It's also a Chinese class.

□ A candidate in Nanjing

When I was a child, I liked reading, and there was another feature: I was very fast and had a feeling of reading quickly. In the fourth and fifth grades of primary school, my "skill" deepened day by day. A big book will be solved in two or three days. But my parents said I didn't study hard. However, they couldn't convince me for the simple reason that I wasn't caught by them.

Before that happened, I still read in this way. ...

It was a Sunday and I was wandering in the street when I suddenly saw an old book stall. I hurried over, turned over an anthology of ancient poems and began to read. Looking at it, it occurred to me that I wanted to find a poem to test my father and give him a Chinese lesson. So he took out his pen and copied Su Dongpo's "Water Tune" in his hand.

Run home. Great, dad is reading the newspaper. I stepped forward to imitate the tone of the Chinese teacher and said, "Dad, how about I test you a word?" Dad nodded with a smile.

"People have joys and sorrows." I shook my head and read, "What's the next sentence?"

"The full moon is cloudy and sunny, and this matter is hard to bear." Dad answered unhurriedly. "I hope that people will live for a long time and have a good scenery for thousands of miles."

"Very good." I secretly praised, "one last question, who is the author of this word?"

"Su Shi, one of the eight masters in Tang and Song Dynasties," my father replied loudly.

"Ha ha, you are wrong. The author is not Su Shi, but Su Dongpo. How about it? " I am proud to say.

"Ha ha!" Dad smiled, too "Son, you are so funny. Isn't Sue a stone? "

You don't say! As a little teacher, I can't be wrong. But seeing my father's seriousness is not like cheating. For the sake of "safety", I turned and ran out of the house and ran to the second-hand book stall. Dad seemed to understand something and didn't catch up and ask me why.

Fortunately, the book didn't sell at the second-hand bookstall. I found that word. It turns out that there is a brief introduction to the author below: "Su Dongpo, formerly known as Su Shi, is a Dongpo layman ..."

I am convinced that this statement is true, but my father became a teacher, and he made me get rid of my carelessness in reading extracurricular masterpieces.

● Comments: The composition of this examination room is very clever. Starting with Selected Ancient Poems on the old bookstall, the author first wrote "I" to give his father a Chinese lesson, and wrote in detail the scene of the argument between father and son about Su Dongpo's name. Then he briefly wrote "I am completely convinced", pointing out that "this is indeed a Chinese class, but my father has become a teacher", thus telling people a truth: reading. This kind of writing is detailed and simple, which can attract the attention of the marking teacher. The full text is exquisitely carved and the language is simple, giving people a simple and natural feeling.

koji

It's also a Chinese class.

□ A candidate in Nanjing

Chinese is everywhere in life, and Chinese classes are everywhere, all the time.

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Before going to school, the Chinese teacher gave each student a garlic, let them go home and plant it in a basin, and observe the change of garlic once a week. A month later, report the growth of garlic to the class.

The students all wondered why the Chinese teacher didn't do his business and started as a biology teacher. But who doesn't want us to experiment? So the whole class went home quietly and busy.

After January, the students moved the garlic pot to the class. Xiao Zhang failed in the experiment because he put garlic in the bottle. There is water in the bottle, but no soil. Garlic was buried in water and covered with a lid. Garlic rotted in the bottle. My experiment was successful. The garlic I planted grew best, tender, green and straight, and proudly emerged from the soil. Failure, depression. Success, happiness. However, regardless of success or failure, students' weekly observation records are very specific, vivid and wonderful.

The teacher asked us, "Why are all the articles written by everyone successful today?"

We all express our opinions. The playful Xiao Wang said, "We have no pressure to hand in our compositions."

Xiao Ming, who is active, replied, "This is what we like to do."

I also rushed to answer: "It will certainly be vivid to write about our personal experiences."

The teacher then asked, "So, we have experienced many things in the past, but our writing style is not vivid?

The language student representative of a course plausibly said, "Although we have experienced many things, we have not paid attention to and accumulated them, so although we have a life, we have no living materials in our brains."

The teacher smiled: "Yes, this is Chinese. It passed us quietly. We must learn to observe carefully, think carefully and record truly in order to learn well. " At this moment, it suddenly dawned on me that the teacher asked us to kind of garlic, so that's it!

