Unit 1

Unit 4

Part 11 of the fifth-grade Chinese book "Military God" knowledge points+graphic explanation

Part 12 of the fifth-grade Chinese book "Poverty" knowledge points+graphic explanation

Part 4 of the fifth-grade Chinese book. Knowledge points+graphic explanation

Part 5, Volume 2, Chinese Lesson 14 "Brush Plum" Knowledge points+graphic explanation

Part 5, Small Language, Volume 2, Exercise Example "My friend is tolerant+the little goalkeeper and his audience"

Part 5, Volume 2, Chinese Exercise "Write a person's characteristics concretely", lesson plan courseware+model essay

Lesson 16 "Horse Racing in Tian Ji" in the second volume of the fifth grade+graphic explanation

Part 17 "Diving" in the second volume of the fifth grade+graphic explanation

Part 18 "The Boat in Venice" in the second volume of the fifth grade Chinese exercise+model essay

Unit 7

Part 18 "The Boat in Venice". Solution

exercise: write a person's characteristics into specific

teaching objectives

1. Use the methods learned in this unit and select typical examples to express the characteristics of the characters.

2. Stimulate students' ability to observe and practice, and improve their interest in writing.

Teaching process

First, introduce new lessons to stimulate interest.

Every day, we come into contact with all kinds of people: uncles and aunts who exercise in the community, principals, teachers and classmates in the school, bus conductors we met at school, traffic policemen who maintain order, owners of newsstands, vendors selling breakfast ...

Who impressed you deeply? What examples of them impressed you deeply?

second, review the previous article.

In this unit, we mainly learned the basic methods of describing characters: ① Write specific characters through typical examples; ② Use language, action, manner, psychology and other descriptive methods to express the characteristics of the characters; (3) indirectly express the characteristics of the characters by describing the reactions of people around them. Do you remember these methods? We will use these methods today to describe a person who left a deep impression on you, and pay attention to writing the characteristics of the characters concretely.

third, writing guidance.

1. In this lesson, we are going to write about a person who impressed you the most. What characteristics of him or her impressed you? What are some typical examples of his (her) characteristics? (Read the chart from the textbook and summarize the skills)

2. Ask the students to determine the writing object (person) first, then determine the clues (characteristics) of the article, and finally supplement the composition materials (typical examples).

3. List the frames, first determine the frames, and then start writing. Pay attention to the combination of positive description (action, language, appearance, expression and psychological description) and profile description; While choosing typical cases to express the characteristics of characters, we should also be detailed and appropriate.

fourth, writing comments.

1. After writing, students can communicate with their deskmates or in groups.

2. Choose two or three excellent compositions and make comments in the class. The focus of writing is to make a person's characteristics specific, to use a variety of methods to describe the characters, and to use vivid and fluent language, and so on.

blackboard writing design

writing a person's characteristics concretely

topic selection: object (person) → characteristics → examples

methods: positive description, side description

teaching reflection

Through this exercise, students learned that life is full of writing materials, so they should pay attention to observation and accumulation of good words and sentences.

exercise: write down a person's characteristics

model essay

model essay 1: an unusual old man

The smell of baked sweet potatoes wafted in the street, and I couldn't help thinking of that old man. On the east side of our school gate, there is an old man who sells baked sweet potatoes. Compared with others, he has many different places.

Grandpa is about 6 years old. Although he deals with coal every day, he often wears a set of white trousers, which is clean and sets off his dark face, giving people a clean and simple feeling.

grandpa baked sweet potatoes, and he mastered the heat very well. Sweet potatoes, large and small, are placed in the oven. When is the sweet potato to turn over and which sweet potato is to be baked, he only needs to touch it with his hand and pinch it, and it will be clear. The sweet potato he baked is not raw and stubborn, and the attractive fragrance often gets into our noses through the window of the classroom.

Grandpa never shouts, but his oven is full of children as soon as school is over. Do you like sweet and soft red-hearted potatoes or sweet and fragrant white-hearted potatoes? As long as you buy them once, he won't make a mistake. Next time he comes, the sweet potato he picked out will be to your liking.

Grandpa is very particular. There is a homemade trash can next to his stove, and no rubbish can be found in the open space around his booth. No matter which child throws the peeled sweet potato skin on the ground, he will bend over and pick it up. The next time the child who threw the sweet potato skin comes, the old man will definitely smile and say, "Leave the sweet potato skin you peeled with me and I'll clean it up." You know, you are a literate student! " Every day when I come home from school, I always see the top sweet potato skins piled up in grandpa's trash can.

