1. In the sixth grade, write a model essay with 55 words around the central meaning

Once, our family went on a trip.

As the mountain is very high, we went up by cable car. The cable car is rectangular and green.

it doesn't stop at the foot of the mountain, so it can only climb quickly, and it must be at the speed of light, otherwise it will be missed, because the platform is only five meters long. On the cable car, the cable car slowly climbed to a higher place, higher and higher.

With the cable car getting higher and higher, the things on the ground are getting smaller and smaller. Looking at the things on the ground, there is a magical feeling. People have a kind of fear and a sudden sense of beauty, which is both mysterious and nervous.

The space inside the cable car is very small, only a little bigger than the palm of your hand, and it is ventilated on all sides, so it is easy for luggage to fall down. There are four handles in the car, and there is an alarm device, so you can get in touch with the ambulance personnel on the ground at any time.

Everyone is nervous, mainly afraid of falling. Mom's hair stood on end, and she was as nervous as an electric shock.

I was sweating on my forehead, as if I had been caught in the rain. Her hand is holding mine, and my hand hurts like it's going to be broken by her.

dad huddled in the corner of the carriage, staring at the roof, sweating like a downpour, rubbing his hands back and forth, and feeling scared. The cable car rose to another height and climbed over a hill. At this time, our nervousness eased down.

We looked out of the window, and looked from the glass window like a distance. The things on the ground were very tiny, and we needed a telescope to see them clearly. The mountains in the distance are high and low, and you can vaguely see a beautiful landscape painting.

The cable car has reached the highest peak, and the white clouds are beside us, like soft cotton candy; White clouds are beautiful and poured into the cable car; White clouds are very light, and I want to ride them to higher mountains. White clouds are so fragrant that I feel like swimming in a sea of flowers. White clouds decorated our cable car, and in this short span of ten seconds, we came to fairyland and walked through Xanadu.

The cable car has reached the top of the mountain. It is really "not afraid of clouds to cover your eyes, just because you are at the highest level." It's really beautiful to take the cable car this time. 2. Writing around the central idea

Original publisher: Long Yuan Journal Network

In ancient times, there was a scholar who never wrote an article to the purpose. Once, he went to ask a teacher for advice. The teacher took him to a small forest and pointed to a spider web and said, "Please worship it as a teacher!" " After reading it for a long time, the scholar suddenly understood the mystery, and since then, his article has made rapid progress. Someone asked him why, and he said, "There is no spider web without a center in the world. Spider webs are woven with a center first and then a circle. The same is true for writing articles! "

so how to write around the central meaning?

first, write a paragraph around the central sentence.

The composition of middle school requires that one thing be written concretely around the central meaning. Students in this section can practice with fragments at ordinary times-write concrete sentences around the central sentence.

what is a central sentence?

The central sentence is generally the first sentence in a paragraph, which summarizes the main content of this paragraph.

Example: The fog is really heavy and beautiful this morning! There is a vast expanse of whiteness between heaven and earth, as if there is an incomparably wide gauze garment floating. Mountains, houses, fields and trees in the distance are all shrouded in milky fog, looming and beautiful. I walked on the way to school, and it seemed to be in a misty fairyland, which was very interesting.

The first sentence in the example is the central sentence, and the following three sentences revolve around "The fog this morning is really big and beautiful!" This sentence is described in detail: "white, milky white" first writes the color of fog, and the metaphor of "incomparably wide gauze clothing" writes the beauty of fog and fog. Through my feelings and the dialogue of the characters, the fog is very thick and heavy. 3. The topic is really interesting. Write a 6-word or 5-word essay around it.

There are many clothes in my closet. The colorful clothes are mixed with a pair of worn-out pants, which are blue school uniform pants. Maybe you will ask, "What's the use of keeping these pants?" Don't worry, listen to me slowly, and I promise you will laugh after listening. This is an embarrassing thing for me and an interesting thing.

