Yesterday's article "Delicious Children" was written out of gratitude for my daughter's filial piety and understanding. I was also glad that I had delicious food, and I wanted to write more about the delicious experience. But actually, I lacked aesthetic experience, but I couldn't express it, so I wrote a hydrological article. Shame, shame!

after such a good experience, the written words are stale and dry. It seems that there is still a lot to learn, so how can I stop writing? Keep going!

Before writing this article, I was still impressed by Jane's wonderful essay @ Mu Zi Luo, because I have never eaten much delicious food, never eaten out in restaurants, never seen a chef cook, and I don't have much knowledge of various dishes of plants and animals. I always feel powerless to write these contents.

For this reason, yesterday afternoon, I went to the small library to find a book "China on the tip of the tongue" (ancient town tour), and carefully looked at other people's writing methods. The ancient town has different landscape characteristics, different human landscapes and different food tastes. For each kind of food, the author wrote about the local strange people, exciting stories, the matching of buildings, the legend of food, and his own unique experience of food. At the end of the article, he attached the methods of food and the routes to famous shops in ancient towns, which was rich and colorful.

In a word, it's actually because you don't have enough experience and a certain amount of knowledge.

When writing Delicious Children, I hope that I can use certain senses, use proper words and rhetorical devices, and convey my unique food experience through appropriate and rich imagination and association, which I think is the basic skill of an author.

In my impression, Wang Xiaoyu tells stories in Listening to Books in Minghuju, and the author's description of her voice is an example for me to learn (which is also my lack).

For example:

In the above paragraph, metaphor and exaggeration are used first, and writing voice brings wonderful comfort; The scene of climbing Mount Tai's Nantianmen is followed by the performance of Wang Xiaoyu's voice, which climbs one after another and is extremely controllable and melodious. In the following paragraph, I write an evaluation, comparing "three days without stopping" with Confucius' "I don't know the taste of meat in March", praising the high-speed rail of Wang Xiaoyu rap art, which is extremely beautiful.

I was going to learn Liu E's writing, but I didn't learn it. On the contrary, it's like a toddler in Handan. Let's start from the beginning. I still have to learn it.

Because the fireworks of food, clothing, housing and transportation are the main position expressed by the author, and I can't write the basic life fragments well, am I still embarrassed to show off in an ostentatious manner?

Besides, I still have a group of students and an eight-year-old boy in my eyes.