The first section (1~2 natural section) When the fiery red clouds came up, the glow in the sky changed the color of everything on earth.
The second paragraph (3~6 natural paragraphs) writes that the color and shape of the flame cloud are constantly changing.
The third paragraph (the seventh paragraph) says that the flame cloud has gone down.
Remember "change" firmly when writing the full text. First of all, as soon as the sunset comes up, children's faces, big white dogs, red rooster, black hens, small white pigs and beards of the old people all change their original colors and become mysterious in a very short time. Grasping the word "change" can make students feel the surprise when people see "red clouds coming up" after dinner, the happy wish of the old man "smiling at his pig" and the feeling that the cool man says "your old man must live a long life and you will always have a golden beard". So I think it is the natural phenomenon of flaming clouds that brings joy and interest to people.
Then I wrote about the color and shape changes of luminous clouds. Rapid and numerous changes are the characteristics of sunset clouds.
The four "moments" in the third paragraph of the text constitute a set of parallelism sentences, which shows that the color change of the sky is spectacular and intoxicating. In this paper, three methods are used to show the change of color: "red" and "gold" highlight the brightness of color when "burning", and "half purple and half yellow" and "half gray and half lily" are the fusion of two colors; Grape ash, pear yellow and eggplant purple are all imitations, which vividly shows that the colors in life are all in the sky. When learning this paragraph, grasp these words and let students understand the imagination, which can make students feel the magic and magnificence of nature and stimulate their emotions.
The fourth to seventh paragraphs of the text write that the burning clouds have various shapes and change rapidly. "The horse is kneeling", "The dog is fierce", "A big lion ... crouching like that, very powerful and calm". These descriptions vividly show the forms of flame clouds such as horses, dogs and lions. The words "blurred for a while", "suddenly disappeared" and "then disappeared" embody the characteristics that "horse", "dog" and "lion" change in a hurry and come and go without a trace.
Finally, I wrote "Red Clouds". The anthropomorphic phrase "the sky just doesn't wait for those children who love it" shows that the flame cloud seems to be deliberately teasing children, and also shows that children are obsessed with the unpredictable flame cloud. As the end of the article, the last sentence "After a while, the flame cloud goes down" echoes the first sentence "After dinner, the flame cloud comes up", which makes the text structure rigorous and shows the rapid change of the flame cloud again, indicating that the flame cloud is a natural phenomenon that appears in a short time. However, it left people with joy and beauty, infatuation and yearning.