1. Scenery Writing by Sensory Method 611 Title Plus Author

Beautiful Scenery of Spring

Blow a willow flute, put spring in your mouth, and a cheerful and refreshing song, from the mouth of a cowherd boy riding a yellow cow, render a vivid and melodious one. With the wind, it lightly crosses the bamboo forest and begins to spread to every corner of the world, just like reunion of old friends, and everything becomes beautiful.

you see, clusters of bright yellow winter jasmine are smiling on the wall, with a trumpet-like charming face, as if they were naughty children, somewhat lively and lovely, but they are a piece of music that has been gorgeous all spring?

Look at the pink and pale azaleas that are coiled in the middle of the mountain, spreading their branches, and quietly wearing countless red makeup. Like a bride who is ready to marry, she is full of shame and smiles lightly, adding a lot of vivid beauty to spring silently.

The spring breeze is full of amorous feelings, attracting a colorful butterfly. You chase me, and I catch up with you, dancing around the flowers like a child, showing off your beauty to the spring without stint. They are the legendary beautiful elves, spring dancers?

Spring is a beautiful scene!

Spring is a beauty without an appointment!

Hold a brush, embed the spring in the scroll, dye it little by little, and decorate the color of spring. Look, the mountains in the distance are lush. Clear water, full of beautiful blue; You don't need too much painters' pen and ink to sketch a spring. Because spring is so simple. Always comes quietly when we least expect it!

A breeze can freeze and cut out curled willow silk, which is soft and graceful and endless. The clean sky reflects the pool of lake water, and it is soft and clear.

At this time, take a breeze, take a bunch of spring scenery, walk in the fields, and put the corolla of spring on your head. I believe your mood must be beautiful. Sprinkle a bunch of laughter, step on the fragrance all the way, recite the lines of spring, and bind a page of praise for birds and flowers. What could be more cheerful than this?

Let's cheer loudly: "Spring is coming! Spring is coming! "Turn our excitement into songs and spread them all over the spring!

Not to mention the whispering swallows, the bustling flowers, the rustling spring rain, the whispering spring breeze, and the children who laugh wildly, just the whispering of the lovers who are looking for spring when their eyebrows are low, and their faces are full of spring scenery, they can open the birth machine without restraint.

oh! Spring is a colorful picture that plays up the interest!

In spring, we didn't make an appointment, because she is always by our side and in our hearts! 2. Use the method of multi-sensory description to describe a scene in at least three places and at least 311 words

When we enter autumn, the ears of rice, sunflowers, apples, grapes, corn and sorghum are all mature, and the beautiful wild chrysanthemums also fragrant the narrow paths in the fields.

The ears of rice are ripe, and the golden face is like beautiful gold, shining in the sun. When the sunflowers are ripe, they all bow their heads, as if they were walking with their backs bent.

The apples were cooled by the autumn wind, and everyone put on a red cotton-padded jacket, as if red lanterns were hanging on every branch. Cut every branch.

The grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and all of them were covered with a purple robe, as if the grapes were also cooled by the autumn wind, and all of them were covered with a purple robe, just like beautiful purple pearls. How beautiful the strings are! The corn held the red tassel happily from ear to ear, as if forgetting the troubles of a summer. Sorghum blushed and smiled, as if he had been praised by others.

Wild chrysanthemums are also fragrant in autumn. I walk on the narrow path in the field and smell the fragrance of wild chrysanthemums gently, which is as beautiful as roses, honeysuckle, morning glory and cactus flowers. Autumn, there are golden ears of rice, autumn, there are golden ears of rice, oily sunflowers, red apples, purple grapes, yellow corn and red sorghum, which are so beautiful! Ah! How colorful autumn is! How glorious you are! How noble you are! You are not only a beautiful season, but also a harvest season.

I want to thank autumn, because autumn brings us food and fills the world with beauty. Ah! How great you are in autumn. 3. The composition describing the scenery has 411 words of sensory spring essay < P > When the gentle spring breeze caresses my cheek, I am very happy; When the naughty spring rain wet my feet, I am very happy; When the mighty spring thunder shook my ears, I was very happy ...

