's comment: I am drooling!

I really want to try it myself when I have a chance!

this is the charm of words. through the combination of words and the imagination of readers, better things will often be sublimated. Without further ado, let's take a look at your article itself!

at first glance, the little author is a child who likes writing, and he is very skillful in using the layout, taking care of the beginning and the end, being detailed properly, and having a clear context. The basic skills of these compositions are very solid. So I also want you to improve a little. I think the little author is about to graduate, so he should work hard on the conception of the article. For example, is the sauerkraut in my hometown entrusted with the homesickness of the wanderer? Does it represent the taste of hometown? What kind of development do you hope the sauerkraut in your hometown will have? These can be considered, which can make the idea of the article more profound. (Xuele China Distinguished Teacher: Teacher Li Min) 28-8-6 17:3: