First of all, it should be said that there are many advertisements.

Consumers are disgusted with advertisements. Who has the patience to read a 311-word advertisement? Short and pithy, clear and impressive.

two or three sentences is enough. (The content is about quality and service.)

It will be officially opened on October 5th, when the large-scale song and dance will welcome friends from all walks of life.

It will be opened on October 5th, when the large-scale song and dance will be waiting for you!

there are many gifts, waiting for you to get them!

Do you think it's a little kind to change it to this way? It is suggested to hold an

interactive activity when opening the business, such as answering relevant questions and giving gifts,

(the answers are printed on the leaflets, and the activities and activities should be reflected on the leaflets)

' You can get an ice cream when you enter the store with this leaflet!'

this sentence is good and tempting. I suggest it be kept and printed in a conspicuous position.

leaflet layout: 1: advertising slogan

2: opening date and activity content.

There is no need to disclose the gift. It can be said that it is a surprise gift, so leave it in suspense. Get more practical things for the gift, things that young people like, etc. It's a big day to start business, so it's necessary to spend a lot of money to get famous first.

slogan: Happy Harry,

Happy Hall!