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A composition describing a puppy with comments?
This puppy is beautiful. Its fur is shiny black, and its four little feet are white, as if to show off how clean it is. The following is what I arranged for you. I hope it helps you!

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A few days ago, my uncle gave me a puppy. It looks so cute.

This puppy has black eyes and a pair of big ears. It looks so funny. Its coat is black and white, but its tail and claws are pure white. The white tail is always wobbly at ordinary times, and the four white claws are like wearing clean white socks, which makes people like it.

The puppy likes the food I give him very much, and always looks very satisfied when he is full. Sometimes he likes to chew my shoes, and when he is tired, he will find a place to sleep. After waking up, it likes to look for me everywhere and let me play with it.

I like this lovely puppy, and it has become my best companion.

Comments: This article is a narrative. The little author gave us a detailed description of the puppy, a lively and lovely puppy, from the eyes, ears, tail and claws. Vivid metaphors further enhance the expressive effect of the article and make it full of fun to read.

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Today, I went to my menstrual home. Just getting off the bus, a lovely puppy came face to face, which was very lovable.

I saw it wearing a "black coat", fleshy and running straight. Don't think it's "Little Zhang Fei", but "Big Beauty"! The puppy's name is "Niu Niu", and it is still very young, and the only sounds it makes are "Mm-hmm" and "Hum". It has two yellow hairs above its eyes, which seem to be its eyebrows. At first glance, I thought it was painted in yellow! There are a pair of bright and big eyes under the "eyebrows", blinking like greeting me. He is still wearing "yellow gloves", and his hairy tail is cocked high and kept shaking, as if welcoming me. He looks like a hospitable puppy. Niu Niu's mouth is always restless and she is very kind to people. When she sees something or someone, she licks and bites with her tongue. He is particularly interested in brown fluffy things, and my shoes have been attacked many times by it. My shoes are brown. There is a circle of soft fur at the mouth of the shoe and a circle of adhesive tape under the fur. Niu Niu stared at the hair and tape on my shoes when she saw me. I told my vigorous skill to get out of the way and tease it.

Running left and jumping right, Niu Niu seems tired and resting on the steps. I seized the opportunity, walked behind it, touched it and helped it. I rubbed it left and scratched it right to make it familiar with me and have a good impression on me. Gradually, I tried to hold it. I slowly picked it up from behind its front legs. At first, his legs trembled with fear, and soon he became familiar with me. Later, my uncle pulled up his right front paw and performed a kowtow and fashion show. ...

Niu Niu is so cute that I can't put it down!

Comments: This article describes a lovely puppy, and gives the puppy the idea that she is wearing a' black coat' and fleshy by using rhetorical devices such as personification, vividly writing out the characteristics of the puppy, such as black and fat. Between the lines reveals the little author's love for the puppy "Niu Niu".

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Grandma keeps a lovely puppy at home.

It wears a brown "coat" all year round, with its ears on its head, and its round eyes seem to be able to see through your mind, which is particularly considerate; Puppies have a keen sense of smell, just like police dogs, and can distinguish a variety of smells. The whole mouth protrudes forward, because it looks like a monkey and is lively and active, so I named it Little Monkey.

The "little monkey" is sometimes majestic, like a general who guards the city gate and has great military achievements; Sometimes I scream when I hear abnormal sounds, as if telling my family to be careful, there are bad people coming! Sometimes when you see me, you are smart enough to scratch me with your claws. I remember once, my neighbor came to my house as a guest. The little monkey has never seen her, so he has been yelling at his neighbor, scaring her to run away. I am particularly angry, which is strange. His round eyes stared at me as if begging for mercy. I began to feel heartache, so I forgave. It seems to be very happy, tightly attached to my arms. ...

Grandma's puppy always brings me a lot of happiness. I like this "little monkey" so much!

Comments: At the beginning of this exercise, a lifelike puppy is presented to the readers. Such as "round eyes" and "mouth protruding forward" indicate that this is a "cute puppy". The little author also highlighted the loyalty of the puppy through a story and expressed his love for the puppy.