Now, I haven't seen grandpa for three years, but I still remember his white face, delicious baked sweet potato and the homemade trash can.

Comments: The little author points out the topic at the beginning, and tells the difference between grandpa and others through typical examples in the middle. The writing structure is very clear. In addition, the little author created an extraordinary and unusual grandfather with plain language, highlighting the characteristics of the characters.

fan wener: "gluttony is strong"

"report-report!" A simple and rhythmic report voice interrupted the teacher's lecture. Teachers and classmates all looked at the door of the classroom.

The door of the classroom was gently pushed open by a crack, and a round face leaned out from behind the door, and a pair of small eyes quickly swept into the classroom. Then, the door opened wider and wider, and a short, fat boy with a big face and small eyes squeezed in.

"greedy!" I don't know who shouted, and there was a loud roar of laughter in the class. "Greedy" couldn't help narrowing his eyes, blushing like a big red cloth, pouting his greasy mouth and returning to his seat with the teacher's permission. Well, this is the "gluttony" in our class. We are slow in doing things, but greedy is famous!

On that day, after school, several of our classmates went shopping with "Greedy Strong". Everyone visits stationery stores and shopping malls, but "greedy" is searching for food! "Yunnan Crossing the Bridge Rice Noodles", "Wuhan Regan Noodles" and "Nanjing Pearl Bao" ... In front of every food stall, the feet of "gluttonous" seem to be stuck, and they are reluctant to leave. In the end, we can only let him "fly alone".

In the dark, the WeChat group in our class was screened by the message that the greedy mother was looking for a child-"Who has seen my Hadron?" "Which classmate left with my Hadron?"

when we saw this information, my classmates and I immediately told the greedy mother and went to that street with her to find the greedy mother. When we found "gluttonous", he was eating kebabs! The bamboo sticks and iron sticks on the table in front of him are piled up into hills. He has eaten his mouth full of oil and his stomach is round!

"Hadron, your mother is looking for you!" "Come on, guys, together, together ..." Say, "Greedy" took us with meaty hands, let us sit down, and then started a new "battle"!

His mother is really in distress situation when she looks at "greedy and strong".

alas, "gluttony is strong", when will you change your gluttony?

Comments of famous teachers: The little author used a series of verbs such as "sweep", "squeeze", "narrow" and "pucker up" to describe the image of a naughty boy. It also describes the behavior of "gluttonous" when shopping together, which vividly reflects his gluttony characteristics. At the end, I sighed deeply, hiding my love for my friends.

Fan Wensan: Confused Mother

My mother has short, crisp hair, clear eyes, a pair of silver-rimmed glasses on her nose, and then a glib mouth. My mother is short and thin, and walks like a gust of wind.

after reading my description, you must think that my mother is a very smart person. Haha, then you are cheated by her appearance. In fact, my mother is often confused. Sometimes, she washes the rice and puts it in the rice cooker, and then she cooks. When all the dishes are cooked, she finds that the rice in the rice cooker has not yet started cooking. Sometimes, she goes out to work in a hurry in the morning, and after a few minutes, she hears the sound of her running back. Needless to say, she must have forgotten something again.

once, she was looking around the house, and I asked, "What are you looking for, Mom?" Mother frowned while looking for it and said, "I'm looking for a pen. It was here just now. How could it disappear in a short time?" Did the long legs run away? " Look at the way she is in a hurry, I also help to find it. However, there is nothing on the desk, on the sofa or in the drawer ... Where is the pen? Suddenly, I saw my mother holding a pen in her hand and asked her, "Is that the pen in your hand?" "Hey, here it is." Said, and smiled shyly.

Look, my mother is such a confused person. However, her confusion is her loveliness in my eyes!

Comments: The author first describes the appearance of her mother, giving people a smart impression, then lists some things that her mother is confused, and then shows the characteristics of her mother's confusion through a specific example. In this way, the exercise not only has a clear structure, but also makes people more impressed with their mother's "confusion" through the contrast brought by the comparison before and after. At the end, I ask the question again and express my love for my mother.

My bearded father

My father is over 4 years old and has a strong body. He always runs up and down the stairs. A heavy gas bottle can be carried upstairs with one hand. His face often changes, from young to old. What the hell is going on? It turned out that his beard was at work. Dad always wears a beard when he is busy as a bee; When the task was completed, he was radiant again. When I was a child, I thought my father's face would be deformed like transformers!