Spring is the most beautiful season of the four seasons, where life begins and the monotonous world begins to be colored. Spring came early this year, and my heart became restless after a quiet winter vacation. When I smell the fragrance of grass and soil, I can't bear it anymore. I can't wait to lean out my head and see this year's spring girl.

I walked out of the house with excitement. A cool breeze blew my hair. Smell it carefully with your nose, and you will smell the breath of new life in the wind. I couldn't help being immersed in it, as if all the noise had become quiet at this moment. There is an indescribable happiness in my heart. Go ahead, into the dense forest. Ah, spring is clear before my eyes. The big tree shed its original gray-brown tree coat and put on a green dress, which turned out to be young, just like a young man. The tender little leaf buds are wrapped around the slender branches little by little, giving off the breath of life. Squatting down, I found that little pointed heads actually emerged from the soil. As if I were about to come out of the soil, I couldn't help laughing. A few small wildflowers hidden in the grass are like a shy little girl. Pull through the grass and take a closer look at the flower. The bud is not in full bloom yet, and there are several crystal clear dewdrops hidden. Isn't this the most beautiful ornament of spring?

At this moment, some birds are singing. They are also celebrating the arrival of spring!

I look at all the scenery with my eyes, listen to all the songs with my ears, and touch all the life with my hands. This spring, I am so happy! 4. A composition for every sense organ

Pupils' compositions often give people a dry and empty feeling. Therefore, teachers ask them to read more books and practice more, but these two points are not easy to do. Pupils have children's natural nature, and their minds are difficult for adults to understand. In addition to reading and writing training, teachers should also teach children to use some writing skills to increase the observability of their compositions on the basis of existing knowledge. It can increase children's interest in writing and reduce the pain in the writing process. Ordinary people have five ways of feeling: seeing, hearing, smelling, touching and smelling. It will have a better effect for students to use these five feelings to write. Most primary school compositions are propositional compositions, which are nothing more than three categories: keeping notes, writing people and writing scenery. Take the composition Autumn Tour as an example. Primary school students like to play, like new things and like those that are rare at ordinary times. Seeing with your eyes, listening with your ears, smelling with your nose and picking with your hands will definitely make you feel flattered. Teachers only need to teach them to arrange the composition structure. The composition begins with vision: look at the sky, the autumn is crisp, the sun is warm and bright, the sky is blue, some clouds are fluttering, and some are like ... Then use hearing: listen to the wind in the wild, listen to the sound of the wind blowing through the Woods, and listen to the leaves blown by the wind. Listen to the sound of little feet stepping on hay and fallen leaves, and listen to everyone's laughter and laughter ... Then touch: autumn wind is very being relaxed and free, hair and clothes are fluttering, pick up a fallen leaf, touch the veins on it, gently brush the rough trunk, find a meadow to sit down and have a picnic, and feel the warmth and sureness brought by the sun and the earth ... There is not much sense of smell and taste in the text, and the timing of appearance is also very free. Look at the weather. You can smell the fragrance of wild flowers on the grass. When you walk in the forest covered with fallen leaves, you can vaguely smell the fragrance of the soil. When you sit on the grass and eat, the delicious food will definitely tempt your nose deeply and make your sense of taste greatly satisfied. Senses are also very useful in keeping notes and writing articles. "Listen to people, watch people walk, say your own words and think about your own affairs", All this needs to mobilize the five senses of the young author. Documentary articles should use vision and hearing. Eyes should witness the development of things, ears should record other people's words, and psychological activities should be described, so the composition will not be too blunt. Writers should pay attention to details, and the details should be observed by themselves. Look with eyes, listen with ears, feel with heart, and think with head about what kind of person this is. To sum up, not every article should use all five senses. The order of appearance of the five senses is not fixed, and the senses can be real or illusory (psychological works produced by brain processing, such as smelling the fragrance of sunshine with the nose). Teaching primary school students to write with their senses will reduce their resistance. One more skill and one more wonderful one. 5. writing a composition with multiple senses

The writing of the article can arouse multiple senses to describe the scenery, or it can be done without vision.

human senses include: smell-nose, sight-eyes, taste-mouth and tongue, hearing-ear, touch-many parts of the body. In this way, in addition to vision, there are many feelings, and you can also write wonderful articles. For example, Liu Zongyuan's "Ode to Autumn Sound" describes the scenery basically by hearing. Li Zhao's "Li Mou plays the flute at night" "Li Mou plays the flute in Guazhou on autumn night, and the boat is very narrow. At the beginning of the tone, the masses are all at rest. After a few minutes, the breeze came quietly. A moment later, Jia Ke, the boatman, complained about the sound of weeping. " The scenery here is put into hearing.