Search the memories in my mind. What happened in the third grade comes to my mind clearly. It was a spring morning with the fragrance of flowers in the air. While I was sleeping under the covers, I heard my mother's loud cry, "Zhang Rukai, get up quickly, it's 7 o'clock!" I vaguely responded: "Mom, it's still early, let me sleep more!" " Just after that, I was stunned. It was already 7 o'clock. Now I woke up more than half of the time and said to my mother anxiously, "Why didn't you call me earlier? I'm going to be late!" I picked up my school uniform and put it on my body. I don't know what's wrong with me today. I'm a little clumsy. I either put on my clothes backwards or put on my socks wrong. Later, I got bored, so I casually wore them and made a hasty decision. Mother said angrily, "Look at you, a boy who is so careless, didn't he tell you to adjust the alarm clock?" Without answering my mother's words, I ran to the washstand, quickly pulled the towel down and wiped it on my face a few times, then ran into the kitchen, grabbed a few mouthfuls of rice at random, hurriedly put on my schoolbag, put on my shoes and ran to school.

Fortunately, the school is not far from home, so I hurried to the school, and the class was about to ring. Walking into the school gate, I breathed a long sigh of relief, only to see that all the students next to me looked at me, and some even muttered something. "When did I become so famous?" I thought to myself, and without much thought, I ran to the classroom, but I was late!

"report!" I shouted. With the students' eyes "brush" to look at me, immediately burst into laughter. The teacher said seriously, "What are you laughing at? You are so undisciplined!" "Teacher, look at her pants!" Someone shouted. The teacher turned his head and laughed. I looked down and nodded, "Oh, my God!" It's over, it's over, my pants are on backwards! What should we do? What should we do? I can't wait to find a hole in the ground! I blushed and bowed my head, not knowing what to do. I was really embarrassed at that time. I can't help laughing every time I think about it.

it's interesting to think about this embarrassing thing. It tells me that I can't do anything carelessly, otherwise it will cause a big joke! What really fascinates me

The world really fascinates me

Life is a kaleidoscope, which shows me a colorful world. At the age of ten, I have a blue sky and a happy land. There I feel with my own heart and create with my own wisdom. Everything there fascinated me and intoxicated me: reading, drawing, making by hand, growing flowers and raising small animals … I enjoyed unlimited fun, increased my knowledge and cultivated my temperament. This world really fascinates me!

The beautiful spring girl quietly came to this kind world. The grass poked its head out to greet her in a friendly way! She was silent enough to wake up the hibernating animals; She quietly melted the ice; She asked everyone to take off their thick and heavy down jackets and put on thin sweaters and coats; She ..... Miss Chun and her children walked slowly hand in hand. It is spring that wakes the world up!

the hot summer is coming quietly. Everyone put on shorts and short sleeves. All summer, the most lively place must be the swimming pool. There, the red sun shines golden on the swimming pool, which is very beautiful! In summer, the leaves of big trees are greener, more lush and the flowers are more beautiful! People appreciate everything in summer with their heart. It is summer that makes the world more vibrant!

autumn is coming with golden dead leaves! Uncle Nong's face is full of joy of harvest. The sun shines softly on the earth, and everything is so orderly. Autumn leaves a new suit, golden, beautiful! It is autumn that brings people the joy of harvest!

We sent away autumn and ushered in winter! Everyone is not casual about clothes, but put on heavy clothes to resist the cold wind. In winter, everyone makes snowmen, has snowball fights and snowballs, and laughter and laughter are everywhere. The sun in winter is no longer as fierce as in summer, and the road is much softer and more precious. Winter brings us joy in the cold!

this world really fascinates me, and it deserves my fascination! 5. Around the central meaning, Syaraku wrote 5 words

Trees bear fruit and enjoy it. A seed is buried in the ground and takes root. It takes a long time to grow into a big tree with lush foliage, and it finally blooms with flowers. In autumn, the trees are full of fruitful results. People picked the fruit and ate it beautifully. The next year, it still blooms and bears fruit, and people pick the fruit and eat it. I asked Uncle Shu, "Uncle Shu, aren't you wronged?" Uncle Shu's answer came from the wind: "No, I am happy when I see you eating happily!" "

bees make honey and enjoy it. Bees have to fly a long way and collect a lot of pollen to make a little honey. And those who enjoy honey are not hard-working bees, but others. Bees are still picking flowers and making honey. I asked brother bee, "Brother bee, don't you feel bad that your work has been dedicated to others?" Brother Bee buzzed and replied, "I am very happy to offer sweetness to everyone!" "