Look carefully, the base camp of Dad's beard is on the chin, where a dense army of beards is stationed, more than the Terracotta Warriors and Horses. Two troops climbed up from the left and right sides respectively, and joined forces among the people. The other two teams, which are not neat, extend in the direction of ears. The beard on the neck is the most undisciplined, sparse, one crop in the east and one crop in the west, as if the left-behind soldiers were playing.

gradually, I saw the truth.

On one occasion, my father and colleagues compiled a book about Zhejiang's light industry and textile industry. The books are all arranged, except for printing. At this time, it was proposed to print in traditional Chinese characters, which can be shown to customers in Taiwan Province, China and Hongkong, China. Seeing that the idea was about to be decided, dad resolutely disagreed and argued with them. When I was on the phone at home that night, my father said loudly, "People there are learning simplified Chinese characters, but we are publishing books in traditional Chinese characters. Don't be stupid!" Dad's voice is so loud that even his beard army is waving flags and cheering for him. After a long argument, the book was finally published in simplified Chinese characters.

the wave has not stopped, but it has started again. Dad received a mission to go abroad to introduce an advanced equipment. Before going abroad, there was a lot of preparatory work to do, so he worked day and night for several days, and his freshly shaved beard quietly covered his face (by the morning when he finished the preparatory work, his father was a primitive man, and his beard covered his smiling face like a forest.

a few months ago, dad was going to evaluate "senior engineer". He spent sleepless nights after sleepless nights in the mountains of materials under the desk lamp. As usual, his beard is scrambling to develop territory on his face again. Mom asked dad, "Do you want to send some gifts to the judges?" Dad looked at his materials, his mother, and me. He felt his beard for a long time and shook his head. Mother nodded silently. At this time, I think my father's beard looks majestic and magical.

After a series of reviews, my father finally got the title of senior engineer by virtue of his strength. It's a pity that his beard never enjoys the joy of success. Nevertheless, I really want to have such a beard. I asked Dad, Dad, when did I have a beard like yours? "Dad smiled and replied," When you are as old and busy as me, there will be such an army of beards to help you tide over the difficulties. "

verbose dad

"Ah-"With a terrible scream, my car collided heavily with another car.

an unfortunate car accident happened to me ... I was "black and blue", and my head hit an iron, and my knees were bruised. I almost cried in pain, but I still endured the severe pain and came to school to put down my schoolbag. Then I immediately ran out of the campus, went to the telephone booth and called my father. I wanted to cry and told my father the whole story. Dad was anxious when he heard it, and said, "Just wait at school and I'll be right there." Dad came here before morning study, and called me out as soon as he came. I showed my father the wound, and my father carefully observed it and said, "Does it hurt?" It hurts. "I replied. Dad said, "Do you need to go to the hospital to have a look? Give some medicine and rub it, and it will get better faster. " "No, just go home and rub some flower oil." "Well, if you feel dizzy or uncomfortable, just call me, do you hear me?" "I know, I know."

I ran back to the classroom. Dad looked at me uneasily when he left, as if afraid that something unexpected would happen to me again. Time passed by, and I didn't feel dizzy or uncomfortable, so I didn't call my father. By the time of the first class, my father's tall figure appeared outside the classroom again. My father called me out and asked, "How is it now?" "Good, but my knee hurts a little." Dad looked at my leg again: "What I just hit will definitely hurt, and it will be all right soon.".

Dad has a smile on his face, and it seems that he has been relieved a lot. I was about to enter the classroom, when my father grabbed me again and said to me with concern, "Don't be crazy after class, don't run around, and go home early after school." Maybe people will think that my father is very verbose, but I am very moved. Back in the classroom, my tears swirled in the classroom and almost flowed down. I fought back and continued my class. I knew that my father's caring eyes had been watching me.

My Maitreya father

has a round, big head, the same round, big belly, kind-hearted, and always smiles ... When you see this, everyone will think that I wrote Maitreya, but in fact, I wrote about my father.

My father loves to laugh very much. He often says, "Smile, you are young." When he smiles, his eyebrows are bent and his mouth is wide. At first glance, he looks like Maitreya. In addition, he is very kind and helpful, and his neighbors like him very much, saying that he has a pair of bodhisattvas.