Zhou Jiadi, a blind poet, lost his bright eyes, but saw the world more thoroughly.

In literary creation, the thinking of writers and poets is extremely active. People's feelings borrow and communicate with each other. The poet's sensory organs should communicate with each other openly in poetry. Just as Liu Xie said, "Poets have a sense of things, and their associations are endless". When the poet's feelings are surging, his hearing, smell, vision, taste and touch become very close and sensitive. Thus, in the world where poets wander, the voice has a shape, the flowers have a song, and the fragrance has a color ...

It is called "transference" or "synaesthesia" in rhetoric. For example, the spring breeze is green in Jiang Nanan (Wang Anshi: Boating in Guazhou). The author changes the tactile spring breeze into a visual "green" image, which makes people strongly feel the charm of spring breeze.

"It sounds like cicadas sitting on a tree in the forest/pouring lilies." (Homer's Epic) The sound is transformed into a flowing liquid with the fragrance of lilies, and the poet uses visual images to describe the beauty of the sound. If the image of poetry is not deformed by other senses, the sound is indescribable. 6. Writing and writing autumn with sensory techniques

Feeling autumn

If spring is a newborn baby, as Mr. Zhu Ziqing said in his essay "Spring", then I think summer should be a vibrant teenager, autumn is a stable middle-aged person, and winter is a kind old man.

I think autumn is the most distinctive of the four seasons. In autumn, there is no wonderful scene of freezing thousands of miles in winter, and there is no willow waves in spring and cicadas in summer. But autumn has her crisp autumn air and fragrant osmanthus.

autumn is a harvest season. Standing on the edge of the field and looking around, a vivid "Harvest figure in Autumn" will come into your eyes: in the field, sorghum blushes and rice bends; At the edge of the field, the straight fruits of the fruit trees are ripe and only waiting for the farmer's uncle to pick them; Under the tree, the farmer's uncle put down his sickle, wiped his hard sweat with a towel, looked at the harvest field with a smile and enjoyed the harvest.

the scene in autumn is very beautiful. We can understand it from the words "autumn wind is cool" and "fruitful branches" used by literati to describe autumn, but this is not enough. It is more poetic to appreciate it in real life. If you want to find autumn, I suggest you take a walk in the Woods and choose a sunny afternoon. Because this time can make you feel the breath of autumn best. At this time, I walked alone in the quiet forest path, with the autumn wind blowing, the autumn sun shining and the sound of Lin Tao; Smelling the charming chrysanthemum fragrance and watching the golden leaves on the tree fall with the wind can't help but remind you of the poem of Huang Chao's "The Last Chrysanthemum": Wait until September 8 in Qiu Lai, and I will kill a hundred flowers after bloom. Blooming chrysanthemums in full bloom, the fragrance of the fragrance of changan, the city is bathed in the fragrant chrysanthemum - Italy, the land is golden like the chrysanthemum - like chrysanthemum.

Autumn is not only beautiful, but also rich in philosophy. Middle age is the golden age of life. During this period, people can freely fly their dreams and hopes, and strive for my own ideals and goals to meet their own days of our lives. If people don't work hard and sow for their own hopes at this time, then it is difficult for them to have a good harvest in their own lives.

I am now in the early summer of my life, and the autumn of my life is far away from me. But can I relax because of this, and wait until the autumn of life comes before I struggle? No, you can't. I'm going to keep fighting now, lay a good foundation for the autumn of my life, and play the four parts of my life: celebrating spring-exploring summer-striving for autumn-enjoying winter.