There is no denying that the beginning of the fight against the sky was wonderful, and it also brought great popularity to potatoes at the beginning, which made the fight against the sky still achieve good results in the middle and late stages. However, many problems in writing have been leaked out, resulting in the loss of popularity of this book and a lot of abuse. \x0d\ 1 update problem \ x0d \ uploading 20 1 1 year began on April 4, 2009 and ended on July 20, 2009, which lasted for 827 days, with a total of 5,328,025 words, with an average of about 6,442 words per day, which is basically regarded as two shifts per day. However, some of the earliest readers may still remember that the update was extremely unstable for about a month in the early stage of the fight, and sometimes it took only three to five days. At that time, the pursuit of books was really depressing, and the update was stable in the middle and late stage. However, in order to get tickets, the update mode was adopted, which was stable at the beginning of the month, took several vacations in the middle of the month, and broke out at the end of the month. Many readers also said that the updated content was too watery, which led to the evaluation of poor personality, water beans and dragging beans. \x0d\ 2 No outline \x0d\ There is no doubt that this is the most unsuccessful place in the struggle. The author has no holistic view, and the overall situation has not been well controlled, which makes the whole book full of loopholes and inconsistencies. (1) In terms of strength, after one or two hundred chapters, the all-powerful man in front of him was not even qualified to come out as a walk-on, and the author used the mainland to explain it, but according to what he wrote, it obviously didn't make sense. For example, in Xiao's family, two emperors fought to protect Xiao Xuner, while the ancient clan's age was about thirty years old, and all of them were poor, and their talents even reached the level of seven or eight stars. Is it reasonable for the ancient clan to send two bucket-emperor-level garbage to protect their patriarch's daughter, the bucket-holy star? When Medusa broke through the bucket, there was no bucket-emperor protector, which made Xiao Yan take advantage. Then the snake clan came up with a pile of bucket-emperor-level elders who commanded several bucket-emperor peaks. Is Medusa's popularity so bad? At such an important moment, there was no master in the snake clan to protect her. What is this? (2) Xiao Xuner's theory of generational level is definitely the ancestor of Xiao Yan. Gu Yuan is thousands of years old. I don't know why I suddenly got married and gave birth to a daughter. Is it a whim one night, and the celestial phenomena were observed at night, so I gave birth to a daughter to the emperor star to protect the status of the ancient family? Actually, I'm curious about why Gu Yuan sent Xiao Xuner to Xiao's home. The explanation in the article is to avoid disputes among the clans and recycle the imperial jade. But who is Gu Yuan? He is known as the leader of the first power in the mainland, and the strong man at the top of the bucket is definitely a hero in the world. Can't such a male master even provide a comfortable environment for his daughter? This is really funny. As for recycling the imperial jade, Xiao Xuner was only three or five years old when he went to Xiao's home, and his mind is still immature. It's hard to say that she will be willing to cheat back to the Emperor Jade when her parents have feelings for Xiao's family, and it's certainly not as safe in Xiao's family as in the ancient family. In case Xiao Xuner is assassinated by the soul family, the ancient family has no place to cry. Even ordinary families spend a lot of money to send their children to better schools for their children, while Xiao Xuner went to the declining Xiao family when he laid the foundation on the road of cultivation, and the resources he got could not be compared with those in the ancient family. (3) The IQ problem of the Soul Family gives the enemy ample room to grow up. Is the Soul Family brain-dead? You have to say that it is the master of the Soul Family who disdains to make moves against Xiao Yan, who is still weak, but the real family can't do anything despicable for the sake of being stronger, and something as important as Emperor Jade has been put in Xiao's house for so many years, but the Soul Family has turned a blind eye to it. With its strength, even the younger generation can destroy Xiao's house and take away Emperor Jade. The so-called ancient clan has pinned down the masters of the soul clan, and the masters of the soul clan fighting the holy level behind have wandered around casually, but they haven't seen the ancient clan pinning down others. (4) What a wonderful chapter of fighting skills you are looking at, it's all floating clouds. It's a waste of feelings. (5) Xiao Yan didn't practice a few levels by herself. After decades of penance on the top of an adventure, she still said that others were quarrelling and floating, and no matter how quarrelling and floating, Xiao Yan was definitely the first person. (6) The female host had an ambiguous relationship with many beautiful women who appeared, but she forgot them in a few days, like Xiao Yu, an important female companion in the early stage, who mentioned it several times behind Fei Ya. It is better to write it as a stallion. \x0d\ 3 \x0d\ can only be said to be average in writing. In fact, online writers have a general writing style, but potatoes have a bad habit, that is, they use words repeatedly and use some sentences repeatedly. Many readers on the Internet have summarized it, so I won't summarize it any more, which will cause aesthetic fatigue. The same is true of the plot. Many plots are repetitive. For example, when the protagonist knows what an emergency is, it always falls from the sky at the most critical moment. Maybe Potato thinks that writing like this can set off the glorious image of the protagonist. I also enjoyed it at first, but I am tired of watching this situation too much. I think Xiao Yan can die if you don't pretend 13. There are always some so-called "bad guys" who take away what the protagonist needs in the auction. In the end, the protagonist can get what he needs for free only by killing and robbing goods, and also give away a bunch of good things. Repeated words, repeated sentences, repeated plots, can it look like water? \x0d\ To sum up, the potato is unique in the plot, and it is relatively outstanding among the authors at the starting point. However, there are certain problems in the style of writing, which can't be seen in the early stage, but it leaked out when it was written too much, resulting in a broken head and tail. \x0d\ However, for Tudou and Shanda, the evaluation standard of success is how much profit Doubao brought to them. Doubao should bring millions of income to Tudou and millions of income to Shanda, so Doubao is extremely successful for Tudou, and it is also true for Shanda. Therefore, Tudou has opened a new book with confidence, and Shanda will still support Tudou, but if it does not improve its own shortcomings, it depends on it. \x0d\ Actually, reading novels is just for leisure. I read them if they look good, but I don't read them if they don't look good. But I used to like beer and potatoes so much, but I couldn't stand it in the end. I was really uncomfortable.