● Comments: This excellent examination room is novel and unique, with lofty ideas. This paper describes an unforgettable Chinese practice activity "observing the growth of garlic" and understands the truth that "Chinese is life" from a small angle. The inscription is skillfully used, harmonious and appropriate, and the end of the article points directly to the theme, which is seamless. There is no rhetoric, and there is no hypocrisy. Candidates use simple words to describe their unique feelings about Chinese lightly, but our hearts are deeply moved. This is another highlight of the article.

mistress

It's also a Chinese class.

□ A candidate in Nanjing

Spring is coming again. I secretly made an appointment with my partner and rode my bike to the nature where the grass is long and the jade is flowing. Our intrusion broke the silence of Yuan Ye. Listening to the songs of countless birds, we felt indescribable joy. My heart suddenly got close to nature!

I have sat in the suffocating bedroom countless times, watching the chimney spewing black smoke out of the window and depicting euphemistic bird songs with my boring brush strokes. But I don't know that Yuan's voice of nature has not been experienced in any of his articles. I have written countless times about flowing water and withered red flowers. I don't know that there has always been such a voice in the soft soil of vilen: "Falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more." I have eulogized nature countless times, but I have never observed nature so carefully: ants are tenacious and United when carrying food together; In the nest, the warmth revealed by the mother bird when feeding her chicks; The things created by trees, grass and vines are intertwined ... How can we simply understand everything from textbooks? Even the wonderful pen of flowers can't explain the mystery of nature.

If it weren't for that trip, that "bold" move, I wouldn't be so excited and I wouldn't write beautiful words full of passion. Only at this time can I proudly and sincerely say, "In the vast Yuan Ye, I have discovered a lot and learned a lot through my close contact with nature. Oh, this is a close contact with nature. "

Who dares to deny that being close to nature is not a Chinese class!

● Comments: There are three main highlights in this examination room composition: First, the selection of materials is novel. The author found a new way to learn Chinese in the natural classroom, which embodies "everyone has nothing". Second, the writing style is new. The author downplayed the specific plot of "Chinese class" which is in close contact with nature, and wrote his own experience and feelings of learning Chinese in the natural class in a lyrical style of prose. Narration and lyricism were integrated, and the discussion came naturally, with a concise and unconventional ending. The third is the new language. This article is short and pithy.

Representative work 4

It's also a Chinese class.

□ A candidate in Nanjing

Not long ago, we had a special Chinese class: we conducted a social survey of "looking for Chinese on the street". In this paper, the characters of signboards and road signs in six streets in Nanjing were investigated in detail. The results show that the street characters in our city are not standardized and should be paid attention to.

Street characters are not standardized, mainly in the following aspects: first, the number of traditional Chinese characters used in signs has increased significantly. Many words have long been obsolete, and some words are not in the general dictionary at all. Most of these words appear on the signboards of specialty stores, with a total of 24 words, which makes people puzzled. Second, there are many problems in the use of Chinese Pinyin, English letters and Chinese characters. Some signboards don't have a Chinese character, and the letters are scrawled and unintelligible; Some letters are inconsistent with Chinese characters; Some foreign names they took don't know what they mean. There is a * * like 17. Third, there are many typos. One unit's notice wrote "deployment by superiors" as "deployment"; Some restaurants write "fried shredded pork" as "copied shredded pork". The fourth is irregular simplified characters, which are more common on small signboards with many characters. Some simplified characters and traditional characters are used alternately, which makes people feel awkward.

The standardization of street writing not only affects its commercial value, but also reflects the degree of civilization of a city in social value. Imagine a signboard that can't even write the mother tongue well or wrongly, which will naturally make people think that the quality of shopkeepers and the management level of the city should not be much higher, which will inevitably affect the image of the city. To this end, we suggest:

The first is to raise awareness of the importance of street language. Educate operators to use Chinese characters correctly and write Chinese characters well, so that they can understand the significance of standardizing the use of Chinese characters. Second, when issuing business licenses, the industrial and commercial departments should conscientiously implement the relevant state regulations, not only to review the contents of signboards, but also to review the writing forms, so as to stop the phenomenon of irregular street words from the source. Third, the relevant departments should strictly check the standardization of street characters. In accordance with the requirements of the Interim Provisions on the Administration of Advertising Language and Characters issued by the State Administration for Industry and Commerce, irregular street words are regularly inspected. The fourth is to intensify the investigation and punishment of nonstandard words. In the investigation, it is found that some of them are caused by the operators' deliberate pursuit of fashion or lack of social responsibility. Those who refuse to mend their ways after repeated education should not be indulged, but should be resolutely investigated and dealt with. Fifth, mobilize social forces to supervise the use of street Chinese characters, so as to achieve the dual effects of education and supervision, and let the irregular use of Chinese characters have nowhere to escape.