Grandma enjoys cooking. Grandma's homework every day is: buying vegetables, washing vegetables and cooking. Running out and running in, I worked so hard, I was so tired that my back ached and I was sweating all over, which made me greasy. And all those delicious foods are poured into our stomachs. When grandma sees us eating her cooking with relish, her tired face will be filled with a contented smile.

teachers enjoy teaching. Teachers have to prepare lessons and correct homework every night, and give us lessons the next day, tutoring us until we fully understand it, and we are the ones who benefit from the knowledge. When the teacher sees our progress, she will nod her head and praise us repeatedly, as if we had given her happiness.

dedication is happiness. Trees, bees, grandmothers and teachers have all given their fruits of labor, and they all enjoy it. 6. Write a composition around the central meaning

Write a composition around the central meaning

Describe the scene, so what is the scene? Scene generally refers to the scene presented to people in a certain period of time in collective activities. Just like a certain scene or scene we see in a drama.

what scenes have we participated in or seen in life? Here are some examples for your reference.

labor scene. We often participate in school-run factories, farms or service labor at school, and there are many people's enthusiasm and enthusiasm in labor and good deeds in labor. We also often go to factories, villages and shops to visit and ask questions, and see how uncles and aunts work. These are the labor scenes.

game scenes. Students often play games together at home or on campus, and teachers also organize various activities during sports activities. These game scenes are often very active and interesting, and they are also familiar entertainment scenes for students. In our colorful after-school life, entertainment is a very important content. There are many vivid scenes in cultural performances, get-together activities and watching movies and TV shows that are worth remembering.

ceremony scene. At the beginning of each semester, we will hold the opening ceremony. Ceremonies are often held in your city, village or town, and when new buildings are completed. The scenes of these ceremonies are meaningful and educational, and we should carefully observe and record this memorable moment.

sports scenes. At the sports meeting, athletes chase after each other, struggle hard and strive to create excellent results; The audience applauded and cheered for the athletes. These exciting scenes are unforgettable.

scenes of life. There are many scenes in daily life that are also very distinctive. For example, buying goods, family reunion, traveling by car and boat, seeking medical treatment, building houses and repairing walls; , decorate the bedroom, etc., all have a strong atmosphere of life.

meeting scene. Class meeting, team meeting, school meeting; Meeting with heroes and model figures, participating in various celebrations and commemorative meetings, the scenes of that meeting often leave a deep impression on us.

In a word, practicing scene description can improve our ability of observation and cognition and narrative description. 7. 5 words of Syaraku's composition around the central meaning

When writing a composition about music in the center, you can write about life, such as family life and study life; You can also write about a certain point in society or a certain type of people, such as sanitation workers, people's teachers, etc. No matter which direction you write, you must add your own feelings and experiences.

text: living in this colorful world, it is inevitable that there will be a drop of tears. If pain exists, then I deeply affirm: "Happiness is everywhere".

When you really fail, maybe you will say, "Why did I pay so much and end up with nothing? Why is God so unfair to me? " In fact, as long as you carefully taste the process of hard struggle, you can find that you are not so painful. Because you have really struggled, compared with those who never dared to fight, you have won the envy of others.

when you lament that your family conditions are not as good as others, you may say, "why am I so smart, but my conditions are not as good as others?" Why is God so unfair to me? " In fact, as long as you think slowly, you can find that you are not so unfortunate. Because God has given you quick thinking and rich imagination.

In the face of setbacks, thoughts give imagination, while imagination gives comfort and courage. Compared with those who only capture others with money and have no real skills, you also win the envy of others.

When you struggle with death, you will find happiness everywhere-success is a kind of happiness, failure is a kind of happiness, competition is a kind of happiness, frustration is a kind of happiness ... Even the insignificant ant has his own happiness, that is life. Don't say that God is unfair, and don't say that life is boring.

think carefully, if there is no pain in this world, will there be a wonderful life? It is because of these tears and laughter that we have a colorful life. If you really can't imagine, you can also find that you have one of the greatest happiness, and that is life.

Life is the greatest happiness, without life. Will you still be happy? Really, don't be so sad.

because-happiness is everywhere. 8. Write a 5-word composition around the central meaning to help

find the luminous water. The bright moonlight shines on the sofa, and I stand on the balance car, whizzing through the living room.

alas! The sky is grey and wild, where can I find my English book? English book, where are you? Without you, my mother will be stripped.