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Just look at the number of words in this article, and you can be sure that it is a short story. I was a little surprised, because most of the novels in the academy were long stories, and short stories were rarely seen, but fortunately, the surprising time only lasted 0. 1 second, and then it returned to normal. I wrote a simple comment after reading it. I hope the author can forgive me. Clear works are like youth novels in magazines, full of youth, innocence and sadness on campus. If but from the overall point of view of the article, there are not many problems, but if you comment on the details, there are many minor flaws. So I don't point out the advantages, but directly point out the disadvantages. Hehe ~ Judging from the monologues of the characters, it is a good idea for the author to divide several specific characters into separate narratives, but as far as a short story is concerned, the narratives of several different characters are a bit too compact, and the narrative positions arranged by each character are a bit chaotic, which is also one of the defects. The character's personality characteristics and description are not clear enough. Although readers can know the heroine's own Excellence, coldness, publicity and self-confidence from some texts, to be honest, I can't feel these characteristics basically when I read the whole novel. I just think she is hesitant, lonely and lacking in self-confidence, which is related to the author's writing style. ...