To investigate the market, this. It makes us understand that street words are related to quality and image and cannot be taken lightly. It is everyone's responsibility to standardize street writing.

● Comments: This examination room composition is unique from another angle, written in the form of an investigation report, novel and unique. Candidates write in strict accordance with the writing order of the investigation report, so the logical thinking of the full text is clear. At the end, writing "Investigating street writing is also a Chinese lesson" not only takes care of the title, but also naturally leads to the author's appeal: "It is everyone's responsibility to standardize street writing, and everyone has a share."

Masterpiece five

It's also a Chinese class.

□ A candidate in Nanjing

I haven't studied Chinese for a short time since the first grade of primary school. Although I can't compare with those great writers and poets, I'm not bad at their eloquent and brilliant Chinese. I've also made progress from real Chinese classes in my life. Don't believe me, look. ...

Online language

After reading junior high school, I have become a "net worm". Sitting in front of the computer, drinking soda and tapping on the keyboard-it feels great! Browsing the web and reading some articles are my first priority ... huh? Why is there so many typos in this report? Just at that moment, I sent a letter "Yi Meier" to the mailbox of the website, pointing out the typo in the report.

A week later, I opened my mailbox and saw an email from that website: "Thank you for your support. I will pay more attention in the future. " I was in a good mood and immediately felt like a great man. This isn't it?

China people at art festivals.

Every year 1 1 month, the school holds an art festival, which mainly selects good programs from each class and combines them into a performance. This is a good time for each class to show themselves! I participated in our class's music and poetry reading program. Finally, the program passed two reviews, and finally boarded the stage of the art festival, which was well received. At that time, the hearts of the whole class were beautiful! This is also a Chinese class!

China people in the Spring Festival Evening.

"jiaozi is wrapped!" With grandpa's voice, the family is more festive. Although the Spring Festival is celebrated like this every year, I will never get tired of it. Just thinking, the family came to the living room talking and laughing-needless to say, it must be time for a party. This is my family's annual program. I remember that the content of last year's gala was "idioms solitaire". Unfortunately, I was the first to be eliminated. No matter what competition it is this year, I have to get a place. After a while, everyone in the family sat down and grandpa began to speak. The content of the speech is first a toast, then a summary of the events in the past year, and finally a difficult game topic. I quickly pricked up my ears and listened carefully ... "What? 吱吱 couplets? " After hearing the topic, I was shocked. "Hey! There is no play this year. "

The game started, my parents answered several questions correctly, and I was like a decoration. Time is running out and there is only one left at this time. "Peace every year", grandpa finished reading the first couplet and was waiting for someone to pick it up. Without much thought, I blurted out the bottom line of "Chinese New Year reunion". There was a sudden silence at home for a few seconds, and then there was praise. When I realized what was going on, I was already intoxicated with this happiness. This is still a Chinese class!

How do you feel after reading the above story? Once again, I really feel that there are Chinese classes everywhere in my life. I have really tasted the sweetness of learning Chinese in my life.

● Comments: This paper mainly has the following characteristics: First, select typical cases from different angles and highlight the center. Sending an errata letter to the online mailbox highlights the pride of learning Chinese from life; Participating in the recitation and performance activities of the school art festival highlights the achievements of learning Chinese from life; After the Spring Festival family get-together, there are couplets, which highlight the joy of learning Chinese from life. The content of the three things is specific, writing your own real experience, closely following the life center "It is also a Chinese lesson", with real feelings. Second, the structure is complete, and the use of subtitles plays a role in distinguishing levels. The third thing is very representative and interesting. The author focuses on the detailed description of dialogue and psychology, while the first thing and the second thing are briefly written. This approach helps to highlight the main idea of the article.